Date: 08 Oct 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
I do love sharing! Things run so much smoother when people talk to one another. Great chapter. You always leave me wanting more?
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
looking forward to more
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter!! Can't wait till next week! :)
-Kate
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward to more
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter!!! So excited to see the next one... the meeting with Garrett, and Calvin!! :)
-Kate
Date: 25 Sep 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Date: 14 Sep 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
Date: 04 Sep 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter! I am thinking that her reaction can be somewhere in the middle? not too freaked out, but not totally ok with it right away. Would love to see what happened with her parents and how Peter ended Victoria, either in an outtake or future chapter :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 01 Sep 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love that Carlisle and Jasper are back in Bella's life. It's also good to know that Cassie's illness isn't something more nefarious. I would ha e loved more Jasper in this chapter, but I figure it will all work itself out. Great work here. You allow us to see into Bella's life without the Cullen's in a perfectly natural way. Cassie's reaction should be interesting! I would think her connection to Carlisle would keep any drama at a. Minimum. Interestingly, I see her as always having some concept of vampires and her Father's otherworldly clients. Considering her line of work, curiousity would be more than expected as well. Perhaps she has known a bit about this whole side since childhood- preteen age and just kept her silence understanding the risk.
Jasper- I think Bella's opening up to him or possibly her sleep-talking would be a way to have Bella tell the tale of parents. Jasper would almost NEED to know if it hurts her that much. As for Peter ending Victoria, I can see his Captain telling Jasper how he ended her when he feels Jasper's anger at Bella's revelations. It could be as simple as a phone conversation. Thanks for your update. The story is marvelous!
Date: 01 Sep 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really like this story. Hope it continues.
Date: 01 Sep 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
looking fowrard to more
Date: 31 Aug 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
i can see her leaning more towards like Bella but that doesnt mean that she needs to jump into a relationship right away no matter how hot Dr.Hottie is...
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think paul should be next one there is t many or they are left unfinished. Please. .
Date: 25 Aug 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
I do love Bella with Jasper. They're so ying and yang. Why do I have a nasty feeling about Cas and her illness? Bella having cousins is an interesting concept. Nice work.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
I wonder what happened to her family members that she wasnt allowed to see. Thats harsh that her uncles wife did that, but some people turnout like that sometimes. MAYBE they didnt look for Bella and Charlie because maybe the wife of her uncle told them they[bells and charlie] didnt want anything to do with them... I mean you never know.
Hopefully their okay, and wont be pulled into the life of vampires.. ya know?
Next we see whats going on, I'm pretty sure the reason Cass is feeling so bad, is because the mating pull towards Carlisle was put in effect once they spoke on the phone.. thats probably whats wrong with her.. ya know? thena gain you DO know b/c it's your story.. so I'm guessin here!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review hun and you are right on track with Carlisle and Cass but she is also sick.
Now her cousins, you know how some people and family are and if its true that her uncles wife was a gold digging *cough *cough* whore then she pretty much made her kids against the remaining Swans after their dad'd death.
I might bring them back for some drama fun for a bit but im not to sure yet. I dont really want them to be vamps unless they end up being good. Who knows sometimes these characters have a mind of their own.
I still have to bring the mystery vamp in from Jenks past.
Thanks again fore reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to more
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter! :) Moving can be stressful and time consuming... I just did it 5 months ago :) Hope everything goes well!
hmm.... parings... would depend do you like the wolves? I love Bella with Paul! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
I love Paul and Bella and it works with how the story starts.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter... I am thinking maybe Garrett? Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think that the vampire from the story could be one of the three vampires that are all in the Cullen ‘family’ of Carlisle, Edward or Jasper but now that I think of it it could have been Peter since that's the first vampire that Jenks called to help Bella.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
I like to be the family of Peter Bella, also liked that she has more living relatives than Peter.
I think Carlisle found her mate in Bella's friend and business partner.
Alice has secrets to hide the truth because they do not want to miss Jasper. I think Alice is not bad if it were I think Carlisle would not tell the phone to the lawyer knew he would find Bella. Even if she had not seen Bella there she told Carlisle that omitted the Jasper Bella was his companion and told the Jasper too. I think only his love for Jasper who was blinded her to be honest.
Author's Response:
If i understood your review corretly... Alice did not know where Bella was when she gave Carlisle the phone number to Jenks. She gave him the number because it was a new number not the old one that Jasper had, also it had something to do with Cassie. Alice knew that something would have happend once Carlisle called but nothing related to Bella, she didnt even know that Jenks was dead or had a new partnership.
Thanks for reading and reviwing.
Date: 07 Aug 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
LMAO that last line was the shit!!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it... would you imagine your BFF as your mom? I know I couldnt LOL.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 07 Aug 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love that she is related to Peter!! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
What I love most about this is that Bela doesn't roll over for anyone. She is willing to work towards new relationships, but she let's everyone know where she stands. In short, Bella has grown up...big time! Her trust and love for Peter and Charlotte is a warm counterpoint to her relationships with the Cullens. I'm looking forward to more!
As for your critics, if all they can catch is the punctuation and such, then they really aren't up for the story the rest of us are reading. Take a deep breath and remember that a lot of us are not editors and seriously enjoy your work. Thanks for all that you do!
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter... Can't wait to read more... oh and to that person that said that to you, they need to get a life. I just don't understand giving horrible reviews like that, if you don't like the story/author/grammar, then DON'T read the story, no one is forcing you to... ugh that irritates me! anyway I love your story and I don't even notice any mistakes!! :) Love ya!!
-Kate
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am enjoying your story so far. Loved it when Bella put them all in their place.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
forget the people who are retarded and try to belittle you because your grammar or punctuation or whatever! your story is awesome i just wish there was more in the chapters.. but i love the story anyways.
look forward to the next, your doing great!
Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
lo estás haciendo muy bien . no te preocupes de la gente que solo sirve para criticar. no se lo merecen , sus vidas estàn tan vacías que solo sirven para molestar
tu historia es buena
no la dejes tu amiga
Author's Response:
Gracias ms. rosario pero como sabes que puedo leer en espanol :)
el proximo capitulo esta con la beta asi que en esta semana lo subo aqui.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
looking forweard to more
Date: 29 Jul 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
All that law school paid off! If for nothing else, it stood Bella well dealing with Rosalie! All her news should hit everyone else like a boulder. Nicely done! I'm looking forward to her talk with Jasper.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
She shouldnt be so forgiving. I'm glad she has a fucking backbone now. Rosalie is a bitch and I cant stand her.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love it this is one of my fav. Please update soon
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter... so glad that she knocked her down a few! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 25 Jul 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great couple of chapters!! Can't wait to read more! :) All the renovations are beautiful :)
-Kate
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
I loving this story your keeping thing interesting
Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
PETERPIRE LMAOO
Date: 23 Jul 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
looking fowarard to more
Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
WOOOT WOOOT !!!! ALICE FUCKING SUCKS ASS AND SO DOES EDWARD!! I DONT LIKE THAT TANYA TWAT!!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think this is shaping up to be a great story! Can't wait for their first reunion and if Peter is there, it would be even better (he's one of my favs).
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter... Can't wait till they meet up!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter.... I don't think he should go to her, that would just scare her away. Can't wait to see what he does to Eddie boy though! :)
-Kate
Date: 30 Jun 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm liking it, so far. Looking foward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see the next one!! :)
-Kate
Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmm jazzy is gonna be suprised when hismate calls him lmao
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! :) Can't wait to see her and Jasper's phone call! :)
-Kate
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well over a cuckolded .... just that this was to hide who the true companion. Well over Alice loves Jasper although not a true companion. He did not think about it right. And by the way Jasper had no love for Alice, only lived with her distracted right? because he wants to part with hate it without even looking back without even knowing if Bella is alive or not ...... and all this in the face of Edward. Edward has nothing to say about Jasper to be the companion, like, he has some feelings for Bella?
Bella did not realize that Jasper Whitlock, Jasper Cullen and even Alice.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
More surprises. I mean Bella is the companion Jasper, wow. I think it will give the talk eh. More and woe, Edward does not feel anything for Bella? in its history Edwrad only distracted with Bella and not to love?
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
The surprise was for both, hehe
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved your story. The poor thing Carlisle, horn and did not even know
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Carlisle definatley needs to tell Jasper about Bella if he is suffering. Great chapter, by the way!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
great chapter!! Can't wait to read more! Hopefully when Jasper calls Bella she will give him time to explain things :)
-Kate
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved the convo between Bella & Edward, I wish it had gone like that. lol
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the start to your story
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
So she already met with char and Peter. I can't wait to see how this plays out. It looks good.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Marvelous backstory! It makes sense and will help the rest of the story flow. Carlisle is in for a big surprise! This is not the Cullen's Bella anymore. Bella is strong and tempered by pain and loss. Edward better watch his butt! My one question here is did Peter know that the Bella he was helping had a connection to Jasper? She didn't mention it, but with Peter's gift the possibilities are endless. I can't wait for more!! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.... Maybe maybe not. Maybe that's the reason Peter helped her ;), maybe there's more lol
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it... so she has met Peter and Char already.... and is running the Jenks office... Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
You certainly have my interest!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
great start! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate