Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
Aww *wipes a tear*
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
Thank God...I almost feel sorry for him.....ALMOST!
I took my ex back a few time...bit me in the ass every time. But I actually love a happy ending...so gimme one!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
Bella should keep Jasper. He cares....jeeze to be with a pregnant woman is kinda weird I would think, if it isnt your kid anyway. He is a good man and she needs a good man!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
intreasting !
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
:)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
damn edward is totally not cool- plans get messed up- its called life deal with it- I think rose should have decked him too....
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
i would gladly trottle u if it weren't for the simple fact that you have toweite the freaking story, that i love by the way
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
Byaaahahahaa! Great chapter! EVIL Manhole! Edward is a douche! Jasper is wonderful even tho he only had one line in this chapter!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:18 AM Title: Prologue
so who's the shank that is with edward?
did eddie finally grow a pair and decide he wantts to be a part of a family?
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
Bella better make his ass pay and pay lol wait.....the prologue!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
She shoulda called Jasper....=D
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Douche! Thats all I have to say!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
I was pretty pleased that Bella decided to move on
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
OH SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im such a happy little girl right now!! Im giving you java for this! Oh yes I am! xoxodana
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Alrighty, my idea with Jasper was a "no". Jessica is an easy blow....nice. Edward you are a bombastic turd!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:34 AM Title: Prologue
Ok this asshole need to make up his freaking mind. First he does not want it and now he is all concerned and is not going to give his right up. Dick!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
WOW!! I totally loved Edward's POV. I can't believe that he called Jessica right after the big family blow up. I have faith in you about Edward but right now I want to throw him off a cliff.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
PLEEASSSEEE say she will meet JASPURRRRR!!! Oh I love how she belted him!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
oh that was evil. I was going to write what the hell happened betweeen last chapter and this one. LOL
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:23 AM Title: Prologue
Oh wow! I like the beginning ALOT!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
Looked up that song. Really liked it
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
her subconsious wont let her trust him quite yet...hope that it keeps getting better!
post again soon!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
OMG!! I can't believe Edward told Bella that!! Damn I wanted to kick his ass myself after that comment. Sure glad Bella got some kind of pay back!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: Prologue
I just found your story today!! Wow I am so glad that I found it!! Edward is such a prick!! Poor Bella going to labor at the wrong time!!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:28 AM Title: Prologue
OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Me Likey! :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
GAH! *throttle* LOL you done that well hun! I was gonna go "WHAT! what the hell happened in between? They made love and then hes with that Dog feature Tanya!" Well played hun it was just a dream! But aint dreams supposed to tell you something? Well we will have to give him the benefit of doubt! Ha! * shakes head* great chapter ;-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
I am still at a loss? How can something like that happen and in the prologue hes with Tanya? Gah! ok ok I know we are getting there :-) Its just I can't begin to understand what an Idiot he is! LOL Oh and Thanks for the update by the way :-)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
Ohhhh shes a real nut job! but oh well thats what happens with years of abuse I suppose you find a fantasy world its gotta be better than the real one you live in... and then you just forget which one is real! Edward sure knows how to pick em!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
Ooohhh so Jessica needs a beat down and I really hope someone gives it to her soon! What is her problem? Is she that pissed off that Edward dumped her? GAH std troll :-)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
that's a good start
Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
no she needs to not take him back really quickly. He is an idiot.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
Yeah I think she does need to let Jazz go.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
What a cocky SOB he is.....hmm now what about that threat from Jessica.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
Not that he deserves any more chances.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
eddie is an idiot
Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
yummy Jazzy.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 5:23 PM Title: Prologue
Why wasn't her door locked? That should have been an automatic response when getting into a car.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
aww great chapter cant wait to see what else he dose to get her back !
Date: 04 Mar 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
yes i agree yeah the preggo hormones are full on but hell id get it on with him but she needs to focus on her self and the baby!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
alright i teared i know i should be all for bellas pov but got to give it to daddy cullen !
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
I cannot wait to see what happens next with Edward and Bella! I really hope they can work everything out! Soon please?
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
I am glad that Jasper understood where Bella was coming from and he was not mad at her.
I love what Edward is doing to try and show Bella that he really does want her and the baby in his life. WHAT HAPPENS???? WHICH ONE DOES SOMETHING to screw it up.
They are finally talking and LISTENING!!!! I loved this chapter. It shows a glimpes of what Edward and Bella could have. What happens??? Something has to happen to get to what happens in the proluge.
Can't wait for your next update. SOOOOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
I am so glad that Edward got rid of Jessica. It is about time.
I am also proud of him for not losing his temper when reading the document. They handle that more like adults.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
I am hitting the review button FAST!!!!! I don't want Manhole coming after me. HaHa!!!!!!!!
I think Bella is doing the right thing by letting Jasper go. She really does not need that right now. She is way to hurting and emotional right now for that.
I hope Edward controls his temper and watches what he says. I really hope they can talk about this like adults.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
Ok, I am getting whiplash with both Edward and Bella. I am with Bella on Edward thinking that he could just walk right back into her life like nothing happened. He has got to earn his way back into her life and show her that he really wants to be there.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
Way to go Carlisle!!!!!!!!!!
I am aggravated at both Bella and Edward. They are not in high school. They are graduating college. they are both going into the medical field. They are intelligent people. GROW UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
ok, I know that Edward really really hurt Bella, but man she is ripping him a new one everytime she can. I am aggravated at both Bella and Edward for the way they are acting. I know she has to see that he is struggling, too. Edward is just as scared as she is. He just did not do a very good job with it at the beginning when he left her. He has told her he is sorry and that he has been stupid. I think he really wants to come back to Bella.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
WOW, Hot and horny Bella.
Edward is really having a hard time letting go of Bella. Why does he not just tell her he is sorry and wants her and the baby back.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
He is obviously going to f it up again, but he is headed in the right direction for now. And I just love Jasper.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
love it cant wait for more
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
i kind of like him more now actually....becuz i see that underneath it all, he still cares for bella
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
OH FOR SOME REASON I LOVE ALL THE ANGST ITS SO GREAT
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
lol i love this story and you ssense of humor wow for you..........
Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
This is really good
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
Graet job u did.:)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
Yeah its time he fight for her love..)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
I like it how you write..)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
I love it.:)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
You wrote with deep strong feelings)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
Awesome how you write with so much Emotion.:)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
I love it..)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
The chapter was so sweet, especially the last part. *wipes tears away*
Edwards redeems with Bella, but I fear, that there will be a next blow-up from him.
As I said, great chapter and great story.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
It is nice to see, that Edward is changing. Even with baby steps.
It is quite obvious to me, that he overthinks everything too much but therefore comes to all the wrong conclusions.
Lets see, what you have else in store.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
This story is so cute...insane with everything going on but cute...keep writing!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Edward is such an asshole.
But it is a nice change of plot, because in the typical Bella/Edward stories there is always Edward the nice guy, who picks Bella up after being shattered by some other guy, preferable James, Mike or Jacob.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
points for Edward he did good
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
I think he need to slowly court her you know text her sweet thing send her things like flowers but put thing in the flowers for the baby like rattle, bibs, teddy bears. Let her know that he is thinking about both of them all the time.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
she needs to stop playing games and she is playing Jasper I think he is more seriouse about Bella than she thinks. The parents are right she needs to stop stressing and take care of her and baby. Please tell me manhole is gone now poor girl I just fuckin hate her LOL
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
at least he knows still got it he is no going to get it Jasper reps the benifits. what the fuck is up with manwhole he had best kick her to the curb
Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
Daddy Cullen wise man. come on Edward get it together I don't know why I am say this I know he doesnt at least not till she is about ready to have the baby.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
I love the hole manwhole thing that is good. He sould now that you should not mess with a pregnet women.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
Jasper is Fuck hot go Bella get some of that. Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
Man I am glad she told fuctard where to go. I still say he doesn't deserve to be part of their lives. he fucked up.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
I love fan fiction so I will have to check you out. I think i read more than i do anything else
man jasper is hot. to bad it is not a jasper and bella story. he seems like a nice guy and knows a good thing when he ses it. I love the confrontation between edward and bella in the bar. he so deserved to get it. she did a hell of a job serving justice to him. I lvoe what jasper said to fucktard. he gave him a chance and told him he would regret it. I so love this story
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
he is a big douche bag. man him and jessica deserve each other. wouldn't that be funny if he got her pregnant. men
love it,go bella and that great punch of yours
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Well I hope you get her a new love interest because fuctard does not deserve her. If he was my son I would have slapped him. How dare he say the shit he did. Man my blood is boiling I am so pissed. He has the nerve and I agre after 6 years he is already with someone else. I like to cut his dick off and shove it down his throat or up his ass not sure which
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:51 AM Title: Prologue
OMG
Let me tell you I so hate edward. I am not sure if that is what you where trying for but man I would hope she finds some to love her and the baby if she is able to have it without problems. man i dont see how edward deserves to be in their lives
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
Well that's how Edward should have been acting all along, from the prelude he obviously was not able to keep it up.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
Somehow I don't believe we've heard the last of manhole. Bella is right to concentrate on her and the baby, but can Edward REALLY keep his word and keep to himself and not go F-ing around?
My spouse never really did anything to make me feel only I mattered. After the blinders came off he became my ex-spouse.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
Nice one-liner Bella!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
WOW that was a sweeter Edward :-) Thanks for sharing this story :-)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
OK, this is the most messed up chapter yet. Fuck both sets of parents! It is ok for Edward to keep doing Manhole but Bella has to stop seeing Jasper??? Yeah right! Even if Bella and Jasper are friends with benefits, she needs "tension release" worse than Fucktard right now being as she is pregnant. And as far as him putting his hands down her pants, that is messed up, I wouldn't want him touching me while still doing Manhole. Who knows what kinds of germs he has!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
How did he ever make it this far in medical school, a box of rocks have more common sense than he does.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
He has every reason to be VERY scared of how Bella will feel.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
If hes come to his senses why is he with Tanya in the prologue? I thought he was going to fight to make it right? well guess we will have to wait and see obviously he can't keep it in his pants!
When my Ex partner told me he cheated I threw my milkshake at his face and left him standing there in the middle of the street of all places to tell me! DUH! I used him for booty calls but that was it after a while I couldn't stand seeing his face! LOL still can't and to me he is worthless and a waste of fresh air LOL but he gave me a precious baby boy who is 22 and now a man himself and the total opposite of his father :-) Not agreat ending but I got my treasure out of it!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
Do NOT mess with a pregnant woman you will regret it!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
Good chapter.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
Go Bella.. fuck the shit out of Jasper..
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
awesome chapter.. I loved that Jasper n Bella scene..
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
ok I fucking hate Edward in this story.. I seriously hope that he fucking grovels, and burns in hell.. But it is an awesome story.. please continue..
Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
That was great i really enjoyed edpov hope u do another one
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
I just started your story and I really like it! Thank you for sharing and I'll be anxiously awaiting your updates.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
He deserved that punch in the face and way more! I can't believe he called Jessica up not once but twice. What. A. Dick.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
I like stories where James is the the friend and not the crazy psychopath or former lover turned crazy psychopath. Great job with the second chapter. It's a bit choppy but I think they will get better as you continue writing.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:35 PM Title: Prologue
Great job!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Edward, you are such a dick.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
WOW yep a true douche bag. Great job with this chapter
Date: 26 Feb 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Thanks for giving us Edward's POV. I do not hate Edward any more than I did in the other chapters. Because I believe in his heart of his he really does know what is the right things to do. He is just being a jerk right now. He is scared and is taking it out on Bella. I bet until now he life has been pretty much perfect and this is the first real problem he has come up against and he does not know how to handle it and he is lashing out. I am still mad at him but reading his POV I can see that he does love Bella. His is just scared.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Thanks for giving us Edward's POV. I do not hate Edward any more than I did in the other chapters. Because I believe in his heart of his he really does know what is the right things to do. He is just being a jerk right now. He is scared and is taking it out on Bella. I bet until now he life has been pretty much perfect and this is the first real problem he has come up against and he does not know how to handle it and he is lashing out. I am still mad at him but reading his POV I can see that he does love Bella. His is just scared.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
I love storys in and
with Edward Pov..)
Date: 26 Feb 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
I think an Edward POV every once in a while during the story would be good. Even though the boy definately needs to grow the F up.