Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
wow never thought he'd actually kill her. she had it coming.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
He really did kill Jessica. Well, it was kind of a accident. She was killed but not the way he had intended to kill her. What is going to be the story on how he found the baby. I can't wait till Bella sees her. I love this story.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!! I lovee your story. I am off to read the next chapter.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
OMG!!!!!!!! I am on pins and needles, sitting on the edge of my sit reading this chapter. I am sooooooo glad that I can go on to the next chapter right now. I off to read it...
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
Jessica really scares me.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
i love it wished jass could have got more then trown accross the room but oh well she is out of the way now. really love ur story
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
like how are they going to explain him getting the baby back?
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
I am sure a lot of people would do something like this if they could.
Cant wait to see what is going to happen.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
If i was in Edwards shoes, I would have probably done the same thing...I don't Hate Ya!!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
Brilliant! :)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
The death was to quick, however as long as she is dead who cares how fast.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
Wow - this is the ending?!?! Crazy that you decided to make Edward a murderer. Interesting. How the hell is going to explain finding the baby? Eh, who cares - one line can proly be enough.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
Wow, this was such a brilliant chapter. I am glad you ended Jessica's life that way in way as it is a real possibilty to happen. Can't wait for the next chapter if there is one?
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
I guess no more children for Bella, if she even survives this mess. I wonder what the guys will do when they find Jessica. She needs help, not to be beaten to a pulp by four grown men out for revenge. Glad there was such a quick update but we are still in such a precarious situation not knowing who will live or die, including the baby.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
Holy sh!t Can't wait to hear the explination he will give as to how he got his daughter and where Jessica is though.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
WAIT A MINUTE BACK IT UP....YOUR PROLOGUE DOES NOT MATCH YOU STORY....YOU SHOULD MAYBE FIX THAT. I DO LIKE THE STORY, BUT BELLA GOING IN LABOR IN THE BEGINNING WHEN SHE SEES EDWARD WITH A STAWBERRY BLONDE AND NOW YOU HAVING JESSICA (WHO IS A BRUNETTE) TAKING THE BABY OUT OF BELLA, THIS JUST DOESNT MAKE ANY SENSE. SO YOU SHOULD PROBABLY EXPLAIN THAT OR TAKE THE PROLOGUE OFF YOUR STORY SO THIS IS MORE CONSISTENT.
Author's Response:
LOL, Oh my. You misread a chapter...The prologue was a dream.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
<3
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
She has to pull through this! Now I am thinking that this isn't going to end well for Jessica I am thinking because James,Jasper,Edward and Emmett are after blood and vengence for someone that can't do it for herself right now. And that little girl needs to be checked out at a hospital.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
OMG!!!! Is Bella really dead? I hope that they find that sick bitch and put her away and throw the key away because she doesn't deserve to be around anyone for the rest of her life.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
Oh man I was right and she is really sick in the head and thinks that Bella's baby will be hers!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
Oh man I was right and she is really sick in the head and thinks that Bella's baby will be hers!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
Jessica stole that picture didn't she? I hope that I am wrong but I am thinking that I am not! It is so cute that he is getting pregnancy pictures done.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
So it was all a dream!! I really hope that it was and that Edward wouldn't hurt her again!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
OMG! I finally got a chance to catch up some reading tonight to find these OMG chapters. Holy Sh!t
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
So they are together now?? well then it seems that Edward fucked up again otherwise the prologue wouldn't have happened.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
Oh she is one sick bitch and I hope that she does try something just so that she can get the help that she is in desprate need of.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
She is really a stupid whore isn't she. I mean picking a fight and threatening Bella in front of her family, Edward and his family was a really stupid move.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
Oh I think that he just took a huge step in the whole I am going to get the family that I never should have left back!!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
i started reading your story a little bit ago and can't stop, please post the next chapter i'm begging......please
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
To answer your question my BF and I had broken up over something stupid that neither one of us remembers now but he started dating again and so did I and I wound up with a loser that never broke up with me just stopped coming over and talking to me only to have his ex im me on his name one day to tell me that he was never going to talk to me again because she gave him everything that he needs. Well I was pissed and called my now BF and he listened to me cry and drove the 3hrs that it takes to get to my house and just let me cry on him and talk about anything and nothing. And we are together now and I love him more than ever.
I am glad that Edward finally pulled his head out of his ass!!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
I really think that Bella is doing the right thing in letting Jasper go because she is using him and that if she decides that she wants something with him that she should wait and see if she really feels anything for him or if it is a rebound. I also wonder what is going to happen between her and Edward.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
Um... Is Jessica really that stupid!! Does she really think that she will get Edward in the end??
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
He may be an asshole but at least he is turning his feelings around and actually acknowlege that yes Bella is pregnant and yes it is his.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
I am very excited that he has come to this conclusion and now he needs to talk to Bella and handle this whole situation.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
He may be an asshole but at least he is turning his feelings around and actually acknowlege that yes Bella is pregnant and yes it is his.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
I am glad that Bella is going on with her life without Edward because who really needs him she can go find someone else that likes her and wants to be with her.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
I have to agree that he is being a real douche bag. I am really beginning to doubt that this is a Bella/Edward story but I want to see what happens and I have faith in your story so I am going to continue.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
HaHa that was funny!! I am glad that she got to say what she needed to say and I have to say that Edward is one sad individual right now.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Prologue
What an ass! I really hate guys that won't stick around after they find out that there is a baby in the mix. I know from experience because my son's father didn't want him and so he has never been a part of his almost 2year life.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
Ohhh Jessica is in trouble now!
I say a little game of cat and mouse is about to start and the looser will not be Edward. But then again you are writing the story and they could all lose.
Till you update next I cant wait... I will be hanging on to the edge.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
So sad. Bella will never have a baby again.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
So the prologue was only her nightmare? It doesn't happen?
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
omg im so sad that that happened to bella i cannot wait till you get the next chapters out hopefully soon !
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
wow that was really dark and tormented ! cant wait to read the next chapter im glad you posted it !
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
OHHH Evil is not the correct word for her... but i cant really use the one I want...
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
poor eddie. going crazy i bet
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
Ok.. you cannot end it there.. I need the next chapter..lol
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
like we say in my country ARRREEE
omg i hope bella is okay, i was definetely not expecting that. Jessica is fucking nuts. anyway great chapter and i can't wait till the next one!!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
ugh!!!!!!!! ok sry mentally unstable or not, I'm all for euthenasia.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
Oh my!! You must give us the next chapter! Did they get to her in time? Is the baby going to be ok? Who is going to be the one to get to Jessica first and how will they kill her - I say something brutal like a stabbing. Or perhaps Edward doesn't get to revenge Bella's almost death and the police just shoot her cause she won't step away from the baby. Arg. So good, so crazy. Can't wait for more. Good job!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
Oh that was wicked good in its uber creepiness.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
That baby class was hilarious. Future blackmail video. Que evil laugh...
Loved this line: "For god sakes how hard could it be to breathe in, breathe out and do he, he, he. Rocket science, what a waste of time!"
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
That's so what happened on the show Private Practice... did you see it? Exact same scenario. Interested to see how it will all play out in your story. Anyway, just found this story- like it alot. And I like the fact that it's moving at a nice pace... you aren't going over every single moment of her pregnancy. Anyway, look forward to next update.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
Based on the chapter title I should have definitely seen that coming but no, I was thoroughly confused and just a little bit pissed. You little trickster. LOL. Good job. Pulled a fast one on me.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
Pickles and ice cream... hahahhaa
But why would Jessica send the onesie to Bella? Unless it's got some poisonous neurotoxin in it...
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
Soooo creepy. It is just awesome. I think Jessica's POV was my favorite one yet.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
Very good. Now let's get Jessica back in here so we can all have a go at her.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
ok she a little more than f'd up. She's psycho and delusional.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
she is a sick women--perfect psycho..
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
omg shes a few pennies short isnt she? Total nutcase and why does she think the baby is hers? Oh well I suppose thats what happens when you dip your wick somewhere else then you get everything thats coming to you! Thanks for the update!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
What a cool idea huh! Well looks like he warmed up nice a toasty now!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
update woman you can't just leave me with this sour taste in my mouth because of a measly jessica villain bitch extraordinaire
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
please update ASAP!! it would make me super happy!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
i love the story please update soon
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
Awww.....He's forgiven!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
Jessica is watching Bella, isn't she. Did Jessica get into Edward's house and take that picture??? I am really scared for Bella and the baby.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
You need to run and hind. That was mean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But that was so goooood. You did a great job with this chapter. Very sneaky!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
I really like this chapter. I like how you have Bella all horny. That was really good.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
OMFG!!!!!!!!!! Jessica is crazy!!!!!!!!!!! I really hope that that was a baby doll she had in that crib and not a real baby. Now I am really scared for Bella and the baby.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
I can't believe that Jessica did that when there was witnessess around. Boy she is brave. I am confused from all of this. Edward and Bella seem to be getting close. But in the prolouge they are not together at all. Well, I can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
Oh wow pregnancy pics, thats so cute! Hope you update more soon!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
ummm where is the sonogram pic?? it didnt sound like it was there?? yea! they are working through it!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
Ohhh, it has taken me 6 hours to read your story and I have to say you had me in tears, laughing, angry, scarred, pain, joy, and about 10 other emotions.
I really have enjoyed reading this story and I really can not wait for you to update soon. I have a feeling that Jessica is going to end up taking the baby and I am sure she need to be punished severely for it.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
Ohhh, it has taken me 6 hours to read your story and I have to say you had me in tears, laughing, angry, scarred, pain, joy, and about 10 other emotions.
I really have enjoyed reading this story and I really can not wait for you to update soon. I have a feeling that Jessica is going to end up taking the baby and I am sure she need to be punished severely for it.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
His stupid manhole is going to ruin
every thing, I think! I love this
story! Thanks for the update! :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
<33
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
I love it..)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
I love it how you wrote this..)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
I lkie it..)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
My Daughters name is
Jessika to,but she is not
a pycho,lol..)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
I like it..)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
Does this mean that scene won't happen?
Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
I think Jesscunt is going to steal the baby because she is a wack job. They will have to find her and kill her slowly or really fuckin fast who cares she must die. I feel so evil LOL
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
If she's already pregnant he doesn't need to wear a condom.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
You are evil and I love it.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
Pictures while preggers, complete with huge belly sticking out. What fun! Why is it when the wife feels something off it must be hormones, pms, or delusions? When the guy feels that way Something is really off? Seems they forget about women's intitution really fast, doesn't it?
Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
So Jesscunt sent the onesie to Bella that is just creepy. nice full body message he knew what he was doing good boy lol
Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
I knew Jesscunt was wacked but I had not clue how scarry wacked she was very good.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
thnk goodness it was a dream
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
crap. what do you wanna bet the jess stole a key to eddies place.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
What has the cunt got up her sleve someone just needs to stop Jesscunt now.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
oh so the shank is psycho!!! lovely
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
oh now that shank has gone and done it-she needs a beating
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
sweetness- loved it
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
finally, edward seems to be off his ass and in his right mind- lets hope Bella can let him back in
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
OOOOOOKKKKK!! Now I understand! Great job!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
It is wise for Bella to let go of Jasper as a lover for now. If she is going to contunie it, she needs to talk to Edward and get over him once and for all.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
Now the prologue is confusing me.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
Oh man she's coocoo like a cocoa puff! makes sense now!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
Jessica is evil