Date: 26 Feb 2010 6:10 AM Title: Prologue
LOL sorry about my last review but hey! the pissing pansy Edward just got to me! Omg! but none the less I will be back to read more :-)
Date: 26 Feb 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
I seriously wouldn't want him back! Ah kill him off already LOL get rid of him hes a worthless piece of shit! and as for him being with someone else moments after he left Bella and then again now. Bella would be better off without him and then to show up at the store with Tanya in tow telling him shes bored.... ah put them in a fatal car accident kill them all off.LOL
Date: 26 Feb 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
i liked looking into epov ! he is such a douche bag ! and i cant wait till the next chapter !
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Yeah he is a dick but no more so than in the other chapters. ewww Jessica
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Oh please give us more of EPOV, so I that I can sit her at scowl at my computer screen because of his douchebagged-ness!!
What a moron! But I love this Edward.
It'll make his groveling much more sweeter!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Just have to hate Jessicunt. He will feel the pain of his words forever but so will she So sad Waiting for more
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
lol!!! LOVE the note you left about James and Jacob...LOL
How selfish of Edward.
I love that this is so out of character for the canon Edward.
Sometimes it takes him being an asshole to appreciate him when he's back to normal.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:39 AM Title: Prologue
Oh Edward you stupid, stupid man!
Hello! Life throws you some lemons, pour a shot a tequila and suck it up!!!
Poor Bella!!
I love the emotion you protrayed in this chapter! I wanted to stand up from the chair as scream THE BABY IS MINE!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
What a selfish jerk.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
I don't like this Shmuckward!!
Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
I could just kill him. I mean really.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
I am so glad that Bella hit Edward. He so deserved it.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Awesome! I'm usually more of a blood and guts kind of fic reader. *chuckle* But, you're summey and banner caught my eye and wallah....a great, angsty fic! Look forward to the rest of this, I've added you to my alert. Cheers, DN
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Loving what you has so far
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Your Edward is a jerkward, assward, and shitward. I can not believe that he said that the baby was not his. I hope Charlie ripped him a new one when Bella left. I am soooooo happy that Bella hit him. He deserved it.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:55 PM Title: Prologue
Love it!!
<3
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
that was great i liked all of them siding with bella ! great chapter and loving this story
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Edward just need the shit kicked out of him. Bella has balls to bad her heart has to be broken. Cant wait for more Hurry Please
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Way to go Bella. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Dickward really needs to grow the F up! Jackass.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Go Bella. Love the condom closing.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
He truly is Assward in this
story! Great update! :)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
omg.....that is intense and i am sooooo disappointed that there are only two chapters....please please update soon....obviously from the prologue edward realizes his mistake but tanya???? how could he?
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Good because I love James...I love this fics...can not wait for next updated.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
But i like it one time
ok that is the second
time for me is a James
nice and lovly i like it.
Wow,i want soon please
more.Fantastic Job u did..)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 8:17 PM Title: Prologue
I am pissed at Edward right now. But I am glad that Bella had his parents to rely on. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what is going on.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:39 PM Title: Prologue
Looks to be a very good story, can't wait.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:15 PM Title: Prologue
WOW great first chapter...
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:09 PM Title: Prologue
This story looks quite promising and interesting.
It looks as if Edward now wants to be a part of Bellas and the childs life.
I am curious how the story will develop.
Marrojeanne
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:44 AM Title: Prologue
Brilliantly awesome plot bunny! :)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:25 AM Title: Prologue
I allready love this Story and i want more
read from that and i hope they come again
toghether.:)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:37 AM Title: Prologue
it was a good chapter i can see lots going for this story cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:27 AM Title: Prologue
Hmmmm Tell him to fuck off Bella show up with his skanky ho! LOL this story is great so far and if I was Bella I wouldn't let him in my life and I hope his father and family get him out of the picture until Bella is ready to deal with him :-) thanks for the start of a great story I truely am gonna enjoy reading it :-)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:32 AM Title: Prologue
Probably only wants to be involved cause mom and dad are pissed at him
Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:25 AM Title: Prologue
OMG need more quick sound so good