Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:05 AM Title: Finding Purpose
Yay! I have been thinking of you lately and am sooo excited to see an update. Glad to hear your holidays were good :)
Whew I wanted to kill Kate myself there :) hehe and I have always loved the name Aiden... :)
I can't wait to see what happens when Bella wakes up and how things go down. and will Edward really beat the crap out of Seth??? Poor Seth
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:29 AM Title: Finding Purpose
Man.. he hold a grudge doesn't he.. damn.. The boy is hard as nails. Bella is going to have to tred very lightly around him... from now on.. I feel like.
Great Chapter.. i had a blast rereading this tonight.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:37 AM Title: Finding Purpose
I was so excited to see the update. I am so addicted to this story and am so EXCITED that there will be a sequel. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:14 AM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play
great chapter
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:51 AM Title: Have You Seen My Innocence?
what a chapter
thanks
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:37 AM Title: Finding Purpose
You made my day! Thank you for the update : )
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:30 AM Title: Finding Purpose
Green
That was damn good!!! Edward seems to be waking from his stupor. I hope.
More when it's ready please!!!
Cory
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:58 AM Title: Introducing The Demon
great chapter
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:41 AM Title: Becoming Whole Again
thanks
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:33 AM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between
great chapter
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:30 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
oh man.. I am rereading this again.. and this chapter just gives me the creeps.. Edward is going to freak out
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:21 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever
sound like a great story
look forward to reading
thanks
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:20 AM Title: Finding Purpose
Thanks for the update. Have been waiting a while. Can't wait to see what's going to happen when Bella fully wakes up.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:07 AM Title: Finding Purpose
Phew...a marathon but worth every moment. Glad to see you back...was looking at this story last week and wondering but I knew, from the feel of the last chapter, you would continue it. What a skewed world they live in...
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:26 AM Title: Finding Purpose
OH.MY.FUCK! That was an awesome chapter! UPDATE SOOOON! thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:00 AM Title: Finding Purpose
Wonderful as always I can't wait to see what happens next cause He has finally started to pull his head outta his ass!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:58 PM Title: Finding Purpose
gosh edwards crazy these days, isn't he? but i'm glad that he's back, happy about the baby (cute name by the way) and ready to love bella and make things work. hope bella will be open and they can make things work for themselves and for their kid :D
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:45 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever
good chapter.. Still not understanding his thoughts on trusting her.
he cant trust her because she chose to protect her father? Her family? What? just because it wasnt his family she was protecting?
I would think he would respect her more because of what she went through to protect family. To me that shows more trust and dedication. Just not grasping the logic here.
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for the review. :-) Yes, she did she show trust and dedication, just not to him. She trusted the Volturi and Esme above him he believes. He has also never been in love before so he is still struggling with all the new feelings that he is experiencing and since we are seeing the story from predominantly his point of view, I suppose it's ok that we are a little confused. lol. Hope this answers your question, if not, feel free to PM me.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:38 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Edward is getting on my nerves! Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:27 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Bravo Baby Aiden! I love it. Ugh, Edward is so mean to Kate, but i can understand why he is the way he is. It takes a whole lot to even a gain a little of this trust. I can't wait for the next chapter. Edward needs to listen to his conscience, the Demon, and accept love in his life and make Bella believe that he loves her and their baby. Please don't let Bella give up and Edward has some serious begging to do. Thank you for updating!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 9:38 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Edward is a prick I dont get how he can care for a man that put him through hell (father) and cant trust Bella no more because she went to save her dad the only family she had left its wasnt like she had a nice time when she was away, And the way he treats Kate he deserves to have the shit beat out of him I really hope Bella takes time for herself and doesnt go back to him so easy. I feel bad for her Carile dont like her but WHY and to sit there and talk to Edward about how it leaves a nasty taste in his mouth to talk about her and Edward laughs about it . If I was Bella I tell them they can be apart of the baby life but they can kiss her ass and dont want nothing to with them
Date: 21 Feb 2011 9:12 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Fantastic chapter, tons of emotion and I loved it. I really wasn't sure for a second if Edward was going to let Reily live or not, I love how you give insite to what the characters are thinking. Thank you for the update!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 9:05 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and I don't know why but I am not getting and of my update emails........
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:03 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Yay!!! Yay!!! Yay!!!! You are back with another wonderful Chapter!!!! So happy! Yes, RL can get busy, so glad things are calming down some. This was really a fantastic Chapter too, can't wait to hear more from Bella and see what she unleashes on E. Well we know that she is going to be too emotionally drained for sometime to deal with his return but our Bella is a fighter... we know this... look what she has endured thus far for Pete's Sake.
The Demon is continuing to rake him over the coals in regards to his treatment of Bella too I see, Love the Demon getting on him about how he is acting.
Bless Alice's heart, so happy she kept after him. Jasper was right in telling him about Bella moving out of the main house, surely when E has more time to think about it he will understand that she just couldn't bare to be inside with all the memories of a man that she saw and felt hated her, first for the betrayal (I don't think she betrayed him, but he does) and secondly for being pregnant with his child. Demon needs to remind him that it took two to tango in order to make that little angel Aidan and after all Aidan is his saving grace. Carlilse surprised me in a nice way with the feelings he shared in regards to Bella and reminding E about Redemption!
So Looking forward to more and then a Sequel.... Oh, I am just beside myself with anticiaption. So glad your back to writing and getting support from family and friends and hopefully fans too!!!!
Take care till the next update,
Laters B Kathy xoxo
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:18 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Don't know where to begin. Good that she moved out! He didn't want the baby so why should she stay in the mansion. That'll teach Edward. So how will Bella react when she wakes up and finds Edward there and already named their son. Will she accept him right away or push him away for being gone and detached from them? I would lol. If he wants her to forgive him, he has to work for it. Love all the angst just so you know lol but poor Bella. Calling out his name while sleeping. So sequel? Yay!!!! Can't wait for it!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:00 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Excellent chapter. It hurt so much to read Edward's angst over Bella and Aidan, (Beautiful name, by the way) as well as knowing Bella's having her own hurt and angst over Edward. I just want them to talk. I so want Edward to fix this, soon. You're making me nuts!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:29 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Glad you are back. I am one that messaged you. Okay now great chapter. Sad though, Bella can she take any more hurt? She came in abused. Then Carlisle and Esme hated her and that never went well. Then she tried to make her father live. Almost cost her her life. Then Edward decides that he can not forgive her for defending her family. He defends his, but oh my. She left him because it looked like her only course of action. She is selfless so she tried to fix that problem herself. THen the Volturi abused her. She gets back and Edward tells her he could kill her. That makes sense why go after her. Oh I get it the baby he did NOT want. Then he leaves. Remember this baby maybe his but she is not married to the father so.... Aiden is a Swan. That should kick Cullen in the ass. I think Bella has had enough hurt, don't you? Normal people would lapse into some type of depression or they would become violent. Carlisle still doesn't like her. HE wants the baby.
Her best friend Kate slept with her Edward whatever he is to Bella, not husband, not boyfriend, not really anything. I am glad she moved out.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:50 PM Title: Finding Purpose
OMG!! This chapter was so worth the wait!! So much pain and sorrow for Edward as he fights with himself over his feelings for Bella and his son. I just wonder how Bella is going to react once she wakes up.. I hope she gives him hell!! but then again I want them to make up. Edward was so mean to Kate at the end but I think he will come around or I hope he will. I am glad you are back and cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:44 PM Title: Finding Purpose
wow, thanks for the update, i had almost given up on your story.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:28 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Wow... long chapter :D thanks!!!
Edward is finally home. Bella him back????
Waiting for the next chapter :)
x
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:20 PM Title: Finding Purpose
eddie is a prick of huge porportions....bella needs to kicks his as$. the prick didn't want a son and now he is a proud papa. prick
Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:52 PM Title: Finding Purpose
I love the demon; his voice of reason. This was a great chapter and I'm so happy it was updated.
Can't wait for the next one....
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm happy I updated too. LOL. Next one wont be far away. :-)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:39 PM Title: Finding Purpose
oh wow i loved this chapter!!!! please update soonnn!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:38 PM Title: Finding Purpose
I didn't expect Edward to come home and accept things so quickly...then again, he does love Bella. Is it really that he doesn't know if he can trust her, or is it that he was/is so incredibly hurt that she choose to leave and he doesn't know how to define what he's feeling? My son's name is Aidan, so I especially love the name you choose for the little guy. ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:08 PM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
love love love YOU
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:08 PM Title: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells
i think i've forgotten to post comments lately - but i love you and still am a dedicated follower!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 1:15 PM Title: Finding Purpose
yay! hope! Edward's slowly coming around, he still has to deal with the trust issue, but he's already fallen for Aidan. how will Bella react when she sees him? she's gotta be numb by now, can Edward bring her back outta it????? missed you! hope all is well!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 1:06 PM Title: Finding Purpose
:)
yeah... what a great wake up this am... in fact i got 3 allerts for it...
love the fact that his demon is pushing him home
Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:46 PM Title: Finding Purpose
Oh my god.... update the next chapter soon!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:18 PM Title: Finding Purpose
*squeels like a pig in shit!!! My ClanWard is back and I'm loving it!!!
Oh, how I missed you!!!! FanFuckingTastic chapter!!!!
I love, love, love the name Aiden and I was soooooo doing the happy dance that the baby was/is a boy!!!!!!! ;)
I am saddened that Bella moved out and am really hoping they can get past the bullshit and find eachother again along with some much needed HOT SMUTTY MAKEUP SEX!!! LOL...yes, I am still a huge perv!! Enuff said...
Ok, on to the next chappie!!!!!! XXOXOXOXOXOXXXOOOOXOXOXO
Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:06 PM Title: Finding Purpose
beautiful. I cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 20 Feb 2011 8:08 PM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
Love the story, and all it's twists. I feel like I'm crawling out of my skin for an update. Will we be getting one for your 1 year mark on the 23rd?
Date: 18 Feb 2011 11:28 PM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
oh man things are so rough right now...what is truly Edward's hang-up with forgiving Bella?...her becoming like his mother....her joining the enemy...what exactly?...cause he's being a stupid s.o.b!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:09 PM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
please please update soon xx
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:04 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
This is great, thank you!
Date: 13 Feb 2011 4:34 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever
Hope nothing bad is going on in your life, it has been such along time since we have heard from you
Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:46 PM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
I absolutely love your story - I read all the chapters over the weekend! Can't wait to see how he handles all these emotions. Thanks for writing!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:12 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever
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Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:05 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
Wow, a lot went down in this chapter.... I am so late to reading it due to the holidays I fell horribly behind on my reading and am finally making some progress :)
So wow, I have to say I can't really blame both of them. Bella was just plain stupid for leaving and not talking to Edward first and Edward needs to deal with his pain and move on... So stubborn the two of them! :)
I think it's kinda great that Edward is off to kill them all, he's at his best and nothing like taking down the jerks who did this to make you feel better :)
I am curious to see what will happen next. I wasn't sure if it would be best for them to have a boy or a girl but it seems like the boy offers way more choices for them I am curious to see what Edward does. And how will it all go down... Will Bella and the Baby be okay before and after birth while Edward is off killing??? How will she handle his leaving and what about Kate??? Maybe she falls for Seth??? :)))))
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:15 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
suck ass sucks ass.......... you saved everyone but they are still out there.. you are new mooning me..... YUK!! and carlisle you are still a bastard you can't see any qualities to like in bella F you buddy!! she is the strongest woman you have ever seen.... please get ed's head back where it should be even demon is more reasonable then he is!!! can't wait for the update and read all the outtakes!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:28 AM Title: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells
let's kill those mofos!!!! and don't let jas or ed or em get hurt... everyone else can....
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:13 AM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
go get her fool and you thought she just left you, you are a piece of work to think that she told you she loved you forever! i am so disappointed in you!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:02 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
stupid stupid biotch!!! damn see you lulled us and here it is.... tell me the rath of edward cullen is coming......
Date: 15 Jan 2011 4:39 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
no shit they are going to make their move and bella is going to get hurt and i am going to be as crushed as ed!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 4:08 AM Title: I Would Die for You
don't lull me you are lulling us and then you are going to spring it on us and we won't be ready for it
Date: 15 Jan 2011 3:54 AM Title: My December
ok you are really really scaring the shit out of me please tell me you aren't going to kill everyone..... i can't read on if that is the case!! please please don't do that!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 3:31 AM Title: Blood is pumping
knew it i knew it was her..... damn it!! please please don't do this!!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 2:52 AM Title: Holy Night
you better let edward get them quick because they don't deserve to live.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 2:42 AM Title: Silent Night
ok that was really really bad please tell me they don't get bella and please tell me edward gives them the death the deserve....
Date: 15 Jan 2011 1:30 AM Title: I'll Always Come Home
yeah right the minute he promises he will leave!! thanks for the hint!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 10:50 PM Title: We Gonna Run This Town
it's too bad bella had to find out the hard way to listen to edward... stupid.. jasper man what up with that!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 9:01 PM Title: All My Daughters For a Son
WTF where is jasper he would NEVER leave her he better be OK!!!!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 8:36 PM Title: Sin
what does he want to do with her? cut her open and crap whil he f-s her? i am confused is he that much of a sexual deviant?
Date: 14 Jan 2011 8:21 PM Title: I Trusted You
damn ed you need some serious help!! you are f-ing CRAZY!!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 8:06 PM Title: Same In The End
knew it! i knew she would be pissed at him!!! i thought it was going to get out but i thought it would be awhile. that was fast. ed is going to be devestated in alice won't forgive him
Date: 14 Jan 2011 7:36 PM Title: Somewhere in the Middle
ok esme and james... wow that could blow up bad and i have feeling it is going too... not good not good alice is goint to freak out and be mad at ed for not telling her!!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 1:20 PM Title: What Is Normal Anyway?
damn girl you better tell all!!! this is not good
Date: 14 Jan 2011 6:02 AM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play
cool hate to say it but he deserved it!!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 4:48 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever
ok it's going to be interesting. i don't think aro is going to stay peaceful!! they better have killed jacob because he will come back to get them i am sure.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 12:13 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
OMFG!!!! i love this story! but its sad how edward was kinda harsh to a pregnant bella... even though i understand why edward was like that, its still sad!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:18 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
omg. Tears are all over my laptop, which im sure is not a good thing, and I will clean it up as soon as im done typing this. I have so much faith in you that edward will be okay. Please dont let me down. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:49 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
i cant wait till the next chapter so i hope you update soon.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:39 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
WELL I THINK IT'S REALLY MESSED UP THAT EDWARD IS LEAVING AND BELLA HAS LITTLE TIME TILL IT'S TIME FOR THE BABY TO COME SHE WILL NEED HIM SHE LOVES HIM SO MUCH HE HAS HURT HER SO MUCH, I KNOW SHE HURT HIM BY LEAVING TO BUT IT WASN'T TO LEAVE HIM IT WAS TO GO TO HER FATHER HE SHOULD TRY TO HAVE SOME UNDERSTANDING OF THAT FACT. WILL BELLA GET SICKER WHEN SHE FINDS OUT EDWARD HAS GONE? I WANT TO CRY FOR THEM THERE LOVE THE BABY EDWARD DOESN'T SEEM TO WANT ALL OF IT IT'S SO SAD. I WISH THERE WAS A WAY YOU COULD OR WOULD LET ME KNOW HOW OFFTEN YOU UP DATE. I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY AND AM WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:01 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
WOW, just wow!
Great story - I feel so sad for them. Please let Jasper or Emmet talk som sence into Edward and have Alice help Bella...
Looking forward for next update.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 8:15 AM Title: My List
OH I LOVE YOUR STORY I THINK THIS IS MY FIRST REVIEW I DON'T DO A LOT OF REVIEWS WHEN I AM SO BEHIND ON A NEW STORY TO ME AND I AM BEHIND ON THIS ONE BUT I WILL CATCH UP I GOT ANGRY AT CARLISLE FOR WANTING TO KILL BELLA I UNDER WHY HE FEELS THAT WAY BUT SHE HASN'T DONE ANY THING TO THEM TO BE KILLED FOR, EDWARD NEEDS TO KEEP HIS HEAD IN THE GAME SO TO SPEAK SO HE CAN DO HIS JOB AND STILL BE WITH BELLA AND KEEP HER SAFE ALL AT THE SAME TIME.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 2:40 PM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between
oh.my.god!!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 1:46 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever
OH GOD, JACOB'S DEAD...I'M SO HAPPY!!!
Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:05 PM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
is that really it?? or can i have a sequel PLEASE??????? Love it, thanks soooo much for sharing :) xx
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:36 PM Title: Somewhere in the Middle
MIstakes or not...this is a very good story. It keeps my interest riveted on the screen.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 8:18 PM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play
Wow! you write really good. It hurt just reading the story so far, but I'm hooked. Good job!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 4:30 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
I hope you update soon, cant wait to see what happens!
Date: 11 Dec 2010 9:52 PM Title: I'll Always Come Home
wow..i am only this far but this chapter is by far my favourite...WOW
Date: 10 Dec 2010 1:04 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
Oh this was sad. Edward is struggling with so much but then so is Bella. Betrayal, love, anger, sadness and the upcoming birth of their child. I am very surprised at the change in Carlisle he actually seems to be trying to help her. I like that. It shows his human side. Didn't know he had one. As for Kate still not sure I trust her but she is trying to support Bella. I like how Alice stood up to him. PLease update soon & keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:41 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
great chapter :)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:32 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
What a moving chapter. I feel for Carlisle, he really loves Esme. I think Edward is a plonker, does he think Bella had it easy for the last few months? Also him running away and not telling her until he has gone is not a good thing for their relationship, hope she doesn't take it lying down, really lookng forward to the next chapter.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:35 PM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
wow that was hard! edward is such a douche can i beat him please? i hope he finally comes to his senses n stop acting like an ass, i wish a painfull n slow death 4 the remaining volturi pretty please? please help them find their way back together is killing me! :( s boy yay a cutie :) i miss u on twitter wr r u? xoxo
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:14 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever
LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED ITTT:) it wasss soo gooodd , please keep writing and keep up the good workk:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:27 AM Title: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
Wow. I know you've got things going on, and this last chapter just went up but I need you to update soon. I am loving this story! (I cried over this chapter :( )
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:19 AM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
Poor Edward. Poor Bella. Carlisle knew? hmm, maybe not.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 2:57 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Aww crap. I knew it was coming, but still.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 2:45 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
First, I have to wonder why anyone would want you to change this story. True, it is full of disgusting and deplorable acts of violence that I hope no one condones. It is, however, a work of fiction. And a damn good one, too. It's owning me right now! So, it's getting ready to hit the fan, eh? Bring it on.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 1:29 AM Title: Blood is pumping
OMG!!!!! I kinda thought it might be her..damn.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 1:02 AM Title: Holy Night
When Edward gets his hands on them...WoW.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 12:48 AM Title: Silent Night
OMG Demetri deserves everything he's gonna get!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 11:32 PM Title: We Gonna Run This Town
Good, I think she understands now.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 11:11 PM Title: All My Daughters For a Son
oooh! That was evil. Good thing I don't have to wait. I hope Bella learns when to keep her mouth shut. Alice or Rose should explain things to her!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 10:46 PM Title: Sin
The build up was fantastic and you didn't drop the ball here, either. Glad Alice has forgiven E.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 10:29 PM Title: I Would Die for You
I just love your mind, sometimes there is almost too much violence and gore; HOWEVER, then you have this inner monologue with the Demon's and Monster's and you can't help but laugh, so I say....BRAVO!!! you're just FanTabUlous~!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 10:10 PM Title: Same In The End
Hopefully Alice will come to see that Edward was protecting her.