Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
wow he is tupid isn't he? i mean seriously! he is gonna rag on her for being a bit stressed! she should have hit him again.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
so hot! i love me some jasper! yummy.... and it serve edward right bella is a free woman now and it was his choice.
are you gonna move your other stories here to coffee? i would love to read them
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
epov was good but i am glad to hear this one will be better as abpov only. eddie is scared, plain and simple. been there done that and some days i would have loved to be the guy and have the choice to walk away too bad real life doesn't work like that. when you make your bed you gotta lay in it! glad my man was and still is better than eddie, he has stayed though it all, 18 years this november. teen pregancy and all the rest of the bullshit life throws at you. i got me a keeper!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
well edward's an asshole isn't he? too bad he hasn't got a beating yet....
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:42 PM Title: Prologue
well that was interesting
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
Yeah she's crazy and scary but had a tortuous youth and is clinically diagnosed. She needs serious help.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
So sweet! But w the whole Jessica thing how are they not taking her seriously?
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
I just kept thinking WTF!? Stupid dreams
Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
Ok that was good. Poor J though.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
I'm still waiting for it.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
What a dick. Who the eff does he think he is talking to her like that? And I don't care how much her body physically reacted- doesn't mean shit. She should tell J and have him kick E's ass.
As far as recs; check my favs. I love darkward too.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
Its Edwards like this that don't make me hate my husband;)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
I'm 32 weeks along myself. He's lucky she didn't smash his head on the desk. Dumbass.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
Good for B. So glad E got his face rubbed in it too.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Wow. That was some awful personal info she was throwing around. But I guess she wanted them to know what was going on. I always love a strong B too.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 6:24 PM Title: Prologue
I always love a good E I can hate.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
i loved this story... this stuff actually happened about 10 years ago in my hometown... except it was in a garage and the mom didnt make it... i am glad bella did in this story... good job
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
Awww... a girl... of course we already knew that. Loved it!
~Jessi Cullen
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
Good chapter. I liked what Bella said at the end. This was good for her. Her and Edward made me laugh. Serves that boy right.
~Jessi Cullen
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
I liked this EPOV I want to murder him all the more now.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
WOW. I'm getting out my gun and shooting him dead. Congrats to you for making me want to kill him. Not many could have done that. Not many try. This is so different it is refreshing.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:26 AM Title: Prologue
For the first time in a very long time I want to strangle Edward! I have to keep reading though~
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
so cute...I'm glad they had the big family that they both wanted
Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
great story
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
Love big brother Emmett. That was so sweet. I love the outfit that Alice got her. You scared me to death with the Code Blue. But I loved that all it was, was Bella pulling everything off and out of her. Loved her holding the baby. She and Edward are going to make wonderful parents.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
so sweet
Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
yay Edward
Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
find a new hiding place
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
you are doing great
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
you do phsyco well lol
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
great chapter ;)
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
lol I loved it
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
awe so sweet
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
phsyco
Date: 07 Apr 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
manhole bitch
Date: 07 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
hmm men actually do that? well shit
Date: 07 Apr 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
wel it is just sex right most men want that
Date: 07 Apr 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
awesome
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
he is an ass
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
I like Bella :)
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
awesome chapter ;)
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
awesome job andyeah I am hating
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
go Bella
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Love your story so much. Thank you for writing.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
Your writing style is great, but, I really don't like the over gore and bizarreness of this. It goes to far in taking the baby and then to have Bella have to have complete hysterectomy. It was bad enough in the beginning to have both Edward and Bella act so completely imature about this. I want to stress again the writing is great but don't like the shock value used. Now we have the police giving him the address on the sly.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Sad is it end Thank you for the wonderfull story.:)
Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
Oh thats sweet..)
Date: 05 Apr 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
<3
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Aww i love what you did at the end. Love the baby names as well so cute.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Hey great Epi hun just love it :-) And its cool how they adopted 2 boys :-) Thanks so much for sharing this story :-) And I am also reading Explosive Encounters its a great story keep it up but I will check back on Ripple effect :-)
Date: 05 Apr 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
This story was wonderful. You did an excellent job with it. Now I am off to read the next chapter of Explosive Encounters. It is getting good. It has always been good but.....You know what I mean. lol.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
What a perfect end to a wonderful story. I am glad he told them what happened and they all excepted it now he does not have to carry around so much guilt. I am reading your other stories also and they are great. Thanks for sharing your talant with us all.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
That was a great way to end it. They overcame so much and now have three children too!!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
great chapter.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
nice ending...and currently reading ripple effect-llove it
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Excellent ending!!! I loved that they adopted not one but two little boys. Perfect!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
good sweet ending to a crazy story...thanks
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Very good job.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
Great, great ending! Good job. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, mostly because it was chock full of crazy.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
i love it
surprise they r going to love u r very talinted keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
OMG I did not realise you were writing Explosive Encounters... I have to say that James is just pure evil in that as well as Jacob and Billy... I really hope you do some damage to them. Not just a quick bullet. Anyone how is not reading this story should. Keeps me on my toes.
I have not started Ripple Effect yet but it is on my fav's list. Will start it soon.
Loved this story and I love the ending, it was beautiful. I am always sad to see a story I love end, but I know they always have to. Thank you for writing it and I cant wait for the update on EE. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Author's Response:
Yes, that's me! We are actually working on Explosive Encounters tonight, perhaps might even be able to update again, TONIGHT. So keep checking your inbox. EE Is about to kick up a notch and get a whole lot more sinister and mysterious.
Thanks for reading and reviewing After Everything.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
im happy that they got a happy ending !
Date: 03 Apr 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
nice chapter....
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Oh man! Edward has gotten himself into a situation.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
Thank God she is going to be ok! I am glad that Edward won't have to deal with losing Bella after everything!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
good chapter
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
gotta love family
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
That was the best
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
awwwwwwwwwwwww i don't want it to end
great chapter
xoxo
AnnA
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
Yea! So glad Bella got to see her baby! Edward was suck a fucking ass!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
I am happy Jess crazy is dead I just wish Edward he didnt do it but I am good with it. How are they going to explain how they found the baby
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
i did love this chapter- i especially loved how edward set bella straight- a little tough love but tender moment perfect moment
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
im so happy that she made it ! and they got the baby ! im sad its ending !
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
love the story...awesome job
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
OK, did they leave Edwards car behind? Just want to make sure they tie up all loose ends.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
Ok you really know how to bring on the tears. Thank you for a beautiful chapter, from the talk in the car to the mothers washing their granddaughter to Bella holding the baby.
Truly beautiful.
Cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
OMG! That was an excellent chapter. I loved the scene with Emmett in the hospital and the last part where Bella was freaking out had me in tears.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
Bella better pull through. I hope the boys are going to find the crazy bitch and get the baby back. behind the couch may not be safe for you lol
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
Aww that chapter was so heartbreaking. It's a shame it's nearly finished but the story is starting to wind down now so it kinda makes sense that it's nearly over lol.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
I will have to hunt you down if Bella dies or anything bad happens to the baby. Jess must die
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
She is one sick bitch
Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
good chapter
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
too funny...
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
i love not knowing who she will end up with....
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
Glad to see that Edward is trying...
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
Hell at this point I don't think either one of them deserve this baby. Bella has high blood pressure and should be resting but all she wants is a quick f%#@ and Edward should know better about getting her all hyped up- is he really going to be a doctor??
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
<3
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
Great chapter! Is it really messed up that i'm glad he killed her. Curious to see how he is going to explain getting the baby though?
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
Yeah Edward..
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
that was dark but good... cant wait for bella to meet her baby
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
"ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME!" Edward said??? Why is he so upset? It is what he asked for. He can't be too upset, Manhole just left.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
So Edward thought he would take Bella upstairs for a little action then run home and have Manhole too. He really is an ass! I hope Bella doesn't let him touch her, no telling what diseases he is harboring.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
I wouldn't take Edward back. How could Bella trust him? She would worry everytime they had a disagreement that he would hit the first bar and first whore he found. I mean how could he even be thinking about sex with a whore hours after their fight???
Date: 29 Mar 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
Seriously, Edward can't think that just because he didn't sleep with Manhole and just let her give him head that it doesn't really count...
Date: 29 Mar 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
She deserve this.:)
Date: 29 Mar 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
Wow,i like it what u write
and how you write.:)
Date: 29 Mar 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
OMG.I am choked how could
she doing so thing.:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
Well I can't really say that I am sorry that Jessica is dead. She thought that she would get away with all of this and that her and Edward would raise his baby like it was theirs and that is sick.