Date: 08 Oct 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
aaahhhh.... come on.... who is it??? Please??? Can't wait for more...
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
oooh you are evil cliffy woman!!!! lol for Caveward at the doc's office.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
O no!! How could u?! I can't wait until the next update. Really good chapter!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
Mike i doubt but victoria?
Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
would it be victoria
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
BAH WHAT IS UP WITH AUTHORS AND CLIFFIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MEH UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
Victoria???
Great chapter
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great mob story
Date: 03 Oct 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
hey
great chapter
My gosh...
Karen is really psycho!
but the proposar is sooo cutte!
bye
Lil
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for the update!
Date: 02 Oct 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
love the last 2 chapters. great job.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
I have read all your stories and I have enjoyed them all!!! You have a way with words that just keeps me reading. Keep up the good work!!! Can't wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait until they have something concert on Victoria and Karen. Esme and Renee must be ecstatic about being grandparents can't wait for everyone to find out. why did she get pregnate was she off birth control....... I don't remember. A Cullen-swan wedding........good times and a big party I'm sure!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad that Mike is gone. I liked it. Thanks!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 01 Oct 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
Very glad Mike is no longer with us :) That is a great proposal loved it
Date: 01 Oct 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awww nice proposal. Glad Tanya is willing to do what is needed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Leaving you loads of love. Love the story xx
Date: 25 Sep 2012 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. Thanks.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
But when her mom called vic she told her she didnt get pregnant it sounded like she was in on the plan & yet she says she was drugged also she mentioned james is it same james. Bella killed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh Jenks. You've screwed the pooch this time. Karen is an delusional psycho. Hope Victoria is telling the truth and they help her.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
hum... that's a difficult one.... on the one hand there is no proof that Karen drugged Victoria.... but on the other hand who says she didn't... so one has to say who was the greater villian here? Karen Newton or Victoria? Just from whats present her it looks like Karen is the greater villian.... again from the information we see....
Date: 24 Sep 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Vic was used but she knew what she was doing didnt she????
Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Get Karen locked up for a long time!!
Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
So Victoria wasn't a willing participant? Do we believe her? It has to be hard seeing the women that raped you wanting your help. I can't image it. Bella seems really calm about everything.........
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
hey
great chapter
I'm not sure if Vic is telling the truth,
but I would help her...
Karen is the really mean one!
bye
Lil
Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
loved it! can't wait to see what will happen next! poor edward!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
hey
great chapter!
I'm sorry you had that experience...
I'm not offended that you didn't use the word...
I'm glad Edward and Bella are ok!
bye
Lil
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
Rape is a damaging thing to happen to someone and their loved ones but im glad the newtons will pay
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
I hope you know that you are a strong woman being able to write about rape after experiencing. I thank you for this story and hope that you continue to write more. Also I hope that Karen and Victoria gets what is coming to them.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good Chapter.........
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
loved it! can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sorry to hear about your past, hopefully your are healed from your experience. Even though you may never forget it:-(
Ok, knew it was some how involving mikes mom just didn't know Victoria was a sister. Hopefully Bella kills Karen and Victoria especially after drugging and raping Edward as well sat torturing him.
Update soon.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh Karen...you've doomed yourself and Victoria. Stupid biatch. Poor e
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
Karen is going down!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
I wasn't thinking it was Victoria that had sex with Edward...but yeah, knew it was Karen or Jessica... so glad the witch is Not preggers....but I have a feeling, sick as it may be that they (Karen and reluctantly Victoria) are going to attempt to say Victoria is pregnant with Edward's baby... yep pretty sick but like you pointed out the Greedy Witch wants something she felt she was apparently entitled to through Bella and Mikes marriage... Yes, the use of the date rape drug is a vial form of Rape..... I'm so sorry for your life experiences and the trauma you have suffered in the past, but thank you bery much for this chapter and the story, as I'm sure it was difficult for you, like you pointed out.... till next week....Kathy
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Omg please hurry with the nxt chap lol xx
Date: 14 Sep 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love. Great story. So looking forward to further chapters
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
loved it! can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
loved it! love the badass Bella!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Love Edward when he's being a badass!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
Is that who the guys saw at the church?
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
Just found your story and read the whole thing tonight. Excellent stuff
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
BAH Y A CLIFFY WHY!!!!!!!!!!!! MAKE AN UPDATE LIKE HELLA FAST!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
Dayam...b is bad ass. Me thinks she is prego. Wonder who they stole e's spermatozoa for.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Go bad ass bella.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was so good. I hate having to wait for the next update!!! Loved it! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm guessing it's no other than mikes mom? Oh......... She date raped Edward, hope Bella put a lot of pain into her death. Was she trying to get pregnate or the fact that she could flaunt she had sex with Edward?
Bella pregnate? Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh dear lord...that witch....either Jessica or Mrs. Newton ... gave him the date rape drug ...most definitely a form of torture... I bet she's pregnant
Date: 10 Sep 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hope skanka rots.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Looks like Momma Newton is in charge. Nice twist.
Jukie
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bellas preganant her mentioning her jeans being tight gave me that idea. And i cant believe mikes moms behind this....did she rape edward?
Date: 10 Sep 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
seems maybe she is pregnant. wondering what they did to e when they drugged him
Date: 10 Sep 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it :)!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my goodness awesome chapter!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good chapter...... im guessing she is pregnant
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
BRILLIANT!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ohhhhhh fucking loved it cant wait 4 nxt update xx
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
For your first Mobward story, it's very good. There are plenty of twist to this story. Who would have though that Charlie would be head of a "family" and may have slept with Tanya. And I really like this Renee too. Now is James and Laurent working for someone? Can't wait until Monday for the next update.
Thanks, Maria
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
Make Jess do it. Film her doing it then blackmail her to keep her trap shut.
Love the update. It was good to find out that Mike is that stupid. :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think Bella will kill Mike once Edward is back and she has answers. I think she is gonna even be madder once she sees what kind of condition he is in. Not sure if jessicabis in on it or not, but she can't leave her alive if she kills Mike. Maybe she just leaves them both for James and Laurent. I definitely think she is going to be going after those two.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait to see what happens next! Monday is just too long!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
i think jessica knows something about the scheme overall but maybe not about mike's exact involvement. great chapter.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story. Mobward AND Mobella
Date: 05 Sep 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
That weasel...poor Edward!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I do love a Mobward.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hum, I'm glad he's alive I still just trying to figure out why they left all those people aliive... TY so much for another update this week.