Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Loved it :)
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Love this story I just wish you would update more. I can't wait to see how Balles compostion comes out. Keep up the good work.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Wow, I think Bella got some big girl panties for Christmas. She certainly had them on in this chapter, standing up to her classmates and her in-laws (or should that be out-laws seeing as they're estranged from Edward?)
Great chapter
Date: 06 Apr 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
:)
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
:) Great chapter! I can't wait to read more of it ;)
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Great story
xoxo
Date: 06 Apr 2013 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Thanks good chapter
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Oh wow, that was GREAT :D I really loved it! Gah, Edward/Carlisle's father is an ASS with a capital "A"! I cannot stand him!
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
great chapter
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Love this story and so darn excited for you!!! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Im proud of bella for defending edward to his father...and yeah maybe the mom wasnt strong enough but you defend and protect your kids even against their father.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Love it!! I hate Edward's father!
Date: 06 Apr 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
great chapter. Wonder how long til those two skanks start running their mouths? Ya know someone is gonna pay them too.
Char is such a good friend.
Ugh his parents are arseholes....well at least daddy dearest is. Glad her and Carlisle are doing better though.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Great chapter. Love the story!!
Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Loved it it may of not been what they wanted to happen with Bella getting hurt but wow that was the best lol. Love the dress and the shoes are the coolest.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
loved this chapter... so exciting!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Love it!!!! Continue ;D
Date: 22 Mar 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
OH, snap!! That was one hell of a fun chapter! I'm so glad to see the muse in full bloom again! Maggie and Lauren will get everything they deserve, I'm sure! I've missed your stories so much and look forward to the next chapters of all I'm following in addition to the publication of Breach! Thanks for persevering here for us and for yourself!!
Date: 22 Mar 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
I don't know how I didn't get notifications for this and the next chapter when you posted them, but I didn't. I just discovered today that chapter 28 was the last one I read, so I'm catching up today! I'm happy to hear you're on the mend! I love this story and was very happy to see in continuing.
Date: 21 Mar 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Loved the chapter.
Date: 21 Mar 2013 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Wow! That was spectacular. Finally the bitches have been taken down and managed to add extra charges on themselves at the same time. Poor Bella, getting hit on the head with an award. I think she should take up acting, she did an amazing job playing her part at winding Lauren up, hahahaha!! The press are going to have a field day.
Jane x
Date: 21 Mar 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
This is sooooo good!
Date: 20 Mar 2013 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Thanks good chapter
Date: 19 Mar 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Good to see them go down, more worried about Bella
Date: 19 Mar 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
love it
Date: 19 Mar 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
I forgot my coffee cups again
Date: 19 Mar 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
They’re a tacky lot, without exception, but maybe “that’s Hollywood”.
Great pictures
XOXO
Date: 19 Mar 2013 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
;-)
Date: 19 Mar 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
That was AMAZING! I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what happens next, because I really want to see Maggie and Lauren suffer ;) I hope Bella will be ok! I love the dress and shoes :D
Date: 19 Mar 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
YEAH! :D Finally! great chapter! and history.
Date: 19 Mar 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 19 Mar 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Best chapter ever! Hot sex, hot Edward and Maggie and Lauren go down!!! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 19 Mar 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Cant find dang!
Date: 19 Mar 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
that was awesome, but upset that Bella got injured, she probably has a concussion, hope Edward really does sue the both of them!
Date: 19 Mar 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Loved it, hope Lauren & Maggie do get what's coming 2 them & I hope Bella will be OK.
Date: 19 Mar 2013 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Oh yea thanks for the update glade things are going good
Date: 18 Mar 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
That went well...
Date: 18 Mar 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
I love the outfit and shoes. But I bet the shoes would be a bitch to walk in and even harder to stand in.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Woohoo!! I love this story SO much! I cannot wait to read more! So please update soon!
Date: 18 Mar 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
What a showdown! Maggie and Lauren are getting their just desserts but it's a pity poor Bella got hurt in the process.
Great chapter
Date: 18 Mar 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Im glad maggie and lauren are out now but poor bella paid a price im sure edwards beating himself up over it
Date: 18 Mar 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Wow... finally the bitches went down :) Great chapter!
Date: 18 Mar 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
hey it has been along time hope your okay and it is nice to know that your still writing, still loving this story take care.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
wonderful chapter
Date: 18 Mar 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Ha! I love it! Maggie sure went down, but I have a feeling it isn't over :)
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Lauren cold cocked Bella with a award?? Damn!!
Looking forward to more. Was so happy to see the update. :)
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Yeah the bitches have gone down I do hope Bella will okay. Can't wait to see to what happens next?
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS BUT PLEASE DON'T LEAVE US WAITING TOO LONG.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
LOVED IT! I can't wait to see what ends up happening to Maggie and Lauren. Maybe they can be each other's prison bitches? LOL!!! The lemon was very hot, and I love her dress and heels. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job!
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SEEING LAUREN AND MAGGIE GET WHAT IS COMMING TO THEM AT LAST BUT I DIDN'T THINK BELLA WAS GOING TO GET HURT I HOPE SHE WILL BE OK.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
FINALLY, SORRY FOR THE HEAD BANG, BUT SO WORTH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
:) loved this
Date: 18 Mar 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
ACK OMG poor Bella. Hope the do more than charge simple assault...like assault with deadly weapon or attempted murder.
Yummy time before the skank barged in.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Oooh! Maggie and Lauren are about to go down!
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Thanks good chapter
Date: 27 Feb 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
loving this story thank you
Date: 27 Feb 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Can't wait for them to take those skanks down
Date: 27 Feb 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
i sure did not like bitch Bella in this chapter
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
how did I not find this story sooner!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
I love it!!! Can't wait for the update and taking-down of Maggie !!
Date: 24 Feb 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
I'm loving this new Edward he really is making an effort and keeping true to his word. I can't wait to find out how they take down Maggie and how she takes her complete humiliation.
It sounds as though you've been through the mill lately, I'm glad you're starting to feel better and I hope you get back to full fitness soon so you can do all the things you want to do. Take care flower.
Jane x
Date: 24 Feb 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Magnifique!
Date: 24 Feb 2013 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
wow!
Date: 24 Feb 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
:) great chapter!! It was worth the wait ;)
Date: 24 Feb 2013 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Love it as always... till next time.
Fiorella
Date: 24 Feb 2013 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
I'm glad your back. I love this story and look forward to seeing more!
Date: 24 Feb 2013 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
WOW, so sorry to hear about our surgery & the complications. glad to see you are feeling better & writing! this was a great chapter, so glad they are finally getting to the bottom of this Maggie shit & will get rid of her. Carlisle even called Bella lil sis, awwww. can't wait to see what happens to Maggie & Lauren! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 24 Feb 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
i am so glad you are doing better I hope you will soon be 100%. I cant wait for what they are going to do and do glad they are doing it together.
Date: 24 Feb 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Loved it :)
Date: 24 Feb 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Wonderful to see this story back! Can't wait for the showdown! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
glad to have you back...im really enjoying reading this story
Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Maggie and Lauren are going down. That's a chapter to look forward to.
Great writing.
Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella's plan works out. Thank goodness Edward has such faithful people working for him.
Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
wow Sam was a little harsh on B. Glad he finally found out Lauren was helping hte skank. Cant wait for them both to be taken down.
Date: 24 Feb 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
OH YEAH!! That was GREAT! I am so happy for them! Maggie's beat down is going to be amazing ;) I cannot wait for that!
Date: 23 Feb 2013 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
can't wait for the grand plan!!! hope you have a speedy recovery!
Date: 23 Feb 2013 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
I hope you are feeling better. I love this story. I am so looking forward to the "takedown". I am glag that Edward is including Bella now.
Date: 23 Feb 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
I'm so sorry that you've been having such difficulties!
I can assure you that this chapter was worth the wait!
Date: 23 Feb 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
The bitch is going down along with taking out of the trash. Can't wait!
Date: 23 Feb 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
:)
Date: 23 Feb 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Love it
Date: 23 Feb 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
Love it update soon
Date: 22 Feb 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Just fire he.r she a lost Eddie tough cookies
Date: 19 Jan 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
That house is so ugly! It looks like an old people's home.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
That's it, I want more...I soo love this e/b!
Date: 09 Jan 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
Oh my goodness!! I absouletly loooovveeee this story(: The long pauses between updates suck D: but I will wait for as long as it takes to read this story. It really is my favorite. I cant tell you how many times ive reread this story, just so it feels like there are updates(: Cant wait for more(hopefully they caome fast..no pressure) take as long as is needed.
Date: 09 Jan 2013 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
Oh, so sad. No more chapters to read! Can't wait for more. I love this story.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
Loved the chapter. It was a little more realistic on how the compramises would work. It has to be a two way street. They both have to have their heart in the right place even if there are hurdles in their plans. Things come up that are unexpected. I hope Bella realizes this fact.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
:) It's a great story... I laughed, cried and I don't know what emotions I got with this story! I can already tell you that I normally never cry with a story or a movie so you touched the right emotions and I can't wait till read more of it!
I so want to know who the stupid person is, who helps Maggie, but I've my suspicions, even if we didn't heard of her a lot in the story... She's still Edward's assistent ;) I'm not going to name names, but I hope you know who I'm talking about ;)
Up to the next update!!!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
GREAT CHAPTER A LOT HAPPENED I LOVED THE TALK PHIL HAD WITH EDWARD AND THE GIFT ERIC GOT EDWARD WAS GOOD BUT WHERE EDWARD IS PUTTING IT IS EVEN BETTER. EDWARD'S LOVE FOR BELLA'S COOKIES WAS NICE. THEM TALKING ABOUT KEEPING THE BITCH OUT OF THERE HOUSE AND ENDING HER WORK WITH EDWARD FOR GOOD. AND LETS NOT FORGET THEM PLANING ON DATING THAT SO COOL.
Date: 06 Jan 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
I'm so glad that things are getting better for them, they're talking, laughing and making plans, long may it last. I loved Phil's dad chat, short but to the point and also Eric made his point too, lol. I can't wait for Maggie to get what's coming to her.
Jane x
Date: 06 Jan 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
Loved it :)
Date: 06 Jan 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
Wonderful to see this chapter. Very happy thing seem to be back on the right track for these two. lol, Cheri
Date: 06 Jan 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
great chapter
Date: 06 Jan 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
Oh how beautiful, it is good to see that Edward has pulled his head out of his arse. I really hope that Maggie demise is just as bad as these two are thinking. It would be a shame for anything less.
I cant wait to see how Hollywood is going to take Edward being off the market. It is going to be interesting.
Love the chapter cant wait for more.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
:)
Date: 05 Jan 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE I'VE BEEN GOING CRAZY WAITING FOR IT. I'M GLAD EDWARD AND BELLA ARE BACK TOGETHER AND MAYBE GOING TO THE OSCARS WILL BE THERE COMING OUT TO THE WORLD. MAYBE THIS IS WHAT SHE NEEDS TO FEEL SHE MADE THE RIGHT CHOICE BY GIVING THEM ANOTHER CHANCE. I HOPE YOUR HOLIDAYS WERE GOOD AND MAY THIS NEW YEAR BRING YOU MUCH JOY AND HAPPINESS AND GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR SURGERY AND A SPEEDY RECOVERY. UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
So who is letting Maggie in?
Good to see Edward and Bella making plans.
Great chapter.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
:) Neat!