[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 49
both they have both missed out on so much
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sigh...my heart did a little flip with the last two lines...I want more!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this sounds like it's going to be angsty and heartbreaking...I can't wait to read more!
Date: 27 Dec 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 46
That is a mothers love Esme is so sweet and loving.
Date: 27 Dec 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 45
That was shocking Esme just cant believe how stupid Edward was.
Date: 27 Dec 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 44
she cant let him go
Date: 27 Dec 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 43
She is just confused but has a heart and still loves him no matter what
Date: 27 Dec 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 42
She must be in shock
Date: 27 Dec 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 41
Bella is not taking shit from anyone
Date: 27 Dec 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 40
Im glad he grabed his balls
Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 37
someone alone and trying to cope. Feeling less than desirable because the love of her life dumped her. So she went off the deepend. Loss of hope in the love area. Sad.
Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
she would be so much better to leave there... so much
Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
What a small town crappy ass thing to say. Bella would be better to leave there and find another place to live start over and never speak to a Cullen again.
Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 46
Well finally he comes clean! I think it will be better now that he has some support. I wonder how Bella is coping with her new found knowledge?
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 46
I don't know why I didn't get the updates.
Date: 17 Dec 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 39
At least she got rid of Mike
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 39
What is Jacob's relationship with Bella? I'm dying to know how Bella sank to this point.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 38
how did things get so messed up with her?
Date: 16 Dec 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 38
I still go for the kick his ass
Date: 16 Dec 2011 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 37
She stayed with mike because Edward left her for the same thing she just figured that is the way it was.
Date: 16 Dec 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
I think Alice is about to kick his ass
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 35
She had love she still is in love but he has hurt her so bad and now finding out that he knew about her dad SHIT
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 34
She is so broken and if he is not careful he will be broken by Jake
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 33
That is one way to talk to her once he figures out how to get his foot out of his mouth.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 32
At least he knows that she hasnt sleept with Jake.
Date: 13 Dec 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 31
His mom is not happy with what he did either.
Date: 13 Dec 2011 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
holly shit he just keeps shoving his foot in his mouth suprise his mom knows all about it.
Date: 13 Dec 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
That was an ice breaker
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 35
wow the truth hurts
it is hard to get out at times and hard to hear and comprhend
now he needs to see what his actions left behind
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 35
Bella is so full of anger and hurt. I don't see her forgiving him any time soon.
Date: 12 Dec 2011 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 27
He fucked up big time.
Date: 12 Dec 2011 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 26
So did Bella have a baby and it died????
Date: 12 Dec 2011 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
what is Emmett trying to say???
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
Okay I have read along. I get it he dumped her. He is still in love with her. Like he knows anything about love. She is the town whore. She has the label. She feels nothing anymore. WHY? Because the people she loved left. So she won't let anyone in. This is her coping. Seems like she has no hope.
I am still here wondering where this is going?
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Most of the time that kind of thing doesn't happen!
Date: 07 Dec 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
He is a joke. Please there is no LOVE in him. He is all about himself. He does not love her and if she is the town whore now why should he care. He sent her there. She clearly loved him and he clearly told her he had someone else he loved. HIS OUT. Please he is shitty
I probably can not stand to read this I hate Bella being so beaten down. I get sick of the Edward is better all the damn time. She trip she falls, she pretty and poor and stubborn and not popular. That is written so often.
Author's Response:
Oddly enough, you've proven my point. When an author gives only small bits of information, mostly based on hearsay, and entirely from one character's perspective, readers tend to jump to conclusions based on other stories they've read. While I'm tempted to correct the points you've made, doing so here would simply spoil it for everyone else, and honestly, I'm having far too much fun watching everyone jump to conclusions.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow maybe Edward should have taken her with him, so she didn't turn out the way she did. Thanks :)
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
What a stupid bastard I am going to kick his ass lol
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
So sad I am going to cry
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
You should of told her
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
so now she just takes fucking instead of love
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
He is the one that left her what does he expect
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
What a mess! I actually hate Charlie for not being honest. He knew what would happen. I hope he's rolling over in his grave now.
How the hell is Edward going to fix this?
Date: 05 Dec 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hard to see someone you love go down a dark path
Date: 02 Dec 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Your killing me here lol
Date: 02 Dec 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
wow his heart is breaking but why did he leave her?????????
Date: 02 Dec 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was a good first many more to come
Date: 02 Dec 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
She is in so much pain
Date: 02 Dec 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
They are perfect together
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
so it seems we are getting somewhere
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
wow alot of information to take in. you need to deal edward there is a reason
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
look what happened edward. why did you leave her
why did she do this to herself
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 18
Don't stop here!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2011 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella is trying to find love that she lost or at least feel loved for a bit poor thing
Date: 28 Nov 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Life sounds like it was pretty good
Date: 28 Nov 2011 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
Shit is going to hit the fan but he left her.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow so is bella a whore now that edward left her. willing to do what the wives won't how sad
Date: 28 Nov 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
What the hell happened to turn her into basically a whore?
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
i am dying to know what happen between these two
love it
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
well too bad you didn't go back for bella since you knew you left your heart with her
looking forward to the reason it didn't work or try
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
seems bella likes edward as well
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
so much to deal with. oh edward like a band-aid just rip it off
i can't wait
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
so he has a crush on alice's friend.
hmmmm
love it
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow edward is troubled. he needs to come to gripes with the past it seems. alot to get through or re-examine
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
To perfect was that the problem???
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
He is so smooth lol
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Sounds so perfect
Date: 25 Nov 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
How did it go so wrong?
Date: 23 Nov 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love the emotions coming through this writing-poor Edward. Can't wait to see what happens
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Damn! I was hoping there was another chapter before I caught up.
Date: 23 Nov 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
It has to be Bella
Date: 23 Nov 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
that is a great first date
Date: 22 Nov 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
what happened???? and how is he going to find her
Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
cant wait for more
Date: 21 Nov 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great beginning. I love your writing, as usual ;)
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
cant wait for more
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
it was natural why fight it??
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds sad
Author's Response:
Yeah, it pretty much is. I mean, it'll all work out for some happiness, but getting there isn't exactly a picnic.