Date: 11 May 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this chapter. I wonder why he disappeared.
Date: 09 May 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 30
oh! It is getting close now!! Can't wait to read the next one! :)
Date: 08 May 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 29
oh poor Edward... I don't think that his guilt will go away :(
Date: 08 May 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh! :) can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 08 May 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
well, well, well..........sounds like Edward and Bella are getting soon ;-)
Date: 07 May 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
OK, i'm not so mad at him any more
Author's Response:
He was never going to stay away too long :)
Bee xx
Date: 07 May 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
well the date didn't go quite how she planned... but in the end she got Edward back :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 07 May 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
uh oh... well I know Edward will flip when he finds out about her date... now I just wonder if Alice will tell him and he will try to stop it before hand or he will find out when she is on the date :) Can't wait to read more!
Date: 03 May 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
so sad.......doesn't her dad see how this tearing his daughter apart?
Date: 03 May 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 24
damn Charlie! thats all I have to say :(
Date: 02 May 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
uh oh ... nothing like an angry father on a rampage ... Can't wait to read the next one!
Date: 29 Apr 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow Poor Edward :( It was along the lines I have been thinking after the last few chapters that you gave us clues :) Can't wait to read the next one!
Date: 28 Apr 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
Looks like they are going to have to disappear sooner than later. Too bad :-(
Date: 28 Apr 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
Enjoying the story...love the cliffy..
Date: 26 Apr 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
uh oh... more answers just lead to more questions! :)
Date: 25 Apr 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
ohhh nooo!!
Date: 25 Apr 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
ughhh Bella is too desperate!! she should be more confident
Date: 25 Apr 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
i feel sorry for Bella and i don't like this Edward:(
Date: 25 Apr 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
ohh this is sad:(
Date: 24 Apr 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! and some more little slips on Edward's part :) Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
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Author's Response:
Thank you for all the wonderful reviews :)
Bee xx
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Heck yeah!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yay! I just KNEW he was in the witness protection program!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great job!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is all I have to say.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
LOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVEE ITTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awwww!!!!!!!!!! Love it!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing, as always :D
Date: 22 Apr 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow... great chapter! can't wait to read more!! :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
YES!!!!! that chapter almost made me cry! Bravo!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Not much goin on in this chapter, but still really good.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
I would have squealed in excitement, but it's two-thirty am, and everyone but me is sleeping. IT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wish there was a bigger smiley face but this is the biggest one I got :D
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome! I'm not in a looking-at-things-critacally mood, so I can't offer any advice at the moment. Really good! :)
Date: 21 Apr 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
LOVED dirty weekend!! Can't wait to read more!!! :)
Date: 20 Apr 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
LOVED tanya's reaction...priceless!!! LOL ...... so witness protection huh? Hmmm.... Can't wait to read the next one!
Date: 14 Apr 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad that Edward finally realizes that he is fated to be with Bella. I can't wait to see what he is running from. It sounds like Bella may have some hard decisions to make coming up. Oh...I can't wait for Tanya to find out about them. She is going to be livid! Great story!
Date: 14 Apr 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG........what the heck was Edward running from!!!!!
Date: 13 Apr 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
yay for Jacob's reaction.... but being that he is a bit older I would hope he would have a mature reaction..... Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yay!!!! I was so worried that he was leaving her again. I kinda feel sad for Jacob, and I'm not necessarily a normal Jacob sympathizer in most stories, however this Jacob really seems kind. Glad Edward was able to spend time with Carlilse and Esme. Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter! Oh, and Who on earth couldn't relate to the dog Molly licking all over Edward? LOL!!! Yummy!
Date: 12 Apr 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
yay Edward has seen the light... lets just hope Bella doesn't regret her decision in the future .... Can't wait to read the next one!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh my gosh I had to pull the song up and listen to it and Oh yes, I could see her crying over this too!!! Oh boy do I fear that our fella is oreparing to leave or is that just my overly suspious mind at work here... Love the story....
Date: 12 Apr 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
amazing chapter! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ooooh this is so good... my heart just aches for both of them... Selfishly i'm hoping for a life altering tragic accident that takes Charlie's life so Bella will be free, and then they wouldn't be alone... see told ya I was selfish...mean of me to want Charlie dead right?!?! till next time... hope he didn't disappear on her....
Date: 10 Apr 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
so sad for both of them :( Can't wait to read more... hopefully Jacob doesn't take the news that she only wants to be friends to hard.
Date: 08 Apr 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh...what a joyous, torturous puzzle.....bless Bella's poor heart.... Edward is oh, so stubborn....
Date: 04 Apr 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved this!! Can't wait to read more! :) Such an amazing story I really am enjoying it.... will we get any clues as to what is up with Edward?
Author's Response:
Edward's truth isn't too far away don't worry, plus it will all be in his POV. Thanks for the review :)
Bee xx
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
I actually cried reading this chapter, OMG I wish he could confide in her. What a good story and interesting twist on NM of sorts. Can't wait to hear from Edward as to what Mr. Black said about Friday night and Bella... goodness this is good
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It's great to here you are enjoying :)
Bee xx
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward you are so dang frustrating here...how come you won't allow Bella to be with you...Why do you have to be all alone, unlike the rest of the family?!?! you deserve happiness too!?!? stomps foot and whines on Bella's behalf...
Love the story thanks for the chapter update
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Really bad in the long run
Date: 03 Apr 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Is Jacob somehow blackmailiing Edward? Edward says, "Jacob is really a decent guy." Seriously? Jacob is total slime. What boss swings that kind of sexual innuendo at a brand new employee? Not just this chapter, but others as well. I hope Bella slaps Jacob with a sexual harrassment lawsuit if it continues. Oh, but that's right. Poor girl is trying to start her career. And here we have it. The ultimate misuse of power by "the boss." Hardly a "decent" guy. Is Edward blind? Bella's better off taking care of herself than having some slimeball "take care of" her.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! and yeah not sure if the foreplay is going to make things any easier... who is Edward kidding? LOL Can't wait to read more!
Date: 31 Mar 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
just found this... and I am loving it!! Can't wait to read more! :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
hell YES I want to know what he is hiding from or what the big secret is.....arrrgggghhhh so frustratingly GOOD!!!! TY for another chapter
Date: 30 Mar 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
gtreat i want more...
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
such a good good story and intriguing....so many questions as one reads....like what on earth is keeping him on the lam, and why can't he be with his family....what on earth happened to make him leave her behind and pushing her to find someone new.... especially If what he said was true about her being the only woman he has had full blown sex with ever... yea, didn't get that he didn't fool around just not intercourse...can't wait for more... Laters Kathy....
You are very talented and good luck with your endeavors... awesome story.... pulling me right in.. giggles...
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad she brought up the pimp part. I'm so angry with Edward for that
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
thank you for the update.I love Edward & Bella together.Can't wait to find out what he is hiding, and where is the rest of the family.until you post again
Date: 27 Mar 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What a great story!! Wondering what the deal is with Edward. Is he in the Witness Protection Program? Some sort of undercover agent? Looking forward to your next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review. I will be updating soon, I promise. :)
Bee xx
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
new reader to your story, I just love it.....Can't wait to find out why Edward had to leave.................Where is the rest of the family?...Will they make it through the night without making Love....I seriously doubt it.....I loved when Edward was teasing and Tanya was having a fit!!!!......Can't wait to see how the story unfolds, until you post again
Author's Response:
Hi rodeinti, thanks so much for the review. I'm new to this site. I only joined today so thank you for being one of my first reviewers. :)
Bee xx
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
hum...so he's 24? well that explains somerhings, not much but some....I too was trying to figure out how he was an accountant at such a young age......this is so good...
Author's Response:
Hi Twifan1228, thank you so much for all your reviews. I'm glad you are enjoying my story. I only joined this site today so thank you for being my first reviewer. :)
Bee xx
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
hum...no, no he isn't giving amything away that's for sure....can't imagine what he's running from...
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow, this is really good...confusing as all hrck...is he or isn't he a bad guy and is hie in some sort of WitPro or something...just lots of questions...still ver good... Kathy
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
mercy...must be Edward
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
great first chapter can't wait for more... looking forward to the next chapter.. on to read ot now... thanks for writing and sharing this with us.... Kathy