Date: 29 Aug 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
SORRY IT TAKE TOO LONG TO THANK YOU, BUT I'M REALLY GRATEFUL FOR YOU TO READ AND REVIEW
Date: 28 Aug 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
sneaky bastard i don't trust him either
Author's Response:
YES, NICE TO KNOW EDWARD IS REBELLONG
Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to mroe
Author's Response:
THANKS FOR READ AND REVIEW
Author's Response:
THANKS FOR READ AND REVIEW
Date: 24 Aug 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think that the best idea he has had at the moment. They should elope and maybe edward should turn down the positon. I hope he didnt sign the prenup that way after they elope it wouldnt matter anymore. Great chapter hun, i cant wait to read her answer. :)
Author's Response:
I'M WORKING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER SO IT'S WILL BE POSTED SOON. I'M STILL ASHAMED FOR THE DELAY :(
Date: 24 Aug 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
elioping is forb the best no jake no long engagement and who would say no to edward
Author's Response:
YOU TOOK THE WORDS FROM MY MOUTH :D
Date: 24 Aug 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
Charlie is a douche
Author's Response:
YEP, RIGHT NOW NOT EVEN HIS MOTHRR WOULD LIKE HIM
Date: 15 Aug 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR READING AND REVIEWING
Date: 15 Aug 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Eleazar is going to be okay. Tanya is one screwed up woman. I liked it!
Author's Response:
ELEAZAR IS GONNA BE OK, TANYA IN TIME WILL GET HRR JUST DESSERTS
Date: 15 Aug 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
poor carlisle what a shock hope eleazar survives the heart attack. a daughter like tonya could give any boby a HEART ATTACK FROM STRESS.
Author's Response:
DONT WORRY, ELEAZAR IS GONNA BE OK.
Date: 15 Aug 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope that didnt come of rude no need to appologise jus a bit of constuctive critizism xx
Author's Response:
IT WASN'T RUDE, I LIKE TO KNOW YOUR OPINION. LETS JUST SAY I HAVE TOO MUCH FUN WRITING ON CARLISLE POV MAYBE I SHOULD GIVE HIM AN ULCER FOR ALL HIS STRESS
Date: 15 Aug 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
I like this story but its dragging a little bit xx
Author's Response:
SORRY, JUST ONE MORE AND WE WILL MOVE ON IN TIME :)
Date: 13 Aug 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Omg just when ye thought it couldnt get better it did loved it xx
Author's Response:
THANKS :)
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
YES lets hear the clueless man POV. Great chapter, update more soon :)
Author's Response:
THANKS, I'M WORKING TO POST IT ON WEDNESDAY
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh how i love nosy people so predictable. this story is fantastic
Author's Response:
THANK YOU
Date: 10 Aug 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
ABSOLUTELY AWSOME
Author's Response:
THANK YOU VERY MUCH
Author's Response:
THANK YOU VERY MUCH
Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it
Author's Response:
THANK YOU VERY MUCH
Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh how wonderful reunited mother and daughjter forgiveness when practiced is great
Author's Response:
QTHANKS FOR READING AND REVIEWING EVERY CHAPTER, FIRST, I REALLY LIKE TO THANK YOU, FEEL FREE TO ASK OR SHARE YOUR IDEAS OR ANYTHING YOU WANT. SECOND, YOU'RE RIGHT WITH FORGIVENESS, IT WILL BE GREAT BOTH OF THEM
Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 11
oh god bella's mom is really sick
Author's Response:
SADLY, THIS IS TRUE. BUT IT'S THEIR CHANECE TO RECONNECT
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
A cullen baby wow it will surely be cute
Author's Response:
IT'S GONNA BE THE CUTEST BABY
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
DID THEY TAKE THE TEST TO TRY AND SAY THAT THEY ARE PREG BYCARLISLE OR ONEOF THE CULLENS
Author's Response:
MMM, LET'S SAY YOU'LL FIND OUT SOON. AND IT WILL BE FUNNY ;)
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
WAY TO GO EDWARD BE STRONG AND LET YOUR DAD KNOW YOU ARE A MAN AND HANDLE YOUR OWN STUFF
Author's Response:
YEAH, EDWARD DESERVE IT
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
THIS IS GREAT
Author's Response:
I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT, THANKS
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
OH GOIOSDNESS WHAT JUST HAPPENED JAZZ SAID WE NEED TO LEAVE NOW
Author's Response:
JASPER KNOWS HOW TO KILL A MOMENT
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
THEY ARE CLOSE AS A FAMILY I AM GLAD TO SEE THAT
Author's Response:
THEY BECOME CLOSER RECENTLY, BUT STILL IT'S GREAT
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
OH POOR GUY THAT HAS TO HURT. BUT I MUST SAY WHY DO THEY CALL THEM BLUE BALLS ? DO THEY ACTUALLY TURN BLUE? OR DO THEY JUST SWIVAL UP IN A NICE TIGHT SACK ?
Author's Response:
IN MY OPINION, MEN MAKE SUCH DRAMA FOR A LITTLE UNCOMFORTABLE SITUATION ;)
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
THE PRINCE FINDS HIS PRINCESS IDENTIDY
Author's Response:
YEP, DESPITE THE BAD DRAWING
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 The next day
OH MAN I AM GLAD DADDY CARLISLE IS NOT MY FATHER
Author's Response:
YEAH, HE ISN'T 'FATHER OF THE YEAR' MATERIAL
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
PERFECT HOOK UP THEY ARE REALLY IN TO EACH OTHER
Author's Response:
I'D LIKE TO THINK IT WAS LUST AT FIRST SIGHT
Date: 08 Aug 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
THANKS :)
Date: 07 Aug 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh I loved it had a lump in my throat
Author's Response:
THANK YOU, SO DO I
Date: 02 Aug 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
THANKS FOR ALWAYS REVIEWING. THE NEXT ONE WILL BE POSTED SOON
Date: 01 Aug 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward ot more
Author's Response:
THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, the next chapter will be posted before Friday
Date: 24 Jul 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder who took the test? Someone that is going to try and say that the baby is Edward's??? The women after the guys are crazy!!! I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
REALLY CRAZY, BUT SOME OF THEM ARE MORE INTELLIGENT THAN THE OTHERS. THANKS FOR REVIEWING
Date: 24 Jul 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
So Carlisle had Bella checked out. They all must be in jeopardy of losing the company by the way Carlie is acting. That is the only thing I can think of. He needs to come clean to his family. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
YOU GOT THE VERY MAIN POINT, THEY HAVE THREATS TO LOOSE THE COMPANY BUT IT WILL BE CLEARED LATER, CARLISLE IS BEING SO PARANOID
Date: 24 Jul 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
So Bella seems to be showing signs already. I hope they have set Esme straight. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
FIRST, SORRY FOR WRITING IN CAPITAL LETTERS MY CELL PHONE IS A LITTLE CRAZY. SECOND, I´ D LIKE TO KNOW IF YOU HAVE SOME CHEESY LOVE SONG FOR EDWARD TO SING TO BELLA WHILE HE IS DRUNK, ONE THAT MAKE HIM SING OUT OF KEY. I´ M ASKING BECAUSE YOU ARE ONE HELL OF A READER AND I'D LIKE YOU TO BE IBNCLUDED. THIS WILL APPESAR IN CHAPTER 11. AGAIN SORRY FOR SPELLING ERRORS BUT MY PHONE IS ACTING SO WEIRD.AGAIN THANKS FOR ALL THE REVIEWS AND I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND MY PETITION
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
There was so much drama going in at that gala. Wow. I guess we knew it would be that way with all the girls that are after the guys. I really like Alice. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I think the h gala was funny
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hmmm.... So Carlisle is sick and there must be something that says the kids must be married in order to take over the business???? I can't wait to find out more. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
You are right, there is somthing with the company statutes you will see.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am glad he figured out her name. Also, it is good that Jake met someone else. He needed to move on. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he fi nd her despise the bad drawing. Shh, butdont tell Bella
Date: 23 Jul 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 The next day
Charlie and Carlisle need to get a clue. They are the ones that are making things harder on their children. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
And it'Ss going to take some chapters for they to understand thank God for Rosalie
Date: 23 Jul 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting. I can't wait to catch up. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
THhTHANKSThanks for reading and reviewing
Author's Response:
THhTHANKSThanks for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was weird. Edward said he sighned the list and even Alice was accepted but Alice told the girls that she was rejected. I hope Bella remebers that and tells Edward about it. Good chapter, update soon :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. There are more problems with the list, next chapter you'll see ;)
Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
when u are typin this could you maybe put like a 1.5 or 2 space between each line? its hard to read all clumped together like this.
if u are using word just highlight document and go to the space button at top and choose one of those.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and the advice. You´ll notice the difference the next chapter :)
Date: 26 Jun 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
great update :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing =)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Really like it and i cant wait to read more. Could you space the dialog? its hard to read when it looks all press together like it is now. Update soon :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. I´m working with the dialogue (I promise next one you´ll read it perfect)