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Reviewer: Janiceelynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 11:56 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

I feel so selfish. I warmed up to the idea of Carlisle and Bella, for this story ONLY, so you should feel special lol. But I still don't like pictures Edward with anyone but her.

Whatever. If it had to be anyone, at least it wasn't Tanya.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 11:56 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Thank you for such a wonderful story.  I'll be on the lookout for more from you in the future.      Kat

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

Great story!  Glad to see that everything came full circle with Edward, Bella, Carlisle, Alice and Jasper.  Can't wait for the epi

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

awesome story love it

Reviewer: cam87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

i really enjoyed reading this..great story

Reviewer: eclipse_me Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

so good...cant wait for the epilogue

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

Loved  loved loved this chapter. Ireally do love how you wrote things. They have all worked out. You did an EXCELLENT job. I am really sad that this story is at the end. I am sad for that. GREAT JOB!!!!

Reviewer: tima Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

I'm sooooo very sad that this is the final real chapter...But you have done it extremely well, and bringing James back into the picture to give Bella closure was brilliant. She needed to have an unbiased opinion and she got just that from him. I actually liked reading a James that wasn't the bad guy (at least, not in the end!). I cannot wait for the epi!! Make it long!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

Wonderful Story.  I really enjoyed it.  Thank you.    Kat

Reviewer: julie70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

omg that was a great chapter..glad to see that Carlisle came to his senses and made the first move..:)

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

Amazing story! Loved the happy ending for Bella and Carlisle!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

I'm so glad they are re-united!!

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

I loved this chapter and this story.  I know what you meant about Kate.  It's not that she wanted to give the baby up it was how she responded to Edward in a whole.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: Marybell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

Love the ending!!!! I'm glad that bella was able to forgive James.... Every one deserves a secnd chance, even if it's just to vent... Overall, I truely enjoyed ur story... Hate to see it end... And can't wait for the Epi...

Reviewer: chugga Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

Hi i have really enjoyed your story. It was a really great read well done

Reviewer: ClumsyAsBella Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

Ok, I am hooked....  Awsome story! For some reason I find myself loving naughty Carlisle more and more.

Reviewer: ClumsyAsBella Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

Ok, I am hooked....  Awsome story! For some reason I find myself loving naughty Carlisle more and more.

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

i second that.. lol love it

Reviewer: ClumsyAsBella Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home

I really liked it!

Reviewer: twihard4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

That was absolutely perfect. I couln;t have asked for better closure and a HEA than that...that is unless Bells ends up preggers!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

im happy he finally came to his sences! 

Reviewer: Janiceelynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

As much as I love this story. Thank God you're not dragging out their relationship.

 

Now go write some Edward and Bella shizz for real this time.

 

Haha :)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

i am so sad this story is almost over but YAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! Bella and Carlisle are going to have their HEA.

here's hopping the future entails a wedding and some babies.

 

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

This was a great ending!!  bravo =D

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

great chapter. i love this story. im happy that things are ok between edward bella and carlisle

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

I think it was a great ending! All I was hoping for was that they ended up together. And James did turn out to be a decent guy. That's how I wrote him, too. But he's going to be a villain in what I'm working on now....shit. Sorry, that's beside the point. Anyway, great job. I can't wait to read the epi!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

Very sweet.  And I actually liked you bringing James back and showing him maturing.  can't wait for the epi!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever

Bout darn time, he got his head out of his ass.... Men are so stubborn. Cant wait to see what you have in store in the epilogue. Do you plan on doing any out-takes from this story. Is the next story going to be another Bella and Carlisle story?  Keep up the awesome work.... Cant wait to see what you have in store next

Reviewer: CullenGirl09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home

Awww, so sad that it's over, but I'm glad they made up!  Wonderful ending to a wonderful story, bravo!  Hope to read more of your stories!

Reviewer: Belindella Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man

Oh, damn it. I have to go for now. Can't wait to read more soon! *kisses*



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews! Glad you're enjoying it ;)

Reviewer: Belindella Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 5: Busted

Oh, I am sooooo wondering how Edward is going to fit into this! La!

Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss

Where can I find a cigarette? Gah! I wasn't a Carlisle fan until now. lol

Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

“I don’t sleep with attached women,” he said simply. Holeeeeeee shit! The man has game!!! lol. I'm nervous as to how there's a HEA if she hooks up with Edward after C though. And isn't it annoying having the names Carlisle and Charlie? They look so freaking similar, I'm constantly getting confused. But we work with what we have been given, huh? lol

LOVE hearing Bella's thoughts - so well done!

Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

Ahahahahah! The last two lines are classic! Fantastic! I love that you let us in Bella's head so much, and I love her internal dialogue - something that is often missing from 3rd POV stories.

Carlisle was going to stay here? Under the same roof as her? At night? Yeah, baby! ;)

Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home

I've had this on my to be read list for so long. I'm very pleased I'm finally getting into it! I really like your writing style, and the 3rd person doesn't pull me out of it too much the way you've done it. Looking foward to more. :)

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations

Poor Carlisle is emotionally fucked! Oh for an opportunity to help him out with that...

 

Hopefully one of them cracks and admits what they are thinking and feeling -- aside from 'feeling' each other ;-)

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss

OMG, I'd like to join the Carlisle fanclub myself!!!  He is one H-O-T piece of gorgeousness. ugh!

Reviewer: Wannabeemmetts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

I can't believe a mother could think that about a child.  I know there are people out there like that but it is not the childs fault.  I'm glad that Edward confessed everything that he did.  Now maybe Carlisle can get back to Bella and they can be happy. Is this a time to ask for Esme to turm into Bitch and slap the shit out of Carlisle?  Sounds good to me.

Reviewer: NikiC Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Ah such a heart breaking but well written chapter.  I really loved the Carlisle/Edward confrontation in the last part of the chapter.  Though I'm really afraid for Edward and how he will ended up dealing with everything.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Carlisle better do something major to get Bella back!

Kill Kate!

Reviewer: vilarane Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Awww, this was written so well!  I love this story and I'm sorry to see it come to an end (but, I understand!).  :)  I'm so glad the boys talked it out!

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

It's a perfect step. A lot was finally gotten out. I love that Bells brought out his paternal side. It's ridiculously endearing that he wanted to father her children. A little girl. I mean, really. Edward is sort of wonderful. I mean, eventually he'll have to realize that there is quite a bit too much Cullen in him to be even remotely like Kate - nature v. nurture et al. And the fact that he realizes his failings and cares makes him decidedly un-Kate-like. I really do not at all like that woman. She is beyond frustrating and horrible. Esme is so great. I love her. Carlisle and Edward are lucky to have her. 

I love this story. It's real great.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Wow I can't believe it's almost over.  Great chapter though.

Reviewer: SallyThePumpkinQueen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

<3

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

I think this is the BEST chapter you have written. Don't get me wrong....ALL your chapters are good but this one just was written wonderfully. It really touched mt heart. I am sadden that the end is near. But I am excited to see what is going to happen with all the characters. This is a wonderful story.

Reviewer: iLuvTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Wow.  Will Edward's admission regarding Bella be enough for Carlisle to let go of his anger towards Bella?  How long until he reaches out to her and will she have given up by then?  Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: tima Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

while I completely trust that you'll give us all the satisfying ending we all believe Bella and Carlisle (and Edward) deserve, I find myself wondering if just one more chapter will give us such an ending...

BUT, like I said, I trust your judgement! You haven't led us astray yet! :) Can't wait for the update!

~Fatima

Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

WOW  This was a really good chapter. I'm glad they talked I just can't wait to read the talk between Carlisle & Bella. I have to admit its weird not reading abt Bella & Edward but this is really good :)

Reviewer: Hels Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Great chapter! I felt so upset for Edward when he was telling Carlisle about his meeting with Kate. At least it's all out in the open now, Edward knows all about his mother and Carlisle knows that Edward was trying to seduce Bella to hurt him. I really hope Carlisle and Edward's relationship can begin to improve now. I really hope Bella and Carlisle can move past what happened and be happy together. Can't wait for the next chapter but on the other hand I don't want it because I don't want the story to end.

Reviewer: rpattz granny Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

something came out good with the break up

Reviewer: rpattz granny Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen

father and son getting complicated

Reviewer: rpattz granny Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies

a very self sacrificing father

Reviewer: rpattz granny Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss

that was hot

Reviewer: rpattz granny Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

edward is coming its getting better

Reviewer: rpattz granny Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home

we are getting there

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Seriously! ONE CHAPTER!!!!  I need more, i wanna know about that bb girl, that doesn't exist!  I so want them together!!!

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

This chapter was fabulous!! It feels like I've been waiting forever for this to be posted. I'm so glad Edward and Carlisle are communicating, and I'm beyond thrilled that Edward finally has an inkling of how much Carlisle loves him. Now we just have to get Bella and Carlisle together again.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

wow! the ending was awesome. i loved it. i dont think it could have been any better.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

cant wait till the next chapter i want t osee what happens with bella and carlisle! 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

What a powerful chapter! I can not wait to see what happens next! I hope that Bella ends up with Carlisle! 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Wow a lot happened in this chapter and I loved it. Bella messed up but he has put her through so much he really needs to make the first move. She deserves to be happy and be reassured that she worth more to him then he's shown by not contacting her



Author's Response:

I agree that Bella must be feeling pretty cheap by now. I think Carlisle is justified in thinking the way he did though. But now it's time for him to pull his head out of his ass and step back up.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Beautifully done!  I want to just hold Edward and make it better to hear kate tell him that he means nothing to her.  How horribly cruel.

I'm almost hoping that Bella ends up pregnant from her time with Carlisle so he gets a surprise when he finally pulls his head out of his ass and goes to her.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really am surprised by how many of you want Bella to end up pregnant. I never would have thought that would be something so desired!

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

great chapter. i love this story. plz continue soon

Reviewer: Janiceelynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

As much as it may shock you. I don't completly hate Kate. Because in a way, she was just doing what was best for her. She gave Carlisle the choice, she didn't force the baby onto him and didn't go behind his back and take him away, she put him in front of her needs when in the end she knew her marriage wouldn't survive it. I look at her the same as I would look at any woman who put her baby up for adoption. Whether it was easy or hard, I can't judge them. Some woman just aren't meant to be mothers - some don't want to - and I'm grateful they at least go through the pregnancy to give them a life, because it'd be much easier on them emotionally and physically to just abort.

Yes, she's a bitch. And I don't like her because of that and how she spoke to Edward. But I think if you wrote her side honestly - at least how I see it - she wouldn't be that cold. Her harshness is a result of bitterness towards herself, not Edward or Carlisle. Because you can tell by the way she talked about him and the way her eyes softened and for just a moment, she reassured Edward he was wanted - if not by her - that it isn't them she blames.

That's my thoughts, anyways.

As much as I love B/E stories and the only real reason I'm reading this is because you tricked me into thinking it was (lol), I'm okay with it.



Author's Response:

I actually agree with you. She really did the best thing possible by Edward by walking away. She knew she wasn't the type of person to be a mother and would resent the child if she kept him. Would having a mother around that was only there out of obligation have been better for Edward? Not at all.

But I do hate her for the way she spoke to him; the things she said to him. They were horrible and I think she could have handled it better if she wanted to. But then again, maybe she said what she did to make sure she pushed him away so he wouldn't come back. Only she knows.

And I'm sorry about the tricking...or maybe not because I have you hooked lol. I'm glad you've enjoyed the journey even though it wasn't what you were expecting

Reviewer: AgoodWITCH Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

wow...emotional rollercoaster~  I'm glad Edward got his answers and Carlisle got the truth...now they just have to get their shit together!

Reviewer: cheermom13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

i think this is my favorite chapter yet



Author's Response:

I really think it's mine too. As I was writing CPOV I felt that way and then when Edward whispered his POV in my ear, I loved it even more.

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Oh I am crying, big fat tears and hiccupping! Great chapter.  Now it is time to bring Carlisle and Bella back together.



Author's Response:

IMO, it really is one of the greatest compliments a writer can get when the reader become emotional. It shows how deeply they've invested in the characters and that's really what you hope to accomplish when writing.

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man

aww thats sweet :) xx

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss

it is extremely hot in here, i need a cold shower haha i love him too :) you are an amazing writer :) xx



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

well i definitly want more :) hav i mentioned that i love dr cullen :) xx

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

hehe ok im in love with your carlisle :) mm xx

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

WOW  i do not  normally like carlisle ficx expecially when he is with bella but this is fucking excellent.

so couple of things i hope happen in the end of this story.

1 edward and carslisle work their shit out

2 bella and carlisle live happily ever after

3 bella ends up pregnant from all the unprotected sex they have been having

keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

Well, it's safe to say (if you've read the next chapter) that you're number one desire has been granted. Sort of. They will eventually get there.

As for 2 and 3...only time will tell.

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

great chapter. i love this story. plz continue soon.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Love the Alice and the Rents...they make great points for Bella to think about.  I hope that she doesn't put herself in the line of fire and takes her mother's wonderful advice.

Reviewer: Wannabeemmetts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

I like this story, even with Carlisle acting the way he is.  He is hurt and I don't think ever felt love before.  Bella did the right thing even if it was in anger.  What  is happening to Edward?  I glad he called Esme but is he going to find his mother.  I don't think that is a good thing, it would shock the shit out of him but at what cost.



Author's Response:

Carlisle has his own issues I don't think he's ever really worked though. And he needs to do that if he wants it to work with Bella. Edward is very confused and angry, and with good reason. But I'm glad Bella gave him a taste of reality. The boy needs to grow up.

Reviewer: twittertwix Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Oh, my, god. truly this has got to be one of my favourite stories i have read and you have not even finished it yet. the character development and way the story progresses is unbelievably good. i actually cried with the whole carlisle vs bella part in the last couple of chapters. you make them so good together, you really do. i really hope they sort it, because they really seem made for each other!

And Edward, i get he has issues and stuff but man he winds me up! so maybe a chapter in his point o view my lessen the animosity i now feel towards him, but please don't do i chapter just his point of view, because i really want to know what Bella does!

well done, truly this is an amazing piece of writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really want to know what Bella does too! lol Edward needs a good does of reality, and even though Bella sort of gave him a taste of it, he needs more IMO. I have no idea where he is yet either. I'm on the edge of my seat just like the rest of you!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Bella does have alot to think about. So does Carlisle and Edward. Did Edward go find his mother?? Have Edward and Carlisle talked? Has Esme talked to either one of them??? I hope we get Edward and Carlsile's POV.

Reviewer: SallyThePumpkinQueen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

<3

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies

Things are getting very messy, but I love 'assward'. lol he makes me laugh. and don't get me started on Alice. LMAO!

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss

am in a swoon here!! boy was that hot! (I love Carlisle too)

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation

"Ring. Hello? Oh, It's Bella"s inner porn star calling. Yeah, I didn't know she had one either!"

LMAO That was the best line in this chapter...lol

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

I'd listen to what he has to say.  Could be interesting.

Reviewer: eclipse_me Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

EPOV would be great...find out whats going on in his head

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Great chapter. Yes, I would love an EPOV. Love to know if he is actually searching for his long lost mother or just hiding out being sad. And if he really has any feelings for Bella.



Author's Response:

I'd like to know where he is too! lol If he has gone to find his mother....wow, imagine what that convo is going to be like. I'm waiting just like the rest of you to know where and what Mr. Assward is up to

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Omg that was such a good chapter and i can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next 

Reviewer: Hels Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Edward PoV would be great. I'm so glad Carlisle had spoken to Charlie on the day of the wedding about his feelings for Bella. I loved Renee's reaction when Bella was telling her what had happened in Forks. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: kim67255 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

I think EPOV would be good at this point.  To see what is going on in his mind.  How he took to Esme's confermation on the big lie. 

 

 Please update soon. This is one of those stories I just can't get enough of.  It's very well written. 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will get the next chapter up as soon as I can. The story is almost over so it's very bittersweet. I want to finish so I don't keep you all waiting, but I want to drag it out because I hate to see it come to an end.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

I'd like to see Edward's POV.

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

A pickle.....buahahaa!

You have done sumthing that I thought impossible, you made Carlisle hawt!  Thank you!! XD

great chapter! can't wait to hear about all the conversations!



Author's Response:

Carlisle is seen as the father figure a lot of the time. I love bringing out a different side of him and having readers experience the hotness that is indeed in Dr. Cullen

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope you update soon

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Thanks for updating. I've been waiting for this chapter. If Edward's talking to you, I guess you'd better let him say his piece. Just please update soon. I don't think I can wait two weeks to hear from you again.

Reviewer: Nukemlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Loved the chappy. And yes, The Fountainhead is an awesome book.  Hopefully Carlisle proves to be a real man and Bella crawls herself out of her "pickle".

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

Ooooh you go Balla!

Reviewer: A Little Distracted Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

I love the way you write Renee.  She is not just some air head.  I realy hope we find out more about Carlisle and Edward in the next chapter. 

Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

yes, an epov would be great

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Love it!

Reviewer: aggy73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Ok, you should totally do an Edward point of view. Especially calling Esme and if he really did go find his mom. I love hippie Renee! She rocks!

Reviewer: tima Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

a little short,  but great chapter nonetheless. I'm glad Charlie knew about Carlisle and her sneaking around, and approved. Now, the question is, will he forgive her? And what did Edward and Carlisle discuss...?

Reviewer: iLuvTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

I would love to hear Edward's POV!  I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Carlisle finds out that Edward tried to seduce Bella in an attempt at revenge so that he understands some of the motivation behind the final encounter between Bella and Edward.  Great story!!!

Reviewer: cullen2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

oh my god i love your story i am also a fan of carlisle and it is nice to see a story involving him and bella hot hot hot!!!

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