Date: 18 Feb 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 29- Going home
Hey Kat! Thank you for the update!! I have been missing this story!
Glad they are working everything out. He is coming to her and she is getting a promotion to LA!
Looking forward to a quick update! ( I hope)
Date: 18 Feb 2015 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 29- Going home
Have loved this story from the very beginning. That has not changed. So wonderful to see this update. Love your characters and all their flaws. Thank you for sharing your amazing talents. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 18 Feb 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 29- Going home
Yes she is moving closer to him
Date: 18 Feb 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 29- Going home
Great Chapters!! Update soon!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 29- Going home
Ahhhh! Update update update!!! Love this!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 29- Going home
looking forward to more
Date: 17 Feb 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 29- Going home
Wow, switching cities simultaneously. How fun. Love this story
Date: 17 Feb 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 29- Going home
oh...so happy for them! It is finally coming together and they are going to get that happy ending. Thank goodness.
Date: 01 Jan 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy
Oh another baby in the family. And I love the girls idea for the book. Bella could write the screenplay.
I really hope hope she doesn't leave. But if she does I hope it's not for long.
Date: 22 Dec 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy
Merry Christmas!!
Date: 22 Dec 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy
Thanks for the update.....I always look forward to seeing one....Merry Christmas to you... :)
Date: 21 Dec 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy
Yes it has been a very long time since the last update. What a wonderfully pleasant surprise to see another chapter. It is a very good chapter.
Date: 20 Dec 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy
So wonderful to see this update. Can't begin to tell you how much I love this story. Thank you for an amazing Christmas present. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 19 Dec 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy
Thank you!!! Merry Christmas to you and yours x
Date: 19 Dec 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy
Sooooo exciting....so ed will sell his tanya tainted house and get bella one in malibu!
Date: 19 Dec 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy
it really isn't going to be that easy is it?Makes it worth it in the long run though
Date: 10 Oct 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 27- Change of plans
What a wonderful gift Alice gave them by taking the girls. I hope the good news allows Bella to work from home. Or maybe they are opening a new office in LA
Date: 10 Oct 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 27- Change of plans
Great chapter! They are sooooo cute! Update soon
Date: 08 Oct 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 27- Change of plans
Thanks for updating...it was worth the wait :) since you promise to finish I'll promise to hang in till the end with you...Till next time
Date: 06 Oct 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 27- Change of plans
And I still love you and this story! So wonderful to see this update. You made my day. Thank you and thank you Auntie Alice. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 06 Oct 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 27- Change of plans
I hate that they had those 5 years apart, but maybe they needed to grow and mature so they could come together and make it right this time around. Obviously the passion is still there lol. Great chapter and I will happily wait for any and all future chapters. Some stories are just worth the wait.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 27- Change of plans
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:14 PM Title: Prologue
Wonderful story! And especially considering that English isn't your first language, since you write better than a lot of native English speakers!
Date: 20 May 2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 26- Making plans
great chapter! update soon!
Date: 19 May 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 26- Making plans
Just want to thank you for this wonderful story. Love each and every chapter. Love this family, yes it is a family they just need to realize it...I'm sure they will and I am enjoying the ride! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 19 May 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 26- Making plans
the little snippets of family life...I hope the two adults see how special it can be. Yes they will have some adjustments to make, but as the darling daughter said "Wouldn't it be wort it?"
Date: 19 May 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 26- Making plans
So happy to see an update...even though a lot wasn't going on it was a great chapter...Edward and Bella still have that spark and it was good for her to talk to Emma about what's going on with them...now we see if her and Edward can hold up to the no intimacy deal.. See you soon I HOPE :)
Date: 19 May 2014 2:01 AM Title: Prologue
Thanks Kat! It did clear alot of it up. I think I will go back and re-read it. I am enjoying it :D
Thanks for answering, so many authors don't.
Looking forward to the next chapter!! ♥♥♥♥a86;a86;a86;
Have a great week :D
Date: 19 May 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 26- Making plans
When this is all over. When you hit complete I am going to go back and re-read.
Because I am as confused as heck! Maybe its the lenght of time in between chapters (please dont be offended. I am not complaining. I understand the RL can be a bear!)
But when did they get back together? When did they become a WE???
I hope you answer/reply.
I am looking forward to more :D
Author's Response:
Hey :)
Not offended at all. I know long waiting between updates can be confusing, but that's better than me just dropping this project. I couldn't, even if I wanted to... it's all in my head and I need to get it out, haha! ;)
As for the becoming a 'WE', they didn't. Not really. It's still not clear, most of the time Bella refer their new relationship with the words 'whatever is going on between us'. But to try to get clearer, at the end of chapter 24 (I promise I'm worthy) when they ~finally~ kiss goodnight, that's where they know they're going to be okay. The next chapter is the morning after, it's Bella POV who still has lots of doubt and don't want to tell the kids. And yet, at the end, she decide to just 'enjoy' being there with Edward, not overthinking everything.
This chapter is actually that same day. So they're still on their little bubble, not yet a official couple, but clearly happy to be together at the moment. Also, Bella realize she can't hide from her daughters who see and understand more than she gave them credit for. So she try to explain it to them (Emma, mostly.)
Hope that helps. :)
Kat
Date: 19 May 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 26- Making plans
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 15 Apr 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 25- Our happy place
Oh that was brilliant. There is going to be a lot of pain and uncertainty in the beginning. But they will make it through as long as they are honest with each other.
And i I love the cheesy lines. Lol
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 25- Our happy place
I LOVED IT :) can't wait for the next one !!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 25- Our happy place
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!! So thrilled to see another update and yes I saw the Lemonade Stand wish list and couldn't agree more. Your characters feel so real and right. Won't beg yet but I hope you continue this amazing story. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 11 Apr 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 25- Our happy place
Loved it. Can't wait for more.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 25- Our happy place
sigh, these two...jump in you two. You are meant to be and you know it. Yes it is going to take work, and much better communication skills but you can do it.
Date: 01 Apr 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy
I absolutely love Carlisle. I can't even be mad that he ruined their kiss because it just made the next one so much better. They really are meant for each other. I wonder how long their coming separation is going to be before they crack.
Date: 01 Apr 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 23- The Date
Oh it is never to late for love. I'm so glad they are finally talking.
Date: 18 Mar 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy
Glad to hear things are going well for you with all the changes you've had. I love this story so much and am glad for the updates and to know you will not abandon it...I'll stick around as long as your writing :)
so happy that Edward and Bella seem to be making some progress in repairing their relationship...I think they need a few more one on one dates :)
till next time!!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy
I have the same exact goofy grin on my face. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 09 Mar 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy
Great chapter! udpate soon
Date: 08 Mar 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy
I hope so, I really do. I really want to root for them. Got a lot of work to do to figure out where to go from here.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 23- The Date
Cannot tell you how THRILLED I am to see this update. Have loved this story from your first chapter. I know R/L is R/L, but I have never forgotten this story or stopped looking for it. Your words, your pictures have left a wonderful memory with me and I can't wait to see where you take this beautiful story. A big welcome back. XOXO, Cheri
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 23- The Date
Hope you are enjoying the heck outta that baby of yours! Of course I have missed this story very much but I would never ever begrudge someone dealing with real life on taking their time. So glad E and B are communicating again, its going to take some work but I think they can have their happy ever after in the long run...at least I hope.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 23- The Date
Welcome back! I've missed this story and was excited to get the notification that you updated. I love how honest they were with each other. Can't wait to read the next chapter:)
lisa
Date: 27 Feb 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 23- The Date
looking froward to more
Date: 13 Feb 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
great chpater! Update soon
Date: 16 Sep 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
This story is so good and very well written. I hope you and yours are well. I also hope you will be able to complete this story. Good luck to you.
Date: 30 Aug 2013 5:57 AM Title: Prologue
love the story. Hope to read more soon
Date: 18 Aug 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
While yes this chapter was a little disappointing that nothing else happened between them it really was great. We now know Bella's fears and Edwards as well. I love that he wants to take her on a date. It's about time. Sure they have the girls who are their top priority but they need to make them a priority as well.
Congrats on the little girl. I'm sure she is born by now. And good luck on trying to find time to write. As I'm sure you are finding out it may be hard to find time to shower alone (I had started bring my daughter along, she loved it) let alone be able to string along whole sentences at one time.
Enjoy her. We will all be here waiting when you can pick up the time to finish it.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
This is one of my favorite stories and reeeeally hope you can upate! Much love!
Date: 24 Jun 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 17- Confrontation
Would he have really have succeeded that well if he had Bella and the children (a baby and a 5 year old) tying him down, he was a free agent, as so many of the women said, they didn’t even see him as a father.
It surprises me how often he travelled to and fro to visit the children, that must have cost plenty and he actually put more time in with this studying and travelling probably than he put into the law degree.
So he wasted his marriage, his family life and struggled because why, he couldn’t communicate or he needed to be ALONE to succeed
Luv
XOXO
Date: 24 Jun 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 16- Confused
Emmett was supposed to know what went on before the divorce, I thought Edward didn’t even really know and Emmett had never met Bella, to take her measure.
You wonder with Rose and Emmett being super stickybeaks, imposing and all knowing that have never latched on to the fact that Edward was supposed to be broken-hearted because of the divorce and things between Bella and Edward had never been resolved or discussed.
Edward obviously only acts cool calm and collect and never really discuss anything personal with anybody. He helped Rose with her delivery saying the right things and spend weeks 24/7 looking into her contract but he could never bring himself to tell Bella that he loved her. With this unemotional demeanour she would have been frightened to make the first move.
Edward must have been keeping things from everyone, even himself.
I mean what he asked Bella to do was complete unreasonable. She was not even comfortable with him and she was supposed to move away from her whole support system and job. Bella shouldn’t have asked him to choose between music and his family but between sudden impulses and his family, that’s the way he presented it to her.
Rose interestingly describe Edward a very cocky but surprisingly Bella gushes to herself in one part, describing Edward as wonderful kind sweet etc, etc and I wonder when she saw that side of him and why she didn’t react to it at the time.
I guess he didn’t make the grand gesture and she kept misinterpreting then thwarting his small efforts.
Great story though
Luv
XOXO
Date: 24 Jun 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Thank you great story
Luv
XOXO
Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Sorry I forgot to do the coffee cups last time because you deserve them, this is a great story.
I guess when they were together they got used to acting in a kind of role-playing way and didn’t want to act out of “the character” they thought the other was expecting for fear of rocking the boat so to speak. They were both so unsure of the other’s feelings, for example, when Edward came across to Bella’s table at the library, to interact with her, but she just made him think is was only about their daughter.
Now they accept that they don’t know each other now because of the 5 year separation so they are willing to gradually, with the help of their children, now with opinions of their own, to show the real them to each other.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
The few times I have been on large yachts (not this size of course) they wouldn’t let you wear stiletto heels for fear of damaging the decks.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
So who was the influence telling him that Bella didn’t care about him because she had practically sacrificed her marriage and her children’s time with their father for his studies?
She said at McDonalds that he had financially supported her but he never had a job whilst they were married, she did and prior to that, it was his parent that supported them.
She had the job, he was wasting his time, how did he propose they would live, she had two children to think about and he also said he was near to going back to her and taking the few weeks needed to complete his law studies and not make a mockery of the aspect that put a complete strain on their marriage.
It’s like he’s unstable.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 11- Moving On
It’s all a bit strange that his family and hers never really knew that they weren’t communicating and never encouraged or relayed what they had seen as observers.
What was Renee doing on her stay overs, just being a fly in the ointment and taking up a needed bed, couldn’t anyone help them gulf their insecurities with each other.
They are so cold now, their youth has gone.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 10- Explanations
Even if they do reunite, it’s hard to say back together again because is many ways they were not really together. It’s so sad because they are so mature now and that wonder and passion will never be theirs, they have let it slip by without really noticing.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 9- Family time
Very sad that they are both very mature adults now and they are strangers who shouldn’t be strangers. It’s just weird that they never got closer in that 5 years they were together, even if they mostly had different schedules. There is such a thing as quality time even if it wasn’t quantity time, you would think they would have bonded more through their children.
But I guess, as I have skimmed and am now reading in detail, that Edward is a bit dense, even about what he thinks Tanya is accepting of, not really knowing how rejected she feels. Maybe, although Edward thinks he was all self-sacrificing, he is just a bit too self-centred. Except for his children, I really don’t know how he could have left Juliet as baby.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2013 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 8- The first day
I honestly don’t see why her and the girls were the reason he continued until several week of finishing his degree. Then he leaves his little baby and 4 year old behind, because he can’t cope, with only one parent that is supposed to cope on her own. She used to it I suppose and how can she miss him, it seems they were never together as he seemed to be studying all the time anyway.
You would think after five years of being cut off from everyone, they would have used each other for a listening post at least, even forced cell mates or college room mates confide and converse with each other. Who else did they converse with?
Date: 23 Jun 2013 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun
Sam and Leah seem to be managing with life, marriage and children.
It seemed silly to me to have him studying but not being able to sleep in a bed and yet Renee was there to help!
Surely the children could have slept together; children get used to noise and usually sleep through it OR since Renee was there to help, the baby Bella and Renee could have been in the same room. Noise travels in small flats anyway; giving a separate room to a baby was a luxury they couldn’t afford.
I also think it was strange for Edward to actually sacrifice his relationship with Bella for this continual studying as she said “they” hardly saw him anyway, then say he was doing all he could for them but give it up at the 11th hour, it was a food’s errand really.
He not only sacrificed his love of music for the law degree but his marriage and quality time with his children, particularly Juliet. Also his sex life with his wife it would seem.
How did Bella manage so well when he left with only the her?
Just life I suppose, his heart really wasn’t in it.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2013 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 6- The beginning of the end
Sad but I can't help thinking that the family support seemed to drop out rather drastically. And How much time did the other sudents (without childrfen) in their final year of law really have.
lUV
xoxo
Date: 22 Jun 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 5- His girls, angels & muses
great chapter
Date: 22 Jun 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 3- Edward's side
thanks great story
Date: 22 Jun 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 2- Dropping the bomb
great thanks
Date: 22 Jun 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1- That hot, drunken boy
great
Date: 22 Jun 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 4- Doing what's right
great
Date: 21 Jun 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
First off I am thrilled to see this chapter. For this story I will truly wait as long as it takes. Second you are going to have a very lucky little girl if her mommy is anything like this story portrays. Your belief in family shines thru in every word of this amazing story and between that and your wonderful talent for writing yes she is going to be one lucky little girl. Congrats by the way and all my best wishes for the next four weeks and beyond. Even if you can't post a new chapter keep us informed on how you are doing and maybe even the name of the addition to your family when she arrives? As for this story one thing Bella could give this man who has everything...a little boy, even if he thinks he is done with babies. XOXO, Cheri
Date: 21 Jun 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
First off THANK YOU for updating :) I love this story so much. I'm looking forward to Edward and Bella rediscovering each other and doing all the things they missed the first time around.
Second - congrats on the house and the baby girl on the way...I wish you all the happiness in the world...and some "me time " =D.
Till next time.
Date: 21 Jun 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
looking forward to more
Date: 21 Jun 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
I'm so happy that you decided to continue this story :)
I hope you post the next chapter really soon!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
Please don't get mad... but something about this Edward ticks me off and he breaks my heart at the some time.
It seems to me it is all about him. He and what he wants comes first. I just get they were young when they got together.. but he is just... grr.. then he breaks up with Tanya an wants Bella torun right into his arms and his bed.. That is still warm from Tanya?? Yeah, right!!
Anyway glad everything is settled in to your new home.
Congratuations on your daughter!! To fun!! :)
Love the story!! Looking forward ot more.
Date: 20 Jun 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified
Oh I have been missing this family! I am so glad to see Edward is realizing where he went wrong (I hope Bella is figuring it out to) This communications thing is going to have to start working for them. They are a lovely couple and their kids deserve a second chance to be a part of a family, just like Edward and Bella do.
Congrats on the new house and the baby girl, good luck with everything!
Date: 05 May 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 25 Apr 2013 3:18 AM Title: Prologue
When's the next update? Getting anxious here! :)
Date: 19 Mar 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
Just read last chapter. Update when able. Can't wait to see what happens :)
Date: 08 Mar 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
So happy!!! Love it
Date: 19 Feb 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
Congratulations on the baby. Take the time now to have fun and presue all your passions. Because your time will soon be someone else's. but truthfully it is the best feeling ever. Enjoy it.
I am so glad Edward finally broke things off with Tanya. I know in his head its been over for a while but it's nice to finally have closure. I had to laugh when he kicked everyone out. I'm sure it was very liberating. And I'm sure Bella was pleased as well.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
I'm glad Edward & Bella were stopped before they did something that Bella would regret. I look forward to more.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
Thanks! This is one of my favorite stories ;)
Date: 12 Feb 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
well I hope everything works out for the two of them...I hope Bella doesn't play with his emotions and Tanya i the one that got hurt in the long run.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
First off congrates on the baby and good luck :) this was such a great chapter, I loved how they got schooled by their girls at the end. Glad Tanya is officially gone. Looking forward to the chat that's coming up. Till next time
Date: 11 Feb 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
YES! NO MORE TANYA! time for edward an bella to get bak together!!!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
Loved it.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
First welcome back - so missed this! Second, finally Edward is growing a pair! Third, I LOVE those two little girls. It would never be boring with those two beauties around! Seriously I am so glad they are working toward being a family again. I'm hoping for a wonderful day of the 4 of them in the next chapter and maybe a great night...for the two of them? Can't tell you enough how much I enjoy your talent. XOXO, Cheri
Date: 11 Feb 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
yay! update!! i absolutely loved it. it feels like everything is right in the world right now. lol. =)
Date: 11 Feb 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
Love this chapter!!! :) Can't wait to read more when you have time to write it! My favorite part was when the girls just outted everything!
-Kate
Date: 11 Feb 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
I love it! The breakfast conversation was so much fun. The beginning was awesome. I am so glad Tanya is gone....which is for the best. Throwing everyone out was perfect. I can't wait to see how this little family spends the day together. Great job....thanks so much!!! Congratulations on everything going on with you!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
Congrats on baby! and on House! Thanks for not letting this go, it is a special story and I absolutley adore it. Best of luck with all!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Jan 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek
Amazing. This story really is brilliant.
You know that Bella is going to be in Edwards arms when they wake up. I wonder who is going to find them? The girls? Esme and Carlisle? Emmett and Rosalie? Maybe even Tanya? She does have to come back for her car.
Its sad that Edward had to pretend with Tanya today. But really I'm glad he wasn't a jerk and just broke up with her in front of everyone. I hope he can do it next time.
Date: 06 Jan 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek
You are so amazing!! I hope all is well, and you guys had a great holiday season!!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek
This story owns my life!!!!! The horror that there is no more chapters to read! Can't wait for you to update. :)
Date: 29 Dec 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek
Oh I so love this story, I miss it so much between updates! Finally didn't cry this time around. Awkward morning snuggled together I hope?
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek
Thanks for the update
Date: 16 Dec 2012 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek
Love the chapter. Going to love reading what happens the morning after with hangovers for our favourite couple
Date: 16 Dec 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to read more! YAY for the break up soon!
-Kate
Date: 15 Dec 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek
Great chapter! This is my favorite story ;)