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Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Wow... he already has her (& us) worked up and they still have all their clothes on!

 

Still is her protecter, jut like when they were kids.  the connection that they have doesn't come around very often, so hope it works out even though he says he will need to leave.

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

Interesting start. You really had us thinking that Bastion was the new employee. 

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

*fans self

there were parts that walked a fine line for me, his dominance, the way he treated her..

i know that she was a willing participant and this was 10 years of frustration built up.

there were also parts that were endearing, getting the cloth, holding her, his reassurances.

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

sensual and super hot! their chemistry radiates off the page.

(ps. sebastian and christian are two of my fav. names)

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

5X% -  you slayer you ;)

mike's hard lemonade has some amazing memories for me ...

this chapter was incredible!

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

what a beautiful start.

really loved the throw back to growing up with out technology, summers spent in the pool and young love. reminded me of my childhood!

i work in accounting, doing statements and surrounded by papers and such...i laughed while reading this.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Loving it as always doll, I thought i had already reviewed this story and i am sorry that I havent yet. But I LOVE it, great job. Keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: Judge- Cinna Buns Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

Oh wow! Chapter 4 is shocking. I didn't expect Sebastian to be that rough and...vulgar? Even though I think he's yummy, his actions and words killed the mood for me. I expected their first time to be fast and frantic, but the gaging and choking made me grimace.

I understand that he is a dominant lover and she may be naturally submissive, but I just didn't find scene realistic. I would expect her to at least pull back a bit and adjust herself, but she just takes it. 

Anyways, I like the premise of the story. Long, lost love and they're bestfriends, love it! I think this has a lot of potential. If you make it to next week, I look forward to reading your next chapter.

Good Luck 

Reviewer: angeleyes24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

JSIAHN VP;DNAP;IJHEAN......................*collapses into a pile of goo.......dead*................

 

autopsy reports: DEATH BY ORGASMIC IMPLOSION.... SEVERE LOSS OF FLUIDS......

 

see.. now... you killed me kitty cat... just.fucking.killed.me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

seriously whoever has anything bad to say about this.... NEEDS TO GET A FUCKING CLUE ALREADY.... and they need to be taught to read again.......

 

THAT WAS AWESOME BABYGILR.... JUST FUCKING HOTTTTTT...... i sooo need this pdf when youre done winning this competition.. m'kay??? great... BRING ON TOMORROW!! WHOOP WHOOP!!

LOVE

REE

Reviewer: angeleyes24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST... ILL BE YOUR QUEEN BASTIAN... ANYTIME.... ANYDAY... ANY-FUCKING-WHERE......

 

*wipes off chair and mouth* OK.... JESUS KITTY CAT... YOURE ON A ROLL. AREN'T YA??? lol... you ssooo owe me LOTSA FUCKING NEW PANTIES..

weeeeeee....*slides to chappie 4*

 

MUWAH

REE

Reviewer: angeleyes24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

oooohhhhhhh... *shakes head* kitty cat kitty cat kitty cat... YOUVE GOT ME SOOO HOOKED... IM GONNA HUNT YOU DOWN NOW... just to update this.... LOL.....

you know.. im sooo hooked to bella/edward... i struggle to read anything that doesnt have my fav pair of green eyes in them.... LOL.... BUT YOU SWASHBUCKLED THAT ONE... RITE OUT OF THE FUCKING PARK.... lol... i do believe you will be guiding hand into actually getting back to normal books... I CANNOT WAIT FOR BREACH.... its going to be EPIC... just like this one..

ok.. question time:  is this gonna get angsty and how many chappies have you planned ahead, cos i know this is a comp.. but every week someone gets knocked out... WHICH WONT BE YOU... not with this... i can actually taste it.. the adrenaline rushing through... AWESOMENESS CHICKA!!

rite... ONWARDS.... lol... im gonna hate you in about 20mins time when i get to end of chappie 4 madam... MUWAH

Reviewer: angeleyes24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

OMFG.... KITTY CAT... WHO IN THEIR FUCKING RIGHT MIND WOULD FIND FAULT WITH THIS... im one chapter in and all i can think of is... JESUS SPADE.. YOU ARE BLIND MY GIRL!!! lol

i am soo intrigued with this story... and i love the style of writing... its fun to read.. easy reading with a HOLD-ON-TO-YOUR-FUCKING-HORSES-YOU-ARE-IN-FOR-A-RIDE feel to it... LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT...

ok.. *shanties in hand* (shamwow panties.. in case you didnt know..lol) ON I GOOO......

love you and love it...

love

Ree

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

good

Reviewer: JUDGE-SpankMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Well, that was interesting...fast, hard and chaotic!  Not bad!  I think the only thing that bugged me a bit, but I understand that we really don't know Sebastian and this was a loooooong time coming..giggles..literally!  I didn't like how rough he was with her their first time orally.  *prudish much*  Not really, however, that is such a think I would not think most would do, especially to that rough extent, the first time.  And again...where are the condoms in theses stories...I don't care if she is on birth control, I want disease protection people!  LOL!  You don't know him anymore...

SpankMe:  All joking aside, other than some repetition of "breaths in pants" some body parts doing things they can't normally do..."my lips grazed his skin" would be better if it was I grazed my lips along his skin...but these are minor.  Work on it in the next chapter and it's all good!  

Good luck in the contest.  Congrats on making the top 12.

Reviewer: Misti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

The chapter was incredible. Loved it. Good Luck and I hope you had the best birthday a girl can have!

Reviewer: JUDGE - Morning Glory Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

I had high hopes for this story. Reunited love, a second chance, 10 years of fantasies - you’ve got it all there, but this chapter didn’t seem real to me.

 

She is his “princess”, but his language and actions suggest otherwise.

I believe you could have done this with a whole lot more class. I agree that they couldn’t possibly have waited another minute to consummate their relationship, and it should have been fast and steamy. I just don’t think it should have gone where it did, for round one... round two or three maybe, but not round one. This chapter, for me, lost the very crucial romance aspect. 

 

I have stated before that I, personally don’t do cock on the first go round, so maybe I’m a little biased towards my own preferences here. Having acknowledged that, I think we still need to accept that couples need to take some time to introduce and explore their respective sexual appetites (needs, desires, fantasies, limits).

 

For all the controversy around the contract in Fifty Shades of Grey, it served the really good purpose of introducing Ana to Christian’s expectations, and allowed the reader some speculation as to how far they would go... that anticipation was titillating, thrilling even. She too gagged around his cock and managed to deep throat as well, but there was an element of care in Christian’s attitude towards her (however inconsistent).

 

Eroticism is sensitive, compelling, breathtaking and irresistible. It can also be wild, fierce, frenzied, decadent and raunchy. But above all else it needs to be tempered with love. IMO anything is just porn.

Good luck in the contest, you appear to have a lot of support and for the most part I’m liking what you’ve got to say.

MG

Reviewer: JUDGE -- The Avid Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Woooo.   Because this happened so fast, alcohol was involved, and they exploded so quickly...I have a bad feeling about tomorrow morning...lol.  One or both of them is going to pull away.  The fantasy is one thing...I worry what tomorrow will bring.  

 

But that's what makes a great romance...conflict.  Don't make this too easy on either of them.  Yes, it's been ten years...but they really aren't the same people no matter how hard the try to be 

 

Reviewer: SWEmicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

I look forward to reading more! :D

Reviewer: ceceprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

I think this is my favorite! I had a long list of 5 out of all of them and this one I had printed out but didn't read yet and I said let me read it finally! OMG!! I love it! OMG! It's good! It's really good! Keep it up! Love the characters! I was a little confused if she wanted him in or not at first I thought she didn't and I was disappointed then she did! But wow! amazing!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

So how do I vote. Can you send me a reminder? You are my first choice but how many can I vote for?

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

So feral, yeah! The end sweet and reassuring, perfect.

Reviewer: jojo757 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Oh my! That was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!! I can not wait for more of this story:) Loving it!

Reviewer: Epic16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

That was incredibly hot!! Great chapter!:)

Reviewer: Cabrad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Hot, hot, hot!! I loved it!! Nice guy, bad boy in the bed...who could ask for more?!!!

Reviewer: CullenMeCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

holy hot damn i need a fresh pair of undies this was an awesome chapter and i cant wait for more i really like this story and cant wait to read more

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Wow new panties are definitely needed now. That was a seriously hot chapter. Loved it xx

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Fantastic story!

Reviewer: anamac711 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

That was hot!! Love me some Sebastian!! 

Reviewer: anamac711 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Ohhh domineering!! How exciting! 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Ok!  I said F it!  The pool can wait:)

Holy hotness mother of Gawd! 

That was freaking hotter than hot!  When I get home I'm reading it again in privacy, so j can take care of some issues!  

I couldn't wait though!  

Seriously freaking freak!  FLUV it!!!

Reviewer: anamac711 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Awww such a cute reunion!!

Reviewer: anamac711 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

You know, I actually don't mind that this is not and Edward and Bella story. I find it refreshing. Loved this first chapter!

Reviewer: TexasRoseFanfiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Oh

My

God!!! 

This just keeps getting better Cat!  Loved it!

Reviewer: gracefish21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

soo good !

Reviewer: cbmtmorris Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

I have to begin by saying that I absolutely love........ everything that you write.  I found you on FanFiction.Net; and, whenever I see you have posted something, I am compelled to read!

I definitely am intrigued by this story.  I truly believe that some people are simply fated (soul mates) to be together.  Even if many years slip by, peope that are meant to be together, will be.  Yeah, it's not always a smooth path, and often a couple makes several detours along the way (whether it be dating, marriage, celibacy etc.), but usually the couple find their way back to each other.

I can certainly understand Bastian's reasoning--both he and Olivia might of had to leave each other and pursue other paths (afterall they were young, had college to complete), but he obviously understood that it was not forever.  However, I can also understand Olivia's trepidation with getting too caught in Bastian once again.  Sometimes it seems easier to get out quickly than to become too involved and to be left hurting and miserable.  Yeah, sometimes it seems easier to leave than to be left again. 

Too bad men often don't understand the female psyche.  Some women over-think, runimate, mull over situations endlessly,  waffle back and forth playing out each possible senerio out (to the point of exhaustion), but most men just see what they want and pursue it.    

So now that Bastian has reconnected with Olivia, it will be interesting to see him try and convince her to let go and just feel--wait to see what develops and not look for concrete committments just yet.

Anyways, really am enjoying this thus far.

Reviewer: JUDGE - Tease Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Okay, yum. I am loving Sebastian. Actually, I quite like them both; your characters are very nicely developed. The fact that they have a history is a nice change. Their chemisty is glaringly obvious and that little thing you did at the end, the dirty-talking Sebastian? Yeah, nice. 

Critique time - if you don't have a beta or a pre-reader, try to find someone to help with grammar/punctuation/typos. Research idioms before you use them to make sure you have the wording right. Your story is good and your characters are lovely--don't let your readers get hung up on grammar goofs. 

Looking forward to more.

~Tease Me

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Loving how their evening ended! Bastian is so not allowed to leave! Great chapter, loved it x

Reviewer: Epic16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

This is so hot! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

he was definitely hitting on her, wasn't that kiss at the bar an indication! Bastian seemed so disappointed with her thought she was with Sam. 

Great chapter, loved it x 

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

You reall captured that first lost love feeling. Great first chapter, loved it x 

Reviewer: NyxKey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Ok you totally got me hook on another story of yours. More soon please!

Reviewer: kellishines Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Please add another chapter! This story is so intriguing! Please!

Reviewer: Blueeyebrat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

WOW! I think that is the fastest I have ever read three chapters in LOL!

Reviewer: KuroiTenshi Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

WoW!! Steamy! Need.More.Please!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

please tell me the next chapter will be up soon?  I NEED more!!!  ahhhhhh

 

*and again, reread for errors.. there were a few.

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

JFC!!  This is fantastic.  Another barely breathing chapter!  On a sidenote, I did pick up a few typos, so you might want to have a read through again to make this as clean as possible babe.  I want you to go far with this!

Reviewer: MOTHEROF6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

So this Christian guy....Uhm why am I wondering if Olivia should be carrying pepper spray and a taser?!?

Anyway...the last part of the chapter...where we see a glimpse of how intense Sebastian will be and how "this" has been 10 years in the making? Three words: total panty annihilation! Gah...woman...I'm done! I am going to violates husband now because that had me all worked up!! 

Love the story! Need to read more! 

Reviewer: MOTHEROF6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Damn the sexual tension just comes off the page!! I am at the edge of my seat waiting to see if they end up in bed together!!

Reviewer: MOTHEROF6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

I am a big fan of your work, so it's not a surprise that once again, I am hooked on another one of your story!! I cannot wait to read more of this story!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

You, you, you, are a tease!!!!!

Holy hotness!!!!!

I freaking love it!

So, when is the next update??????  Like tonight, within an hour, or a minute??? 

Wow, oh Wow!

At first I was getting sad with her when he said he was going to be leaving again.

But from the sounds of it, he's not leaving without her this time!!!!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Whew!  I'm fanning myself over here! 

Love, love, love the reunion!

So happy that he feels the same way!  It's kinda sad that he figured out of site, out of mind:(  

But good things come to those who wait!

Amazing Cat!!!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

You are such a tease! Making us think that it was Bastian!

Poor Olivia!  I can't imagine the longing!  I surely would've hired a PI after all that time:)

Sam, oh Sam... He just wants a little some some:)

Love the emotions!

Onto the next chapter!

Shelli

Reviewer: texasbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

I'm breathless and speechless.  This is fantastic.  I love how you wove so much back story into her present day surroundings!

Reviewer: Nyddi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

*Dead whore dead whore dead DEAD perished!!!!*

 

Double murder on one body. Didn't know it was possible but here we are. MORE PLEASE NOW!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Nyddi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

OMFG....the hand....the bar...the kiss....

 

Nyddi's dead.

 

*moves onto next chap in Phantom mode*

Reviewer: Nyddi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

You got me curious. You do. I so need to see what's going to happen next. Loving it so far.

Reviewer: CullenMeCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

holy hot damn i need a change of underwear and the nitty gritty hasnt even begun. i love the way you right i have been captured from the beginning. cant wait to read more your awesome

Reviewer: Judge Fiery Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

I'm into it.

Am repeating from a review below, but I really like your attention to individual character personalities, and I'd like to see even more of that. I want to care about these people, and with yours, I really do. You've made an excellent start.

Loved the playful flirtiness of the reunion bar scene. So chaste, so snuggly, SO HOT. More please. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

I really don't like Christian. I can see him causing a few more problems before this tale is complete.

My heart broke for Olivia when Bastian said he'd be moving on in a year. 

Holy hell what a place to leave us hanging. Dominating Bastian had come out to play and I'm dying to get to know him better. I'm so glad you've gone ahead and entered this contest. I'm loving these first 3 chapters and I'm dyin for more :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Yay! Bastian is back and he is flirting. You've done a great job introducing Olivia and getting me emotionally invested in her and her love life. I'm also loving Sam. Such a great friend :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

I like how this is starting :)

Reviewer: JUDGE-SpankMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Hello Cat,

This is a very interesting and intriguing story.  Wasn't sure where you were going, though figured he was going to show up again.  The banter and character development is good.  Pace and flow is good as well.  I thnk the only other thing is that it seems a little new moonish.  I would love to see less Edward/Bella/Jake and more Olivia, Sebastian and Sam.  Make this their own, and it will be great.

If I had to justify a flogging...it would be due to minor punctuation and proofreading errors.  

I wil give you the same lecture as the others.  I would highly recommend that before you post chapter 4, should you make it in the top 12, I would find a couple people that could possibly proofread.  

Keep in mind, you are writing for a contest, a contest that could potentially get you a contract to publish your story,  Please put some time into the editing side as well.  If you write FF, find a beta if you don't have one...there are several that would probably be more than happy to help you out.

That being said...I can't wait to see where this goes.  Sebastian is taking control over Olivia, and she wants it, but I get a sense that she is afraid he will leave again.  Looking forward to chapter 4!

Good luck in the Contest!

Reviewer: iwmec Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

oh wow ... all the fun begins now .. can't wait :)

loved it bb

Reviewer: iwmec Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

loved ittt .. he seems lovely already .. i can feel the chemistry .. gr8 chapter bb 

Reviewer: iwmec Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

ok that was interesting ... i really thought it was gonna be him though :(

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

good

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

good

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Mmmm superb

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

I really like it

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

!!!

Reviewer: allienicole16 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Ah it's so nice to see someone else from Indiana. I know ALL the places and things you mentioned. It's quite refreshing. lol.

 

Great update as usual babe!



Author's Response:

lol! Write what you know! I actually live in OH now, but I lived in Indianapolis most of my life and am back frequently.

 

Thanks!

Cat

Reviewer: gracefish21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

soo good

Reviewer: jojo757 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

I am so loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need a Bastian of my own:)

Reviewer: Cabrad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Holy Canoli!! Sweet, sweet, sexy, rough Bastian!! You did not disappoint, Cat!! ;)

Hugs,

Chrisann

Reviewer: Misti Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

Glad to see another awesome story coming out of that head of yours. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: allienicole16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

so good doll!!! cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Keli17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

First time  reading it and already love it <3

Reviewer: WendyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

wow, I have to admit...very nicely done!  Can't wait to see where these two go next.  Sighs....love found again....I know it can't be that easy...none of yall ever let it be that easy!  LOL!  

Reviewer: WendyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

Nice beginning.  Sad to be pining like that. Hope Bastian shows up soon!  or she falls for the new guy???  No, Bastian, come home!

Reviewer: jojo757 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for more:)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Oh nice...and the kiss...yummy 

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Whoa! I'm totally hooked! So many questions. So enthralled. Cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: Cabrad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Loving it! More, please?!

Hugs,

Chrisann

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

Oh this is going to be fun!!  

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

Very intriguing start. Can't wait to see where this goes!

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

good

Reviewer: Cabrad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

I thought for sure the new employee was going to be Bastian!  I should have known that you'd never make it that easy! I am hooked...as with everything I've read of yours. Hugs to you, Cat!! 

Chrisann

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