Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
i gave u a 6 i really liked it but i wanted to see more of bella
Date: 31 Oct 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 39
loved it well done
Date: 31 Oct 2012 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 39
Fantastic! I have not been able to leave my computer. I just loved every minute of it. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 39
Truly enjoyed this ff!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 39
I have truely loved reading this amazingly beautifully well written story, which has kept me capitvated in reading this intriging story. I am sorry it has come to an end because I have truly loved reding and following along with this story line. Will u be writting a new story soon???
smileya987
Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 39
Lovely story...enjoyed reading it.... :-)
Date: 30 Oct 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 39
Absolutely loved it sad that it has ended but it was great!!!! :)
Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 39
AWWWW Kinda sad its over:( but it was a really great read
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it all!! Excellent story from start to finish :-)
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 39
Thank you ahnd I will watch closely for anything else you choose to write. Thank you for a wonderful ride! LOL, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 39
That was lovely. :)
Date: 30 Oct 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 39
I have enjoyed this story from start to finish. Thank you for sharing your talent.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it. I would love to see a future take of after Bella's finished uni and her and Edward juggling SP and kids.
Thankyou for sharing this fabulous story with us.
XoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 39
What a wonderful way to end this story, which makes me a bit sad, too. Thinking back to the beginning of this story, and how it ended, it's been one hell of an amazing ride. Watching them fall in love, tear each other apart and then to finally grow up and realize they are meant to be together was all worth the angst. There were so many damn emotions that I went through reading this story. There were a few times I was swearing at my lap top or had to get up and walk away, but then I would wait anxiosly for the next chap to be posted, not knowing what emotion I was going to go through. Thank you for writing this awesome story and I will definitely be reading it again in the future.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 39
what a great ending !
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 39
OMG ITS OVER I CANT BELIEVE IT DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH IM GONNA MISS THIS STORY EVEN THO I ONLY STARTED READING IT LIKE 3 DAYS AGO LIKE A TON IS HOW MUCH IM GONNA MISS IT CAUSE I MEAN LIKE HELL IT SNUCK ITS WAY INTO MY HEART UNKNOWINGLY AND LIKE READING IT HAS BEEN ONE HELL OF A ROLLERCOASTER CAUSE SOMETIMES I WANNA SLAP EDWARD OTHER TIMES I WANNA HUG AND KISS HIM AND SOMETIMES I JUST WANNA SLAP AND OR HUG AND KISS BELLA AND MIGHT I ADD SO GLAD JANE AND TANYA ARE OUT OF THE STORY BUT OMG I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER!!!!!! :.........................(
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 39
I can't believe it's the final ending. It's like my little niece is not so little anymore :( Fantastic writing all the way through, with just enough of crazy cliffies and drama to keep me on the edge of my seat! Bravo!
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 39
Yay! SO glad you killed off Jane....I hate those lurking-in-the-corner, spooky-music-filled, is-is-really-over? type of endings.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 39
GREAT STORY ! I loved it from beginning to end. Sad to see it end, but enjoyed the ride. Good luck with your new stories. I have already added you as a favorite author.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 39
This was an awesome story that I just hate 2 end. But, every great things come to an end. I so loved this story & the epi was excellent.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 39
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 38
Thanks good chapter
Date: 29 Oct 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 38
What a great chapter and read this has been. I'm so gLad he was so thoughtful & go them both new rings.
thanks so much for writing this:-)
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 38
Love this story sad to see it end but it has beem awesome!!!! :)
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 38
Wonderful Edward, Wonderful Bella, great side kicks, great storyline. Great story! Thank you for sharing. LOL, Cheri
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 38
looking forward to mroe
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 38
wonderful chapter.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 38
I think your mention of 9/11 was totally appropriate and fit in seamlessly. Having them in NYC on the decade anniversary and being oblivious to it would have been odd.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 38
Oh, I so do not want this story to end. Although the story was angsty, made me curse and cry like a baby, I love these two and your wonderful FF . You know, there are all kinds of possibilities for a sequel. Just sayin' :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 38
This last chapter was especially lovely. I adored the re-proposal at the end. A new start to the rest of there life. I love that. After all the rough times these two have endured this was a hard fought for HEA. Although, it really feels like a new and much happier beginning. Thanks for sharing this story.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
as i am english i will constructively... point some things out 4 u
english people do not say crikey, thats australia
is bella from essex? no offence to porople who live in essex. :)
no one i know says 'thats a load of old pony' what are we 70?
Author's Response: Hi I'm not sure where you think I'm from, but I, too, am English, which is why I made my Bella English. I say crikey all the time, although I have never heard any of my many Australian friends and acquaintances use the expression. Bella is from Berkshire. Like many posh girls (of which I have met many) Bella and her friends affect a lot of urban-style expressions, of which minger is one - bandied about by most of my friends, and popular amongst both middle class and working class girls. As for 'load of old pony', have you never heard the middle classes adopting Cockney rhyming slang? I hear it all the time, used by all ages and classes of people. But I live in London, so maybe it's more prevalent here. Thanks for reading.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 38
I can't believe it's over! I love this story so, so, so much. :(
Date: 28 Oct 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 37
Interesting learning about UK law! I love these little tidbits you add in. In the US, CPS is Child Protective Services, which gets involved in cases of child abuse. Acronyms abound!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 38
This chapter could not have been more perfect! I know you said that there would no sequel but I do hope you would maye consider a few future takes? Anyways I am having trouble finding the words to express just w much I have loved this story and how much I ave anticipated each and every update. I can't wait to read whatever stories you grace us with in the future. :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 38
I really enjoyed this story. I'm sad to see it end, but you have done it beautifully. You are an amazing writer, Please write something new soon!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 38
One of my all time favorite stories! You are a terrific writer. Thank you so much. Can't wait for your next one.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 37
OMG TOTALLY LOVE AND JANE IS ONE CRAZY ASS BITCH AND GOD SO MUCH CRAP HAS HAPPENED IN JUST 37 CHAPTERS AND THE STORY ISNT EVEN COMPLETE ITS LIKE HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO ADDICTED!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wonderful chapter, but a little sad that it is almost over. Maybe a sequel?????? Not sure I am ready to give these two up, just saying. Thank you - Cheri
Date: 25 Oct 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 37
great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 37
I have truely loved reading this amazingly & beautifully well written story. I have truly loved following this story & look forward each day looking for your next update. Great, geat work!!!!
smileya987
Date: 24 Oct 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 37
loved the chapter
Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it :) I will be sad to see this story end I have so enjoyed it!!!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 37
Nice! Loved it. About time.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 37
Wow!! So f**king HOT!!! Great chapter loved it!!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 37
Great chapter & they're finally fully reunited. Yeay
Love your writing:-)
Date: 24 Oct 2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 37
Noooooooooooooo I don't want this story to end :-(
Date: 24 Oct 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 37
I have loved this story! Its been so good all the way through. Can't wait for the last chapter but don't want it to end! Love that Cambridge was in your story too, its my hometown and was born here. Varsity is nice, been there for a wedding reception. Will we get a glimpse into their future in an epilogue?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words, and I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story. There will be a little more Cambridge schmexin' in chapter 38, and then the epilogue will take us six months into the future... and then that will be it!!
Thanks so much for reviewing.
Liz
Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Cinnamon Grahams !!! Yay!!!
Date: 22 Oct 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 36
loved the chapter looking forard to the next one
Date: 22 Oct 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 36
I hope janes dead
Date: 22 Oct 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 36
Yeah, Jane's gotta die.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wow!!!!!! Now, I'm scared Jane is going to rise from the dead & attack Edward while Bella goes downstairs...intense chapter. Whew
Date: 21 Oct 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 36
Way to go Bella!!! Maybe now they can take that honeymoon! LOL ~ Cheri
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 36
Jesus, these two can never catch a break, can they? And boy, do you know how to write an intense scene. I think my heart was about to come out of my chest! Jane was one f**ked up psycho bitch. Hopefully, Jane is dead and these two can get on with their lives. But I think their "lovin" time is put on hold since it will be Edward's turn to recuperate. Thanks for one helluva awesome chap!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 36
Omg! Great chapter
Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 36
Please update soon
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 36
As long as Aro doesn't go all "revenge-y" on them I'll be happy. For a second there I thought it was Tanya. I keep expecting her to pop up. I'm glad Bella was the one to end her even though Jane literally impaled herself.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 36
Wow, action packed and a little lovin' thrown in;-)
Ding Dong! The Witch is dead. Which old Witch? The Wicked Witch named Jane!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 36
Thanks good chapter
Date: 18 Oct 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella & Tanya's interaction in this chapter was too funny! :-)
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 35
I loved this chapter;
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
Thanks good chapter. Very glade they are back
Date: 18 Oct 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 35
Wonderful chapter and YES, he finally said IT!!!!!! Can't wait to see where he wants to take her! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
Jesus mother of God! Hallefreakinlujah! It's about time the old asshat said those three little words. If Bella wouldn't have instigated that conversation, how long would it have taken him to finally say it? LOL Since Jane hasn't been caught yet, is she still going to be a problem? Can't wait to find out :)
Date: 17 Oct 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 35
Your comment in the end notes was hilarious!! Great chapter!!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 35
WooHoo!!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter and finally he shares his feelings and acknowledges his feelings to himself & outLOUD, haha. Great chapter thanks for the update;-)
love your wit & the humor your characters have.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 35
So sweet, well written
Date: 17 Oct 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 35
Love it im glad edward told her his feelings
Date: 17 Oct 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THANK GOD
Date: 17 Oct 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 35
loved it ! cant wait ti llt henext chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 34
Thanks good chapter
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 33
The tension and emotion here is palpable. Nicely done!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
Are these two ever going to make it??? After reading rhis chapter I have done nothing but cry...I truly know how she feels... after loosing my father when I was only 7... & thinking no one cares...which was true in my case...no one did
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 34
You always do good things, like this wonderful story. So glad she is awake, now what have each of them learned? And of course, where is Jane? Thank you - Cheri
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
no he is just an old fool.... and old fool in love...hope he soon discovers that before she grow out him and finds some one who will show her they love her back ...or dumb ass works too
Date: 15 Oct 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
oh yea .....johnathan harker .....what crazyness is going through her head now ....at this rate ...she will wear his old ass out
Date: 15 Oct 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 34
That inspector is fishy
Date: 15 Oct 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 34
So Edward is mister Duracell love it, can not wait to see what happens..A little sadden that he would let her go so easily