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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 2 Never Thought I'd See You Here

she is quite a smart mouth. Most young women will be flattered and yet she is schooled enough in society to be resistant to his charms.

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 8:43 PM Title: Words

love this reconciliation chap. update soon!

Reviewer: Tessacartwheel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 3:39 PM Title: Words

OMG YAY!!!!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 1:36 AM Title: Words

Le sigh.  Finally.  Thank you.  I want to proceed with romance.  I am curious how Bella is going to keep paying her tuition.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 8:34 PM Title: Words

:) yay! I'm so happy that they are going to finally keep going.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 2:00 PM Title: Words

Edward needed that temporary scare when Bella said 'no'. It solidified the reasoning behind her explanation.
Kelsey will always be a thorn in their side.
Luke needs to move on letting Bella know he will not pursue her as long as she and Edward are together.
Looking forward to their courting! Edward make it memorable!
Will school get in the way or are they both focused enough to balance out their busy schedules?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 8:20 AM Title: Words

Abt time edward you confusingman 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 6:38 AM Title: Words

:)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17 Wake Up Call

Excellent chapter. I loved rose and the way she led Edward. Hate the other kid btw. 



Author's Response:

Rose was awesome. Thanks so much for reading the next chapter is finished and with my beta. Up next we'll get to see how Bella responds to him as he fills her in on everything. I'll post it as soon as I get it back form her and have it all prettied up. Until then I've added a teaser to get ya by.

See ya soon,

~EA

Chapter 18 teaser:

Her brows furrowed slightly as she stared at me, probably trying to gauge whether or not I was being honest with her. There was more that had to be said before she would believe me.

"I mean it, Bella. I love you. And I'm not telling you this because you said it earlier, or because I'm worried you'll walk away if I don't. I'm telling you so that no matter what happens between us from this moment on, you will know how I truly feel about you."

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 17 Wake Up Call

Bro it's about time Edward! This girl has been waiting! I get being scared. I just told my boyfriend I loved him. Scared the shit out of me because I have never said it to a guy who wasn't related or a close friend before.now lets get these kids together.



Author's Response:

It really is about time. Thanks so much for reading the next chapter is finished and with my beta. Up next we'll get to see how Bella responds to him as he fills her in on everything. I'll post it as soon as I get it back form her and have it all prettied up. Until then I've added a teaser to get ya by.

See ya soon,

~EA

Chapter 18 teaser:

Her brows furrowed slightly as she stared at me, probably trying to gauge whether or not I was being honest with her. There was more that had to be said before she would believe me.

"I mean it, Bella. I love you. And I'm not telling you this because you said it earlier, or because I'm worried you'll walk away if I don't. I'm telling you so that no matter what happens between us from this moment on, you will know how I truly feel about you."

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 17 Wake Up Call

:) loved this



Author's Response:

So glad you loved it.

 

So glad you loved it.

 

 

 

 

 

So glad you loved it. Thanks so much for reading the next chapter is finished and with my beta. Up next we'll get to see how Bella responds to him as he fills her in on everything. I'll post it as soon as I get it back form her and have it all prettied up. Until then I've added a teaser to get ya by.

See ya soon,

~EA

Chapter 18 teaser:

Her brows furrowed slightly as she stared at me, probably trying to gauge whether or not I was being honest with her. There was more that had to be said before she would believe me.

"I mean it, Bella. I love you. And I'm not telling you this because you said it earlier, or because I'm worried you'll walk away if I don't. I'm telling you so that no matter what happens between us from this moment on, you will know how I truly feel about you."

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 17 Wake Up Call

Well, spitting out the 'I love you' sure captured her attention.
Now he needs to barrel through this mixed up thoughts that delayed this realization.
Edward is fortunate to have a cousin like Rose. She knows him well enough to call him on his indecisive reasoning; pointing out his true feelings yet allowing him to moments of inward reflection.
I'm glad the night didn't pass into day before he got the chance to express his love and all that has been plaguing his mind the past ten days.

Author's Response:

I think you will like the next chapter. Thanks so much for reading the next chapter is finished and with my beta. Up next we'll get to see how Bella responds to him as he fills her in on everything. I'll post it as soon as I get it back form her and have it all prettied up. Until then I've added a teaser to get ya by.

See ya soon,

~EA

Chapter 18 teaser:

Her brows furrowed slightly as she stared at me, probably trying to gauge whether or not I was being honest with her. There was more that had to be said before she would believe me.

"I mean it, Bella. I love you. And I'm not telling you this because you said it earlier, or because I'm worried you'll walk away if I don't. I'm telling you so that no matter what happens between us from this moment on, you will know how I truly feel about you."

Reviewer: Tessacartwheel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 17 Wake Up Call

Hi, great chapter as always! Regarding Bella's reaction, I would like her to say it back and then Edward will propose and Alice will plan their wedding. 

 

Not really, but I hope you get the gist :) 



Author's Response:

we still have a little ways to go befoe we are planning their wedding. LOL Thanks so much for reading the next chapter is finished and with my beta. Up next we'll get to see how Bella responds to him as he fills her in on everything. I'll post it as soon as I get it back form her and have it all prettied up. Until then I've added a teaser to get ya by.

See ya soon,

~EA

Chapter 18 teaser:

Her brows furrowed slightly as she stared at me, probably trying to gauge whether or not I was being honest with her. There was more that had to be said before she would believe me.

"I mean it, Bella. I love you. And I'm not telling you this because you said it earlier, or because I'm worried you'll walk away if I don't. I'm telling you so that no matter what happens between us from this moment on, you will know how I truly feel about you."

Reviewer: Emelie-twi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 16 Times Up

O-M-G !! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I think it would be fun and interesting if Edward said that he needed more time, though

Really really really love this series, and I hope you upload soon again. Xx



Author's Response:

Edward is about to get a huge wake up call so he won't have any other choice but to pull his head out of his ass. Hopefully once his reasons come out, everyone will understand him a bit better.

Thanks for reading. There's a teaser for the next chapter below.

~EA

SIB chapter 17 teaser


"One more thing, Cullen," Luke said.

I turned back around to face him and was promptly met with his fist colliding with my jaw.

"What the fuck, man?" I asked rubbing where he'd hit me.

"That was for Bella," he said in a warning tone. "That was for being a jackass in the library the other night. If she was my girlfriend, I'd have never walked away and left her with another guy. And it was also for making her cry tonight and to remind you that I will be there for her if you fuck this up completely."

"Not gonna happen."

"We'll see," he challenged and turned, walking off across the parking lot.

My thoughts were a jumbled mess by the time I reached the table where Jasper and Emmett were waiting for me.

I could now see that Luke wasn't just playing to make me jealous where Bella was concerned. He really wanted her.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 16 Times Up

Yes, Edward, you HAVE been a complete mindgame-playing douchebag, and I can't understand why Bella hasn't told you to go to hell yet. You really aren't worth it.



Author's Response:

Edward is about to get a huge wake up call so he won't have any other choice but to pull his head out of his ass. Hopefully once his reasons come out, everyone will understand him a bit better.

Thanks for reading. There's a teaser for the next chapter below.

~EA

SIB chapter 17 teaser


"One more thing, Cullen," Luke said.

I turned back around to face him and was promptly met with his fist colliding with my jaw.

"What the fuck, man?" I asked rubbing where he'd hit me.

"That was for Bella," he said in a warning tone. "That was for being a jackass in the library the other night. If she was my girlfriend, I'd have never walked away and left her with another guy. And it was also for making her cry tonight and to remind you that I will be there for her if you fuck this up completely."

"Not gonna happen."

"We'll see," he challenged and turned, walking off across the parking lot.

My thoughts were a jumbled mess by the time I reached the table where Jasper and Emmett were waiting for me.

I could now see that Luke wasn't just playing to make me jealous where Bella was concerned. He really wanted her.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 16 Times Up

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing over here too!! I greatly appriciate it.

~EA

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 15 On The Waiting List

I guess we'll see his decision in action at the party hosted by Rose's parents.
What will Alice dress Bella in to get every guys attention?

Author's Response:

Hi! Edward's decision will be coming very soon!!! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, chapter 16 will be up by the end of the week. Below is a teaser to get ya until then.

See you then,

EA

I watched as my best friend's head snapped around so fast I was sure she was going to have a massive kink in her neck from it. Her face then lit up like the brightest star in the sky, causing me to follow her gaze and see what had her so damn excited.

I shouldn't have been surprised to find her eyes glued to Jasper. From what she'd told me, they had spent a lot of time together and she was falling fast and hard for him. I had never seen Al so completely enraptured by a guy before. However, Jasper wasn't alone. He had Edward, Emmett and Rose with him.

"Gah," Al groaned before exhaling in a long sigh. "I swear if there was such a thing as swagger patrol, all three of them would be put behind bars."

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 15 On The Waiting List

:)



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, chapter 16 will be up by the end of the week. Below is a teaser to get ya until then.

See you then,

EA

I watched as my best friend's head snapped around so fast I was sure she was going to have a massive kink in her neck from it. Her face then lit up like the brightest star in the sky, causing me to follow her gaze and see what had her so damn excited.

I shouldn't have been surprised to find her eyes glued to Jasper. From what she'd told me, they had spent a lot of time together and she was falling fast and hard for him. I had never seen Al so completely enraptured by a guy before. However, Jasper wasn't alone. He had Edward, Emmett and Rose with him.

"Gah," Al groaned before exhaling in a long sigh. "I swear if there was such a thing as swagger patrol, all three of them would be put behind bars."

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 15 On The Waiting List

I love you! i love this story. Keep it comin! Ps. Edward seriously needs to hurry up and make his move.



Author's Response:

Hi!!So glad you liked the chapter/story. Don't worry, he isn't going to be able to proicrastinate very much longer at all. Changes are coming very soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, chapter 16 will be up by the end of the week. Below is a teaser to get ya until then.

See you then,

EA

I watched as my best friend's head snapped around so fast I was sure she was going to have a massive kink in her neck from it. Her face then lit up like the brightest star in the sky, causing me to follow her gaze and see what had her so damn excited.

I shouldn't have been surprised to find her eyes glued to Jasper. From what she'd told me, they had spent a lot of time together and she was falling fast and hard for him. I had never seen Al so completely enraptured by a guy before. However, Jasper wasn't alone. He had Edward, Emmett and Rose with him.

"Gah," Al groaned before exhaling in a long sigh. "I swear if there was such a thing as swagger patrol, all three of them would be put behind bars."

Reviewer: nicky99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 15 On The Waiting List

Edward shaved his head!?!  did he loose a bet of some sort?  awesome chap, I just hope that Edward gets his act together and doesn't loose her number this time. :)



Author's Response:

Hi! His reason for his haircut will be answered in the next chapter. And don't worry, he won't be ablet to procrastinate in making his decision for much longer. Bella isn't going to let him.

So glad you liked the chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, chapter 16 will be up by the end of the week. Below is a teaser to get ya until then.

See you then,

EA

I watched as my best friend's head snapped around so fast I was sure she was going to have a massive kink in her neck from it. Her face then lit up like the brightest star in the sky, causing me to follow her gaze and see what had her so damn excited.

I shouldn't have been surprised to find her eyes glued to Jasper. From what she'd told me, they had spent a lot of time together and she was falling fast and hard for him. I had never seen Al so completely enraptured by a guy before. However, Jasper wasn't alone. He had Edward, Emmett and Rose with him.

"Gah," Al groaned before exhaling in a long sigh. "I swear if there was such a thing as swagger patrol, all three of them would be put behind bars."

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 15 On The Waiting List

Hehehehe. ER would be awesom for Bella. Anyways Edward needs to get his shit together. It's all n him now.



Author's Response:

I agree, the ER would be awesome for Bella.  Edward is going to have to get his shit together very very soon or risk losing Bella for good. Changes are coming.

So glad you liked the chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, chapter 16 will be up by the end of the week. Below is a teaser to get ya until then.

See you then,

EA

I watched as my best friend's head snapped around so fast I was sure she was going to have a massive kink in her neck from it. Her face then lit up like the brightest star in the sky, causing me to follow her gaze and see what had her so damn excited.

I shouldn't have been surprised to find her eyes glued to Jasper. From what she'd told me, they had spent a lot of time together and she was falling fast and hard for him. I had never seen Al so completely enraptured by a guy before. However, Jasper wasn't alone. He had Edward, Emmett and Rose with him.

"Gah," Al groaned before exhaling in a long sigh. "I swear if there was such a thing as swagger patrol, all three of them would be put behind bars."

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 14 Come Take A Walk With Me

Merry Christmas! I love this story.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 14 Come Take A Walk With Me

:)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 Come Take A Walk With Me

Rose said everything I was thinking about how difficult a guy can make a relatively simple discussion feel like pulling impacted teeth. Haha. So frustrating at times.
Kelsey almost got away with interfering. Luke almost made his move. The siblings need a good diversion to stay out of E&B's period of reconciliation.
Allie and Skye have now met Edward; will he find guys for them to hang around? To occupy their time while he gets back in Bella's good graces.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 14 Come Take A Walk With Me

Im still pissed at edward

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 14 Come Take A Walk With Me

:)

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 14 Come Take A Walk With Me

Oh thank The Lord they at least got some talking in this chapter. I want to star hearing some healing going on. And some mom and pop swan taken down.

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 13 Taking A Stand

i FUCKING love this story, it's so damn addicting. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 13 Taking A Stand

:)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 13 Taking A Stand

Edwards an ass for avoiding her for weeks....she gave him a chance to explain why his # was disconnected but could let her explain grrrr

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 13 Taking A Stand

So disgusted by Renee's parenting skills!
Glad Edward overheard a portion of their argument.
Luke may know his sister and what motivates her but he is also blinded by his desires to be with Bella.
Hope Esme and Carlisle have given Bella an ounce of hope to cling to as she fights for Edward.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 13 Taking A Stand

:) loved this

Reviewer: Tessacartwheel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 13 Taking A Stand

Oh. My. Goodness. I would really appreciate the next chapter soon! My heart is wrenching from the pain of what Edward and Bella must be feeling! Great chapter, as always. Can't wait for more :)  

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 13 Taking A Stand

I wonder how much he heard. Did he hear it all. Even the end. Man I can't wait for them to meet again.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 12 Outta My Head

I can just imagine the awkward silence as Edward and Bella spot each other. Edward with Emmett and Jasper alongside for emotional support; Alice, Rose and Sky keeping Bella safe from her parents.
Who will accosted Bella first? Her mother or Edward? Thinking she is playing some sick twisted game. I can see a confrontation that includes Renee stating Bella should gave gotten all her reckless activities out of the way while in Florida for her summer break. Confusing Edward as to her presence in the DR.

Surprise me!

Author's Response:

Hi, I think you will like the direction the next chapter will be taking our favorite fictional couple in and the realizations they are both coming to.

Chapter 13 will post on Friday and below is a teaser for ya.

Thanks for reading,

EA

"Kelsey, you know I really wish I could believe you," I told her, not making even the slightest move towards taking her hand.

"I promise you can, Bella."

Yeah right. Maybe when pigs fly.

"Really? Because I'm pretty sure I see things a little differently than you do. See, I know that the truth is you had no idea Edward wasn't already aware of my last name and who my father is. But I don't believe for one second that you have one ounce of sincerity in you when you tell me I should keep fighting for Edward."

"Come on, Bella. You're my friend. Of course I want that for you."

"No, Kelsey, we are not friends. Maybe we could have been. But that ship has sailed. See…" I took a couple of steps closer to her. "Friends don't relish in the fact that their friend's boyfriend may be on the verge of breaking up with her. A friend wouldn't be sitting there waiting for the perfect opportunity to swoop in and steal said boyfriend away. I see right through you, Kelsey. I see that you want Edward for yourself. And you know what?"

"What?" she sneered with a huff.

"I don't blame you. He's an amazing man, and yes I **ed up. I know I've hurt Edward deeply by not being completely honest with him. But I want you to remember this. You may have won the first round, but I intend to win war."

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 12 Outta My Head

Oh she has to go now and help Alice! It will just be funny on so many counts!



Author's Response:

Hi, I think you will like the direction the next chapter will be taking our favorite fictional couple in and the realizations they are both coming to.

Chapter 13 will post on Friday and below is a teaser for ya.

Thanks for reading,

EA

"Kelsey, you know I really wish I could believe you," I told her, not making even the slightest move towards taking her hand.

"I promise you can, Bella."

Yeah right. Maybe when pigs fly.

"Really? Because I'm pretty sure I see things a little differently than you do. See, I know that the truth is you had no idea Edward wasn't already aware of my last name and who my father is. But I don't believe for one second that you have one ounce of sincerity in you when you tell me I should keep fighting for Edward."

"Come on, Bella. You're my friend. Of course I want that for you."

"No, Kelsey, we are not friends. Maybe we could have been. But that ship has sailed. See…" I took a couple of steps closer to her. "Friends don't relish in the fact that their friend's boyfriend may be on the verge of breaking up with her. A friend wouldn't be sitting there waiting for the perfect opportunity to swoop in and steal said boyfriend away. I see right through you, Kelsey. I see that you want Edward for yourself. And you know what?"

"What?" she sneered with a huff.

"I don't blame you. He's an amazing man, and yes I **ed up. I know I've hurt Edward deeply by not being completely honest with him. But I want you to remember this. You may have won the first round, but I intend to win war."

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 12 Outta My Head

:)



Author's Response:

Hi, I think you will like the direction the next chapter will be taking our favorite fictional couple in and the realizations they are both coming to.

Chapter 13 will post on Friday and below is a teaser for ya.

Thanks for reading,

EA

"Kelsey, you know I really wish I could believe you," I told her, not making even the slightest move towards taking her hand.

"I promise you can, Bella."

Yeah right. Maybe when pigs fly.

"Really? Because I'm pretty sure I see things a little differently than you do. See, I know that the truth is you had no idea Edward wasn't already aware of my last name and who my father is. But I don't believe for one second that you have one ounce of sincerity in you when you tell me I should keep fighting for Edward."

"Come on, Bella. You're my friend. Of course I want that for you."

"No, Kelsey, we are not friends. Maybe we could have been. But that ship has sailed. See…" I took a couple of steps closer to her. "Friends don't relish in the fact that their friend's boyfriend may be on the verge of breaking up with her. A friend wouldn't be sitting there waiting for the perfect opportunity to swoop in and steal said boyfriend away. I see right through you, Kelsey. I see that you want Edward for yourself. And you know what?"

"What?" she sneered with a huff.

"I don't blame you. He's an amazing man, and yes I **ed up. I know I've hurt Edward deeply by not being completely honest with him. But I want you to remember this. You may have won the first round, but I intend to win war."

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 11 Unwell

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. Chapter 12 will be up shortly.

EA

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 11 Unwell

Well I am glad her last name is out there. That needed to happen now. I hope Edward will give her the chance to explain to all of his family very soon. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Hi, I am so glad you agree that her last name needed to come out now. I do too. Thanks so much for reading. Chapter 12 will post in just a bit.

EA

Reviewer: melferd Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 11 Unwell

I'm not pissed at you, it's that jackass Edward. Alice is right, if he actually loved her, he would have listened. Also, hella long wait just for him to be such an uncharacteristic asshole. If Bella has any self respect she will tell him to piss off. Kinda hard to live the story again after such a long wait just to feel so jerked around.



Author's Response:

Hi, I promise Edward will come to his senses. Thanks so much for reading, chapter 12 will post shortly.

EA

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 Unwell

:O



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, chapter 12 will post shortly.

EA

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 Unwell

Edward's actions are not that of a mature individual capable of handling the stresses of a Hugh profile family life. He needs to 'suck it up princess' and offer Bella the chance to explain her rationale behind this past summer and her relationship with her parents. She truly is fighting an uphill battle.
I hope Carlisle has a more calming effect on Edward.

Author's Response:

You are right, he does need to suck it up. I think you will be happy with the rest of his conversation with Carlisle as well as what Esme has to say. Thanks for reading, chapter 12 will post shortly.

EA

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 11 Unwell

Moreeeeeeee xx

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Chapter 12 will post shortly.

EA

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 11 Unwell

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Chapter 12 will post shortly.

EA

Reviewer: 0bsess3d_much Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 11 Unwell

Omg!!! You better hide! Wasn't the reunion I was expecting! :( 



Author's Response:

Hi, I know it wasn't what you or most anyone was expecting, but I still think her last name coming out now it much better than later. Thanks for reading. Chapter 12 will post shortly.

EA

Reviewer: rinibell Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 If I Ever See You Again

Awww!!!! Don't stop there. I need more :( 

Awesome chapter though :)

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 If I Ever See You Again

Yay! I'm so glad the ran into each other again! I can't wait for the next update! :)

Reviewer: Tessacartwheel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 10 If I Ever See You Again

need. more. 

 

kthxbai

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 10 If I Ever See You Again

;)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10 If I Ever See You Again

When you have scheming friends like Alice and Skylar, you're bound to be exhausted but grateful for their distractions.
I have a feeling Edward is unprepared for this meeting and will say something that will give Bella the impression he is on to the next thing in his life. Hope he can at least get out the words lost phone and your number. Weather he is convincing is the next concern.
Luke is going to find a way into Bella's life. Will Edward be able to handle the competition?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 9 Waiting For A Girl Like You

Edward's reason for not being available is legitimate, but he really hasn't put the effort into finding Bella. He could get her information from the team leader of the doctors without boarders group or insist that his mother help track her down thru the nursing school resgistrants. Surly his parents know the last names of the volunteers that assist them year after year. So a new name would be memorable.
Jasper is cool, Emmett is boisterous and funny. Rose is more level headed and logical than I expected. Good mix of friends and family that Edward can rely on.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 9 Waiting For A Girl Like You

:)



Author's Response:

 I am glad you liked the chapter. Look for a teaser to chapter 10 next Monday on my blog at http://eternallyaddicted.blogspot.com and also on The Fictionator's Teaser Monday at  http://www.fictionators.com

Look for the full chapter to post on Next Friday the 17th.

Until then, thannks for reading!!

EA

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 9 Waiting For A Girl Like You

Amazing chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)



Author's Response:

Hi! I am so glad you liked the chapter. Look for a teaser to chapter 10 next Monday on my blog at http://eternallyaddicted.blogspot.com and also on The Fictionator's Teaser Monday at  http://www.fictionators.com

Look for the full chapter to post on Next Friday the 17th.

Until then, thannks for reading!!

EA

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 8 Leaving On A Jet Plane

Feelings of rejection would be over-whelming me if I were in Bella shoes.
There could be so many reasons why Edward's phone has been disconnected. His Grandfather could have pulled some strings to get it cut off. Edward could have chosen to run away from some strange reason not wanting to be found.
Their plane might not have made it back, crash landed somewhere.
Not really sure what direction you are taking this. I'll just have.to wait.

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 Leaving On A Jet Plane

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 8 Leaving On A Jet Plane

:)

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 7 In The Jungle

This will be the longest three weeks of their lives.
Why didn't Bella tell Edward who she is?

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 In The Jungle

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 7 In The Jungle

:)

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 6 Fatherly Advice

:)

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 Bugging Me

:)

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 Slippery When Wet

:)

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3 Cold As Ice

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Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 In The Jungle

I'D BE BROKEN HEARTED TO IF I HAD EDWARD AND WE HAD TO PART LIKE THAT I FEEL BAD FOR BOTH OF THEM I AM WORRIED HOWEVER THAT NEVER TOLD EDWARD ABOUT HER NAME IT'S WRONG AND SHE SHOULD HAVE TOLD HIM BEFORE HE LEAVES.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 2 Never Thought I'd See You Here

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 That's Gonna Leave A Mark

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Reviewer: Cardamom Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 7 In The Jungle

Loving this.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 7 In The Jungle

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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 6 Fatherly Advice

WooHoo, roomies, tent buddies......there is no way they will be able to limit their physical interactions to kissing and holding each other at night. Will this Bella mumble in get sleep?
Both attending the same university in the fall. Wonder if Bella will find herself residing at his apartment once the semester is underway?
It would seem that Edward's patents have been discussing his infatuation with Bella.

Author's Response:

Woo Hoo is right. Who wouldn't want to be a tent buddy with Edward. LOL  As far as their physical iunteratcions, only time will tell what happens. Yes Carlisle and Esme has been very observant when it comes to their son's growing feelings for Bella.

 

Thanks so much for reading, I can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter.

EA

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 6 Fatherly Advice

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)



Author's Response:

So glad you enjpyed the chapter. I can't wait to see what you think of the next one.

Thanks for reading!!

EA

Reviewer: Georgie20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 Bugging Me

I like this story

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks so much for reading.

EA

Reviewer: 0bsess3d_much Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 5 Bugging Me

Gahhhh! Couple of chapters ago I told you you made my day! Well know i wont sleep! I dunno if she will tell him about she will tell him shes from Baltimore and not about the rich part?

 

POST SOON!!!!

xx



Author's Response:

I sure hope you have been able to sleep. If not I am really really really sorry. Good news is that your wait is almost over. I will be posting chapter 6 tomorrow. I will try to post it as early as I can. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

EA

Reviewer: vanquish13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 Bugging Me

:)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.

EA :)

Reviewer: vanquish13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 Slippery When Wet

Liking this.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I am glad you are enjoying the story.

EA

Reviewer: 0bsess3d_much Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 That's Gonna Leave A Mark

cant wait to see where this is going, read the chapter a couple of days ago and completely missed the updates for the new chapters so you have made my day! :)



Author's Response:

Hi, so glad you are enjoying the story.

Thanks for reading,

EA

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 5 Bugging Me

is it strange that "it's a small world after all..." is on repeat in my mind??

thank you for this story...

esme is a bit of an enigma to me and i'm hoping she gets more page time...



Author's Response:

Nope not strange at all. After all, who'd have thought that two people who had never met before, end up in the same place for the summer, who have this amazing chemistry between them, end up living in the same city. I'd say it's a small world, kharma, fate, whatever you want to call it.

Thanks for reading, chapter 6 will post tomorrow and then we can all see how Edward reacted to Bella's news.

EA

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 4 Slippery When Wet

loving cheeky edward! 

highlight "zero weirdness"

there is a little voice in the back of my mind that's worried about bree and tanya...but i'm not convinced i should be...



Author's Response:

He is just a tad bit cheeky, isn't he. Love him though. I am glad you liked the "zero weirdness". I know Bella said it to Jake in the books and movies, but I couldn't resist using it here.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

EA

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 3 Cold As Ice

hahahahaha...i know i shouldn't be laughing at the end but it's just sooo...bella!

loved this chapter...i feel like i'm in the camp with them, smelling everything, feeling the heat and the earth...



Author's Response:

It's okay. Go ahead and laugh. I had a hard time keeping from giggling the whole time I was writing it. It really is ao very Bella.  I am so glad that my discriptions are so vivid to you. Sometimes it's hard to convey how something is when you have never been there or experienced it before.

Thanks for reading,

EA

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 Never Thought I'd See You Here

i'm really enjoying your story so far.  The ease and lightness with Bella and Edward's interactions flows effortlessly.  Amazing!



Author's Response:

Hi, glad you are enjoying the story so far. They do have a way with their banter. It has been so much fun to write.

Thanks for reading,

EA

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 That's Gonna Leave A Mark

Very interesting. I can't wait to catch up! Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

HI, Thanks for reading. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. I hope to have chapter 5 up later today.

EA

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 Slippery When Wet

Edward is being a cheeky little bugger!
Glad they had a brief moment to rehash last nights events.
His offer still stands, haha, my jaw would be hanging open if that comment were made to me as well. Poor Bella, her little brain must br reeling from his offer. Lol.

Author's Response:

Laughing at your calling Edward a cheeky little bugger. I love it and he really is!!  I'm with you, my jaw would be hanging open too and would be in an equally stunned stupor like she was. LOL

Thanks again for reading. There will be a teaser for chapter 5 on my blog on Monday and the next chapter will post next Friday.

EA

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 3 Cold As Ice

Awe, our favorite clumsy-ella sets herself up for another embarrassing moment with pre-med-edward.

Author's Response:

It was a totally embarrassing moment.  Although, I'm not so sure Edward minded. LOL

Thanks,

 

EA

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 2 Never Thought I'd See You Here

Their bashful banter is very sweet.

Author's Response:

Hi again,

Yes their banter was very sweet. I had a lot of fun writing it.

 

Thanks,

EA

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 That's Gonna Leave A Mark

Each time I tried the link to the blogspot it came back, 'not found'. Is this not an accurate link?
Like your storyline so far. Need to continue reading.

Author's Response:

HI, sorry the link was not accurate. My fault.  Glad you like the story so far. Here is the correct link to my blog.

http://eternallyaddicted.blogspot.com

 

Thanks for reading,

EA

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 Slippery When Wet

Oh, I hope you update fast!! I can not wait to see what happens next!! This is a wonderful story...  So unique and different!! It really great!! 



Author's Response:

Hi, I'm so glad you are enjoying the story so much. The next update will be on this coming Friday. But to get you by until then, there will be a teaser on my blog on Monday. The link to my blog is

http://eternallyaddicted.blogspot.com

 

Thanks for reading,

EA

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