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Reviewer: moonhoney2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 1:05 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Great story.  I really liked this.  Will you be finishing?  I started it thinking it was already completed and was very disappointed to discover I wasn't paying close enough attention.  :(

Reviewer: Vampress Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:49 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever

I really enjoy this story. I really enjoy that the characters are different from the originals and that you gave them a new identity and I love all the suspense! The mafia is such an exciting aspect! I'm eager to see how each coming chapter unfolds. Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update! Please don't abandon this story!

Reviewer: amanianeptune Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 1:29 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Hi I just reread your story for the third time and it still wows me. Please update soon. Thanks

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 3:56 AM Title: Good to be Home

I absolutely loved this chapter!!!

I usually don't read this type of story BUT I've been reading Savage's stories for quite some time now and I guess my "tastes" are changing.  :)  This story actually scares the shit out of me when it comes to my two young daughters.  Geez!!

Now, do you know WHY I loved this chapter???  100% pure Emmett!!!!  I swear I laughed my ass off when he came through the door from his 2nd trip in a row where he walks in on Edward and Carlisle trying to kill each other.  That was mofo funny!!  I can soo see Emmett having the type of reaction he did in this chapter.

I'm an Edward girl 100% but Emmett is my VERY close 2nd.  Love me some Emmett!!

 

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 10:56 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

WOW!!  Can't wait to see where this goes!! 

Reviewer: Nicoconsd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 7:04 AM Title: Finding Purpose

So I was wayyyy behid on my reading and finally catching up!  Is this the last chapter???  You mentioned two more but this kinda seems like a rap.  I am so sad to see things end either way I have really loved this journey.  

When Edward pulled out that ring I grinned so big!  I still want one of those and have bookmarked the website :))) hehe

Reviewer: Vane3131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:43 AM Title: Finding Purpose

WHEN do we get a new chapter??? Its such a fantastic story

Reviewer: Sissy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 9:46 PM Title: Finding Purpose

I'm so happy they are working things out, thanks for not drawing that angst out too long. I can't wait to read the next chapter, as always I think your AMAZING!

Reviewer: Sissy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 8:11 PM Title: Sin

OMG, this story is awesome, I'm rereading it again from when you started it back on Fan.Fic, It is one of my most favorites of all. You are an incredible writer and your demon Edward is HOT as hell!

Reviewer: lovey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 1:10 AM Title: All My Daughters For a Son

cool

Reviewer: lovey Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:34 PM Title: Introducing The Demon

sweeet buit also a little sad. but overall awesome. hehe

Reviewer: lovey Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:22 PM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

great

Reviewer: lovey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:18 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever

first chapter awesomeeeee.

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 5:54 PM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play

That was In-Fucking-Credible! Awesome, great detail and I LOVED J'sPOV of his own death.

Reviewer: scrapalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 10:27 AM Title: Holy Night

Please oh Please make Charlotte an assassin.  There's nothing better than a female ass kicker.  Just a thought!

Your story is fucking fab by the way.  I'm loving all the violence and the gore.  The meshing of my two worlds done with such style. Well Done 

 

Smooches, Scrappy

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 3:04 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Good chapter glad they finally worked things out. Charlie is a ass..Edward should throw him out on his ass.. I loved the convo with Edward & Charlotte. Good for Rose making him hold the baby so she could give him the third degree..

Reviewer: fancastride Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 12:52 AM Title: Have You Seen My Innocence?

Who would have thought that Jake could do something so cruel. I have a feeling he will be breathing his last breath soon if Edward has anything to do with it. What happened between Edward and Esme?  They seem to hate each other.

Reviewer: fancastride Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 2:02 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

Wow you got right to the point, Edward burning Jake's eye.  That is harsh.  So a family of killers, the blood of so many is on their hands. 

Reviewer: MovieMoments Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 11:28 AM Title: Finding Purpose

I didn't cry...

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:05 AM Title: Finding Purpose

wonderful story! i can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:55 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Finally! Yay for him acting human. And for them working it out, kind of. Why is it that when we're hurting, we often ask for exactly what we don't want. Bella didn't want space, just Edward. But because boys listen to words rather than hidden meaning, he gave her space. And it just hurts her all the more. Rough. But at least they're past that now... I hope.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:02 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Well now, I hope he's got the bullshit out of his system. Maybe now he can be a partner for her.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:30 AM Title: Finding Purpose

love the evolution in this chapter ... I'm going to be very sad when this story ends

Reviewer: SugarSweet82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 10:41 PM Title: Finding Purpose

wonderful! can´t wait for more!

Reviewer: the twilight girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:40 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Awwww this was a great chapter! Edward is finally taking action and because of this, his relationship with Aidan/Bella is growing! Very well written and i love the eternal struggle Edward keeps having with the Demon. Thanks for FINALLY updating and keep it comin'!!!

p.p Charlotte is too cute!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:47 AM Title: Finding Purpose

What an amazing chapter.. My goodness.. the emotions were all over the place.  You just so nailed it all.  I am so glad you are back to writing, and I am so excited there will be sequel.  YEAH..

Thanks so much for the greatness.  Your story is just so wonderful.

Reviewer: Bubblegum Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 6:33 PM Title: Finding Purpose

This chapter was well worth reading after the long wait. Although there were a few spelling mistakes, and some sentences that didn’t make sense, who cares! I nearly cried when I was reading about the problems Bella was having with baby Aiden. I loved Edwards’s fatherly skills, and Charlotte and Edward's conversation, they were both so adorable.

Keep up the good work; I’m counting down the days until the next chapter. I can’t wait for the sequel, but then again I don’t want Edward's Clan to come to an end, only...two...more...chapters...left...

Reviewer: OliveTrusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 5:59 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Hands down, one of my all time favorite stories.  I have kinda fallen off the fanfiction wagon but still check here daily for Edwards Clan.  So, I was thrilled when I saw that you updated.  Simply cannot get enough!  I am also really looking forward to the sequel, too. 

Simply amazing!  Thanks for the new chapter.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 4:26 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Green

I love the long chapters but, I also hate the long chapters. Because I can never finish them fast enough before TWCS signs me out. (hee, hee)

Well it's good to see Edward has made his return and wants to take care of his son!!!! Lots of healing done in this chapter!!!! Very anxious to see how this plays out in the final chapters!!!!

Fabulous chapter!!!!

Post more when it's ready please!!!!!!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:45 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Such an emotional chapter.  Having a baby is difficult under ideal circumstances, poor Bella.  I love Edward's demon; who would have thought he would be the rational one in all things!  I am glad to see them moving in the right direction.  Charlie might be harder to convince.  I must admit, I don't like him very much.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 11:56 AM Title: Finding Purpose

The first 3/4ths of this chapter was so depressing, I was losing hope, again, that Edward would ever make it right. Now, I feel MUCH better. Good chapter. Thank you for ending this one on a more positive note.

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 5:04 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Loved it.  So happy they made up.

Reviewer: Mz_Star Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 4:49 AM Title: Finding Purpose

O wow Bella lost her sanity! It's nice seeing Edward taking to fatherhood! Can't wait for the next chapter! =)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 4:24 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Thanks be to G.. the author that Edward is no longer in Emoville:D)

I was getting worried toward the last few chapters & he still hadn't shared his feelings. And god, talk about watching someone drown, Carlisle is like worthless as a MD as far as anything psych goes, haha

I was so happy to see there was an update, was dying to know what was going to happen with these crazy twisted characters, & can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: fshionlver123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 4:08 AM Title: Finding Purpose

YAY! You  updated. i've been waiting for this chapter for a long time and i hope you update more because this story is freaking awesome !

Reviewer: suespunky Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:50 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Well well look at Edward being a dad lol. Didn't think he'd embrace it so quickly. Loved Edward and Charlie's conversations. They need to rumble lol. Poor Bella. She's been thru so much and she finally broke. Edward should take charge and help her but also with Aidan. It's gotta be very tough for her. Loved this update. Kinda sad that it's almost over but yay for the sequel!!

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:47 AM Title: Finding Purpose

This is one of my favorite stories, I was so excited to see a new chapter, thank you..

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:25 AM Title: Finding Purpose

oh so happy for the updated chapter.  bless your heart for another wonderful and heart warming look at our characters, you are a very talented writer hope inspiration continues and again thank you for this wonderful story.  

i see Charlie trying to Dad up with Bella but Edward does have it right Charlie and Renee were the ones who started with the abandonment issues for Bella

til next chapter happy writing  Laters BB  Kathy xoxoxo

Reviewer: atina10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:10 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Thanks, thanks for update!!! I love this story!! well, we are on track and I just found out that going to see a sequel! I love it! Thanks again ... anxiously awaiting the next chapter
x

Author's Response:

LOL you are welcome and i will do my best with the next update. It will happen, im just not to sure when

 

Reviewer: saniaast27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:53 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Loved it!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:19 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Bella has post partumn depression. She probably has a slew of problems after Dimitri terrorized her.  She needs a helper to help with the baby and the cleaning while she lays on her but and gets well. Edward needs to help her as much as he can that will rebuild their relationship. (sounds good on paper)

I say that perhaps staying alone for a couple of weeks might be good. No Kate, Charlie or Seth. Alone time for that little family that needs it so badly.

 

Thank you for not ditching us. I had given up on this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for not giving up on this story completely. I assure you, it will be finished. I would not do that to the readers, leave them hanging without an ending. thanks MaryMary. I appreciate you still reading and as always, I appreciate your candor.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:53 AM Title: Finding Purpose

good 1st steps to repairing the damage :) He's going to be such a good papa! (super crazy overprotective...but good) Bella will hopefully come out of her PPD without treatment. Please tell me the psycho trio will not resurface anytime soon......

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and those coffee cups. im addicted to them somehow..... lol. He will be a good dad. Thanks again. xxx

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:28 AM Title: Finding Purpose

I was really worried about Bella.  I didn't think she was going to let him back in.  I am so glad that he was there to help her nurse the baby and bring her back to reality.  Its been a long time since you updated and I hope you are feeling better.



Author's Response:

Getting there thanks. yeah a long time, I had a difficult time with this chapter, but ultimately, i am happy with it now. LOL. Thanks for reviewing and sticking with the story

 

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:27 AM Title: Finding Purpose

yay!!!!  You updated!!!  I thought I was going to have to send Killer Edward to find you... I'm glad to see that Edward and Bella are making some headway... great chapter...



Author's Response:

Lol thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:15 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Wow.  A lot happened in this chapter.  I am glad that Edward finally accepts his son.

Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

 LOL. I know. It was a mammoth chapter to write. Thanks for reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: bellawant2be Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:07 AM Title: Finding Purpose

I'm sorry you haven't been feeling good - but I loved the update.  I'm sad it's almost over but can't wait for the sequel!



Author's Response:

Thanks. And thats the spirit, dont be sad just think 'Sequel'. lol

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:02 AM Title: Finding Purpose

okay wow... i am glad edward got his head out of his ass!!!  and then got bella out of hers!!!!  i thought she didn't bond with the baby because the baby was the reason ed left her...but now that he wants her back she is starting to feel for him....

anyway thanks for the update can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

You are welcome. The next update..... Heck i dont know when but you will get it. :-)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:00 AM Title: Finding Purpose

wow loved the update,  and we understand that rl takes precedent ad sorry it has been kicking your ass lately.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the understanding. Its all good, and i am glad you enjoyed the update. Cheers for the coffee cups. I love those suckers.

 

Reviewer: Shortbritches85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:56 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Yeah!! I was so happy to see this chapter up!! It was great as usual!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!!! :-)

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:55 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Good to see they have finally talked and are going to try to make things work. Can't wait for the next updates. Excited to see there will be a sequel. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:53 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Well, thank God!!!  I am glad that Edward and the Demon have their heads out of their ass.  Things seem to be on their way to working out for this "family".  I have just one gripe and it's towards Carlise... he kinda pissed me off this chapter with his nonchalance about Bella and her increasingly worsening mental state... why is Carlise not treating her for post partum depression?  Um, hello... he is a doctor, her behavior is so much more than just "hormones adjusting"?  And with everything that she has been through in the last 9 months... jeez, anyone would have a psychotic break!  Stupid man!  Okay... girpes over. ;)



Author's Response:

LOL thanks for reading and reviewing and griping. I love gripes. LOL. Carlisle has also had a lot to deal with and no matter how professional and caring he tries to be, he still doesnt like bella very much. Hes trying, but it will take him time too. Thanks again :-)

Reviewer: LadyChery Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:46 AM Title: Finding Purpose

I like the progress they made on this chapter. Thanks for the update

Author's Response:

Me too. Thanks for reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: kpsp95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:41 AM Title: Finding Purpose

great chapter, it was a great surprise to see the update.  i am glad to see that they are trying to move forward and past this.



Author's Response:

LOL thanks. I was actually kinda stoked to update myself even though Im all snuffly and gross. LOL. I too wanna see them get back to being somewhat happy. Well their version of it anyways. LOL. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:33 AM Title: Finding Purpose

AWWW Greenaway!! I have goddamned tears in my eyes!!! Shit!! LOL

I was being really patient waiting for you to update and almost bit the bullet a couple time and pestered you, but I know you are a busy woman and I appreciate all the hard work that you put into this story so I tried to be a really patient good girl......and apparently it payed off with this fucktastic update!!!

Perfection!! Enuff said!!

I am both excited and saddened that their are only 2 more chapters left....it's kind of bittersweet....although the fact that you are going to do a sequal definitely sweetens it right up!!

This journey has been incredible and the way things are changing for the clan is really fascinating!! Can't wait for more!!

Sorry to hear that you are feeling under the weather...get better sweets!!

Great chappie as always!! xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

AWW, I didnt wanna make you cry! LOL. Well, maybe a little. LOL.

You were so patient, but dude, you should know, its not pestering if you are emailing me. I would never consider you a bother.

Thanks for the review. I am always looking forward to them. :-)

 

 

Reviewer: missielynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:30 AM Title: Finding Purpose

can Edward beat Charlie with his chair please please please, push him down the stairs maybe? poison his food?



Author's Response:

Not without upsetting Bella, but dont think he isnt trying to come up with a way to do that. LOL. Charlie and Kate are definately on his list! lol

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:22 AM Title: Finding Purpose

awww he is a sweet romantic killer lol.  looking forward to next chapter

 



Author's Response:

Lol he is. Thanks for reviewing

 

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 11:56 PM Title: Finding Purpose

I was scared to read this chapter but you surprised me Thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.... 

Reviewer: cinnamontwist101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 11:46 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Sweetie as you know I really thought that was your best chapter, the writing was nothing short of brilliant and the chapter had so much emotion I actually shed a few tears for the both Bells & Edward....Such a sad situation they were in both victims in their own way. Neither was to blame for the mess they found themselves in....God I love Charlotte she is kickass. And the Yeti Witch the demon never fails to make me LOL...Have to say I felt like a proud Aunt how Edward took charge of caring for his son and Bells. LMAO...And thank you my life partner and Soul sister for pimping out Cinnamon's House of Sin....Love you loooong time sweetie :)

Reviewer: twighlight mummy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 11:32 PM Title: Finding Purpose

thank you xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx



Author's Response:

You are so welcome. xx Thanks for saying thanks. lol

Reviewer: mommapurvis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:53 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

I have been hooked ont this story for 2 days! It's so raw, real, raunchy, and freakin awesome! Keep up the fabulous work!

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 10:31 PM Title: Finding Purpose

DAM IT TOOK ME A WHILE TO REMEMBER WHAT STORY THIS IS AND FINALE IT CAME TO ME I REALLY ENJOY THIS ONE BUT I AM READING SO MANY ONCE IN A WHILE I HAVE TO GO BACK AND READ THE INTRO I DID THAT BUT STILL COULDN'T PLACE IT BUT LIKE I SAID IT DID COME TO ME I GUESS BECAUSE IT'S BEEN SO LONG SENCE I READ EDWARDS CLAN I LOVE IT AND I'M SO GLAD EDWAES CAME HOME TO SEE HIS SON AND BELLA HE NEEDS TO STAY WITH HER AND THEY NEED TO HEAL AND FORGIVE EACH OTHER SO THEY CAN MOVE ON AND BE HAPPY.

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:25 PM Title: Finding Purpose

UGH i hate when it's Edwards fault he didn't 'break bella' she did this to herself getting in that car and leaving him .. he went to go clean up the mess & protect her from the 'bad guys'. she is hurt & upset but it's her fault. Iadore Bella in this story but she was a dumb ass for leaving wth Edward's mother that night plain & simple. I hate that he missed the birth of his son but at least he came. I love the name he came up with.. And hopefully when bella wakes up she will tell Edward she loves him & it's not all poor bella & Edward telling her he is sorry .he didn't do anything wrong. I really enjoyed the conversation between Carlisle & Edward.. AND THANK YOU GOD Edward realizes his dad's way of 'training was wrong' woot woot... and kate damn girl just don't know when to shut her mouth & get out...lol.. but i do like her & i feel bad for her.. but still she needs to shut up now poor Seth will pay for that.

Reviewer: commerou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:12 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Great chapter - Great story!

You are doing a good job! Can't waite for next update.

 

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:00 PM Title: Silent Night

crazy:(

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 9:46 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever

I am happy for the update.  I am going back to reread a few chapters because I am a bit confused about Bella having a choice.  I was under the impression that she was a prisoner.  How could something out of her control create such a lacki of trust.  I love the name for his son and can't wait for the interaction when Bella wakes up. 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:52 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Yeah an update!!! Great chapter, he came home finally. I really thought he was going to let Riley live, even though parts of me thought Riley may of had some part in what all went down.

God, Kate is annoying. I don't blame Edward for wanting to hurt her, seems appropriate.

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 8:58 AM Title: Finding Purpose

another great chapter

really enjoying this story - very different.

havent been able to stop reading till i caught up

look forward to the next chapter

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:34 AM Title: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

wow - great chapter

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:45 AM Title: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

great chapter

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:45 AM Title: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

awesome

love it

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:13 AM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places

finally

love it

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:37 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Wow that was a great chapter.  Its too bad that he missed his sons birth.  It was a long time coming and I really missed this story but I am so glad to hear that you are going to make a sequel in the future.  I will add you to my favorite author if your not already. 

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:35 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make

wow what a chapter

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:33 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

thats there distraction

love it

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 11:48 PM Title: I Would Die for You

Great chapter

Reviewer: 4Ever Edward Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 10:29 PM Title: Finding Purpose

I am soooooooooooo happy you have posted I was going stir crazy thinking you were taking a break like every other writer has been doing lately. Thank you, thank you, cant wait to read next chapter. Oh by the way loved it as always, how could I not

Reviewer: Bubblegum Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 7:39 PM Title: Finding Purpose

This chapter was kind of dragging for me, but i understand edward had to go though all of that to get to where he is now. Sadly, i was expecting more after the long wait. However, im glad edward has come back to bella. And the baby... Aww, my favourite part of this chapter had to be when edward compared his son to a matchstick. That made me laugh. Bless him and his red hair. Edward makes such an adorable father, id like to see more of his interactions with Aiden, cool name by the way.

I hope when bella awakes shes not too forgiving towards edward, and that he suffers for not supporting bella at her time of need. Its a two way street, so i guess they can both forgive each other in due time, and move on to happier things.

Cant wait for the next update. (hoping its sooner rather then later.) Keep up the good work, =)

Reviewer: starlingaswad Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 4:54 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Thank you for finally posting a new chapter, I have been waiting for this and it is as good as usual.

Reviewer: mirinha25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 4:09 PM Title: What Is Normal Anyway?

I loved the history,Im is Brazilian

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:23 PM Title: My December

great chapter

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 12:25 PM Title: Blood is pumping

esme - thought so

love it

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 11:36 AM Title: Holy Night

another wow chapter

well written

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 11:19 AM Title: Silent Night

wow what a chapter

evil

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 10:35 AM Title: Good to be Home

getting interesting - esme seemed guilty at the ball

loving it

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 10:03 AM Title: None So Corrupt as Those with Power

awesome chapter

reilly seems a bit suss.

loved it thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:26 AM Title: We Gonna Run This Town

awesome chapter

glad bella has seen now - awesome description by the way

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 4:50 AM Title: All My Daughters For a Son

guess demitri didn;t want to wait

great chapter

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 4:06 AM Title: Sin

great chapter

thanks

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:50 AM Title: Becoming Whole Again

sometimes Monsters need something to redeem with them, and here is a Angel to assist with the Redemption

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:47 AM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

you just have to feel the sadness for the relationship from Hell that Our Emotionally detached Killing Machine Edward has with Esme and Carlilse!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:39 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever

2nd time through the story again.  Here I go!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:17 AM Title: Finding Purpose

damn i love this story.  i am so glad you are back.  i love ed and his demon!  he needs to get his act together though!  poor bells she is really tore up!  she thinks ed hates her and doesn't love her.  i wish he would get passed all this crap about not trusting her.  she didn't do it to betray him why can't he see that?  i hope he does, she moved out she is really really hurt by him... he better get her back!!!  i still don't like carlisle and i love em as always, and i am glad alice gets him thinking all the time.

thanks for the update and i can't wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:20 PM Title: Finding Purpose

Wow I am at work and printed it. I so loved it. Edward sure does have alot he is dealing with. he wants his family safe. he doesn't know if he can accept his son or bella. can he ever trust her again. what will he do with a family. will he train his son the way his dad trained him. i love that edward and carlisle talked. i can almost see carlisle getting old and thinking this way of living is almost done for him. he wants to enjoy his grandson. he wish he did things different. wow edward and the demon are probaly spinning out of control. seth run edward is coming for you. i truly loved it. i am hoping bella can forgive edward and maybe there is hope for the three of them. always worth the wait

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:42 PM Title: What Is Normal Anyway?

love his hello

great chapter

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:44 AM Title: My List

great chapter

thanks

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:22 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Loved the chapter. So glad Edward took out Riley, weird to say but I would have respeced him less if he had let riley live. Interesting how he comments on his dad beating him for not telling him about A/J and that he will beat Seth for not coming to him about his relationship with Kate. I guess that's his world. Excited to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:53 AM Title: Fathers and Sons

great chapter

loved it

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:36 AM Title: Finding Purpose

I have turned into a greedy little bitch!!! I love the Demon soooo much!

Please more!!!

I can't wait!!

Of course take ur time after you close this up!

But I will be anxious!!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:22 AM Title: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

thanks

Reviewer: msmiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:02 AM Title: Finding Purpose

Awesome chapter, please dont take so long to update.

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