Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 50
she's going to have one hell of a hangover tomorrow...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 49
got the feeling it ain't gonna happen tonight....she'll pass out...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 48
geez, where is my Edward like this? add in that he's a sci-fi and/or computer nerd, and my ideal man would be complete....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 47
some place she'd never expect, probably. she is such a horn dog! isn't that usually the guy's thing? LOL what kind of woman's libber am I??
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 46
hot guy, hot car, what's not to love....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 45
so sweet, these 2...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 65
Outtake in EPOV please. As for the wedding bring it on :)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 44
so I see you're still not done here after 65 chapters....hmmmm....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 43
glad to hear you have plans for a couple dozen more chapters....I'm reading it all today in a marathon....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 42
that didn't take long....LOL!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 41
she's full of bravado, this little girl....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 40
these 2 were MADE for each other....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 65
I so missed these two together..they are so hot. :) I would love to see and outtake of the proposal!!! EPOV would be fun, but whichever you choose will be great :)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 64
A girl on girl love scene...either I totally forgot that from before or it wasn't said until now. Yeah, Edward totally had a different reaction based on that fact alone!!! That trailer is going to be rocking for the next two hours <3
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 65
I would like the proposal in epov always different to see a proposal to the mans point of view. great chapter as always
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 39
yep, I love reading about these two unlikely lovers, so drag it out as long as you see fit, just please please finish it eventually, OK?
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 65
Just what I need to start out my afternoon!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 38
yes, me, I want that too, come on over here.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 65
I'm a big fan of anything in EPOV, so you know who's version of the proposal I would love to read :) I knew Edward would be horny as hell after seeing Bella with Tanya. That is every guy's fantasy. LOL BTW... Is there going to be any pics of E/B's heart tats?
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 37
ok well i guess they will go at their own pace...which seems now to be racing off the page!!!! go go go!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 36
spanking? oh, I didn't know this was going to be THAT kind of a story....oh I don't mind at all, just wasn't thinking bubblegum bdsm.....LOL!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
oh damn....they still want each other....fucking LOVE that!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 34
oh you are so evil! the master of the cliffie! I love being teased....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 33
Ha ha! The joke's on me AGAIN! Not so what I imagined or expected! The cardboard cutout was among the things she sent for Jacob's daughter! That's what I get for expecting things! Now lets see the real deal....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 32
wow, so not the reaction I was expecting from Edward! Can't wait to see her reaction to the cardboard cutout of her that she encounters in the shop at her next appointment! not so good, I imagine...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 31
OMG.....what ever does he think of her now? doesn't he know she's the same girl he fucked two weeks ago?? I bet not...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
it never ceases to amaze me what people can build up in their minds about a situation that is so totally not what is really happening....just fucking talk about it, people!!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
what a way to find out!!!! I bet he feels like a first class perv now....LOL!!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 28
still with you, and happily so, my dear! oh I can't wait for this....but I will, of course!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 27
thanks for the background on Edward....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 26
I am very excited to see what comes next between them...I am really enjoying this story a fucking LOT and hope that you do finish it. I have started more stories than I care to remember, only to find the author never finished them...I resisted starting this one a long time ago because of that very reason. It caught my attention a while back but I only started reading now that I see you have started adding chapters again after a long haitus. Please finish it.....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
these 2 need to synch up and talk.....hope the do later on down the line...will he relent and look her up, google her? sorry my reviews aren't really reviews, more like stream of consciousness rant-like comments....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 65
Edward! I think it would be fun to hear from him for a bit.
Love their shared ink. They are so solid I love it!
Glad Renee liked him and approved!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
I can't believe he still thinks her claim to fame is being a porn star! LOL! He couldn't be farther off the track. Oh this is really good! I can't wait until her finds out....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
oh poor girl....i think she will find that she has underestimated both herself and him...eventually...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
more like a scared little girl coward. she is feeling way too much and has no experience with situations like this....selfish, yes, but I don't think that's the main emotion here.....I feel very protective, somehow, of these 2....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow what's this? she's feeling shy all of the sudden...oh I forgot how young she really is...what a way to start a relationship! i am assuming there will be one....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm not sure he's still thinking porn....I don't think he's thinking with his big head at all right now....more like with his other, more sexy, head.....he's in for a big surprise when he finds out who she really is....part of me hopes he never finds out!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
me *raises hand* I want them to keep going....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
so slow, such a tease....more, please!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
he has no idea....oh this is going to be fun...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 65
Very enjoyable reunion! I love that their engaged! Great chapter! Thanks so much!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh god, the imagination runs wild....tongue, fingers, cock. more of all....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh kay....I would love to feel a pierced tongue on my clit....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh you tease....lol!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh Edward, please make a move.....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
LOL! He thinks she does porn.....oh little does he know....I was right, too soo for lemons but not for fantasizing....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
lemons already? I bet not, but could be wrong....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
I bet Edward will be willing to make her scream....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wouldn't call him a manwhore....most men are like this....just hope he's not a cheater. I don't like cheaters....will Bella return tonight?
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
26...I said mid 20's so I was very close! An 8 year age difference is nothing! Mutual attraction at first sight....nice!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
mid 20's would be my guess...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
ok lets see....hot tattward....tattoo virgin Bella...hmmmm...what's not to like?
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love tattoos....have 2. This will be interesting to watch....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
still here. ok here we go. sad about charlie. love the ink idea...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
so far, so good....I hope Bella gets what she thinks she wants....and then some...
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
still reading....like that the chapters are short....makes it easy to catch up. Love snarky Bella....
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey there, I haven't read one of yours lately and this looked fun. I see you have started to pick up chapters again on it so I thought I'd take the chance to start now. Yes, she seems bratty, but hell what 18 year old isn't! I really enjoy reading FF and count you as a favorite among authors. See you again down the road!
Judy
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 65
So glad to get folowup re: proposal and heart tattoos!
As to the outtake - I always love hearing what's going on in Edward's head generally -- but especially with your Edward! He's such a sweet goober - it's so cute hearing this tough tatoo guy gush over Bella :)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 65
EPOV all the way.....love EPOVs :D
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 65
SO amazing! I really loved it SO much! Hmmm...I think I want the outtake in EPOV, since we don't hear from him as much :D
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 65
I love this fic ... I tried to wait 'til it was finished, but I just couldn't! So, I read it all Friday night & pimped you out on my blog yesterday! ;)
i would love to see the proposal in EPOV.
Thanks for sharing your awesome talents with us!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 65
so happy renee and phil didn't give her shit!!
and epov for the proposal :)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 65
Proposal from EPOV.:)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 64
That boy is ready to pop lol
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 63
Edward is there to make sure what was going on with his women
Date: 06 Oct 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 64
I love this! lol :)
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 64
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 64
You big meanie! No fair teasing us like that!!
:) great update, literally panting for more!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 64
Are we getting some sexin next chapter? Loving it doll.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 63
Oh how i have missed these two, Im glad your mojo is coming back with these two.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 64
Hahaha, Edward got an eye-full of some girl-on-girl action. Now he gets some if his own. Make him beg Bella. Lol.
Wonder if Tanya will try and weasel her way into their private bubble. She seems overly interested in Edward. Angela is a delightful part of Bella's entourage.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 64
Damn aww Edward got all hot seeing he's girl making out with another girl lol
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 63
Bella is trying to move beyond her bubble-gum image. I wonder how that will be received?
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 64
IDK about Tanya meeting Edward...
Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 64
Really great story.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 64
I'm sorry I wouldn't let Tanya any where near him.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 64
LMAO.... never saw that one coming. (no pun intended) That right there is a man's fantasy come true ;)
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 63
Oh boy. Is Edward going to be able to handle the Bella's sex scene? Hopefully he feels secure in their relationship that it won't bother him. As for Bella, let's hope she can do it in one take. LOL
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 64
They need to christen that damn trailer now! Dear lord I hate waiting. But I will. For a story this good the anticipation is worth it. :) thank you very much
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 64
LOL.... Naturally the lesbian scene turned him on - but could he have handled a hetero scene as well? And I'm kinda bummed we missed the proposal scene -- hope it makes it to an outtake.
After such a long hiatus - I re-read the early chapters -- such a great story!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 64
:) one way to get your man to be okay with sex scenes
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 64
Good job b. Lol for turned on eddie
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 63
Oooh b doing a sex scene not with our boy....uh oh.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 64
thansk for the updates!!!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 64
oh boy, I believe our boy was turned on!!!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 64
GAH! That was amazing :) YEAH! I knew he would react that way, but I didn't know who Bella's costar was, that was shocking!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I had to go back and re-read chapters because i thought i missed the engagement?? will that be covered in a later chapter.. i love these two they are very hot and adorable together
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 64
I hope Tanya doesn't get any ideas...he's off the market!
I so thought the sex scene was not with a girl, no wonder he wanted to be there! Now she's in for a real treat with the trailer action!!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 64
so when did they get engaged? will there be a flashback or anything to it?? Love the story !!!!! And whata part to do to break the mold, Disney sweetheart to lesbian?
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 64
I'm little worried about tayna and her wanting to meet Edward.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 64
Welcome back! And with all sorts of yumminess! Good to be reading this again! Tanya? Totally unexpected and totally hot!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 64
*fans herself* oh yeah... LOL that was hot, Soapy! Can't wait to read the next one. xoxo Mina
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 64
I don't think two hours will be enough for Edward!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 64
Oh I didn't know it was girl on girl sex, now I get why Edward showed up lol wouldn't be the same if it was a man