[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
Wow, Charlie really is as good as gold! What a lovely man, "forgiveness" in his heart as he assumes his end is near.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:43 PM Title: Arrival
Sigh...swoon...! What can one say? Wonderfully written!
Author's Response:
Thanks, great reviews, encourages me loads xx
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2011 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
Can't wait to see if someone was watching her in the woods!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:20 AM Title: Arrival
I like this Edward, and what you shared of the entire family. They are not very good vampires in the sense we are used to. I think changes like this give stories a unique taste and catches our attention.
Also having such power over their victims minds make things both easy for them, but also a challenge, until they meet a match....
Author's Response:
I have gone for the best of both, Bram Stokers wicked creation and SM's vamp with a heart and mixed em up...great review thanks
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
don't like jacob having a sample of bella either, but his presence seemed completely incidental to her, lol
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
I hope Edward was watching her & her quim! Love the lustful awakening of Bella! Great story!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
So interesting! Charlie seems lucky for now!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:12 AM Title: Arrival
I love your story with this dark Edward!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
Great update. Maybe Edward is a voyeur?
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
I'm sure that was Edward in the woods. He had better hurry or Jacob will beat him to the prize. Almost already has. Post again soon. I think we are a couple chapters away from an Edward/Bella lemon.
Congrats on all your reviews. I knew they would come around!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support and encouragement it does mean alot.xxx Happy reading ;0)
Date: 07 Nov 2011 1:31 AM Title: Arrival
I'm thinking if Edward saw Jacob puttin' the moves on Bella, Jacob is a dead man walking....now if he was just watching while Bella was ahem, 'exploring' herself, now that would be hawt! Mmmmmmm, can't wait til next chappie!
Date: 06 Nov 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
god i hate jacob i hope edward kills him.i no that was a little.over board but we all have our limits and jacob is mine. besides him i love your story i cant wait for edward to make his move on bella
Date: 06 Nov 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
i think Edward was there... am i thinking right?
Date: 06 Nov 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
I'm guessing Edward was observing from the trees. Did he see her with Jacob or after Jacob was gone?
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
hope they meet next chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
I can't wait for the next chapter please update ASAFP.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
Looking forward to your next update!
Date: 06 Nov 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
Wow! So he can't really read Charlie Swan's thoughts clearly either? Must be a family trait ;)
Will your Vampires have destined mates?
Author's Response:
Yes, I like the idea that they have the ONE to spend eternity with, call me a hopeless romantic!
Date: 06 Nov 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much x (quite the compliment from you- love The Perfect Wife)
Date: 05 Nov 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
Good story but Jessica ewwwwwww .......LOL hope his tastes change. Thanks :)
Author's Response:
We have to see his growth as a vampire from shagging anything to being with the true love and committing eternally- bit like a man then! So yes his taste does improve, I nearly had him having a' go' at Mike Newton and thought better of it! Hope you continue to enjoy. x
Date: 05 Nov 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
When will Edward actually meet 'his Isabella'?
Author's Response:
Soon, I'm just writing that meeting now!
Date: 05 Nov 2011 7:33 PM Title: Arrival
love more *traditional vampire* Darkward that is not out killing humans, yum! don't really like that Jessica got a sample of him, lol and I can't wait for him to meet Bella :)
Author's Response:
I had to start him some where...at the bottom, it had to be Jessica (and Mike) to show his progression...his tastes will improve
Date: 05 Nov 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
me encanta por favor actualiza pronto
Author's Response:
will try to, have 4 more completed chapters all in the process of being beta'd and tidied up. x
Date: 05 Nov 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
cant wait to see where this leads
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
Love it!
Date: 05 Nov 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 05 Nov 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
So how is he going to get Isabella there?
Author's Response:
No can't tell you...that would spoil it for you, but I can tell you I've just finished writing that chapter! small tease ;)
Date: 05 Nov 2011 4:29 PM Title: Arrival
Really good start, can't wait for more!!
Date: 05 Nov 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
yes, come on home, Isabella........
Author's Response:
I feel a song coming on....very good x
Date: 05 Nov 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
You have awakened a fearsome craving for more of this story! Thanks a bunch....
Author's Response:
Oooo that sounds good, thank you
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
I so like this story so far!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2011 11:31 AM Title: Arrival
Now I need to dream, LOL.
Author's Response:
Good night, sweet dreams
Date: 05 Nov 2011 7:02 AM Title: Arrival
I am sure i am going to love this
Author's Response:
I hope so too, I'm really excited about writing it,
Date: 05 Nov 2011 3:40 AM Title: Arrival
I'm really looking forward to how you develop this- makes me think of Wuthering Heights and a dark, vampiric Mr. Darcy. Yum!
Author's Response:
Good observation and a great compliment I was thinking Wuthering Heights and there will be a little beauty and the beast thrown in too!
Date: 04 Nov 2011 11:38 PM Title: Arrival
Wow, I need a cigarette (and I don't even smoke!).
Great start :)
Author's Response:
Ha! Thanks for your review much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2011 10:52 PM Title: Arrival
Trying to get breathing under control. In and out.. Omg that was Idont know how to say it intense. I hope you continue this one. WOW>
Author's Response:
Thanks for fab review, I will be continuing as I'm really excited about this one too, 5 chapters already done and currently being beta'd. xxx
Date: 04 Nov 2011 9:26 PM Title: Arrival
That was a climatic first chapter! This should do well. I am surprised you don't have more reviews already.
Author's Response:
Very kind of you to say so. x
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2011 9:16 PM Title: Arrival
Great start!
Author's Response:
Thanks ;0)