Date: 14 Sep 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 16- Confused
Well, he decides he is falling in love with Bella again. How convienent for him. He seems rather selfish and self serving
Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 16- Confused
I can't wait till we get to the prologe, I love this story.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 16- Confused
yay! i'm so happy! =D i want to push them together myself.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 16- Confused
this story so owns me, It just seems to true to life. Makes me want to shake E/B and tell them to open their eyes and look at each other. Everyone knows it except them, and maybe Tanya is getting a clue. She is not a bad guy either just not the right one. His wife is the one!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 16- Confused
Ack. Such a slow burn. Please tell me they are going to talk soon?!
Love the update. Looking forward to more!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 16- Confused
Loved it cant wait 4 nxt update xx
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 5- His girls, angels & muses
Well I guess Bella will have to meet Tanya is she is going to be there for 2 weeks. I can't wait to see how this all goes. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Edward is good. Getting the girls to do his dirty work was amazing. It was the perfect way to get the job done and keep his hands clean.
I loved this chapter it was funny, sweet and made my stomach flutter seeing them as a family. The love between them is amazing I wish that they would get their heads out of their asses and realize how they feel and what they could have. I can see a little boy I their future.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Oh. Is Edward going to go all cave man on Bella and James? That would just finish the night off perfectly. Lol
Julie giving the chewed up food to Tanya was great. I actually had to take a few minutes to stop laughing. And I have to admit that I two have eaten food that has been spit out of my daughters mouth. I guess it is a parent thing. And Bella is so right if tanya can't handle that then there is no way she is ready for a baby, because lets face it they can be pretty gross a lot of the time. Lol
Date: 09 Sep 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 11- Moving On
Tanyas nice and all... But GET RID OF HER!!!!
E/k
Date: 09 Sep 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Edward and Bella need some alone time and I don't mean to talk ;)
Date: 09 Sep 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Love it, can't wait until the next chapter. The attraction of Bella and Edward is done perfectly.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Edward and Bella's relationship proves why communication is important in a realationship. They cared about each other and made assumptions and ended up divorced because of it when it wasn't what either really wanted. I also feel Bella let Rosalie off a little easy but that's just my opinon, I look forward to more.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3- Edward's side
I wonder what Edward's reasons for leaver are. I can't believe Bella didn't know he has a girlfriend.
I know telling Carlisle and Esme had to be so hard. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
What a cockblockin bitch rose!
I will beg u, please get ed & bella back together
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 2- Dropping the bomb
I am glad he remembered even if it is faint. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1- That hot, drunken boy
I feel bad for Bella that this was her first time, but I know this happens. I can't wait to see how this all plays out. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Come on Edward, wake up and smell the roses - we're waiting!!! Thanks for quick update :)
Date: 08 Sep 2012 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 3- Edward's side
It's really good so far, I can't wait to read more, it's very similar to my story, except I'm guessing that Edward and Isabella end up together.
Just a quick grammar thing, when Carlisle says can you sit down? It's actually sit up because she's laying down.
That's it. Thanks
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review!! I kind of want to hug you right now.
btw, thank for pointing out that mistake! It's all corrected now :)
Date: 08 Sep 2012 12:25 PM Title: Prologue
eeeeeee!!!!! it's getting to the good stuff. =D
Date: 08 Sep 2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Close much!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Oh come on you two... if we can see it, surely you can!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Loved it xxx
Date: 08 Sep 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Kat - I can't thank you enough for the extra chapter this week! And what a wonderful chapter it was. Love how warm and wonderful this story is. What could have been all agnst is sweet and handled with class. This whole story is. Love how sweet Edward is with Bella and she with him. I know they will realize they should never have parted and I want that so much, but I don't want this story to end anytime soon! - Cheri
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! You have no idea how happy your review made me!! <33
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
LOVE LOVE LOVE!! Ugh leave it to rosalie to ruin the moment! Hope she's not to harsh on them. Tanya is beginning to agitate me! Hope he ditches her soon!! Once again loveeeed it. wish it could be completed so I can read it over & over!! Looking forward to more
-Amanda*
xoxoxo!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
uhhhh i hate tanya! make them break up already so he can be with bella!!! lol you probably hate me for always sayin that but im goin to say it till it happens lol...loved this chapter.
Date: 08 Sep 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
My dream is that the rest of this story is written and will be posted so that I can read it all at once. Sigh.
I wish they would start actually talking to each other. There have been too many people meddling in their relationship. At least you have promised an HEA.
Thanks for writing! Looking forward to your next update!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Loved it. Are they getting back together?
Date: 08 Sep 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
oh jeez so much for convincing Rose that there is nothing going on... well with moments like those that may not be true for long :)
-Kate
Date: 08 Sep 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
Loved it!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks
oh wow, easy peasy dump the dancer get your wife back. You want her, she wants you! lol
Date: 07 Sep 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
I look forward to more and seeing what happens when Edward notices Bella and James talking.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Thanks! I love the Tanya reaction. I think Alice is more responsible than she lets on. She did encourage him to move too. I can't wait for more and now James it's in the picture ;)
Date: 06 Sep 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
I am worried about what Tanya has up her sleeve.
I feel so badly for Bella- to still be so in love with Edward and have to watch hm with Tanya.
Alice's revelation about pushing Edward for divorce was just painful to read. Some people think that divorce is so easy, when it is anything but easy. It breaks hearts and lives. I am hoping that Alice speaks with Edward and apologizes for that, and maybe she can tell Edward that Bella still loves him?
Hope Jamie is not a bad guy here. I hope he is nice to Bella-she does deserve it. I am also hoping that Edward will become so jealous that he realizes his feeelings for Bella and kicks Tanya to the curb.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
oh...i absolutely love this story...so much that i did not stop to review...
cant wait for the nxt chapter, pls update soon.xo,lavanya.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
I love this story! Great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
This is what it will take.. A man totally interested in Bella. One that is handsome and not poor but rich is not that important. She needs to be interested as well.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
again, i feel like i'm repeating myself, i can't wait for this story to unfold. this is a good thing. i just have high hopes for this one. =)
Date: 06 Sep 2012 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
From the moment you mentioned blue eyes and blond hair I just know it would be James. Is he going to be the 'bad guy' as usual in fanfiction? Or are you trying to throw us off with the name? :)
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Good chapter?...
Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Great chapter!!!!!
Now it will be interesting to see Edwards reaction to Bella being with someone else :-) of course the name James usually means bad thing are going to happen.
Till next time
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
i still cant stand tanya i hope shes gone real soon. like next chapter lo...seriously.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
I have this permanet lump in my throat as i read, waiting for the bottom to fall out!
Im so addicted to this!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Great chapter. I can't wait dfor then to realize that they have feelings for each other. Maybe James being with her will speed I along
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Loved it. Cant wait for more.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Kat - I can't tell you how much I look forward to the updates to this story. Actually squeel when I see a new chapter posted. Love your characters, love the connections between all of them and LOVE the girls, Love the pictures of the girls, they look like Edward and Bella to a T. Love your words. And now can't wait to see Edward's reaction to James's interest in Bella... Thank you and...WRITE FAST, please! Cheri
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter.... best part was with Tanya and Juliet... and then Edward eats it! HA... Bella is right though... parenting is defintely not a mess-free job! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Loved it
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Ahhhhh!!! Youa dn the cliffies!! This was an excellent chapter. i want to believe that Edward is going to dumb poop for brains-I mean Tanya and go back with Bella but I guess never say never, right? This was such a good chapter! I'm wating patiently for the next!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Loveeeed this chapter! Love every chapter love this story!! Would never give up on you! Just wish the story was complete or regularly updated "/ but I know RL gets in the way! I just absolutely love this story!! :D can't wait for the next update! I was some E/B action already! Sorry I'm impatient lol you've got a faithful reader in me!!
-Amanda*
xoxox
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
Lord have mercy! You really know how to pull the slow burn from a story, I love it! I almost wish I would have found this story once it was complete so I could just hop to the next chapter. I can't wait to see what James is up to and I really can;t wait until Edward and Bella get their heads of of their asses!
Love love love!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world
oh god the miscommunication these two had, and if Alice had gone about things in a different way they might still be together...who knows. I am sad for them though. Really don't like Tonya either. lol
Date: 31 Aug 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Omg u seem to make me cry on every page
Seriously i love this so much
Yay alice for showing bella the truth!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
looking forward to more
Date: 27 Aug 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
i love this story. i can't wait for them to get back together and i can't wait to read about how they realize that they never stopped loving each other. lovely, lovely. =)
Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Love your story!!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Love it !!
Author's Response:
<33333
Almost finished the next chapter! I think that snail scene is kinda cute, yay! ;)
Date: 26 Aug 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
I hope Edward finally realizes he and Tanya aren't on the same page with what they want relationship wise.
I hope E/B get a little tipsy after the party and Bella needs some help out of her dress and see if Edward can still control himself as easy as before, or make out like horny teenagers and get caught by Tanya, she needs to go!!!
Till next time
Date: 25 Aug 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Yeah. Bella is starting to see it. I hope she gets brave enough (or drunk enough) to tell him how she feels. I have a feeling Tanya is going to start something and I can't wait. Alice and Bella are right no one is that perfect.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
God Tanya is just digging her own grave and she doesn't even realize it. I can't wait to see Edwards reaction to her last statement. Lol
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Great chapter. I hope they will get together soon
Date: 24 Aug 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Loved it they nned to hurry up an relize pffft lol xx
Date: 24 Aug 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Wow! Awesome chapter!
It's heartbreaking knowing they both loved and still love each other so much, but were to afraid to say it in the past. That said, it makes this a story worth telling!
I really love this story :)
please update soon!
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Date: 24 Aug 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
love this story!
Date: 24 Aug 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
this story just breaks my heart, just a little communication would have saved them both a world of hurt. Nice to see that he is still hot for her tho lol.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
i really do hope they get back together fast because i cant stand tanya lol
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
LOVE it. Looking forward to chapter 14. Will you show a POV from the kids?
Date: 24 Aug 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
LOVE this story. Bella must feel like she is in a fairy tale with all the celebs and fancy yacht. But then again I guess when you have Edward to look at, everything else probably fades away. Was kind of hoping the yacht would sail minus Tanya tho... but maybe she will get dropped overboad somehow... As usual LOVE Alice, besides E/B she has always been my favorite and I don't care for it when authors try and change her so thank you! I know I sound like a broken record, but, write fast please! LOVE to see your updates and love how the little 'moments' are happening now. Thank you - Cheri
Date: 24 Aug 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
WOW! Loved it! :) So excited to see the Firework chapter... hopefully a little more than just the 4th of July in the sky fireworks will happen! :)
-Kate
Date: 24 Aug 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Good chapter......
Date: 24 Aug 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Ok, so you know I have cried every chapter? Well, I still cried, but much less than the norm-I am actually beginning to feel more hopeful. They need the extended family to push them back together. At first, I thought that Bella was the only one suffering from self-esteem issues, but I think Edward does, too. They both hold back due to fear of rejection. They never told each other "I Love You?" How sad!
Date: 24 Aug 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Ahhhhhh!!! I sense a reunion sooooon!! Pleaseeee hopefully my senses are not wrong! Have I told you how much I absolutely LOVE this story! Pleaseeee update soon!!
-Amanda*
Date: 24 Aug 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband
Loved it cant wait for more.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
I really hope Edward realizes what Tanya is doing to Bella. I hate when Edward is oblivious to Tanya's ways in stories. Please update soon!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
I enjoyed the chapter and I feel sorry for Tanya and her unnecessary need to be make underhanded digs at Bella. I look forward to more.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
not pregnant yet?????????!!!!!!!!
I simply hate Tanya
but I totally love your fic
xoxo-maria
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
Oh i love it! Update soon plz!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
this was a really great chapter! it was nice reading edward's thoughts on the divorce. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
edward is really stupid, why didnt he say something to bella, before he makes a bigger mistake. my heart aches everytime poor bella see him and tanya together. of course bella is to blame too, but it was edward that move on so i thnk that should be him to make the first step. please update soon
Date: 17 Aug 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
i hate tanya i hope shes gone real soon cuz i want to slap her so bad.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
Your story is the very reason I hate reading unfinished work....it is so spectacular I am bouncing in my seat waiting for a new chapter! ;) This truly is one of my favorites! I am loving the direction this is going!
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you and... I'm sorry, I guess.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
Oh my!!! im super excited for the next update! Are you doing a posting schedual? or is it just whenever your ready?
Author's Response:
unfortunately, it's whenever I'm ready, since I'm currently writing next chapter. I'm trying to be quick though, and my beta and pre-readers are all aware of you guys waiting, so they try their best to be quick too. Such an awesome teamwork.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:35 PM Title: Prologue
I can't wait until the next update. I am soooo tired of Tanya, and I seriously hope that Edward and Bella wake up and come to their senses! Such a great story!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
LOVEEEE this chapter!! I can't wait until the next one you don't know how happy I get when I see an update!! Please update soon!!
-Amanda*
Author's Response:
thank you so much!!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
I love it!!!! Keep going!!! I can't wait For more!!!
Tam
Date: 16 Aug 2012 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
I just found this story this morning and have already caught up :) I can't wait for more!
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Date: 16 Aug 2012 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
I don't really know what to say. I keep feeling bad for Bella. She is cast off. The one that trapped him. He does not love her. he loves Blonde and his NEW LIFE. I would not want to be there if I was Bella. I would say excuse me and go lay down or leave.
Author's Response:
:/ you need to take note of the tiny details. He obviously still love her. Don't give up hope.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
Great chapter. When are they going to get back together?
Date: 16 Aug 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
Ok not a fan of Tanya's. All I want to know is how long until she leaves the story?
Author's Response:
lol. not long, but I still need her for now. :)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
loved this chapter.. cant wait next..
Date: 16 Aug 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
Ouch, yet! I wonder what Edward thinks about that?
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
Yet??????? Don't care how cute you have made Tayna, the woman has got to GO!!!!!! Really enjoy this story and love your updates. Hint, hint...more soon? Thank you - Cheri
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
"not pregnant. Yet." brilliant cliffie!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
I really like this story. But it makes me sad at the same time. I am always excited to read the updates. Looking forward to the next one! ;)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
I am so frustrated with them both. He was an idiot who took his wife for granted and she was too afrai to speak her mind and ask for what she wanted. Sigh. I hope this gets better soon. I want to smack them both upside the head and lock them in a room until they talk.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
looking forward to more
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
Good Chapter.....
Date: 15 Aug 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
Tanya is coming off as desperate, needy, pushy and insensitive..."not pregnant Yet?" WOW! She is just a girlfrend. Hope this totally turns Edward off.
I love this story, but I cry every time I read it. I am tired of crying :(