Date: 08 May 2010 2:52 PM Title: Jingle Bells
I loved Charlie's reaction. It was perfect for a dad that's not had his daughter in his life much and one that connected so completely with her ex. I'm sure Edward seemed out of place in that house and Charlie knew it. There's no hiding a class difference like that.
Leah and Seth were awesome.
Author's Response:
Yeah...lots of people got mad at charlie...but he was being true to him and he knew something was up the moment he saw Edward.
Leah and Seth were a blast to write.
Date: 08 May 2010 2:27 PM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
Jailbait has skills.....so he can't be that young!
Author's Response:
He's not as young as she thinks...thanks for the love!
Date: 08 May 2010 1:54 PM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
Awe, Edward must really love her to get his feelings hurt by her not wanting him to move in right away and him being upset over her not inviting him to meet her parents. He's so sweet :)
Author's Response:
He does love her and he wants to be there to support her because he can see that Jake wasn't there for her. It will continue to work out. Thanks for taking the time to review so faithfully~
Date: 08 May 2010 1:49 PM Title: Something Worth Celebrating
Everything seems to be coming together. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
The world is falling into place, and the baby's coming!
Date: 08 May 2010 1:44 PM Title: Something Worth Celebrating
Oooohh I wish I had had some of Bella's shirts while I was pregnant. I hated people touching me. My mother was the WORST. And, of course, you can't say anything to your mom because it's just rude. So I grumbled in silence until I got home, and let my hubby have it. I'm surprised I'm not single today! But seriously, great chapter! I love that they were so excited about her article. And that Alice finally spilled....ha! You rock with this story (and of course all your others!), and I hope you know that!
Author's Response:
Alice finally stopped fighting her inner cougar! Thank you so much for the love and I'm going to be posting again very soon!
Date: 08 May 2010 1:40 PM Title: Something Worth Celebrating
Ironic I'm reading this today. I'm going to a baby shower this afternoon :D Thanks for the post...great as always
Author's Response:
Well have fun at the baby shower!
Date: 08 May 2010 1:38 PM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
Okay, meeting Esme wasn't the disaster I was expecting. Again, thanks for the reality of her not being immediately accepting. I also like that you aren't having her hating Bella either.
Author's Response:
Esme's reaction was so much fun to write! I wanted her to be similar to Edward, freak at first and then realize her error and work to make it better.
Date: 08 May 2010 3:51 AM Title: Where the Boys Are
That was a great 19 yr old reaciton for Edward to have. I don't think any college guy that age would be intially over the moon to be a daddy.
Thanks for not making him a trust fund baby that never has to work. The reality of him having to work a part time job while she has a full time one is refreshing to see.
What a way for Daddy C to find out the news. I can't wait for Momma C's reaction.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he did handle it well for his age, but I didn't want the angst of him taking too long to realize he would miss not being there for his kid.
I wanted the reality of having to work because not every son of a doctor has millions stored away and he also wants to 'be a man' about it.
Momma C's reaction is SO much better than Daddy C's...thanks again.
Date: 08 May 2010 3:09 AM Title: The Light of Day
For a minute there you had me wondering if Jake was abusive to Bella. The way she reacted to spilling the wine made me think of someone who was afraid of either getting hit or verbally abused. Of course seeing Jakes reaction to her and Edward it wouldn't have surprised me.
*sigh* The joys of the spin cycle :)
Author's Response:
Nope, no abuse in this one, just a very nervous girl...the laundry sex is one of the most mentioned things in all the reviews of anything I've written.
Date: 08 May 2010 2:43 AM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
What a great first chapter. I'm interested to know if Sam called Jake or if he was just showing up anyway. He was such a douche to her.
Edward was so sweet and totally hot when needed. What a way to start over :)
Author's Response:
Wow! Complete coincidence as far as Jake goes. I wish I could start over with Edward too! Thanks for the review...I'm kind of blown away that you're reading my story...having one of the admins take the time to read it as fast as you have makes me smile so thanks for the love.
Date: 08 May 2010 1:58 AM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
i loved how Esme reacted. i was laughing the entire time, and my how fast she figured it out. smart woman. this is great. please continue.
Author's Response:
When my sister was pregnant we had some funny family reactions, it was hilarious.
Date: 08 May 2010 1:48 AM Title: Where the Boys Are
yeah, i kinda saw it coming (twss), and YES i am glad it is Edward's and not Jakes. please tell me HE is OUT OF THE PICTURE for GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Jake will pop up one more time, but Edward will be very sure of himself and their relationship at that point.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 1:25 AM Title: The Light of Day
yeah baby, i am loving some laundry sex!!!! i've actually done that before, it really does work!! woo hoo!!! please lets continue. lurve this story and JailbaitWARD!
Author's Response:
awe...thanks trace, I'm glad you loved the laundry sex...I had fun writing that lemon. Glad jailbaitward tickles your fancy~
Date: 06 May 2010 7:32 AM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
i hve to say, renee really surprised me. i really expected her to be the one most adamantly against bella being pregnant (not that there's much she can do). but i expected her to be more angry and mad. but nope. she was supportive and caring and kind to her pregnant daughter. i guess it's because she was kind of in the same situation as bella, with an unplanned pregnancy at a young age.
Author's Response:
This one I played close to the book where Charlie thought Renee would be the heavy about the wedding and then she turned around and told her she supported it.
Date: 06 May 2010 7:30 AM Title: Jingle Bells
i'm glad that bella has such a good family to support, despite the way charlie acted when he found out. despite her parents' divorce, bella really did luck out in the family department because both of the ex-spouses found very wonderful people to be with. i really love the way leah was around edward. she really helped him get an insight into charlie and bella's family life
Author's Response:
She did luck out with her step families and leah for me was a big part of that becusae she sees thru the junk and saw Edward for what he really was, a good guy who loves her step sis.
Date: 06 May 2010 7:28 AM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
it's too bad that the picture in here with the bitchy pregger shirts is kinda small..we can't read the words.. oh wells...
i think it's funny that both of bella's friends are getting with (or about to get with, in alice's case) with both of edward's friends. wow.. and all three of the girls are about 5 years older than the guys.. really funny, with all the friends being in the same situation as each other (minus the pregnancy)
Author's Response:
the shirts will come up in the next three chapters to be posted so you'll get to see them. the cougar club is having some fun with Edward and his boys but there are real feeling behind it.
Date: 06 May 2010 7:25 AM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
edward's parents are soo cool! i can't believe they didn't completely freak out about the whole situation. they accepted bella pretty easily, i think. except when esme asked bella if the baby is edward's..though i understand why she asked that, it was not cool...but she was being all mother bear and trying to protect her son so i have to respect that
Author's Response:
she was just like Carlisle, she had to look out for edward but once she knew it was on the up and up she made the about face and supported them.
Date: 06 May 2010 7:22 AM Title: Where the Boys Are
i really like the way bella talks to edward's parents. she was very mature with the way she handled the situation. and she was very honest with them.
Author's Response:
Edward's dad saw what was there and how she was willing to take responsibility.
Date: 06 May 2010 7:20 AM Title: The Light of Day
i like that their sex life is so adventurous and that edward is learning a thing or two about sex from bella. but he feels soo green and she is like the cougar... but they both love each other so much. i'm glad
Author's Response:
I had fun writing that one and Edward is learning some things from her which is a switch. Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 06 May 2010 7:18 AM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
arghghg...jake is sucha jerk! he was the one cheating on her yet he dares to call her a whore. what the heck is wrong with hiM?
Author's Response:
he was a jerk and it will be coming up again soon. thanks
Date: 06 May 2010 5:23 AM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
phew! you scared me. and i'm glad that edward is going to be moving in. finally!!! now is the time they need to start learning about each other more, like their living habits.. they shouldn't have been waiting, i think. i know that bella has so many issues and baggage from jake and her parents' failed marriage but seriously, she's thinking too much with her head.
Author's Response:
She is way too cerebral with this mess, but she's finally letting her heart make some of the decisions for her for a change.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:03 AM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
A little scary there for a moment but I'm glad it turned out so well. At least Charlie came to his senses!
Are we going to hear wedding bells anytime soon?
Author's Response:
You'll know more soon, it did get dicey, but Charlie's on board now and they can move towards the due date. Thanks for the continued love.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:56 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
awwwww!
Author's Response:
thanks so much!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:31 AM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
I am really enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it, this story has really found a home here!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 3:18 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
A.G.W.
Whew!!! That was a bit of a scare there!!!!
But all's well in the end thanks god!!!!!
More when it's ready please!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
THanks I'm glad you enjoyed it and there will be more soon. Working on it right now!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:18 AM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
I know, I'm such a sap sometimes :)
Author's Response:
mwah!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 9:57 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
Both Charlie and Bella are so stubborn. I am glad that Edward called Charlie about the crisis and that he came to be by his daughter's side. I love that he called Edward 'son' and told him not to move. It was also great that Bella caught Edward crying and asked him to share what he was feeling. I love that he was honest about his fears and that she acknowledged her mistakes and her need to be able to do things for herself. It was great that she asked him to move in with her. I love that daddy was right that they are having a girl, but will miss their debating back and forth. It was cute.
Author's Response:
Bella knew that she had to wait for Charlie to come around, because forcing it would have made it worse. Charlie knew he screwed up, and appreciated that Edward made good for Bella in his stead. Edward needed to open up and she needed to hear it. Knowing how hard it was for her to be without him and how scared he was made it easy to take the next step with him. I loved the debating too but had to have Edward be right...thanks for the detailed review and love!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:16 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
aww they're having a girl...im glad that charlie showed up though...great chapter!!!
Author's Response:
thank you...Charlie would never abandon her in a time of need and I'm so happy to have the chance to write Edward's interactions with his little girl soon!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:14 AM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
But why did her blood presure drop because she was run down?? So glad Charlie showed up and maned up. Love Edward and he is more man than most.
Author's Response:
When women are pregnant, their blood pressure drops as they have more area to pump the blood to and by overexerting herself, it caused her to pass out because of the drop in pleasure. Edward is something very special. Thanks for the love hon~
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:13 AM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
perfect indeed, I almost cried myself :P
much love!
Author's Response:
Awe...thank you so much! Love to you too~
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:26 AM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
Awwww. I'm glad that Edward called Charlie so that they could make up. He was being stubborn, but as soon as his baby girl was in trouble, he was there. Just like a good Daddy would be. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Edward knew he had to make that call. Charlie is stubborn, but like you said, he would never not be there for his girl. Glad you liked this one.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:22 AM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
So sweet...great chapter. =)
Author's Response:
thanks, I'm glad you liked it~
Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:17 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
I am so glad that Edward called Charlie as soon as he could. It was good for all of them that he was there.
Edward is moving in...Yeah!!! Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
This was an emotional, but very important chapter...thanks for the love!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:22 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
Crap now I have to wait for an update. Cute story cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
you're lucky, I update this one pretty regularly! Glad you like it though~
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:48 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
;)
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:14 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
Aw, how sweet was that. I'm glad that Bella and the baby are going to be okay, but she was overdoing it and that's not good. I'm just glad that Edward was there when it happened. And calling Charlie was a good move to make as well. It let him know about Bella and also that Edward is with Bella and is part of her life.
Author's Response:
Bella's finally learning that she can't do everything and Edward is there to pick up the slack. And Charlie got to see him step up and is impressed by it.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:08 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
i like this chapter, there is a lot of love in it. I am glad that Edward called Charlie it made it a little easier for him to say sorry to Bella. I am glad they are having a little girl, so cute. I am excited that Edward is moving in.
Cant wait for the next update, so exciting to see what is going to happen.
Author's Response:
Edward really stepped up this chapter and was well rewarded.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:54 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
Awe...that was a sweet chapter! *sigh* So much goodness it made me happy and he's moving in!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the sugar, had to push it so that Edward would call Charlie. Now all is right.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:44 PM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
Hum...I missed an update. I"m glad Renee took the news well.
Author's Response:
Renee was happy that her daughter is happy. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:39 PM Title: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
Yay he's moving in, Charlie is now on board with it all, Bella is going to listen to Edward and slow down, Cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks...I wasn't going to drag them out too long and now everything is as it should be.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:08 AM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
Great chapter. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks hon~
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:57 PM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
That was great! I loved the visit with Renee and Phil. Renee clearing up the argument between Charlie and Bella and explaining about the Leah pregnancy seemed to set Bella's mind at ease. It was sweet that Bella wanted Edward to record himself playing classical music for the baby. I really love this couple and was happy that they found some time to express their love for each other. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response:
Renee couldn't be the heavy in this one and Bella needed an easy holiday and a little explanation. Bella's growing to trust Edward more and more as she discovers just how different he is to other men. I had fun playing with the prego lemon. Thanks for the love!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:34 PM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
I am gald Renee had the reaction she did. As for Charlie...he has got a little making up to do!!! I understand not being trilled at first...it was a shock...but he said something really mean. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Charlie's going to come around soon. First it was shock and now he just doesn't know how to make it up to her. It'll work out!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:05 AM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
Glad that Bella's mom took the news so well. She really didn't need anymore stress right now.
Author's Response:
No she definitely didn't! It was nice to let her relax for a bit!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:02 AM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
Well I am glad that Renee took it better than Charlie did, I really do hope that Charlie tries and says sorry again.
I like how these two have just fallen head over heals for each other and how they are just so loving.
Author's Response:
Charlie will open up again soon, don't worry. They have fallen for each other and it is fun to write because it wasn't a planned and long standing thing.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:49 PM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
nice ride Renee was really cool about it that is funny.
Author's Response:
well it is a lot like the wedding news in the book, Renee was supposed to flip out so Charlie was the good guy, but that didn't happen.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:27 PM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
great chapter!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:21 PM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
A.G.W.
Awe!!!! Great chapter!!!! You've showed in this chapter that they really love each other!!!! (thud - that's me falling to the floor from the love!!!!)
More when it's ready please!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
thanks hon, I'm glad you felt the love!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:41 PM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
:)
Author's Response:
thanks for the love hon!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:36 PM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
Aw, Bella and Edward seem to be going a long time without seeing each other. Surely, there is something they can do to rectify that awful problem.
Author's Response:
It's the beginning of the sememster rush, Edward will be around more soon, he just has to get classes off and running then he'll find a groove again.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:20 PM Title: Feels Like New Years in July
wow nice ride indeed! poor bella she got spoiled in the holidays hehehe
much love!
Author's Response:
she did, but it just goes to show how much she really does love him!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:13 AM Title: Jingle Bells
I love it.. keep going!!!!
Author's Response:
awe...thanks hon!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:01 PM Title: Jingle Bells
loving the story so far...keep up the good work!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much! I'm working hard and will be posting the next one soon!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 10:49 PM Title: Jingle Bells
Really enjoying the story! Please update asap. x
Author's Response:
Don't worry, I'm working on it! Thanks for reading and enjoying it~
Date: 10 Apr 2010 9:36 PM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
Interesting and fast paced start, I'm looking forward to reading on. x
Author's Response:
Thank you! Your review was exactly what I needed!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 1:24 AM Title: Jingle Bells
I love your story so far! I can't wait to read more. It is very well written, and I was hooked right away.
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you so much! I'm glad you like it and I'm fast tracking this one so you'll have more to read soon!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 7:48 PM Title: Jingle Bells
ohh what a cute story. I understand where Charlie is coming from it would be a shock.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:17 PM Title: Jingle Bells
Good chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks hon!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:23 PM Title: Jingle Bells
Christmas day was tough, but I think these two will make it through what ever else comes their way! Great job...I can't wait to see Renee's reaction! Thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Awe...thanks! They'll survive it and much more, thats for sure!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:14 PM Title: Jingle Bells
I like that your Leah isn't a b!t(h. It's a nice change of pace. I loved how supportive Es and Carlisle are, and Edward's present to her was so sweet...as was hers for Edward. Nice job!
Author's Response:
I can't really write a hateful Leah, partially because some people think I'm a witch with a b as well. I had fun writing this chickie though! Esme and Carlisle want to show that they aren't alone and Ed and Bella know what the other needs to feel loved. It was a great way to show just how much they know each other. Thanks for the love pudding~
Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:21 AM Title: Jingle Bells
The thing I didnt like about Charlie this time is he had no reaction when she told him that Jake cheeted on her. I know it is a knee jerk reaction for Carlie he is her dad and loves her he will come around right????
Author's Response:
He knew Jake cheated...that didn't come across as well as i thought. It's that situation where if she had brought him home he could have pulled him aside and threatened to kill him if he ever hurt Bella again and then they would have been good again if Bella was happy. Edward and the baby was not the xmas surprise he expected. He'll come around .
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:12 AM Title: Jingle Bells
Fast thinking by Leah to get Edward out of Charlie's sight. It's good that they have a friend like Leah who really understands.
Can't wait to hear the reaction from Renee. Fireworks or waterworks?
Thanks for another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh yeah...Leah's seen gun toting Charlie in this situ and lets just say Sam's lucky he's still walking around with a head. Leah's a trip and I can't wait to work her in more!
It will definitely be the latter on the Renee question!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 5:33 AM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
love the first heart beat that is so cool and he is such a good guy wanting to be there to suport her all the way even if her dad has a gun LOL
Author's Response:
I was in the room when my sis found out she was having a girl and that sound echoes off the walls and it takes your breath away...its an amazing moment.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:40 AM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
I was almost shocked when some of the comets that Esme said I knew she would come around
Author's Response:
Esme was shocked and did react badly, but she made up for it rather quickly and will continue to.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:22 AM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
I thought Rosalie's middle name was Lillian.
Author's Response:
In the series it is, but the original name SM had picked for her was Carol, and I really liked that name so I through it in there this time around. Good catch though!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:02 AM Title: Jingle Bells
A Good Witch
Charlie didn't handle that too well at all did he???? Let's hope that turns around soon!!!!
What's next????? Looking forward to more when you post!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
No he didn't, but you're right, he will get on board sooner rather than later. Next is some Florida "fun" and the lead up to the new sememster starting. Thanks for the love, as always!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:02 AM Title: Jingle Bells
Cool chapter. It was very cool how Edward, even in the face of a mad Charlie, still stuck up for Bella and the baby. And even if Charlie stalked away, I'm sure he was impressed with Edward for doing that. That took a lot of guts on his part.
Author's Response:
Darn right he wsa impressed, but don't expect to hear ir anytime soon.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 11:44 PM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
:)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 11:26 PM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
:)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:22 PM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
:)
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:08 PM Title: Jingle Bells
well he better!! cause there's a child invelved there...
I love it!!!
much love!
Author's Response:
Charlie reacted badly, but he'll turn that attitude around quick.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:58 PM Title: Jingle Bells
It was very touching to see Bella tear up from the Christmas gifts that she received from Edward's family. I loved how Esme tried to make amends and show her support for the pregnancy by giving Bella a nursery. It was great that Edward got Bella her own rocking chair from home and refinished it.
The visit to Charlie's house was very interesting. I liked Seth and Leah right off the back. I was shocked at Charlie and Bella's exchange after she slammed the ultrasound picture on the table in front of him, but it made more sense after Leah's confession about her past. I loved that Edward stood up to him for how he was treating his daughter. Leah cracked me up with how she quickly spirited Edward out the house to the safety of the diner. I am glad that Edward finally got the explanation about what led up to Bella's break up with Jake and why it was so devastating aside from the cheating. It explains why Bella keeps Edward at arm's length.
Thanks for another great chapter!
Author's Response:
The parents reactions are all very visceral...it is what comes to them first, so Esme wanted to show that they'll be there for them and help with their grandchild.
Seth and Leah were so fun to write and they'll continue to be a blast. There's a lot of passion and anger there and it is a continuation of the fact that he went through this with Leah and now with his own daughter. Edward tried to stay back but he couldn't stand by at that point. Leah is going to be a trip when she's around more and I wanted her to be the one to spill the beans because she wasn't around to know what Edward knew or didn't know. Bella will get better with the trust issues! Thanks for the awesome review!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:30 PM Title: Jingle Bells
well I wasnt expecting a great receptionfrom Charlie for Edward, but wasnt expecting that kind of reception, either. Charlie didnt seem remotely angry about Jake cheating on Bella- did he just not comprehend that due to shock? Hope he comes around, kind of scared to see Renee's reaction now.
Loved the update
Author's Response:
Charlie loved Jacob, so when Edward showed up, he was taking out his frustration at Jake out on Edward because in his mind if Jake hadn't cheated, this little boy wouldn't be sitting there having knocked up his little girl. He knew before then that Jake had cheated, so he had planned to have to pull him aside and do the whole, "you hurt my daughter again and I'll kill you" thing, so most of it was shock that everything had changed so drastically. Renee will be interesting...
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:20 PM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
I love it!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like this!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:56 PM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
Sorry I'm a little late to the game on this update. It was a good one though. I Love the shirts. My fave is the ones with the hands and feeton the bump.
Author's Response:
That shirt seems to be the fave overall! Thanks for the review and I hope you like the next one!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:51 PM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
They got to hear the baby heartbeat. Bella really needs to work on her insecurities with Edward. I am so glad that he is extremely patient with her.
Author's Response:
He knows the insecurites are because of her past and not a lack of trust in him, which is why he's being so patient. Thanks for the continued love!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:47 AM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
great story
Author's Response:
awe thanks for the love
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:34 AM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
Sure hope the morning sickness doesn't last all nine months (like mine did!) or she really will be hormonal and tough to be around. Sweet Edward always trying to say and do the right thing for her and the baby.
Great chapter! Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the love...I'm not going to be that mean to Bella. There will be other issues to deal with.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:51 AM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks hon, love the support as always
Date: 01 Apr 2010 9:55 PM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
Good chapter. I'm glad that Edward is so involved in the pregnancy and wants to go with her to Charlie;s. That right there is a man who is in love with the girl and happy about the pregnancy.
Author's Response:
Edward is stepping up every way possible and that will make for an interesting Christmas.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 6:35 PM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
A.G.W.
Fabulous chapter!!! I'm excited for Bella & Edward and the baby on the way!!!!
But you've got me worried that Bella telling her job before her parents will end up badly. I hope you prove me wrong!!!
Now your note at the end has me confused. Do you have a new story started here at the Coffee Shop. I looked but couldn't find anything called "Good Sex". Hope you can clear this up for me!!!!
Looking forward to more as always!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
The job knowing first won't be the issue over christmas. As for the confusion over the note. This is "Good Sex" its the abbreviated chapter title I use instead of typing out the whole thing. Sorry for the confusion. More coming soonish!
A.G.W.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 6:14 PM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
Great chapter- I know Edward had is feelings hurt when Bella told him not to give up his dorm just yet, but she is being practical, and Edward was right Jake did a number on her. Cannot wat til Charlie meets Edward, going to be an interesting christmas.
Loved Bella's tip for Jasper, make Alice make the move- that'll be fun.
Cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
I'm writing Christmas now and interesting doesn't begin to cover it. The next chapter will be up soonish...
Date: 01 Apr 2010 5:33 PM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
loved it
Author's Response:
glad you enjoyed it hon!
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2010 5:14 PM Title: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it
Great chapter! It looks like Bella and Edward's relationship is moving along nicely and she is working on her trust issues. I liked Bella dropping in on Ed and the guys. She seemed to set Jazz's mind at ease. I can't wait to see Bella and Edward's visit to tell her family about the baby. The pregnancy tees are really funny and adorable. My favorite is the baby feet and hands coming out the black background. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Bella's issues will come into a little more focus in a couple of chapters, but she is working on letting Edward in more. Bella also understands that his friends are important and doesn't want him to drop them for her, and Rose keeps talking about how funny they are. Jasper needed to be calmed and whenthey do get together it'll be interesting. I loved looking for those T's and the holidays are starting the next chapter so you'll get the Charlie half of it...thanks for reviewing as always!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
I love your story, its great.
Can't wait for More.
Author's Response:
Awe...thank you!
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 6:43 AM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
Yes, definately different. Bella older than Edward and now pregnant. Didn't see that coming but it should prove interesting to see how they cope and their relationship develops.
So glad Jake is out of the picture and can't possibly be the father. Thanks for clearing that up!
Can't wait to see Jasper and Alice get together too.
Author's Response:
I had a lot of fun cooking up this plot and now I'm enjoying the good stuff! Jake is not the baby daddy, but he will creep back into this. Jasper and Alice will be interesting to watch them fight it.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:06 AM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
One set of parents down and one more to go. Actually, Edward handled Esme very well; he had a very good response to each of her concerns and actually is being very adult about this whole experience.
Author's Response:
Edward is being adult, mostly because he feels he has to step up and he wants to be the man she needs. He also knows how to handle his mom. I'm glad you liked this one!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: I Love Rock N' Roll
I loved it!
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy the rest of it!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:15 PM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
A.G.W.
Whew, that went well!!!! You had me worried for a second but, all turned out well!!!
Now you've got me wondering where your muse is going to take this story!!!!
More when it's ready please!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Awe...besides having fun writing and making banners for this stuff I have a brood of new stories that will be waiting in the wings for a while, but this one is the next one I plan to finish, simply because it's fun and easy to write and the chapters are short! I hope you like where I'm going because it will definitely be interesting!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:13 PM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
ahh great chapter- Well Esme now knows, but the coming telling of her parents isnt going to be good. Is Edward going with her to tell the parents? So glad to see an update- Cant wait til the next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the love. Yes, Esme knows but you're right the Swan-Dwyer holidays will be rough, and Edward will definitely be goin with her. More chapters are in the works so you'll be hearing more from me!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:34 PM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
It was very romantic how Edward explained to Bella that he meant it when he told her that he loved her. Bella was being very sensible about waiting to get married for love and not just because she is pregnant.
I love the meet and greet with Edward's parents. Esme was a riot when she cut through the crap and blatantly asked whether they were secretly married or she was pregnant. It was a nice surprise that Esme went to Bella's aid in the bathroom and apologized for her behavior.
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response:
That whole chapter was leading up to that, so I'm glad you liked it. Esme was very blunt because she smelled a rat. The reason Esme went in after her, was first she felt bad once she knew more of the situation, but also you knew Edward would have gpne in to check on her, so to have Esme want to do it sets up the relationship that will build between them as time goes on. I'm glad you liked it and I have a few updates in the hopper, so you'll be hearing more from me!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:52 PM Title: Serious Talks Ahead
that definitely went much better than it could have :)
Author's Response:
Yups...it did! Wait until they tell Charlie and Renee!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:27 PM Title: Where the Boys Are
A.G.W.
Putting your story on alert so I don't miss any updates!!!!
I'm loving the idea behind this story!!!!
More when you can please!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thanks again Cory. I had fun writing this and am enjoying the dynamic. Hope you enjoy the other stories as well~
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:53 AM Title: Where the Boys Are
Great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks...I saw that you favorited FiL so thanks for that! This story is far from over so check back for updates!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:18 AM Title: The Light of Day
So far, so good! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for liking it and taking the time to review!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 3:06 AM Title: Where the Boys Are
OMG I LOVE IT CONTINUE!!!! i cant wait to find out wat jake thinks about all this
Author's Response:
There will be a little wait until Jake comes back into it, but I promise it will be delicious! I'm still working to transfer my other stories but I swear you'll hear from me soon!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:43 AM Title: Where the Boys Are
I am so liking this story. And I'm glad that Bella called Edward to let him know there was a potential problem and they were able to work things out.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! When you are faced with something scary you stop holding onto things and focus on what's really important.