Date: 06 Feb 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
It should be real interesting things you learned as most of us have no clue what living the mob life is like! So far, it looks to me as if Edward longs for Bella but she isn't too aware of his feelings! Maybe I have it all wrong, we'll see.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like Edward is pretty happy at Newton's infidelity, since he now gets a chance with the one he really wants, Bella! Who else? This promises to be a lot of fun to read!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for the story
Date: 27 Jun 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow good feelings bella
Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Not so sure about what she said...she didn't sound that upset when talking to her mother about having sex
Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow how awful! Poor Ed :(
Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella is pregnant....wow she sure is tough
Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oookay nothing like a hard f*ck to get over a fight
Date: 27 Jun 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Sweet date...Tanya is something else!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
Okay Jacob is out of the picture
Date: 27 Jun 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
Nice! What is up with Jacob?
Date: 27 Jun 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Cool beat her down!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yeah! Mike finally got what he deserved!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh mike you are in big trouble!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good glad he is going to be a little harsher on those two. So Charlie is a big deal...interesting
Date: 27 Jun 2013 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is Bella's family in the mob too? You said they were afraid of Charlie.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Darn I was hoping for some beat down on mike. Oh well onward with the story
Date: 27 Jun 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting lets see what happens to mike!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
THIS IS THE BEST THEY MADE LOVE FOR THE FIRST TIME
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
DAMN EDWARD'S JUST GOING TO SET AROUND WITH CUM IN HIS PANTS? WONT THE GUYS MAKE FUN OF HIM?
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 10:50 AM Title: Outtake: The Note
ALL RIGHT SHE LOVES HIM, I JUST LOVE IT
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
SHIT I'M DISAPOINTED I THOUGHT THEY WERE GOING TO KILL MIKE
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
TAKE YOUR TIME BELLA AND MAKE SURE THEN TELL EDWARD YOU LOVE HIM TO
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
I HOPE BELLA GIVES EDWARD A CHANCE
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
WOW MRS. NEWTON IS A REAL BITCH EVEN KNOWING HER SON IS A CHEAT SHE WANTS BELLA TO GO BACK TO HER SON SHE STUPID IF SHE THINKS BELLA WILL RETURN TO MIKE. I LIKE THE WAY EDWARD IS GOING TO DEAL WITH THE NEWTON'S
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
YES BELLA LESSON TO ALICE
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh no who's edward going to stoot?
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
what a way to start by finding out your mates are cheaters i hope bella and edward can recover. i like it so far
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love the ending to this story, I have loved it from the beginning.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great story! Fast paced-no time for any heavy angst!! I like it that way.
:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
Yea, good on ya girl...
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward, posessive, never. Really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
Don't know if I trust her...
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well thats different...
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
Addicted already!! So good!
:)
Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wondeful end. TY for writing and sharing
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
Blood thirsty or what...
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
She is a tough cookie...love her.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Jessica is lucky to be alive.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 9:08 PM Title: Outtake: The Note
He got what he deserved.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
I hope they get whoever did this...it is the worst crime.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Running scared mea thinks...
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good to see them so evil, great bad guys.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
mike and Jessica two nasty pieces of work.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Like the look of this one.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
hey
great chapter!
I'm so sad that it's over!
but great end!
you really did a great job with that story!
bye
Lil
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
Liz xx
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
I was going to ask what had ahppened to the dinner donvo. glad you had that in there
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
i will admit i was dissappointed , kicked out of the house, thats all Jessica got, and being scared enough to piss your pants for mike.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
so far I really like it !!!!, I've seen it come up when you update and thought I woudl finally give it a read.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow so worth the wait, i really enjoyed this story, one of those short but sweet stories. A++++++++
Date: 22 Oct 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awww sad to see this end hope you have a very long epi for us all xx
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 23
Yeah!!!! Great job. Good story.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was a very entertaining story. Bella was a bad-ass and I loved it. Can't wait for more from you.
E/k
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
:) loved this story
Date: 22 Oct 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it! Awesome ending!
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity with us all
Date: 22 Oct 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it all the babys and all the love.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great job doll.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it!!! It was such an amazing journey!!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!! Edward and Bella love each other so much and they are sooo happy that they have their baby with them finally!!! They will handle anything together!!!
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
They got married before the birth and after the shooting om
Date: 16 Oct 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
what the last chapter is ended on a cliffy? was bella hit was anyone else hit from karens gun?
Date: 15 Oct 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
How did the crazy lady get free? She hAs been like magic the whole story. Great chapter.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
holy crap! wild chapter
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
hey
great chapter...
good that she is dead...
even when I'm not a kind of Humand that would whish someons dead!
but she deserved it!
I hope Bella isn't dead!
bye
Lil
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow!!! she is dead?? finaly! And Victoria told them the whole truth? that's amazing! they needed it!! especially Edward!!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
What moron let Karen out of jail. Glad v came clean.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
About time that bitch died and I am happy Bella did it.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
confused. b killed her - correct?
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella killed her and the fainted as the adrenaline left her system. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was an evil cliffie! I can't wait for more, thanks so much for the update
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh shit who is it you cant do this lol I guess you can.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
hey
my qosh, is this unfair!
I wanna know who it is!!!!!!!!
I bet it's James or Laurent ...
but my gosh! (I know I'm repeading myself)
The Baby is fine that's great!
and now everyone knows...
wonderful!
bye
Lil
Date: 09 Oct 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh you are not sorry for that Cliffie :-)
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
victoria?! Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my gosh! Please tell me it wasn't someone they killed! I cannot believe you left us hanging like that. This story is like a curvy mountain road in the middle of the night! GAH! This is driving me crazy!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
its Victoria isn't it? OMG, that would be perfect, the she gets the goods in her mother... now that would be sweet, swet Justice for the daughter.... and rewarding for Edward and Bella to know too!