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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 8:48 PM Title: Sin

Damn!  Edward has some stamina, I thought it was funny how he just carried on when Rose burst into his room, lol, she might knock next time.  'Roll Bella a 'Doobie'' lol, I suppose it will chill her out for the drive.  I'm so glad that Alice has forgiven Edward, she made some valid points but I this was different, it involved their parents and their relationship, there was more at stake for everyone involved in this.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 8:46 PM Title: I Trusted You

The demon got some of his way then.  I'm not sure it's a good idea to beat your employees to a bloody pulp, surely that would leave them severely lacking in man power.  Edward's demon's going to need a different outlet for his frustration and anger with Edward for not paying attention, maybe Edward should take him for anger management classes, lol.  I hope Alice talks to Edward soon, lets him explain why he didn't tell her when he found out.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 11:06 PM Title: Same In The End

The secret's out.  Edward really was in a no win situation with this where Alice was concerned.  Hopefully, given time, she'll realise that he did what he thought was best for everyone.  Carlisle took the news better than I thought he would, I'm amazed he's standing by Esme but then they've been together for alot of years and I should imagine more of them were good than bad.  James obviously has never been taught the most valuable lessons of all or he didn't care, never bite the hand that feeds you and don't pee on your own doorstep. So now Edward has all this to deal with and his demon.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 11:04 PM Title: Somewhere in the Middle

So James and Esme did have an affair and Alice was the result. Oh my God!  If Alice found out she would be devastated and it could destroy her relationship with her mum completely.  I feel a little sorry for Carlisle being decieved and betrayed in that way by his wife and his brother.  I still have to wonder about Carlisle's attitude towards his wife.  Why does he stand by and watch her drink herself into oblivion every single day?  Does he know?  Did Esme cave in under the weight of her guilt and confess to Carlisle?  There has to be something going on between them for this to be allowed to carry on.  You try to help the ones you love, not turn a blind eye.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 11:03 PM Title: What Is Normal Anyway?

Oooo, did Esme and James have an affair and Edward walked in on them?  I like Carmen she's very perceptive and she's right when she says that Edward still has a heart, he should listen to that where Bella's concerned but I also think Bella will work her own kind of magic on Edward as well.  I loved the pillow fight, we caught a glimpse of the fun loving and carefree Edward that he probably was as a child before his 'responsibilities' took over.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 11:01 PM Title: My List

Edward has more humanity than he gives himself credit for.  I'm glad they've talked and laid their cards on the table, so to speak.  In Edward's line of work you really can't sugar coat things and Bella has to know what she's getting herself in to especially after what she's been through.  I'm really glad as well that she was able to be honest with Edward and tell him that she wants him. She's a strong woman and she's going to need to be to be a part of Edward's life, I think as well that being direct with each other is going to be key for them instead of skirting around a subject or a problem.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:25 PM Title: Introducing The Demon

Carlisle's not a happy bunny is he?  He didn't seem to fall under Bella's spell but I live in hope, lol.  Alice is like a giddy little girl at a party.  She's already got Bella and Edward paired up, I know Edward's done that in his head too but actually hearing someone say it out loud is completely different.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:24 PM Title: Becoming Whole Again

Oooo, things are gatting interesting.  Bella's having quite a profound affect on everyone, well everyone apart from Carlisle that is, maybe he'll fall under her spell when he gets to see her properly.  Will Bella be the person that helps Esme out of her spiralling demise and re-unite her and Edward?  It's a lot to ask of one person, but who knows she's had a big affect on almost everyone else. Edward spends so much time arguing with himself, it's a wonder he doesn't drive himself crazy, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:24 PM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

I can't wait to find out what Esme did that caused the rift between her and Edward.  I'm intrigued that Carlisle doesn't know the full story of what happened.  Why doesn't he try to stop Esme from drinking and taking drugs? The first paragraph made me smile and I think you identify with that paragraph as well as I do.  As a single parent of a daughter that once she learned to talk she never shut up, I revelled in her bedtime and the quiet it offered me, my brain needed the break.  What makes me laugh is that she even talks in her sleep, lol.  Needless to say I related to that paragraph even though I'm not an assassin, hahahaha!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:23 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever

I'm so glad I put this in my favourites.  I'm going to be playing catch up for a while but I really like this start.  Edward may have been groomed for this life since he could walk but he still has a heart.  You write a very different Esme, that should be interesting, lol.  I'm not a fan of Jacob and very rarely like him in a story, so whatever you do to him is fine by me especially as he seems to be a sick psycho anyway, lol.  Oh, by the way, that house is amazing, where is it?

Jane x

Reviewer: Elvia15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:42 AM Title: Authors note

I was just interested in knowing if ur goin to finish the story I've been waiting on an update for a while would like to know so I can start a new story n stop waiting on this one 

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 7:27 AM Title: Authors note

terribly sorry to hear of your pain and discomfort. hope things are looking up for you now. patiently awaiting the return of your mojo :)  good luck and get well soon :)

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 9:24 AM Title: Authors note

Hope ur feeling better and I really do  LOVE your story. I actually wanted to punch Esme at the charity banquet, glad to see she had some redeeming qualities left before she died.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:57 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Losjr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 2:06 PM Title: Authors note

I was hoping u would of updated by now well just wanted to say it was a good story sorry I wont get da chane to finish it hope u get better bye

Reviewer: sillybella46 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:13 AM Title: Authors note

Please the wait is killing me : (

Reviewer: Losjr Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 12:40 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

When r u goin to update 

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:17 PM Title: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

OH WHAt a wonderful man he is to stay with her he truely would love ,provide,and protect her

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:57 PM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play

HE ABSOLUTELY DESERVED IT . I AM IMPRESSED WITH THE PUNISHMENT EDWARD DISHED OUT ON JACOB

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:27 PM Title: Have You Seen My Innocence?

OH MAN I CAN NOT IMAGINE WHAT THAT SICK FUCK IS CAPABLE OF

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:11 AM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

I THINK EDWARD IS UNDER A SPELL KNOWN As       (BELLA)

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 12:52 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

FASINATING,EXCITING SEEING BAD ASS EDWARD AND ALICE

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 6:29 AM Title: My List

can i just kill Carisle .. then Esme brutally and slowly ???

Come on who treats their flesh and blood like that .. i get the protegee thing but it's like they're both Soulless and Edward is like a dirty kicked puppy for them

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 5:51 AM Title: Have You Seen My Innocence?

EEEWWW .. jacob is sick , psychotic disgusting and i really dont want him to die before receiving the same treatment 1st ..

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 5:38 AM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

I dont get how on earth would Esme treat her kids like that ??

Reviewer: EdwardsKitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:12 AM Title: Authors note

I've spent a couple of days reading this awesome story and have enjoy the fuck out of it. I'm sorry that you've lost the inspiration to see it through at this important juncture, but such is life. I hope things change soon!

Reviewer: Latuacantante83 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 7:29 PM Title: Authors note

I'm pretty wimpy when it comes to angst.  You had me hooked from the first chapter, so I couldn't help but keep reading. This is probably the most intense story I have ever read. And I completely understand why you put up so many warnings. I am not complaining by any means. This was probably the darkest Edward I have ever read and surprisingly he was just human. I have read a lot of mob/mafia stories and NONE of them were this graphic. Thank you for the HEA. I don't think I would have survived without that hope, lol.  You are a truly gifted writer and I appreciate you sharing this.

Reviewer: Latuacantante83 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:04 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever

I'm hooked! :)

Reviewer: BMCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 3:26 PM Title: Authors note

I am extremely excited that you're posting the final chapter, i've been waiting so long for it! XX

Reviewer: July4 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:27 PM Title: Authors note

well i came fron funfiction just  to finish dis story n i hope u can make it worth my waitin cuz i love it so far ur doin a good job people will always have bad things to say  u just got to be proud of ur work if they dont like it they can go read another story cuz me n my sis llove it take care n hope to c da last chapter soon

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:49 PM Title: Happier Times

I am so glad that you are writing this story again. Edward has to get that freak, so they can live without worrying about him. He is just creapy. Edward and Bella need some loving time. It has been over a year. That is crazy. There is enough people in that house to watch that baby for a few hours. Bella better step up after the marriage. She is crazy for not loving on that man.

Reviewer: lover114 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:55 PM Title: Authors note

i loved it all!!!

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:35 AM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:27 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

interesting start

Reviewer: mamarobsten Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:09 AM Title: Happier Times

gracias por estar de regreso

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 7:27 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever

Yay! I can't wait to the next chapter of this story! I'm glad you're back.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:25 PM Title: Authors note

Looking forward to the end of the story!

Reviewer: atina10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:08 PM Title: Authors note

Yeah!!!! :) I'm glad you're well and has continued with this story .... xo

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:44 AM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play

Maybe i'm sick, but i fucking loved it! Wow, amazing story. I can't believe i'm only 6 chapters in. Love it in a sick twisted way. I'm so going to hell. Lol.

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:02 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

Love it so far.

Reviewer: westernem Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:36 AM Title: Authors note

don't mind you taking a break, rather that then writing without passion. glad to have you back!

Reviewer: artri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 11:03 PM Title: Authors note

Great to hear from you...glad to see you back. Looking forward to the new chapter.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:08 PM Title: Authors note

Greenaway

So glad that you popped in to let us know what was going on!! (Yup)

But more glad that your muse has returned and that you & your muse are going to finish this amazing story.

I don't write. But I can imagine your body needing a breather to recharge!!! It happens to everyone!!!

Ready for that chapter when you are!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: TigerBoo2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:31 AM Title: Authors note

Welcome back!

My mum always told me put it all into what makes you happy, when it stops making you happy, stop doing it and do something else. It's something I've lived by, especially with writing, writing should never feel like a chore, and when or if it ever does, it's the right thing to step away until you get that good feeling back. I'm glad you're getting there. I've loved this story and I'd rather wait for something awesome than accept something you've done out of obligation that isn't your best. So take all the time you like, I'm sure when you've reached you're happy place, you'll come up with something brilliant.

Mx :o)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 6:07 AM Title: Authors note

Good luck with your passion finding and I'm looking forward to your E'sC update. I really miss reading that/not knowing how it will turn out.

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:35 AM Title: Authors note

Yay!! Im happy that you happy! And i love this story!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:51 AM Title: Authors note

So excited to have this note from you....Totally support your need to recharge your batteries so to speak!!!!   Can't wait for the next posting and all the very best in your own novel.... till next time!!! :-)

Reviewer: cgooden Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:20 AM Title: Authors note

I'm glad to see that your okay and look forward to reading the last chapter.

Reviewer: rjh Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:50 AM Title: Authors note

Can't wait for the new chapter. Glad your in a better place and writing again.

Reviewer: CarrieLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:32 AM Title: Authors note

Thanks for letting us know and keeping everyone up-to-date.

 

Reviewer: susanpr Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:14 AM Title: Authors note

Welcome Back!  Will love to read the end of this story!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:11 AM Title: Authors note

I am very glad to see you found your passion again. I can see how it could stress you out. I hope things are going well for you.

            Marguerite

Reviewer: Belighted Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:14 AM Title: Authors note

Glad you are recharged! Can't wait to see how EC finishes up.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:10 AM Title: Authors note

I am so happy to hear from you.  I really loved Edwards Clan but to hear that you are ending  it in the next chapter saddens me.  As I seen a lot of suffering from both Edward and Bella when she was captured then when he had to save her, then to find out he was going to be a father he treated her like shit.  So to say they have no time to get back to the way it was is just depressing.   I would never be happy with just one or two chapters to believe that they could be really happy again so even if you wrote it, I would not feel it in the reading.

As for your break in writing, well I think you should have told us this a long time ago instead of us thinking that you just didn't care, or maybe that is what you were trying to say.

Nevertheless, I will stick to the end of this as I will not abandon you because of your choices.  I truely do love the story.

Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:02 AM Title: Authors note

Glad your back!

Reviewer: BE1965 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:58 AM Title: Authors note

Great to hear from you!!! Thanks for updating with us!!! Anxiously waiting the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:52 AM Title: Authors note

Glad you are back and all is well. Looking forward to the end!

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:02 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

Interesting so far. A bit confused with introductions!

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2012 6:51 AM Title: Happier Times

I wish we'd have gotten at least one more chapter of Edward and Bella working things out before we jumped to one year later. I still think he was a bit hard on her and didn't take enough blame for how she ended up after he left her but all in all, not a bad wrap up to that part of the story. On a side note, maybe add in at the top of the chapter that there was a time jump, it took me a minute to figure out.

I'm really loving the progressive crazy of Demetri.  It's fascinating and hilarious.  I kinda wish Edward got to make due on his promise to kill Tanya though.  Honestly, I think I just wanted to her him tell her off again. I don't think I'll ever get tired of that in fics.

Why does Carlisle hate Bella so much?  I mean, side from anything to do with Edward he just seems to hate her as a person. Is there something really about her he doesn't like or does he just hate her on principle? You'd think with all his recent revelations and the fact she birthed his grandson and brought life back to Edward he'd be able to see how silly he's being if the latter is the case.

I'm also sorry, I've meant to review more than the sporadic times I have as I've been reading. Really, it's your fault though. I've been very addicted to this story and have read it all in one day with my eyes glued so hard to the screen I couldn't stop myself from instantly clicking to the next chapter. Try not to write such an addicting story next time. ;)

Can't wait for the next update. I understand life gets busy so I'll be patient. I'm also really excited you are going to do a sequel! I'm so totally there! :)

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2012 4:39 AM Title: Finding Purpose

I understand what Bella did was incredibly stupid and Edward should be mad, but I think he's making it bigger and into something it isn't.  She didn't just up and leave him because she was unsure of their relationship or commitment.  She was cornered and manipulated by his own mother with pictures of her father in pain and being tortured and told if she didn't decide right this very minute she was going to make a phone call that would have him killed. While yes, she made the wrong choice it was a very specific situation.  He really doesn't need to have all these trust issues about her possibly bolting out the door and he's being unfair toward her and shoving unnecessary guilt onto her imo.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 1:13 PM Title: Silent Night

I can't wait until Edward gets his hands on them. I'm glad you don't sugar coat things and pull any punches.  I like some gore and vivid imagery. Clears out all the sugar in the brain from all the other fluffy fics out there.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 11:20 AM Title: We Gonna Run This Town

Is it very wrong of me to find killward sexy as hell?

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 10:56 AM Title: All My Daughters For a Son

Wow, I really want to strangle Bella.  How stupid can she be?  Does she really not realize that the lives of not only her, but the rest of the family could be at stake with one wrong move? If someone who knows of the dangers tells you to do something, you do it no questions asked because you might not have time to finished getting your stupid question out of your mouth.  He's not arbitrarily ordering her around to order her around. I really hope she learns her lesson.

Oh also, BEST LEMON EVAR!!! I forgot to say that when I read that chapter :)

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:42 AM Title: I Trusted You

I don't understand Carlisle.  He seems inconsistent.  He tried to stamp out love and emotion from Edward and told him he can't love.  He's so emphatic about this that it's part of the reason he wants Edward to kill Bella, yet he has a wife and children he loves very much.  It's confusing.  Not to mention the fact he's a disgusting, unredeamable bastard for what he did to Edward as a kid. God I hope he dies a painful death.  I can't believe anyone in the family fosters any sort of love for him. Honestly, the scene with Alice was rather disgusting knowing what he's done to his son. He is no man, let a decent father.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:14 AM Title: Same In The End

Wait...this whole 'demon' thing is confusing me.  It's really distracting from the story because it seems so out of place.  I figured in the beginning it was just what he called his darker side, a way to help him cope even though it was still weird.  But the demon is actually real?  That's would be even weirder because this is a story with no supernatural element. I'm confused.  I love the story side from the demon, it's just rather distracting and jaring from the characters and story.

Reviewer: Nicoconsd Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 6:09 AM Title: Happier Times

Howdy!  I know how it is RL can sometimes get in the way of things we enjoy :)  I am glad to see your still with us and doing well and hopefully this new year will bring more time for fun things :)  

Demriti is one sick puppy....  wow I am sure alec is wondering what he has gotten himself into :)

And the big day is coming up!  Yay!  Ya know I still ahve a link to Bella's engagement ring I love it :)  Maybe one of these days I might take the plunge :) hehe

Hope your having a great new year and I can't believe we only have one chapter left!  I am super exicted for it and sad for it to be over all in one :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 2:20 PM Title: Happier Times

loving this story cant wait till another chapter 

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Date: 20 Dec 2011 9:30 PM Title: Happier Times

SO IN LOVE with your update.  I will always check back for more of you.  You know you're one of my most favorites around and even though real life gets in the way, I hope this side of you is one that you can always express and share.  Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: indefinable1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 9:29 PM Title: Finding Purpose

you are an amazingly fabulous writer and this will always be one of my most favorite fics ever - LOVE YOU ENDLESSLY!!

Reviewer: Jlyons0424 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 7:01 PM Title: Happier Times

I am absolutely obsessed in love with this story! It keeps me on my toes to the point I wanted to skip ahead to see what happens but I didn't. Glad I didn't. I look forward to what is next and I hope you still want to do a sequel. I don't want to say goodbye to this story. It has made me laugh, cry, and cringe. Thank you for sharing this!

Big fan!

Reviewer: bellawant2be Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 3:59 AM Title: Happier Times

It's like Christmas came early!!  I was SO excited to see your update - glad you're back.  I've missed the "clan" very much!  Hope you have a happy holiday :)

Reviewer: 4Ever Edward Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:24 PM Title: Happier Times

I am so happy you are back. I was checking weekly to see if you updated. I hope everything is better now. I love this chapter. I wonder what Demetri has planned... I cant wait until you right the sequel. I know it may be a while but i am willing to wait as long as nothing happens to Bella, Aidan and Edward. LOL...great chap. thanks for writing it.

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 4:18 AM Title: Happier Times

Yay ur back!!

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 9:52 PM Title: Happier Times

Finally they are getting their happily ever after.

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 9:21 PM Title: Finding Purpose

AHHHHHH finally a happy couple

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Date: 12 Dec 2011 5:13 AM Title: Blood is pumping

I know it that bitch is going to be pain in the ass more

Reviewer: PattiMac Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:42 AM Title: Happier Times

Wow, is all I can say.....I haven't read a story in a very long time that filled me with such emotion! I cried for Edward's and Bella's hurt, I was angry with Esme and Carlile, and worn out with Alice.  This is a wonderful story with so much going on and in such detail. However I'm dying to know what was up with Charlie, Renee and Phil. What is Charlie hiding why did he abandon Bella?  I hope that Bella kills Demitre that crazy bastard! He gives crazy people a bad name!!!

Please update soon, I really hope you and you husband have a wonderful Christmas.

PS. love the tatoo it is perfect:)

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 2:26 AM Title: Happier Times

Thank you, so much for the update.  I've missed this story.  Loved it and can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 3:15 AM Title: Happier Times

amazing, as always :)

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 8:02 PM Title: Happier Times

great chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: rjh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 3:51 PM Title: Happier Times

Still here and still reading. Demetri sounds like he is insane, or should I say more insane then ever before. I am so nervous, I want Edward and Bella to have a HEA with the whole family intact. Thanks for the update, anxiously awaiting more.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 3:15 PM Title: Happier Times

thanks fpr the update, great chapter! demetri is the epitomy of evil.

I'm glad your life's settled down enough to allow you to get back to your writing, can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: suespunky Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 6:41 AM Title: Happier Times

Yay you're back! Ok I'm kinda afraid after reading demetri's pov. Be gentle with us? lol glad Bella overcame her baby blues if you would call it. Really can't wait to read the next chapter :)

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:47 AM Title: Happier Times

Emmett and the Irish priest cracked me up something fierce! I was so excited to see this update! I'm so anxious about Demitri, though. Will he be killed in the next chapter? If the last chapter is the wedding, I'm wondering if he won't be dealt with... or if you're going to write a sequel. *CURIOUS*

Thanks for the update!

-R

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:14 AM Title: Happier Times

I was so excited to see this update in my inbox!! And I would never forget this story! I have been with you from the beginning and I will be with you until the end!!


 


Now Lets just say Demetri is a very disturbed SOB!! I hope he dies slowly and painfully! Alec also.  And Yay No more Tanya!! Hehehehe!!


 


Merry Christmas to you also and I am looking forward to the New Year!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 11:28 PM Title: Happier Times

Hi Mandy -love love love this FF.  You have done some superb work.... Although I can only image that it must have been difficult at times writing something so dark.  However, I love it!  TY so much for this chapter and glad that your back to writing.  I totally have faith that you will finish the story and will remain patient as you have always assured us that you would finish this and I know you will.... so no worries that this fan will flounce... Not gonna happen.....

Okay so now we start the chapter off with humor if you ask me, Emmett and the Priest - Bless his "Godly heart" had no clue what he is getting himself into for the $300K he is being offered but hey, at least there will not be a dull moment in his travels.  I am sure that he will never have the pleasure of something like marrying our wonderful Edward and Isabella again.  LOL!

Really appreciated and enjoyed Tanya's end.  Even though it might have been ghastly and perhaps gruesome it makes no difference to me nor did it to Alec, so it appears.. her end was how does one say??? Rather fitting?  Yes, that's it.  Rather fitting indeed!  I know that you will have something wonderful FITTING as well planned for the demise of Mr. Devil Dommer wannabe Demitri....   Yes, like Bella said, our Edward is smarter than Demitiri, so I can't wait to see what Demon/Edward does to him.

Now for the Carlilse and Bella conversation well.... that was greatly anticipated and very rewarding I must admit, it was perfect.  We can not expect Daddy C to just roll over and be Mr. Nicey Nice all of a sudden regardless of what transpired, he does see alot, and has opened his eyes to things like he said, but he is still Carlilse.... 

I love how the Demon loves Bella too... for some reason that is what has always endeared this story to me... well along with many, many other aspects but that something so demonic could have goodness and love, well it does give one hope, right! 

I just think it is so cute and comical that Aidan only says Dada.... come on now everyone that is pretty funny considering... And Loved Loved Loved the fact Edward went to Ireland to get a Priest to marry them for Bella's benefit since she loves Ireland so much. 

Okay so I've written my own novel here so I will sign off!!!! Happy Holiday's dear one and Happy New Year... till next time   ALL THE BEST!!!!  Kathy twifan1228

 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 10:13 PM Title: Happier Times

Greeenaway

Glad to have you back with your amazing story!!!!

But after this chapter, you have me scared now!!!

I'm just going to hope that the wedding & wedding night go ahead without any hitches!!!!

I'm sending you best wishes for a great Christmas and a fun New Years!!!

Cory

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 9:45 PM Title: Happier Times

Great chapter. So glad you are back and I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you have a Merry Christmas and hurry back to us in the New Year!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 9:25 PM Title: Happier Times

I waited and waited...and...you updated. Yesterday I looked again at your front page and wondered and you delivered, thank you, worth the wait. Sorry life has been such a bitch, I also have just finished my November cold/flu, roll on the New Year. Looking forward to the update.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 7:10 PM Title: Happier Times

Great job!  Can't wait for the final chapter.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 5:42 PM Title: Happier Times

Well hello to you 2. I can not believe you finally gave us another chapter.  Not many stories I could go right back to. Some are so uninteresting I just pass them by when they don't update.

 

My only problem is you will not kill of the "grimm brothers". SICKO DEM & FELIX. They need to be burned at the stake. UGH bad people.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 4:56 PM Title: Happier Times

That was sooo good! I'm so happy you are back, and I hope things are better for you now! Merry Christmas to you and yours!

Reviewer: kpsp95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 4:54 PM Title: Happier Times

shocked that this updated.  thank you, have missed thos story.  looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:56 PM Title: Happier Times

Wonderful update, laughter, terror, and Edward all that was missign was lemons, but next chapter.  Merry Christmas to you as well !!!

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:23 PM Title: Happier Times

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 12:58 PM Title: Happier Times

Thank You ...Thank You ... for updating!!!  What a reat chapter.  Sorry life has been crazy for you... but thanks for feeding my addiction...;)

Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 12:02 PM Title: Happier Times

Yay! You're back *dances* I missd you and because I'm silly, I couldn't find your twitter *facepalm* I know I had it...

Anyway, the long awaited penultimate chapter! YESSSSSSSSSSSSS. So amazing!

There was a little bit of everything, some of the Monster, some Edward, some Carlisle but do you know the best bit??

MY CRAZY DEMETRI!!!!

You have to love that kid. I cracked up laughing when Alec said "he's doing it again" hehe.

Holy fudge sticks on waffles, it was awesome and I'm looking forward to the last chapter, even though I want it to last for ever!

Well done babe x

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 11:36 AM Title: Happier Times

Thanks for the update.  Life can be overwhelming at times and priorities must change!  Hope all is better for you!  I am wondering who you are going to kill cause I know someone is going out...I mean good guy not D and A.  Just don't make it too bad!  Merry Christmas to you too, my grinch is out too!  Take care!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 10:41 AM Title: Happier Times

Welcome back stranger! LOL

Sorry to hear that you have had a rough year! Shit happens, real life gets in the way, it is what it is! I completely understand and am glad to see you are still around and doing ok and not giving up on the story!!

Great chapter! Loved Edward's methods of obtaining a preist! LOL

Missed these characters tons!!

Have a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year!

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 10:06 AM Title: Happier Times

Missed you hun !!!! Dimitri better not ruin their wedding ! Emmett was a riot with the priest . i can't believe its almost over , hope you have a wonderful holiday ...can't wait for the next chapter

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