Date: 09 Oct 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Long Weekend
You are funny as hell! I love hearing Taylor's take on everything! Why aren't you writing for a comedy show? Wait. Do you? :)
Author's Response:
Oh, boy! Just give me the chance! Yeah, Taylor could have his own show... :)
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Long Weekend
Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Long Weekend
thank you for the update.I love Taylor............I can't wait for them to catch Lelia
Author's Response:
That'll be in a couple of chapters. I'm looking forward to writing it. Imagine how much Taylor is going to beat himself up over what he'll see as ANOTHER error on his part.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Long Weekend
Ha, fun
Author's Response:
Love that you're laughing, Fobe.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
I love this story so much. Thank you so much for writing it!
Author's Response: ;)
Date: 09 Oct 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow. I've just read 18 chapters in one sitting. I can't put this down. You are an excellent writer, and I really admire the work you've put into tying this in so well with the books. The accuracy with what was said to Taylor or in front of him at what point. The look 'behind the scenes' if you will, into Taylor's world is addictive. I can't wait to wake up tomorrow and read the rest!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, Marty. Appreciate that. Mistakes do happen but I HATE finding them!
Date: 30 Sep 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 23 - A Woman of Substance
I can't wait to get his take on the happening coming soon! I love your story.
Author's Response:
Thanks, aabc! Yes, more coming.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 23 - A Woman of Substance
LOL @ adorable Taylor and Gail, they are so perfect together...Oh, spot on about Leila and manipulative.... Holy Heck, without a doubt!
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree. Even Ana spotted that. Aw, thanks.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 23 - A Woman of Substance
Besides having sex with Gail, when does this guy ever relax. He always seems so wound up! It might be nice to see what a vacation would look like to Taylor. the guy needs one badly.or a session with Flynn. Great chapter as always.
Author's Response:
I quite agree! I was going to send him to stay with Gail and her sister for a few days - I'd love to see him 'off duty'.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
Love it!! Taylor just cracks me up :)
Author's Response:
Excellent! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
OMG!! Too funny! Loved it! One of my favorite lines, although they are all funny, has to be
For fuck’s sake! He even managed to screw up ‘hello’!
You are amazing. Please keep up the fantastic work!!
Author's Response:
I always thought Taylore must have been rolling his eyes at Christian!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
Loving this story!! Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks, Snow!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
I am really liking your Taylor, he has such a great sense of humor. On the inside at least. More please. I can't wait to see how he tries to figure out how Leila gets in the apartment.
Author's Response:
That's coming soon!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
I really enjoy your taylor Stories, please keep these going. Once again a well writen story.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying my main man!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
Hey thank you so much...this has been a blast so far (just found it, and read right through), keep writting! I know you're not the only one who has thought about how Gail and Jason talk...we all have, but man this is funny, really fab, a total winner.
A happy fan of yours, T
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I haven't seen any other Taylor stories but really glad you're liking my take.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
Great as always! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, jg. ;)
Date: 20 Sep 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
All I can say is excellent, excellent, excellent. I love how you have captured the story from the perspective of two important players, Taylor and Gail. They know more about Christen then his own family...they are his family. You are doing an excellent job with this. I think E.L. James would be proud.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
dear lord I love Tay Tay!!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
As always just wonderful! Christian loves Ana so much but is so clueless about how to interact with her. Taylor's inter critique is awesome. I love his sense of humor and his protective values. You have made true Taylor fans out of everyone who reads your story. I just wish you would post more often! I love all of your stories! Waiting weeks on end to read another chapter from one of your stories is really frustrating. Do you have a pattern or schedule you follow to update your different stories? Please don't get me wrong they are ALWAYS worth the wait and I appreciate that you even share your awesome talent with us however it's just me, I'm not a patient person. You are so wonderful at what you do and I don't think if you rushed your work just for the sake of updating quickly we would be getting the quality that we have all come to expect and appreciate. Please just know it is hard waiting for updates. P.S. I know good things come to those who wait! And you never disappoint!
Author's Response:
Hi Lynne, that really made me smile. Sorry updates aren't as often as you like (or I like), but I so appreciate your comments. :)
Date: 20 Sep 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
Great ! It's really awesome. thank you. You peerfectly nail Taylor's caracter and Mrs James world. I laugh out loud a lote with Taylor's inner talk. very funny. I'm French and I've been reading all your writing for some time. I do love it!
Author's Response:
In that case, merci beaucoup!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
I never know where I should leave my reviews with you few that double (or in your case triple) post your stories?? So here I am to exstole my heartfelt gratification for this entertaining and insightful chapter! Not that every chapter isn't, but each one gets better and better of course our magic couple are getting closer and closer too! Taylor is a full blown character to us all because of you! There have been a few TPOV's since you started this original storyline, but none as complete and enthralling as yours. I am of course jaded since I love all of your works and even your entertaining blog master :). This is an absolute delight to read and re-read! Again, I thank you for doing this for us! One of your undeserving but appreciative readers. Liz
Author's Response:
Wherever you like, hon! Just grateful to have them. Hugs, jx
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
J'adore ce chapitre, Taylor est vraiment très amusant
Merci
Author's Response:
Thank you! Merci!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
Love this story! Always do a happy dance when there's an update. :-)
Like how you did the take on Taylor hearing the conversation in the back seat. Very clever.
Eager for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks loads, sr!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man
Great chapter, more please. Thanks
Author's Response:
Working on it now!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
This story is so great! I love the humor and insight. Please continue...I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, jg :)
Date: 12 Sep 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
That was a terrific chapter. It showed that Taylor does care and that he is loyal and discrete. I can't wait for the reunion... and what Taylor thinks during the drive back to Seattle.
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
AMAZING!!!!! I love that he really likes Ana! And that he's excited about the trip to Portland. Great story!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's a real softy at heart. But he'd rather chew off his hand up to his elbow than admit it.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
Loved the extra long chapter. Of course I love Taylor and his smart mouth. I thinks it is hysterical that Taylor makes jokes to himself and then thinks that he is a funny guy. As always you are just an outstanding writer and I am thankful that you share your talents with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, Lynne. Taylor is a swan - it's all going on under the surface!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
Stilling loving the story you write. The story really pulls you in. Can't wait for book two! More waiting...:(
Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sam. I lurvvvve writing Taylor. Glad you do, too!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
Its obvious you weren't one of the original readers of the Twilight fanfiction that turned into FSoG, Master of the Universe. E.L. James AKA Snowqueens Icedragon wrote an outtake of the break-up period in Fifty's POV.
In it, we find out that Taylor builds model planes and such as a hobby - he lends Fifty some glue for the model glider. We also find out that Fifty had some stalkerish activities during the break-up. He ran by Bella/Ana's apartment every morning dreading that she might have gone out and gotten drunk and slept with someone. She didn't, but we know how Fifty tends to jump to the worse conclusion. Also the conversation with Mrs. Robinson wasn't that bad, either. It was actually really short. She just said "It's for the best." She's far too clever to let her true colors show at this point in the story.
I guess that has been my only issue with this story, your Taylor is based on what we see in the main story, not what's in the outtakes, since they give us some insights on everyone. I don't think Taylor is as angry and messed up as you've been portraying him.
Author's Response:
Thanks for writing, Meya. You're right, I haven't read MOTU although someone gave it to me recently. I've only gone on what's in FSOG and my imagination. I guess I'm a bit surprised you see Taylor as 'angry and messed up'; he's certainly angry that Gail was put in danger, but messed up? Perhaps it's just my sarcastic humour.
Very interesting to get your pov, thanks for taking the time.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
Poor Edward! Even though this is in Taylor's POV, you've captured the shear misery Edward endured during this time. Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Yes, misery, for sure. Thank goodness we all know there's light at the end of the tunnel!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
this chapter, even though sad still had some funny parts. i was laughing when she jason was mad she walked past his office to take christian some food. it's nice to have a mix of emotions when reading. that's good writing.
Author's Response:
Ah, thanks Karen. There can be humour in some of the darkest days. Glad you enjoyed that.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
this was really an emotional chapter for me. well written.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
I am so loving this story xx
Author's Response:
Thanks, Ms Goat. Love that you're loving it.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness
this is my Favorite chapter.... I love mind of Taylor and all of his ramblings.. Oh my dear, one just couldn't help but laugh out loud, no less, over his jealousy of Gail coming home for Mr G. and not because she missed him... this was really, really great
Author's Response:
Yeah, poor Taylor. His woman just won't behave herself. Oh wait, that's Christian... no, it's Taylor... oh hell. You know what I mean ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
Looking so forward to reading book two. You have really done a great job writing this story in relationship to Fifity Shades of Grey.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sam. Working on the next book already. But life and work... you know...
Date: 04 Sep 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
I love this story, great job!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Two more books to cover!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
Taylor's POV is brilliant! I love it
Author's Response:
Thanks! Working on the big break up chapters next!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
It is interesting to watch events take place from another perspective. Good job with this.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
Outstanding! Beautifully understated and moving. Thank you x
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon. I'm glad you found it understated - that was definitely my intention.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
woah.. that was really worth the wait . More please ;)
Author's Response:
Hiya, there'll be more but it'll take a while. Been away and just catching up with... er... life and all that!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
wow!!!! wonderful chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I enjoyed writing it - sort of - you know what I mean.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
Wow this just gets better each time, blends so well. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Oona. Glad you're following me through.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
Great update. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. More soon-ish.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
Well, I guess I have to read this three times! Once in all of your posting sites. Jason Taylor thru your 'pen' is such a multi faceted guy, power, control, self confident, trusted,loyal ....but add in lover and soft hearted and you are mixing oil & vinegar to give you anger when mixed. Let them settle again and you can see thru the ingredients to find compassion! You are an amazing creator of this fine character! Please, I will beg in each site continue into the next book....love this! Liz
Author's Response:
Thanks, Liz. I love how you've written for me. Greatly appreciated. Yes, I will continue all the way through. Promise.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
I guess he decided to give the guy a break... that was a very rough chapter. Cried my eyes out when she left (just like in the book). The different perspective was just has heart wrenching.
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you! That's an amazing response. And the next 5 days will be tough on everyone, too. Thanks for reading.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
This is just as heartbreaking as the first time I read it. I'm so glad you are doing Taylor's POV.
Author's Response:
I'll be covering the 5 days of Ana's absence next. It'll take a while. Be gentle with me!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Endgame
Brilliant chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, Tribal. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 - The Long Way Home
Amazing, as usual! Well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 24 Aug 2012 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Long Way Home
Are you sure you're not a guy? "Reluctantly I say goodbye to the Bugatti, silently acknowledging that she’s almost as beautiful as Gail, and probably nearly as much fun to ride: the throbbing engine, the long, sleek lines, the… oh, for fucks sake!". I was laughing my butt off!
Wow! Taylor can really get hostile. It it was good to see how much he really does love Gail.
Author's Response:
Ha ha! My inner Taylor! Maybe it's a car thing. Yep, he's getting very defensive and protective now his woman has come close to getting hurt.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Long Way Home
I am amazed at how much hatred in every chapter. If he hates Gray, may uvolitsya.Kazhdaya head about how he hates Gray and only wants to fuck Gail.
In the original work of Taylor took care of Gree and even loved him.
This is only hatred and anger.
Author's Response:
I don't agree at all! Have you read the earlier chapters?! Taylor loves Gail - that's why he's so angry, because he wasn't there to protect her.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Long Way Home
aaawwh..makes your heart just melt like a ice cream cone on a 115 degree summer day.... Jason adores and loves his Gail aka mrs Jones, what a possessive and protective man....
Author's Response:
Hah! That made me laugh. Yep, you summed it up really well!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am loving Taylor's POV! He is not so stoic in his head is he? More as soon as you can please.
Author's Response:
He's a swan: all going on beneath the still waters. Yes, an update very soon.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
Gail and Jason are so smart!!!!! loved the chapter!
Author's Response:
I must do some more Gail POV soon!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
loved it! please update sooner than later.
Author's Response:
You got it!
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
Excellent story! I picture Jason Stratham as Taylor while reading your clever and witty writing. Please continue and I will keep reading!
Author's Response:
Thanks, JG. Yes, Stratham could be the one, for sure!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love this story! Thanks for the update. :-)
Author's Response:
You're welcome. More soon!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
It is so hard to wait for your stories they are truly so much fun to read!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks, Lynne. Fun is good! ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
thank you for the update.Taylor is a smart man
Author's Response:
Yup, no flies on Taylor!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love tis story! Love seeing Taylor's POV!! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Will do!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
yay .. i read this straight thru . lovvvved it , for my taste tho more Chris , Anna . Taylor is curt & homophobic . I always thought he way cooler than this.
Author's Response:
Ouch. I didn't mean Taylor to come over as homophobic!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love Taylor's POV! Please say this is going to last all 3 book
Author's Response:
You wish is my command. Taylor is going ALL the way. ;)
Date: 11 Aug 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Am totally loving this story! You have given me my laugh of the day. Several actually. :-)
Author's Response:
Then that's a result. Thank you!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you.
Author's Response:
You're welcome!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you for continuing on with this story is one of my favorites. It's nice to get Taylor & Gail's POV on our favorite couple.
Author's Response:
It's not bad waking up to Taylor, is it?!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
I always am so glad when you update your stories. They are so well written and really not only tell a story but get the reader right inside the mind and emotions of the caracters. Well done as always!
PS granny- gate massacre! Lol
Author's Response:
Ah, glad you liked that. I have such fun writing this story!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love getting the notices from FF and read there and then again here in TWCS, I don't always have luck with these reviews showing up?? when I try to redo am told one can only review once... That said I am such a diehard Sunandsurf fan, I love the way you write, I love the chances you take with stepping out and beyond in your stories and how insightful you are with your characters. No one has attempted another Taylor POV because you own it!! This as always is a fabulous chapter because it gives us all insight as to what our favorite boy is going thru when Ana goes to see her mom. The love story with Taylor and Gail could not be told by anyone else and it so touching and real. Thank you for doing this it is greatly appreciated!! Looking forward to Georgia and the soaring!Thank you, Thank you. Liz
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks, Liz. That's really touching. I appreciate it. Truly. Actually feeling a bit emotional reading that. What a honey you are!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
lol, good lord in heaven don't we love Jason's wit!!!!!! so good...now we see what Hell on Wheels means!!!
Author's Response:
And they're not in Savannah yet. Imagine being cooped up on a plane with an anxious Christian for 8 hours!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
Just to let you know I think you have really captured the tone with this and am loving Taylors take on things.
Author's Response:
Excellent! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
Please keep writing! I love this story!
Author's Response:
You got it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is great writing! You make me crack up with the way Taylor reacts to what is being said. I totally see Jason Statham (spelling?) playing him in the movie version and could see him saying and thinking what you write here. Awesome job!
Author's Response:
Can't wait to see who they cast. I love your idea!
Date: 03 Aug 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is interesting too. In fact when reading the book I did realize at a certain point that both Taylor and Gail were privy to Christian sexual habits, something that seemed at odds with their personalities. But you are making it believable
Author's Response:
Yes, they'd have to more than tolerate him to put up with all his shenanigans for four years!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! More soon.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Taylor is a mess.....who knew
Author's Response:
Yeah, there's a lot going on beneath his sharp suit...
Date: 03 Aug 2012 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
All sticky, huh? I bet it's not with syrup either! HaHa
Author's Response:
Cheeky!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
awesome reade!! i hope it won't take long to update the next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't think I could have predicted this one- I love Jason!!! He is so fantastic and it is amazing to see his witty, and caring sides....Please don't make me wait long for more!!!
Author's Response:
Writing the new chapter today.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Haha, i love the last line. looking forward to your next update
Author's Response:
Excellent! Thank you!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this so far, please keep writing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awesome story from Taylor's point of view. I was hooked. Please keep writing!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Keep up I love it!!!! Great job!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
This is absolutely brilliant!
I loveee Taylor's character, he's so funny.
Please keep writing!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
I Love Tay Tay!!! My affectionate name for Jason...and Gail OMG, is she just not the sweetest Eeevvveeerrrrr!!!! Love the story so far...please keep going and stay encouraged....
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the Jason-Gail action!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
ready for the next chapter!!! awesome read!!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
It's nice to think that Taylor and Mrs. Jones were just as "busy" as Ana and Christian.
Author's Response:
Yes, Gail is a lucky, lucky woman!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Another awesome chapter!!!!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
i love these two together!!!
thank you!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
I absolutely love hearing the story from Taylor's POV! Who knew he had such a snarky sense of humor!
Author's Response:
He's the strong, silent type on the outside, but inside...!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your writing and I love your version(well Taylors) of the story. Geez, it beginning to sound like Taylor needs a vacation though. Christian is driving him crazy it seems. Please keep writing!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !
Merci
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Fabulous , fabulous ! Great chapter, Taylor is so cool the way you give him voice. Thank you so very much!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love it! Great chapter!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well, fuck me sideways! Haha, I love it!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my.
Breathless.
This has got to be my favorite second favorite story ("After Harvard" comes first...). And, it just keeps getting better.
I just love reading your writing!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great as always! More more more!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh nooo, I thought we'd been spoilt with two extra chapters and then I realised it's the same one twice. What a tease! ;)
Love this story. It's interesting seeing it from an entirely different perspective from that of Ana or Christian.
Can't wait for another fix!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love love love!! Taylor is so funny in his own way!! Great writing!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
J'ai adoré ce chapitre !
Merci pour cette bonne fiction.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it!!!! Everything is tying together and your work is awesome!!!! Keep it up!! Another chapter tomorrow???
Kim
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome chapter! I love what you do to bring us right into his/her head. Love the blood connection....So good please keep going. Your fan, Liz