Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
Finally, they're getting it together. I loved that he drove around the whitehouse grounds to take her on date, that was great.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
Okay, so my very pervy mind kicked in when Bella said "Totally head to head, and you're going down." Yep my mind went directly there. Because that's where we all want Edward to be.
Love the date, and the update. Thanks for writing.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
Loved it! Prezward all flustered! Got me squirming!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
loved the chapter
that was one hell of a date
congrats edward, you outdid yourself
bella seems to be ready for more they both do
he is a man after all with one hell of a title that is it. he is still a man with needs and dreams all the same
good for both of them
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
Well, it's a shame what a few bullies can accomplish and ruin things for the majority, isn't it? I've always read stories hear at TWCS and will continue to follow my favorite stories that travel here. Not only am I appaulled by authors being threatened, I , as a reader, am also tired of being bullied and having my choices taken away. Elitist censorship is despicable and tyrannical.
This was a sweet date that Edward put together. I'm still so curious who Seth's biological father is and if that has something to do with Bella being targeted. A bit of a mystery.
Till next time! ~ Daze
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
Great chapter.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
looking forward to more
Date: 03 Jun 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
The Presidential Treatment is one of my fav's!! So glad they are moving forward. Any teasers before Wednesday??? ;-). Please ....
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
Very good chapter, thank you
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
So glad to hear you and several of my favorite authors have backed up their works here at TWCS. It may become my primary location for fanfiction.
The date was perfect. Adored his driving from one side of the White House to the other. So sweet a gesture. How bold of Bella to insinuate their will be a follow up date where they will warn a movie and make-out on the couch like horny teenagers. Lol.
The bowling was an innocent move yet became the sexy trigger that sparked the heat. Can't wait for more!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
Love it! <3 Can't wait to read what happens when their realationship becomes public! Will Bella ever be the first lady? ;)
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
yay prezward is getting his Bella of woohoo can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 01 Jun 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
I love this story. I love all of your stories. You are an amazing writer. And I live how you don't make up random stuff like, in this case, flies. You didn't make up some random disease like I've seen some people do. Your writing is real, and I like that.
Date: 31 May 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
Okay, creepy perv in the lurch ...
Date: 31 May 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
Why isn't the White House routinely swept for electronic devices not registered with secret service?
Obviously this person is hoping to get their hands on material worthy of blackmail status.
I'm sure Prezward's staff is aware of just how happy Bella is keeping him. The question is, do they like her enough to keep things quiet for the time being?
Date: 30 May 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
Sounds like someone wants to record the two of them together and then release the tape. Maybe they are actually after Edward. They noticed he had a soft spot toward Bella and Seth. Sex scandal don't play out well on capital hill.
Date: 30 May 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
LOVE LOVE LOVE! <3<3
Date: 30 May 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
Love the way Edward and Bella are progressing.. now the mystery person needs to be revealed and taken care of...
Date: 30 May 2012 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
Great chapter
Date: 30 May 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
My guess is the VP wants the "head job"?
Date: 30 May 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
:)
Date: 30 May 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
i do not know who this dirty prick is who is the mystery point of view but i do not like him.
I do however love prezward and he is the highlight of my week.
Date: 30 May 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
Yay ! You made me hungry by the way :) tomatoe soup and grilled chs sandwich yummy!
Date: 30 May 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
This story is great - I am forever on the site waiting for the next installment, please don't make me wait too long.
Date: 30 May 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
:)
Date: 30 May 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
Damn, damn, damn. You sure you're not carrying over some of 'Master My I', with this slow torture.
Storage room sexing - hot hot hot. Damn Prez licking your fingers-naughty.
Love the update. I 've been rec'ing this on Pinterest, along w/ 'Hear Me'. I think I have at least 3 other people reading.
Date: 30 May 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
looking forward to more
Date: 30 May 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
sue is so great. yummy practicing time for our kiddies. Grrr who is the mystery POV... Ack
Date: 30 May 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
I agree with Seth, Prezward is good-good!
Such an endearing moment between the boys in Bella's life.
Wondering how he will find a way to take Ms Swan on a real date.
So that third persons pov that is monitoring the halls and had Bella's place trashed, are they happy about Edward being involved with his shoe throwing attacker?
How did Bella's meeting with her father turn out?
Date: 29 May 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
Edward is getting more and more attached to Bella and Seth. these pilot better get their act together so he can get home.
Date: 29 May 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
;-)
Date: 29 May 2012 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
:)
Date: 28 May 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
looking forward to more
Date: 28 May 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
loved seth and edward's convo-very cute. brownie points for edward
so the first date didn't go the way it should have. it will get better
love it
Date: 27 May 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
awww cute little mini date
Date: 27 May 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
hey
great chapter!
oh he will take her out properly... great!
they would make such a nice couple!
bye
Lil
Date: 27 May 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
Loved the chapter. I'm glad your son is putting some weight. Like I said before, you are one determined woman. Good for you Thanx for updating. See ya soon
Date: 27 May 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
Well I am glad they got a little time together. Seth is so cute. I love the good-good comment. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 27 May 2012 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
LOVE!! It was so sweet when Edward talked to Set, I hope that one day he will look at him as his son.. <3 adorable!
Date: 27 May 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
oh prezward the way to a single mom's heart is through her children you better be careful you don't crush them both.
As always i can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 27 May 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
Oh that was good, however way too short! A longer one next time???
Date: 24 May 2012 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
I do not trust Rosalie, but Edward and Bella were so.........................
Date: 23 May 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
aww for tucking in. Sue seems really sweet. hmm we'll see how rose acts in the future.
Date: 23 May 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
Rose is trying to cover her own arse. Thinking that Bella knows about her trists with Emmett, she will try and befriend Bella therefore preserving her position. Edward has made it very clear that Rosalie will not bad mouth or interfere again. Her job is on the line. Who knows, maybe a friendship will develop between the two women.
Was the intruder dumb enough to leave behind sny info as to his boss?
Date: 23 May 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
Prezward can tuck me in if he wants to ;-). Love that they are opening up with each other. Rose is nice.. Maybe Bella should hide !! Love it!! Update soon.
Date: 23 May 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
Well, Rose shocked me, but I am glad she talked to Bella. Edward tucking Bella in was so sweet. Sue is so good for Seth. I have no idea about Nauel. I can't wait for this to unfold. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 23 May 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
Bella is still a little upsetting in her actions. Being independent is fine, being stupid is quite another. All she had to do was call her father to find out about the house. Right she is the only one that can really judge what is missing. Her safety is important for Seth.
Date: 23 May 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
Great chapter. Get the "slow" but can't wait for a little forward progress.
I'm thinking maybe the stalker/evilness has to be someone close. Someone unassuming who could gain the confidence & access the CCTV monitors in the whitehouse. With Nahuel, the logical person would be someone from the Amazon but I don't see the stalker as a female. Maybe it is and you'll fool us all!
Looking forward to all of it....the relationship, the solving of the stalker & yes, the seduction!
Date: 23 May 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
I think Rose changed her attitude because she had to change her attitude or loose her job. I think it was forced. She is willing to play nice because she would do anything for Edward. She has noticed that Edward is happy. Edward and Bella are sizzling when they touch. I don't know how slow they will be able to go. They might combust.
Date: 23 May 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
yaaayy! <3 new chapter! :) loved this! <3
Date: 23 May 2012 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
looking forward to more
Date: 23 May 2012 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
Great story and chapter, thank you.
Date: 23 May 2012 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
:)
Date: 23 May 2012 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
:)
Date: 22 May 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
Love it!
Date: 21 May 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
I am so glad they worked out that communication problem.
Date: 21 May 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
Thanks for the awesome update.
Yes, the heat is definitely on the rise!
The a/n was reassuring and answered the questions I was thinking. You must be clairvoyant, lol.
Date: 21 May 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
:)
Date: 21 May 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
I hope he does have a great day. I am so glad they have started to figure things out and are going to try their relationship. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 May 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
hey
WOW great chapter!
On my gosh...
really!
I think it's good that they wanna try it!
I really like that!
bye
Lil
Date: 20 May 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
love it and thank god they had their talk
men sometimes their brains get ahead and over think
so thrilled that edward will be courting ms swan. should get very interesting
Date: 20 May 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
Uh yeah! I'm squirming here, 38,000 feet in the air and all the air vents are on high!
I LOVED IT!!
Date: 20 May 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
Oh what a wonderful chapter. I really hope they make it. Yes, we need to find out what's up with Jazz and Em and Rose.
Date: 20 May 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
Woot woot!
Date: 19 May 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
ooo Prezward and Bella got there orgasm on yay.
CAn't wait to see what happens when the staff find out about it.
Date: 19 May 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
awww glad they got to talk....and play
Date: 19 May 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
Yes, that was some sexy communicating they were doing about their lies and dislikes, oh wait, maybe just likes;-)). All good, can't imagine who the dead guy is because I can't imagine we got James out of the picture that easily.
Date: 19 May 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
love love love! <3 please never stop! ;) They are finally acting romantic! yay!
Date: 19 May 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
That was hot!!!
Date: 19 May 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
Great chapter! I love that they are working it out and that he is letting them meet aro so that he can start to prepare meals for Seth!
Date: 19 May 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
;looking forward to then ext chapter
Date: 19 May 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
:)
Date: 19 May 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
Edward and Bella finally!! :). Love, love, loved it!!!!! Update soon;)
Date: 16 May 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
Bella should have been a little more encouraging with her side of the kiss. Her side must have said she was not interested. Edward was being a gentleman and accepting her answer. He wasn't going to push the issue. That was a critical moment and Bella blew it. You can't give mixed signal if you are interested in a person. It is a big risk for Edward to show interest in her. She better be sweet and and not embarress him. She can have a razor sharp tongue. She needs to put that away and be sweet than honey. Edward has been so good to her and her son. Much more than she has been to him.
Date: 16 May 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
I think I would prefer two small updates, but I'm fickle and may change my mind. Woman's prerogative and all that, you know. Haha
I think Bella's pulling away was due to her just waking up, morning breath, etc. She had no idea he would take it as rejection. Edward is so used to getting what he wants. That kind of instant gratification has him acting as a petulant child that was reprimanded for taking something that didn't belong to him.
Let's see how convincing Bella can be behind closed doors! Will Edward's intoxicated state cause his filter to be non-existent?
Date: 14 May 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
I wish Edward would have let Bella say what she wanted to begin with, but I think whatever happens next will be very interesting. I can't wait for Sue to start work. Seth is going to love being with her. That is going to help Bella so much. Great job...thanks!!! As for the chapters...I think I would like 2 shorter, but I am game for whatever is best for you. Thanks!
Date: 14 May 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
I will take my updates however you choose to send them and be very, very thankful! I think Edward is trying to maintain professional distance here and also protect Bella's reputation. God bless Alice! I loved the bit with Rosalie. And Emmett I the elevator...too funny! As far as the Senator and Mrs. Cullen go, I don't think Edward really cares a lot. It's his job, his office,his, life, and ultimately his decisions. He wouldn't be where he was if he based everything he did on them.
I'm glad your little guy is doing well and holding is own. I also hope that you had a Happy Mother's Day, as I did.
Date: 14 May 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
hey
WOW great chapter
My gosh... he locked the dooor!
is this exciting :)
Hope it will be good!
bye
Lil
Date: 14 May 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
ok, that was mean... please update fast...
Date: 14 May 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
ooooh rose and em got caught. Oh Edward overreacting from the kiss. The media is SOOOOOO annoyting sometimes.
Date: 14 May 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
I actually like the shorter chapters 2xs a week.
Date: 13 May 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
looking forward to more
Date: 13 May 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
:)
Date: 13 May 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home
:)
Date: 13 May 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
Yes!
Date: 13 May 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
OMG, of course you would leave us right here. Meanie. Loving this story, but then I've said that from the first.
Thank you for the update.
I would prefer 2 smaller chapters.
And, I can't wait for your Drabble. Thanks for writing.
Date: 13 May 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
Whatever works for you but I'd rather have a long chapter.
I think Edward & Bella need to talk! The attraction is there but maybe the timing is off. Maybe a littl kissing and communication so no misundestandings?
Date: 13 May 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
Well I am so glad Edward did not have another woman in that room.. awkard
Date: 13 May 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
well edward i wish you would have let bella talk to you in the beginning
i know she likes him and is worried what others think. but hey daddy gave his blessings and she was happy about that
i am thrille dsue will be taking care of seth. a good fit
looking forward to more
Date: 13 May 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
omg! Please update soon! xD<3
Date: 13 May 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
Looking forward to the next chapter....
Date: 13 May 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
Shorter chaPters. That way I get some of it sooner! Great chapter. I hope Bella pulled back because of morning breath and that's it.
Maybe Rose won't be such a frigid bitch of she starts getting some from Emmett.
Date: 13 May 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
I am really looking forward to finding out what will be happening behind the closed door!
Date: 13 May 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
:)
Date: 13 May 2012 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
ooo how am i supposed to choose how often i want chapters, i would have you post it all now so i could read it to completion if i had my way. But i will go with whatever you prefer.
Silly Edward a girl pulls away from a kiss and he automatically thinks he has overstepped. Can't wait for Bella to explain that it isn't the case and maybe you know jump his bones to show him how wrong he is. But as any parent knows disruption free time is hard to come by would love for Seth to strat to cry right at the most important moment.
Sorry i am totally waffling can't wait for the next chap
Date: 11 May 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home
Bella needs to learn how to be grateful. She did not need to snap at him when he asked for a list of items for Seth. She knows people are after her. She knows the reporters are hounding her. She says she loves her son, so why would she put herself &/or him in danger to go shopping. Edward is trying to help her and keep them safe. If she doesn't care about the safety, then she should just go back to her house. Bella can be so stupid. Why is she lacking basic manners and respect. Alice seems to have been taught these lessons. Bella acts as if she was brought up in a dumpster. She also must have some mental illness that needs to be checked. Her mood swings are ridiculous.
Date: 11 May 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home
Nice! The relationship is growing rather naturally - not forced. The break in was a surprise. Thank you for letting Charlie survive, by the way! Too many punches would seem contrived here. Again, the mystery here is first rate and I love it! Also, hugs to your little guy from a fan.
Date: 10 May 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home
I am glad Charlie didn't get hurt. I wonder who was in the house. That kiss was so sweet. I hope there are more to come. Great job...thanks!!!