[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmm confusing what edward said at the end. I can't wait til you update again and hopefully soon.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmm she kissed him and he kissed her. I don't like renne she is being b it chy.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aww how uncomfortable bella must be. love it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
How Old id he again? It sounds like his parents think he's dating her and her mom is just coming along to dinner... Is he waiting for her to be done with high school before he goes after her? Also how can he just stand by and allow her to be treated so badly?
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wished you updated more. Edwards talking about marrying Bella! Good story.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love I cant wait to see what you have stored in the next chapter!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can't believe Edward didn't intervene when Bella and Renee were fighting, especially when she slapped her. It makes him seem none too trustworthy, and I'm interested to know what his plan is. Hopefully this'll make you writer faster ;) I like your story.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
What a witch with a B. Can't wait for the next post.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like where this is heading and can't wait to read more, though Renee is aweful!
Date: 20 Jul 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
How did Renee and Edward even meet? I mean, Edward is way out of Renee's league, yet she managed to snag him...
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Her mom is a real bitch... I hat people who put others down to make themselves feel better and to hide their own insecurity. And what's with Edward? Was it his plan to get with Bella from the beginning or did that come later? Hell maybe not at all, I hope he's not trying to be all player and shit, have both mother and daughter. That just wrong
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked the chapter and I want to know where the story is heading so I hope you're updating soon
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this, and I was so disappointed that there wasn't another chapter to read. God, Renee is terrible - she reminds me of Mrs Bennet *involuntary shudder*
Hope you post soon.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm intrigued so far and can't wait to see where this goes!!