Date: 23 Sep 2018 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
Now, tis chapter made me cry. It explains a lot This needed to be shared and unburdened. An therapist needed to be able to hear and addres and help this suffering man understgand that none of this was his fault.Holy crap. That poor 15 year old boy. Thank you for making your readers see a whoe new dimension of Christgian. Great insight.
Date: 01 Jul 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Its very repetitive the names I lost count hoe many times u used them
Date: 29 Apr 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wonderful chapter
Date: 15 Dec 2015 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 32
Great story telling, thanks.
Date: 23 Nov 2015 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for sharing this story.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 32
I read your story on FanFiction but it is even better on this site reading it the second time around.
Date: 22 May 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
i cant believe what christian did
i cant believe that you could write something like this
when you love somebody you cant possibly do the thing tat you know will cause her the worst pain
personally i would never forgive him, because anna always told him that she wasnt enough, that he has special needs
and after 2 kids and 7 years together he decides to do this????????
i know i am angry on a book but the situation made me so mad .....
i would put him through hell and back for this and pay him with the same coin in order to feel what she felt
Date: 14 Apr 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
Brilliant ...reading this again for the 6th time and I think this song should be played ...LOVER ALTERBRIDGE x THANKS
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 32
this chapter broke my heart.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
I wouldve told him to tell me wat i dont know because if he doesnt im going to think something worse than wat he has to tell me
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
complicated couple
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
must restock happy pills
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
cool christians alive
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
christian is in the icu. ana must feel terrible
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
christian is a steam roller
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
the relationship isnt looking good
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
phone submission?
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
space can be a good thing
Date: 14 Dec 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
way to be firm with christian
Date: 08 Dec 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
chrisian screwed up
Date: 08 Dec 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
divorce coming?
Author's Response:
No divorce. Never. A few bumps in the road, but a HEA story.
Date: 08 Dec 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
interesting vibrater
Date: 05 Dec 2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
good little climber
Date: 05 Dec 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
does she have depression or is anna pregnant
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 29
So nice .....it all started here x
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
good times .......
Date: 09 Oct 2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love the new Ana and I love the way Christian noticed all the attention she got xx
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
Brilliant chapter ...loved it x
Date: 08 Oct 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 22
Excellent chapter ...who knows maybe in the future Ana may find the contract between Amy and Christian......just thinking xx
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well he should have kept his torn trousers for Ana .....asswhole
Date: 08 Oct 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Reading for 3rd time . I think it's always good to re-read a story , you miss so much cause I'm so excited I miss the tiny detail lol xxxxx
Date: 05 Oct 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
I thought my heart was going to pop out seriously ....I thought it was happening to me ........Christian is an ass wipe x
Author's Response:
Hang in there. It gets a lot better. they have a great love going on.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 32
Super end .....especially the meeting with Flynn xxxxx
Date: 26 Sep 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 31
I like when you fill in the blanks about the subs. Brilliant x
Date: 25 Sep 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
No sex but it's the lying...
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Please don't be cheating cristian!
Date: 20 Sep 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awe Cristian as a daddy I love it!!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great he's still an a$$ to Ana :(!
Date: 10 Aug 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
Tring to submit review for whole story.
Nuwriter, this is chewy, yummy, worth reading beyond all the lemons. In the begining I was leaving review for each chapter. The words breathed MOREinto each character. I could not pause. I felt I may miss something. Silly hugh?! The sex, passion, absolute primal needs, and love obtains massive erotic frequencies. Wet, needy, breathless....
Author's Response:
Wow. Thanks. Glad you are enjoying it. You've got a lot more to go. The ride is just beginnng.
E.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very piqued!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Drawn to the positive aspects of sorting out a complication. I had not thought of how strong Christians details to micromanage would effect a non BSDM relationship.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Seems Ana may be missing THE Play Room?
Date: 04 Aug 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok.. Im hung up on why she cryin. I hope Christian isnt abusing her
Date: 30 Mar 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for telling us about this website. I am re-reading your storyline here now until the updates on the other website. Thanks again! I am waiting as patiently as I can for your updates. I just can't start reading a new storyline by another author at this point, especially when you are so good and are continuously updating. Thanks again!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 32
Absolutely BRILLIANT. so much emotion. It was up and down for them. I love how you wrote Christian's past with Elena. It's probably the most detailed and more believable explanation about their "relationship" that I have ever read. Well done. Can't wait to read Clarity. Also, I LOVE how you write sex scenes. They always leave me panting.
Date: 10 Dec 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 32
Great story. I kind of expected ana to ask Christian to demonstrate exactly what went on with the sub he hired.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great storyline and an awesome continuation to the fifty shades triology :) cant wait to get stuck in the second and third book, so glad EL james included this website in her book, and being a writer myself, i cant wait to share some of my work. AWESOME WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!! PS there quite a few typing errors.
Author's Response:
Thanks. It always astounds me that I can read and reread until I'm blind. Then run a grammar and spell check. Run an edit prior to posting and then after I post I pull it up and the first thing I see are errors. Or readers find them for me. The only solace I find is that I'm not the only author that this happens to. These sites are very finiky and difficult to post to. Auto correct makes it difficult as well. It tends to auto correct to something you didn't want. I'll be glad to correct any that you come across. I know a typo can really pull you out of a story.
thanks.
E.
Date: 10 Nov 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow! Great storyline!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks you so much.
E.
Date: 10 Nov 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Damn! That was hot!
Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just have to say WOW. I really enjoyed this story. As a regular reader on Fanfiction.net I found this story but never read it there. I saw you mention that the full version was here, so this is where I went and boy was I glad. It is a wonderful continuation of the Fifty trilogy which wasn't long enough. It's nice to see your take on the continuing relationship between Christian and Ana as well as the extended members of their family.
While I am really looking forward to the next two books I did wonder what happened to Kate and Elliot's 2 month old daughter Ava who appears at the end of E. L. James' third book. Still this minor detail takes nothing away from a truly amazing story which was just gut wrenching at the end. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Please keep writing so your fans new and old can keep reading.
Author's Response:
Thank you for finding this. Sometimes I forget that it is out there and people are just now finding it. I appreciate you taking the time to leave me a review on it as ist is the only way I know if people like it or not. I'm still plugging along on Book III right now, so a lot of things coming up. I think people liked Book II, Clarity, better than Book I, More. A lot of things were revealed in that book.
thanks again for reading.
E.
Actually I had forgotten about Ava. I guess she changed her name to Simon. lol
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
I have absolutely loved this story start to finish. I was a little upset to see/hear christian cheat on ana.. but it worked out and i loved the way you did it. i cannot wait for you to write more i love the interactions between the characters and you keep them true to themselves from the story. I truly feel like i am her fourth book and what the next chapter in their lives would be like.... i hope that you write more soon, cant wait to see what else you have in store for us! <3
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. There is a second book finished and a third in progress. Both are on this site and Fan Fiction as well. Book II: Fifty Shades...Clarity and Book III: Fifty Shades...Full Circle. I'm glad you enjoyed this and thank you for letting me know.
E.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 32
This was great! I look forward now to continuing with Clarity.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
E.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I read the first 24 chapters on fanfic.net and got totally hooked on your very plausible version of the continuation of the 50 shades trilogy but I was a bit disappointed that you had to 'sanitise' the lemons. Imagine my thrill when you mentioned at the end of the chapter that there was a 'fuller' version on TWCS, so I resurrected my old account and here I am, ready to re-read those chapters and the rest of your offerings. Needless tonsayni have 'favourited' you as an author and your 3 stories. Congratulations on your writing and storytelling skills and thank you for sharing them in this forum!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for following me. Stuff on TWCS aren't terribly different, just some parts are a little more tart.
thanks for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
the s in bdsm actually stands for sadism not submission
Author's Response:
That's what I always thought, but in researching this, I found that it can have both meanings.
Quote from, A Submissive's Journey : "It can mean bondage and discipline (B&D), dominance and submission (D/s), or sadomasochism (S&M) There are more definitions for each of those words than Baskin-Robbins has flavors. In fact, there are as many meanings as there are people trying to tell you what it all means."
According to Wikipedia: "The term BDSM was coined as a condensed acronym in the 1990s to combine communities and practices that had a significant amount of crossover - bondage and discipline (B&D or B/D), dominance and submission (D&S or D/s), and sadomasochism or sadism and masochism (S&M or S/M)."
Since E.L. James had referred to it as Submission in her books, that's what I went with.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 32
Well what can I say. This was a great story. it was well thought out the twists and turs were suprising and you stayed true tot love story between the main characters. Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Sorry I'm late responding to you. Still churning out book 3.
E.
Date: 15 Aug 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 32
What a fantastic story, so glad you are writing a sequel, can't wait to startvit!
Author's Response:
Almost ready to start a third. Thanks for leaving a review. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
E.
Date: 14 Aug 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
I know I probably sound like I'm on repeat but awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Repeat it as often as you like. I really appreciate it.
E.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yep they do need to talk the problem isn't going to go away regardless of a near death experience.
Author's Response:
They will work it all out. I have faith in these two. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
E.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Encore un bon chapitre.
Author's Response:
Merci.
E.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bon chapitre, j'aime bien.
Author's Response:
Je vous remercie beaucoup. Merci d'avoir lu et en laissant des critiques. J'ai utilisé Google translate pour écrire cela. J'espère qu'il est correct.
E.
Date: 02 Aug 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
I WOULD OF NEVER THOUGHT IN A MILLION YEARS THAT HE COULD EVER DO THAT TO HER ...DAMN I AM MORE UPSET THAN SHE IS
Author's Response:
WELL, HE DID. Don't be upset. It's not as bad as you think.
Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
I've been reading this story all day and I think it's great! I only have a couple issues with this chapter. My first is that when you had Ana talk to Grace you have Grace make Linc out to be a good guy when we know that he beat the crap out of his wife and was responsible for Ana's hospital stay. And the only other thing was that he calls the boat yar and not yare. But I really like your series and I will continue to read it. I like the plot you've set up!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for reading and leaving a review. I always appreciate comments. Many times readers catch things that I don't. Didn't mean for Linc to come off as a good guy. Don't really know too much about him. I've always sort of been neutral on him, since his character wasn't explored very much. I might have beat the crap out of Elena, myself. lol. You'll see what I mean if you read book 2. Thanks for catching yare, but I do believe the actual spelling is yare. Thanks for noticing and letting me know. I do try to go back and correct any mistakes. By the time I put these things up, I've read them 50 times and still catch mistakes after they are posted.
Thanks again for reading and leaving a comment. I appreciate all of them.
E.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
This was gut wrenching you could feel the emotions they were experiencing. Very well written.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.
E.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
Another great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks again.
E,
Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
This was a fantastic chapter, thoroughly enjoyed the kinky fuckery.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.
E.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
You have a way with words to hear read some more !
Author's Response:
Sorry I didn't catch your review until today. My notification soesn't seem to be working. Thank you.
The next book, Firty Shades Clarity continues the story.
Thanks again.
E.
Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's time to fire John. All you have done is continue fsof seven years with no growth. Do you really believe Ana is still there? Why don't you let Christian improve and enjoy the kinky fuckery? I'll read one more chapter.
Author's Response:
It seems you have followed from fanfiction. If you don't enjoy this, please stop reading it. E.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 32
What a break through! I love love loved these last 2 chapters!
Author's Response:
Thank you. And thank you for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 32
Wow. That was a really hard chapter to read. You could feel how intense their emotions were & how tortured Christian felt. I'm so glad the chapter ended on a light note with them eating burgers & fries & drinking a vanilla shake. Great chapter. You're a really fantastic storyteller. Can't wait to read the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I appreciate the review. New chapter today or tomorrow.
E.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 31
You write the yummiest chapters!!! That was some really good kinky fuckery :)
Author's Response:
Intense to write. Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 32
WOW!!! Just fantastic! SOOO worth the wait to get here. Can't wait to see where you go next.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure where at this point. I have a few things up my sleeve that are written. Who knows.Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 32
Wow,wow,just wow! What a powerful chapter! OMG! Poor Christian. Elena is more sick then we were ever lead to believe. God I hate her so much. I don't know how Christian could have stayed friends with her after all that abuse. I am so glad he has seen the light and has shared it with Ana. Guess from this point on he needs to learn how to trust. This was such a well written chapter. I would imagine it was difficult to write and yet you nailed it! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Why he remained friends with Elena is coming up in the next session with John. Thanks for reading. I appreciate it.
E.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 32
That was amazing!!
Thank you so much for exploring the psychological root of Christian's issues. This chapter, and the previous ones where you dealt with Ana's self-esteem problems were what I found lacking in FSOG.
Are you sure you're not EL and secretly posting this story? Because your work is the perfect compliment to the books. This could easily be book 4.
Love it! Please don't stop.
I wonder, how far are you planning to take A and C?
Author's Response:
How far do you want me to take them? They are young and I've got a few years left. LOL Thanks for reading. If I were E.L. I'd be far too busy with my accountant to have time to write fanfiction. But thanks. I felt like there were emotional issues that would eventually get in their way. Growing up does that to you.
E.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 32
Fabulous! Had to read it here and at FF. keep going you are awesome! Looking forward to Ana finding her own job and CG having to support it! Maybe even some male admirers possibly?
Author's Response:
This is one chapter that was identical on both sites. Thanks for reading.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
Holy crap!!! What an emotional chapter!!! That was so awesome, great update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I appreciate it. And thanks for reading.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 32
Awesome! I am humbled by your gift to write. I had to read it again here after FF. a standing ovation is called for!! So happy you have wanted to share with us, don' t go away!!! Liz
Author's Response:
Thank you ma'am. I assume you are a ma'am. I appreciate it.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
AMAZING! Well done - you really should write a book. Now I hope Ana is pregnant - before not so much, but I think it would really help them now. Thanks again, more soon, please!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much and thanks for reading.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 32
wow breathe taking!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow!
Author's Response:
Thanks for following and reviewing. More coming.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow, this was certainly an intense and difficult chapter, but you did a Fantastic job, WELL DONE!! Thank you for posting two great chapters today, loved them both as always!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and posting a review.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow...that was an amazing chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you and thank you for reading.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank goodness!
Author's Response:
All better? Thanks again for reading.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
I have loved this story so far, but a baby by an ex sub would really ruin it - besides there are several of those out there already on ff and twcs. Seriously, with Christian's control tendencies and Taylor, they surely would have followed up to be sure....Not sure how they could survive that after all the recent drama. Please don't go there!
Author's Response:
Not to worry. Has a purpose, but not a story line. Thanks.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Superb! Thank u for continuing to write, can't wait to hear what's going to happen at Flynn's!
Author's Response:
Hopefully today. Need more coffee first. Thanks for following and leaving a review. I appreciate each and every one.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 30
First of all if I have a vote, I love "happy Greys" Am looking forward to seeing Dr. Flynn and getting some answers. Looking forward to seeing what kind of job Ana finds and her finding her real self again if that's in your crystal ball? I will be delighted with whatever you write!! Just don't stop:))
Your welcome,Liz
Author's Response:
Dr. Flynn coming up this weekend. Only one chapter away.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
Bahaha.. that was awesome! I love that teddy heard him talking about spanking!! Lol!!
I love this chapter, altho I'm super curious as to what Christian is keeping from her!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Is Christian keeping something from her? Hmm.
E.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh, those little ears! I enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving the review. Amazing what they hear, isn't it.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 30
And so the questions begin. I can't wait to hear more of Christian's explainations to Teddy. A Very sweet end to the chapter.
Thanks for Writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. Who knows what he will hear in a future chapter. Little people have big ears.
Thansk for reading and reviewing.
E.