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Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:25 AM Title: Of Meetings and Coffees

You've skated over a lot of character and relationship development. I would've liked to have read about Hermione's preparation for the night, her thoughts etc. and the actual event and her interactions/dialogue with Edward. I think it could've been really interesting but not currently with the way you've done it.

Reviewer: Astanley1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:35 PM Title: Of Meetings and Coffees

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

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