Date: 20 Aug 2012 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
Well, i wouldn't drink blood, and yet, i read vampire stories with great delight. And i just looove Dexter, but in real life i would bust his ass. See the difference between fanfic. and reality;-), dear prev.reviewer:-).
That said, this is such a taboo topic, and i'm looking forward to how they battle with these feelings toward each other and the journey they have to take.
Good job, and hope to read another chp. soon:-).
AKR
Date: 20 Aug 2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
'Dinky,' 'flower,' and 'pee-pee area'? Who teaches their children such ridiculous names?
I've never read an incest story and no way would I ever be interested in 'doing' my brother or sister, but I am interested to see how you're going to write this. I also like that there aren't any mistakes that jump out at me. I'm so sick of reading something and then suddenly there's an apostrophe where it shouldn't be or a 'your' when there should be a 'you're'.