Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 36
Great chapter, so much happening at once. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 36
Good Chapter.....
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 36
So Jacob got to marry Maggie and she's pregnant. Good for him. Now maybe he will fulfill his advisor position properly and leave the King alone.
What happened to Tia, Max and Emilia's mother? Those poor children are so out of their comfort zone but Queen Isabella seems to be reaching them with her directness and motherly compassion.
The news of Marcus being dead and Caius being captured has obviously not reached Meyer Castle yet.
How much longer does Aro have before he will be tracked down and Jane convicted of treason? And where is Alec?
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 36
looking forward to more
Date: 31 May 2012 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
Good chapter.....
Date: 31 May 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 35
looking forward to more
Date: 31 May 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 35
I hope the Queen has a safe and swift journey home. She now has three more charges to care for.
Did Jasper and Garrett send letters back to their loves?
Maybe the queen conceived while visiting her king.
Date: 31 May 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 35
What can I say. Another great chapter. And I think I know what is going to happen maybe in the next couple of chapters.......
Date: 30 May 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
Why is Benjamin beside himself if it is Jacob who wants to marry Maggie?
Leah and Sam, awe.
Maybe the Queen will find herself pregnant now that the King is away at war?
Date: 30 May 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
I hope Jasper is successful within the first day of his arrival.
I love how the country is pulling together to supply their army with everything necessary for a sound defeat of their enemy.
I am truly impressed by Tanya's loyalty to her Queen.
Time for the family healing to begin followed by the celebration of victory over their old foes.
Date: 28 May 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
looking forward to more
Date: 28 May 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
MORE PLEASE, HON!! :-D
Date: 28 May 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 34
Good Chapter......
Date: 25 May 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 33
Good Chapter......
Date: 25 May 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 33
I want the uncles dead, and I actually would like to see Edward do it!!!
Date: 25 May 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 33
Sometimes knowing the awful details is very very painful, but is most certainly better than not knowing & allowing your imagination to come up with something that, most of the time, is so much worse than the reality.
In Edwards case I am just a little ashamed in his small selfishness, but @ lease there was someone there that was willing to set him straight.
Love this story & was very excited to see this update in my mailbox this evening. *MWAH*
Date: 25 May 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 24 May 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
I think I left you one on FFN too. Nice job!!
Date: 24 May 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
well I was worried we would not get here all three of them!
Date: 24 May 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
looking forward to more
Date: 24 May 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
Leah was right to give her the blade.
Date: 23 May 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
Good Chapter......
Date: 23 May 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 32
Another great action filled chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 23 May 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank God! Aro, Marcus, and Caius need to pay and the need to pay soon. How about a hanging , but not to death, placed on the rack, cut their intrails out, draw and quarter them, burn their destroyed dead bodies in front of all citizens, and finally find a way to preserve their heads for all to see for all time. A hot poker in the ass would be good, too.
Date: 23 May 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 32
Glad Carlisle was able to talk Jasper out of riding off on a crusade of his own making.
Jane and Alec are pure evil, having chopped off their mothers head.
Having a difficult time being patient waiting for the other countries to send reinforcements and supplies. They lost 20 men, is that correct?
The family bed will aid in a quicker recovery now that they have been reunited.
Vanessa's first word.....dada, awe.
Date: 21 May 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 31
Will jerks come back to the queen?
How far away is Vanessa?
I could not tell by your description if all of the royal guard was killed or if Sam and Jared are still alive and winding their way back to the Royal Family.
I know the king and queen will survive but will they find their daughter and return the people of Dwyer in time?
Date: 21 May 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
looking forward to what happens next
Date: 21 May 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 31
How evil to leave a cliffhanger! lol
Date: 21 May 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi I love your stories - you have such a dynamic writing style. This story is really great and I love that Edward is back in Bella's good gracies. The plot is well set out and in order.
Date: 21 May 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
You're breaking my heart. I hope you update sooner rather than later. As ever, excellent writing.
Date: 19 May 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 30
GWTW is also my favored book & movie.
Great chapter....love the building suspense!
Date: 18 May 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
Huge mistake sending the entire guard to ride south. That leaves the royal family exposed.
Vanessa is a liability strapped to her mothers chest. How will Bella use her new defensive skills while trying to protect her heir?
Hope Sam is stubborn enough to leave someone in close proximity to assist the king and queen when attacked.
Date: 16 May 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 29
Treason is afoot! Jane has been the insider informant all along. I'm guessing the attack will take place on the Swan lands.
I'll bet no one will expect the Queen to be carrying a concealed weapon. Let's hope Leah has trained her well.
Date: 14 May 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 29
I have a feeling of forboding...I am sure that I am correct in my gut.
Date: 13 May 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
looking forward to more
Date: 13 May 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 29
Never could trust those twins!
Old Aro & Jane?? Gross...just gross!
Date: 09 May 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
looking forward to more
Date: 09 May 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
Good Chapter.....
Date: 09 May 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh no, not Alec. Jane is too close to the Queen. Will they both turn against her?
Isabella is smart to bring in Leah to train her.
Date: 09 May 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 27
All is too quiet in the kingdom. I'm waiting for the surprise attack by the ousted barons. Edward is still haunted by his inability to protect his queen. I hope he does not need to sacrifice himself in battle to secure the lives of his daughter and wife.
Happy for Kate and Baron Garrett.
I really liked the flow of this chapter.
Date: 02 May 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
Good Chapter.....
Date: 02 May 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 26
looking forward to more
Date: 02 May 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 26
Does she believe her husband will spar with her? It may ve looked upon by others as an act if aggression against the Queen. Bella needs to stick to the dummy until Jasper feels he can spar against her without causing the Queen any harm.
Author's Response:
If someone were to spar against the King as part of his training, that isn't seen as an act of aggression, it is them following orders by training with him. There are a lot of times when an order from the King or Queen goes against what you should do, but it is worse to defy your monarch than to follow convention, because in the end the monarch is the law. But I like that angle, your reviews are always very insightful!
Thank you for taking the time to review~
Date: 01 May 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Don't know how I skipped thus chapter but glad I found it. Pulled the pieces together quite nicely.
Date: 30 Apr 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
Jacob and Edward traveling together would make a great out-take. I can hear a lot of antagonizing banter. Haha.
I have to agree with the queen.......that was a very cute and diplomatic way to describe pregnancy.
I would like to think that the queen would want Tanya to share her life with a loving partner. Will she try to play match maker?
Date: 30 Apr 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
Good Chapter.....
Date: 27 Apr 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oath of Fealty ritual was very interesting. I enjoyed the way you tied together the use of the sward later on in their bedroom chamber.
So full if passion for each other.
You raise an interesting point on the heir to her throne, should they have a son. Something to ponder.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
wow their getting back on track update soon
Date: 23 Apr 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well their getting ready for war but when will it happen update soon
Date: 21 Apr 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
Good Chapter.....
Date: 21 Apr 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Things are happening so fast. I wonder how soon the brothers will makes their move?
Date: 19 Apr 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
It is an uphill climb, slowly traversed, yet the end results rendered will show a deeper devotion than was present prior.
Will Tanya be recommended as a wife to one of the new barons as a reward for her exceptional service to her queen?
Date: 17 Apr 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 22
Good Chapter.....
Date: 16 Apr 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 15 Apr 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
"the plan" nearly did him in. Edward is not stupid this is last hoorah if he messes up again. Isabella loves him and I think he loves her. His family had too much hate that they passed down. Remember in the beginning how he acted with his maid? He was not just a good old boy waiting on his one and only.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
A marvelous bridge and interlude between mistrust and faith again. His chapter filled a spot that, if rushed over, could have made the story seem far too contrived. This breathing space that Bella and Edward are working through is vital to their coming relationship. Kudos to you for doing it so well and realizing the value!
Date: 15 Apr 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
I wonder where they are hiding, and I think that they have friends in the court still. I am glad that Isabella and Edward are working to mend the trust that she lost in him by lying.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
Outstanding chapter!!! As ever, it was well written. Thank you.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
thye will get back to where they should be.wonder how long it will take them to find the barons?update soon
Date: 13 Apr 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved how you brought back the frightening incident of the 'animal' in the woods during their honeymoon. The question would be....was Edward's faithful servant from his ancestral home be involved in the plot against the Queen?
Maria was the soothing balm that Bella needed to get her through to the next step of mending the broken trust between her and her King.
It may be a slow process to rebuild the faith in their relationship.
Can't wait to read what you have in store for the barons.
Date: 08 Apr 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 21
So happy that he is free!now bella knows everything update soon
Date: 08 Apr 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder what will happen now. It seems to me that the Barons have swayed many court members to their plight....
Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
This story is so exciting, treacherous, loving and beautiful. I do wish it updated more often. I am so grateful you are writing it.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
I do love the intrigue! Kudos!
Date: 07 Apr 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
finally. and the uncles and their plan did not succeed.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
loved the chapter looking forward to mre
Date: 07 Apr 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Good Chapter........
Date: 07 Apr 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it! It's time for them o heal. Just glad the real criminals were found out. Now time to catch the barons!
Date: 03 Apr 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
I have finally caught up to your fan base. YEA!
I must say that I am thoroughly enchanted by your period piece.
Maria must sense the turmoil Isabella is experiencing otherwise she would not have appeared before being summoned.
Jasper is right to divide and intimidated the Uncles. Of the three brothers, I think Marcus is the weakest link.
Jacob is still a pain in the butt.
How will the king ever regain the trust of his queen?
Keep it coming, loving every word of it.
Date: 02 Apr 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 20
Tangled web and all of that!
Date: 02 Apr 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hmmmm! Maria's there? Curiouser and curiouser. Bravo, Edward! If they are to survive his actions now will lay the groundwork. Wonderful work.
Date: 02 Apr 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to the next hcapter
Date: 01 Apr 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Good Chapter......
Date: 01 Apr 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh shit!did maria see that she was needed or is she not to be trusted?update soon
well she knows now but will it really help edward
Date: 29 Mar 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder if Jacob is part of this and not just the uncles and Victoria and James.
Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
Finally....Isabella knows the truth. Hope it comes out!
Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
i'm sorry burt why tomorrow and why doesn't she question emmet further about Jacob, is she so stupid that she doesn't she what jacob is doing. She should have given him a good tong lashing with what he said about the king cinsidering the name of the baby, the king is still higher in rank than Jacob she should stand more behind her man than she does now
Date: 28 Mar 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
You're breaking my heart. Please let this nightmare end soon. The plot is incredible. I wish to on to solving the mystery and clearing Edward. Thanks for writing such an interesting story.
Date: 28 Mar 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG!wonder how that meeting is going to go and how everyone is going to feel about her meeting edward???UPDATE SOON Jacob is a jerk...he should be drawn and courtered.....
Date: 28 Mar 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good Chapter.....
Date: 28 Mar 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 26 Mar 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
I knew there was something fishy about James & Victoria. Just hope there's enough evidence to clear Edward & condemn those who are really guilty.
Great job!
Date: 25 Mar 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
COWARD, come on out and enjoy this. Edward did not do this we all know. James, Victoria and his......uncles.. All very bad people.
Date: 25 Mar 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow what a chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is how the brothers decided to handle getting rid of Bella and Edward?
Date: 24 Mar 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
looking forward to the enxt chapter
Date: 24 Mar 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
His uncles!!!!!!bastards edward can't go down like this! he needs to say something about his uncles being behind it, but not impliment himself. really hope james doesn't say that edward was behind it. oh UPDATE SOON can't wait till wednesday lol