[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:31 AM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
oh my, a baby? edward's going to be so mad when he finds out she was blackmailed into leaving and is going to have his baby and being torchered, and all he did was sulk like a baby. please please try and update soon!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I hope to have the next chapter out at the same time next week. Hopefully. Thanks again! :-)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:21 AM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
Redemption for Esme, possibly. Good for her. I hope that Edward doesn't kill her for her part in this. She doesn't deserve the peace that would come with death.
How in hell are they keeping Charlie alive? Seems almost unreal that he can live through so much torture for so long.
I hope Edward gets to Bella soon. I think she may go mad otherwise.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey you! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Charlie is still alive through a series of drugs and careful planning on Demetri's part. It is actually quite surprising just how much torture and pain one person can live through, especially if their wounds and whatnot are being treated. How Charlie is still sane is beyond me...... He's just a tough cookie I guess. LOL. Thanks again for the reviews. :-)
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:02 AM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
Oh my freaking God! How much do I love you right now? That's right, oddles and bundles. That. Is. How. Much!!
I have to say I guessed that Ms Swan (soon I hope to be Cullen) was up the duff from your A/N but oh how I loved her finding out for herself. I do love a preggers Bella for some reason (Even though I hate Bella). I especially like DaddyMobward that's always a great combination.
A little disappointed that there wasn't more gore in this chapter hehe but it was still amazing, less about the blood and guts and more about the mind games which can still be pretty freaking scary, I tell ya!
I'm hoping the next update will be like... tomorrow? Too soon? Ok, well I hope it's soon :D Cos I can't WAIT for Esme to spill the beans and for Edward to go all macho, psycho I-want-my-fiancee-back-you-sick-mother-fuckers on us!
Esme better not be informing Edward of the bun he has cooking in Bella's oven though lol I can totally picture his face if he just walked in on her during his gallant rescue, jaw dropping open as he sees his bubba for the first time. Anyway, enough of what I want. It's your story hehe and I know that I'll love it any which way but loose!
Kate, freaking awesome. I'm so pleased Bella has a bud on the inside and that she risked herself time and again to help Bella.
Esme, you gotta hate her really but also just love the crazy woman, just a little bit mind :D I'm glad she's pulled her head out of her ass and is realising that she never really lost her son but she may well do when he finds out the extent of her treachery.
Aro is a psychopath but then that's pretty canon really isn't it? LOL
And Demetri... I could just eat him up. Seriously, I LOVE that little maniac. I'd marry him in a heartbeat. It would probably be the last time my heart beat but I'd still do it. You gotta love the dark, dangerous guy who hears the voice of his 'brother' in his head. I hope we get to hear from Demetri and Felix again uber soon.
And I'm also hoping that Edward has to shed a little blood during his rescue. What can I say? I'm a drama slut and I love the mini heart fail that comes with the sexy boy being injured (just so long as it's not gravely)
Anywho, I'm gonna shut up now cos I could seriously talk the hind legs off of a donkey. Probably the longest review in the history of.. Well, long reviews!
Love ya, love 'Edward's Clan', love Demetri, loving this chapter.
Awesome
Keep it up
Oh and I really am shutting up now...
But first, I don't mind too much if Bella doesn't happen to make it to the end of this story, that what totally not upset me, not in the least.
Team Tyler's Van!!
Woo!
Ok, I'm going.
Love fallanydeeper
Author's Response:
LOL Dont you DARE shut up!!! I love your reviews and hearing your thoughts. LOL. You and Cinnamontwist (my bestie and lifepartner. lol) are such strange little lovlies for digging Demetri like you guys do, but don't doubt for a second that he doesnt love the attention. LOL I was amused to hear the term 'Team Tyler's Van' that one had me bloody laughing. Poor Bells, no one likes her much anymore.
Thanks so much for the review and I hope to have the next chappie out this time next week. Take care my lovely. :-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:56 PM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
OH MY GOD....Greenaway....where do I even begin??!!!??!!
First off, I love how you are getting us thru the angst quickly by speeding up the timeframe and not drawing it out; I could literally kiss you for it!!
Most importantly, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE that Bella is pregnant!! It is so perfectly brilliant and holy shit, the timing was awesome!!! Seriously your brain amazes me with the shit you come up with! What a friggen shocker and who would of thought Kate would step up to the plate and help her out!!
So awesome; I can't wait to see how Edward is going to rescue Bella & the Baby and OMG, I can't wait to see his reaction to finding out she is pregnant! I want Kate to be rescued too and go live with the Cullens and then I want Edward & the Clan to kick some motherfucking Volturi ASS!!!
Bring it on BB!!!! This was a great chapter and you did a really great job moving us along seamlessly!!
I will be of course anxiously awaiting the next chappie as always!!
Author's Response:
LOL, awwww. I love your reviews. Im not a big one on useless angst. I'm always of the mindset, 'use what you need and leave the rest'. LOL. Plus Im just a big freaking sucker for a Happy ending. LOL. Next chappie same time next week I HOPE.
Thanks again sweets, your reviews kick motherfucking ass! LOL
Greenaway
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:50 PM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
OMG!!!! hurry with more!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the coffee Cups! Same time next week I hope. Im off to start the next one now!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:39 PM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
I really didn't want to read this chapter because I literally hate Isabella right now for what she did to Edward and Alice but it was kinda like trying to look away from a train wreck. I just had to read it. I feel no sorrow for Isabella, she did this to herself but I do feel very bad for the baby and Edward and Alice. I am not sure if or how you can put this back together but time will tell. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I have a plan. LOL. Im a firm believer in Happy Endings (braveheart totally gutted me for example.) and there WILL be one in this story. Thanks for reviewing and reading even though you didnt want to. I appreciate that so much. Next update next week I hope. Thanks again. :-)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:28 PM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
oh please tell me you're gonna be able to update again soon! I'm on the edge of my seat here after that chapter and the ending!! :)
Author's Response:
LOL I hope to update this time again next week. Thanks so much for the review and Im glad you are enjoying the story! :-)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:00 PM Title: Friends in Unlikely Places
Wow...awesome chapter
Looking forward to the next update
Author's Response:
Hopefully I will be updating this time next week. thanks so much for the review. :-)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:21 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
OH my life partner its so lucky you have the most kick ass readers who are willing to stay with you through the next torturous chapter LOL...You know I'll be here till the end :)....Awesomest chapter, I bow down to your exceptional writing skills...A too mecci lemon and fak I love me an evil Esme....YAY YOU xxx
Author's Response:
You better be here. LOL. I know where you live. LOL xxxxxx
Date: 03 Oct 2010 5:46 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
OMG can i really say that ii DONT LIKE U VERY MUCH RIGHT NOW_? no im kidding babe wow dificult chap this, one esme is a fucking bitch and i hate hher shall we give her a slow painful death? i think so lol i liked it im still curious was the E thing a set up? uhm update soon and come bk to twitter muAH~!
Author's Response:
LOL Yes you can tell me how much you dont like me. LOL. xxx It was a difficult chapter and the next one is up now. Im sorry with how late this is and Im on twitter now if you are on and want to say hi. LOL. :-)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:08 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Yuck, this is a sad, bad part of the story, can't imagine it can improve much, but am still hoping for some sort of HEA, I'm thinking the next will be very nasty.
Hope you update soon.?
Author's Response:
LOL Ive updated today and im sorry about the lateness of this response. There WILL be an HEA. Definately, I couldnt handle it if there wasnt. LOL
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:56 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
oh no what is going to happen? fantastically well written chapter thanks tracy
Author's Response:
LOL i cant tell you what happens! Thanks so much for reviewing and I apologise that this is so late. :-)
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:39 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
reat stuff, love this story thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Sorry Im so late at replying. :-)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:26 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
OMG, I knew this was happening but Demetri cant hurt Bella. And Edward cant fall apart or he will get everyone killed including himself and Bella.
Author's Response:
LOL next chapter is up now. Sorry for the lateness of this reply. :-)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 2:44 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
ACK! Need the next chapter and fast ;-) Loving this story, keep it coming!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 5:54 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
enjoying the story love how different it is!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 3:58 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
This family is really fucked up. So Bella's going to be tortured, Charlie will eventually die, Edward will go insane, but will Esme die? Hmmmm. After this how can they all stay together. It's not one big happy family. Rose isn't going to put up with this kind of traitors will she? So many questions.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 4:45 AM Title: I'll Always Come Home
i think its going to be interesting to c what happens while he is away
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. :-)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:44 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
the lemon was hot !!!! Damn Esme shes such a skank i hate her!
Author's Response:
LOL no one seems to like Esme. Thanks for the review and my apologies for the lateness of this reply
Date: 28 Sep 2010 12:46 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Oh man Edward will unleash a new kind of hell. Esme will be first then He will very slowly torture Demetri until he begs for mercy which of course Edward won't grant. I do not hate you for this chapter. I knew there would be a lot of pain beg=fore there could be a happy ending. It is part if Edwards world. He should have listened to his gut. Now it will eat at him for a very long time. Please update soon. Amazing work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thanks for the understanding. I appreciate it and I apologise for the lateness of this response. The next chappie is up now. Thanks again. :-)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 10:15 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever
I know it's not likely but I really hope Demetri doesn't get a chance to harm Bella before Edward gets there. I think she has been through enough pain, can't wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I love your screename. Lol. Next chapter is up now and I apologise for the lateness of this reply. Thanks for reviewing I appreciate it so much. :-)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Greenaway
The beginning was sooooo full of love for each other!!!!
But so not a nice ending. (Cory pouts in the corner)
Still looking forward to see how you play out this story!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
LOL Sorry Cory. Thanks for the review. The next chapter is up now, sorry it took me so long to respond to this. :-)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 9:27 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Wow this was so lovely in the begining when Edward was confessing his undying love for her and making love to her and then it all went to shit. I knew the Riley thing was a set up. What I dont understand is why Carlse is so evil to him. He is is dad that trained him to be who he is so why does he hate him so much? I dont think anyone is prepared for the wrath that Edward is going to be bringing home. I cant wait to get more updates. I was starting to worry that you had stopped writing and i am so glad that I was wrong.
Author's Response:
Carlisle wants his son to be the best. He has high expectations of his son and Edward finding love was never among them. There is an outtake called 'My Prodigal Son' which is from Carlisle's POV if you are interested. thanks for reviewing and Im sorry this response was so late. The next chapter is up now too. :-)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 9:03 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Geez, Bela is so dumb, now Edward has to try and rescue her. Charlie was obviously a goner already. Bella could have gone to Jasper telling him that Esme knew where Charlie was. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. The next chapter is up now. And apologies for the lateness of this response. :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 10:26 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Oh God NO!!! please let Edward save her and get rid of the woman who used to be his mother!!! please!!!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. The next chapter (which is up now) may surprise you. LOL. Sorry for how late this is. :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 10:00 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
OMG!!! I want to strangle Esme with my own hands not that is to good for her. I cant wait to see what happens when Edward finds out his mom is the one that lured her out!!! there will be hell to pay!! Please Please update soon!!!
Author's Response:
LOL. thanks for the review. :-)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 8:47 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
OmG, that girl is stupid sometimes! I sure hope they find out where she is soon
Date: 26 Sep 2010 7:30 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
So it begins. Esme maybe crazy but she is not stupid. Vengence is a bitch. Can't wait for whats next.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!! OMG! Love it...hate it! Can't I do both!
Author's Response:
You can love it and Hate it too. LOL. Thanks for reviewing the new chapter is up now. :-) sorry this is so late by the way.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:44 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
What a fucking bitch....!! Oh i can't wait to see Carlisle's face when he learns the truth....!
I feel so sorry for Edward and I have a strong feeling that the demon is going to take over now and there will be blood... Lot's of it!
Not that I am againstit in anyway ***dark chuckle***
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Sorry this response is so late. The next chapter is up already if you havent seen it yet.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:02 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Okay, you said there would be a happy ending...but for WHOM?
Author's Response:
HEA for Edward and Bella. LOL. My heart would break if there wasnt. LOL. Thanks for the review and I apologise for how late this response is
Date: 26 Sep 2010 12:30 PM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
great chapter. hate that edward thinks that bella just left him. damm that esme but she obviously still loves and misses her innocent edward before he changed. i will let the HEA carry me through the bad parts. love this story
Author's Response:
Lol, The HEA is carrying me through too. thanks for the review and I apologise for how late this response is.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 9:30 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
noooooooooooooo! oh god! you can't stop there, come on!
Please don't let Demetri rape her, Bella have seriously been through enough of that
Edwards is going to be destroyed when he gets the message of Bellas whereabouts. I hope i goes into assassin-mode, drives to Aros place and kills everyone... fuck you, son of a bitch Aro (and Demetri)
Please tell me you have the next chapter ready and you will post it ... now!
Awesome chapter, and loved Edward and Bellas sweet moment in the beginning. Good that Edwards showed her why he could never train her
10/10
Author's Response:
Sorry this reply is so late. Thanks for the review! I appreciate it so much. :-) Oh and the next chapter was posted today if you havent seen it already. lol
Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:40 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Aww cmon!! Why??? I know you said there's going to be a HEA but gah!! This right here is torture lol I hope Edward doesn't think she left cuz she doesn't love him anymore..he'll find her right away right? Right?!!
Author's Response:
LOL IM SORRY!!! Well, not really cause it was the way the story was always going to go, but Im sorry its torturing you. lol. I cant tell you what happens without ruining the story, but hold onto that HEA. LOL thanks for reviewing and sticking with me. :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:25 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Right now ...
Not liking this ...not at all ... I'm conting on that HEA ending that you promised.
Author's Response:
You will definately get it too. We just have a little way to go before we get there. thanks for reviewing and sticking with the story, I appreciate it. :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:40 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Well first off, let me thank your brilliant generous mind Greenaway and apparently thanks are owed to MistyDarling too for the lovely lemon you gave us before the proverbial shit hit the fan....LOL
The pic of Esme goes perfectly with this chapter!!
I am seriously worried about Edward's reaction to Bella being gone; I don't like a weakened Edward, but we all know that is the whole point of the Volturi going after Bella...to bring Edward to his knees, which apparently they are succeeding, at least at the current moment anyway!
But I am going to have faith in Edward's demon and look forward to the vengence that he will hopefully set into motion....bring it on BB!!!!
And I for one, could never hate you; not when you provide such a fascinating, entertaining, thrilling, addicting ride!!! I am strapped in right to the end BB!!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks! Im blushing! I'm glad the lemon made you happy, I never would have sent them apart without a good shag first anyway. Just seems cruel not to. LOL. The pic of Esme drove me nuts, do you know how hard it is to find a pic of that woman not smiling or looking all happy? That was the only sinister looking one I could find, so thanks for the kudos, it was a real bitch to hunt out! lol. I dont wanna ruin the story, but like I have said to everyone, there IS a happy ending. Eventually. LOL. I'm glad you could never hate me honey, you are one of my best readers and I LOVE seeing your reviews pop up. Seriously, i was sitting there waiting for Sleeping_Beauty247 to pop up in my inbox! LOL. Im working on the next chappie now and I tell you....... Its gonna shock the pants off ya! lol. Thats all im saying. :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:40 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, im writing the next chappie now. :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:29 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Okay I have a confession..... I am really excited to see the drama back again *hides smile* I just love to see Edward's monster come out and play, what can I say I am a beast myself :) hehe
And seriously I want to smack Bella cause what in the world was she thinkin???? How in hell can she help Charlie in any way shape or form all she has done is gone and made everything worse.
Can't wait for the next update and to watch Edward just loose it and go balistic it's going to be full of awesomeness :))))))
Author's Response:
and we all love that about you my dear! lol. yeah, Bella is coping a lot of flak for her decision, but hey, no one is perfect and we all make mistakes right? lol. I'm actually working right now on the next chapter and even though im going cross eyed from staring at my screen too long and probably developing RSI, I'm soldiering on! LOL. thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it HEAPS.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 3:51 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Oh man, I am a little afraid of what's coming next. But I'd be more afraid if I were Demetri. I can't even imagine the revenge the demon will wreak on him. Hope you won't leave us hanging for too long.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey Balti, Nah, I wont leave ya hanging. lol. Im working on the new chappie as we speak. thanks for the review :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:46 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Wow. Just, wow. Edward is going to lose his shit. And Esme. She just needs to die already. I feel nothing but rage towards her. And at this point, I don't care if Edward kills his own mother. She's not been a mother to him in a long time, anyways. Hard to read, but very good. And I'm wondering if Carlisle will change his tune about his wife one he finds out what she did. I feel sick.
Author's Response:
Well we were both worried about what your reaction would be to this chappie and I don't know about you but I'm relieved. lol. I think the hate you have for Esme is far outweighing anything else, so thats good! Hold onto your esme hate! LOL. thanks for reviewing and sticking with me aerobee82. I really do appreciate it as well as your reviews. :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
ok right now i'm thinking just go ahead and let demetri fuck bella up cuz she kinda deserves it for being a stupid bitch anyway.
Author's Response:
Bella has messed up yes. She has made a bad decision, she wont be dying though cause it would totally wreck my promise of a happy ending. lol. Thanks for the very passionate review. I appreciate it hugely. :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:14 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Oh my god... you can't leave me hanging like this..... I hve to know what is going on....
Author's Response:
I'm writing the next chapter right now! I wont leave you hanging long! thanks for reviewing
Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:55 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
you loaded this twice. I guess you know now. Cliff hanger!!!
Hurry up.
Author's Response:
I hadn't known, thank you for pointing that out. When I tried to upload the chapter earlier it went completely crazy. LOL I nearly have the next chapter done and Im pretending that there was a 'please' in front of the 'hurry up'. LOL. Thanks for the review I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:33 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Oh no! Bella has been captured. Hopefully someone will find her soon. I wonder if the blood left on the car will give a clue to Edward? Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Yay! More coffee cups! The next update wont be far off, im nearly done, I didnt want to keep everyone in misery for too long. LOL. Thanks for the reviews and the coffee cups.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:16 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
Did all of the alcohol Esme drinks finally pickle her brain? I mean, I know that Carlisle is the root of all evil in the Cullen family... shouldn't she be taking her pain out on him and not her son that Carlisle single handedly ruined in her eyes? She's got some messed up logic. Scheming against her own with the enemy, sending an innocent girl to meet an almost certain painful death. I know there is a happy ending promised... I'm just trying to figure out Esme's twisted mind. She was a little cryptic when she spoke of her son. I'm thinking she means to get him killed. '...and the mother of the year award goes to...' lol ;)
Author's Response:
LOL, yes the alcohol and perscription medication has done a number on Esme. But so has the world she is in. She knew what Carlisle was when she married him, what he was capable of. When she saw her son following the same path as Carlisle, it killed her. Her mind is now a distorted, twisted mess of blame and pain (excuse the rhyme. lol) and in her eyes, her son is dead and gone. She sees the monster Carlisle created in her beloved son's place and feels she owes it to her son to give him justice. To kill the monster. It is crazy and insane, but that is exactly the state of her mind.
Yes there will be a happy ending and Im laughing my ass off about Esme's 'Award'. LMAO.
Thanks for reviewing and readings.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:10 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
oh my, i really hope someone just shoots esme, she's one insane chick - really lost it this time. hopefully edward finds/gets bella before it gets too bad. but your bella can take more then most would, seeing her history with jake. can't wait to see the next chapter
Author's Response:
Everyone wants Esme dead. LOL. I guess i can see why and yes, she has really, really lost it. Thanks for reading and reviewing and the coffee cups. I freaking love those things.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 12:55 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
no freaking WAY! what a mess, do i even wanna see how psychotic Edward will be hen he gets back. he is gonna so kill his mother. the blood, Bella's blood in the boot of the car! will Edward be able to tell???? waiting impatiently patient...lol for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
LOL, thanks for the coffee cups, those things are so cool! Im nearly finished the next chapter and once it is done i will post without delay. Thanks for all the consistent reviews, I appreciate it alot.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 12:14 AM Title: The Difficult Choices We Make
WHY!?! Why do people not follow their instincts? Edward knew something was wrong, he should have trusted his gut and not left Bella. And Bella! Shame on you for letting that crazy woman trick you! I have a feeling this is going to get very bad before it gets better.
Author's Response:
LOL. I'm astounded that I still got the coffee cups for this chappie!!! Thanks! I wish I could say you were wrong, but............. LOL. I will promise a happy ending though.
Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it especially since it is such a difficult chapter to read.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
uh oh I have a bad feeling about the Congo too! Although I have to admit that I am kinda excited the drama and torture is coming back, is it wrong to admit that I really like it??? :)
Man still loving Bella's ring, although I have to admit I would have wanted Edward to buy me something a little more flashy like maybe some diamonds and jade or something. :)
Looking forward to the action and drama and Edward kicking some serious ass :)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 7:26 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
So was that shout out for me? if so thanks! lol
Oh Edward...ok I was thinking that he might have mistakenly switched the vials but glad he didn't..
NO!! Edward can't go! something bad is going down isn't it? gah!!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 10:58 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
omg!!! hi huny ive missed u im sorry it took this long to rvw i dont get alerts that u ipdated! ty so much 4 rmbrgin me u better b bk on twitter! so with the chap i freaking loved iT! do i hv 2 say more? u fucking rule! jiji damn Edward is good an assasin n bella didnt even see it! thats awesome in my book, the little pixie when she wantsx somthng what can i say? omg i feel the shits bout to hit the fan isnt it? dont hurt E too much lol, and why r u not updating is everything ok? lots of love 4 u babe muah!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 9:37 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Good Lord, Edward is right, this trip will mar the beginning of the end. They'll get Bella when he leaves. He sure will kill Riley for this.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 9:03 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Oh Edward was so smooth. Very professional. However he should listen to his instinct. Something bad is coming. Bella was sweet when she wanted to rescue that woman. Edward helped her in a way. Now for the drama. I know you have this all planned out and I don't expect you to change it. I just want to see the whole Clan happy at the end. Minus Carlisle & Esme. Awesome story no matter what.
Marguerite
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:02 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
yes, greed getting in the way of things, well that & being a murdering sociopath.
Thanks for the update;)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:12 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Enjoying the story.
Really I am
Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:34 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
The demon was funny in this chapter. I like how he has humor.
Waiting....
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:46 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Rut Roh Shaggy. The shit's going to hit the fan, I think.
Love it. Not surprised this is the last happy chappy for a while though, I was starting to wonder about all the drama and where it was hiding.
Can't wait to see what's up your sleeve.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 09 Sep 2010 7:45 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Don't they say you should always go with your gut? He is obviously thinking with his big ego instead, isn't he? I will be the first to say that I am extremely nervous about the impending doom you are going to roll out, but for someone to say they think you should change it, that's just B.S. To the ninth degree. I do hope that it doesn't give me too many nightmares though.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 6:30 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
I wonder if Edwards feeling has any validity? I hope Edward is wrong so that nothing bad happens. Edward sure does have great acting skills. Thanks for the update.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:55 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
I like how Edward's POV was written when it came to the whole situation with in Japan. It was almost comical how he played everything out and was excited about it
Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:25 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
I like your story line and will continue to follow. I like the edginess. So a world of hurt is coming to Edward? Hmmmm, will Carlisle save him? Oh and Charlie's gotta make an appearance, right?
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:31 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
argh edward is going and bella is alone!!
shit!
now aro will make his move, damn!!
but such an awesome chapter.. bella and edward are so sweet and in love
edwards plan worked like a charm ;) nice job
your writing is as always flawless and amazing
10/10
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:54 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
oh Greenaway....you are surely setting us up nicely for what is to come...*smirks wickedly - bring it on BB!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:10 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
OMG!!! Why oh why do people not listen to their gut instinct??? I know, 'because there would be no story...' lol
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:01 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever
I love the premise. I can't wait to read the rest.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 6:04 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Great chapter as always.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:30 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
I love how Alice is with Edward... she has that boy wrapped around her finger.. I love it.. she brings out the sweet side of Edward.. i don't even see Bella bringing all that out like Alice does.. they brother/sister relationship is just something to be jealous of..lol
Poor Bella....my heart goes out for this girl..the only good thing she has going for her is Edward. she lost everything else and that one thing.. may end up hurting her worse of all. I so got what she was saying in the car.. I hope Edward understood somewhat.. It's not something you can explain. But damn her she almost ruined the hit for Edward and I know it wasn't her fault and i know how she felt bad for that other woman but she knows enough of "Edward's world" that she just can't get vocal like that and cause scenes..
I think i love cocky Edward as much as I do sensentive Edward.. the way he was all smug cuz he pulled off a kill with Bella right there... had to smile.. too good..
But damn it for such a smart, cocky man he is stupid.. if he knows Congo is a trick or something doesn't feel right DON"T GO.. i bet nothing happens to him . this is when crazy mama will show Bella the photo of daddy or whatever and they will get Bella when Edward is out of the country.....grrrr..
I so can't wait to read the next chapters..coming up ... this is gonna be so good and I know i will cry and be pissed.. but bring it on I am ready..
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:15 PM Title: I Would Die for You
I honestly can not remember if I reviewed this chapter or not.. But I love how Edward wants to try and "be normal ' for Bella.. for all the fucked up horrible things the sperm donor did (nope what call him the D or F word cuz he is not. Edward is still a kind hearted person.... Yea he maybe a ass to other ppl but if he loves you.........he would go to hell and back for you.......
Carlisle ............i hate him.......you know how I feel .....not going there.. just hope he dies too..
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:11 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
I loved this chapter. .I was laughing so hard while through the whole thing both times.. too funny..the whole bet omg you could so write a comedy. And of course cocky Edward things he has it "all under control" powder on his shoe.. putting the laundry in the dryer the pink clothes...
Then cooking dinner oh so funny. I am so happy Edward let he have the ring she wanted... all the snobs can suck it.. that's the ring she wanted that's the ring she should have had..
Okay poor Charlie... i really just wish he would die because I can't stand seeing him go through this torture.. he had enough he survived Jacob he doesn't deserve this ..maybe his heart will just give out...
Demetri is one sick ass son of a bitch.. and i can't wait to read about Edward killing him in the most slowest painful way possible.. I want what Felix went though to look like a walk in the park....
Have I told you I love this story........??? and you are one of the best author's for sure
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:17 PM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play
Talk about burning for revenge, I hope I never get on the wrong side of Edward and Jaspers demons. I loved the insight into Jaspers mind, and his feelings towards Carlisle. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially once Edward gets back to Bella, and confronts Carlisle.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 12:41 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Eek... I thought something was going to happen to Bella when he made himself sick. I'm freaked out by your a/n but... I have faith. ;)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 12:33 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Well I have complained so far and I am loving this story. I am sure who ever hurts Bella will have to answer to Edward so I am not worried too much. Well maybe a little. Poor Charlie has really suffered. I hope they dont do that to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 12:32 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Well reading your note at the top, had me wondering what you were doing. Well it is a story about a hit man.. Please they kill people not. You can not sugar cote that. Fiction and that is all to be said about that.
A strong story line is better than half a chapter each of just sex. I swear people just cut and paste that over and over.
You are doing well, slow but well.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:19 AM Title: Have You Seen My Innocence?
Oh god, I am so glad Jacob got what was coming to him. I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to this news.
I also love Bella and Edward inner voices, they are very entertaining.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:01 AM Title: Introducing The Demon
interesting, I just love how the next generation of the clan has bonded together to love and protect Bella. I can't wait to see how their relationships grow, and what Emmett has to offer to the mix, not to mention what happens when Carlisle and Edward have their talk.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:46 AM Title: Becoming Whole Again
Keeps getting better and better, I really hope Barlisle doesn't want Bella removed, because it looks like their is going to be at least four very over protective friends looking out for her. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:35 AM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between
I can't wait to see what happens when Edward and Bella come face to face, after everything she has been through, you have to wonder if she will be able to trust Edward and his family, yet alone love him. I can't wait to see how Carlisle reacts to Bella, nor can I wait to find out more about what happened to Esme.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:25 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever
Interesting twist, I find it interesting that the British government paid for a hit. I wonder just how bad the clan is, and just who their hits are, and what else they could be involved in. I can't wait to find out more about the organization, or the Cullen family.
I also can't wait to see what happens with Bella, obviously her and Rose will have alot in common, and I wonder if they will get along. I am looking forward to seeing what everyone thinks of her, and how they all get along.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:23 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Edward is so smooth..hmmm, I wonder what is going down in the congo I bet it is the volturi
Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:11 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Greenaway
Well it's nice to see Alice all a twitter planning the wedding!!! (hee, hee)
Loved how sly Edward was in the chapter and IMO I think it's a clue as to how Edward will be in the following up coming angsty chapter.
As for how you write your story. Of course that's up to you!!!!! Just remember us readers here need more of the story when you've got it ready!!!!
Cory
Date: 08 Sep 2010 2:20 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Oh noooo dont go Edward!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 2:05 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
I like the picture.
wow, alot going on. so i see you are telling us this is the calm before the storm chapter. i love that edward was still able to have the demon do his job and still be there with bella. it is good that he feels comfortable that the two lives can coexist with bella in his life. i love it. he was so able to pull it off and it was great.
alice got her wish to do there wedding. i am not looking forward to carlisle being told that they are getting married. i fear for her. it will not turn out good i fear. but i am hoping she still takes him with a grain of salt. she is so good at really not paying attention to him but at the same time she is well aware of what and how he feels.
oh i wish edward would listen to his gut instinct and follow it. he is letting himself know something doesn't seem right and he needs to listen. man oh man my mind is spinning thinking they are going to try and kill him or that they will make there move and get bella out of the house to come for charlie and she will be taken while edward is not there to protect her. esme and carlisle could care less so the volturi would have plenty of time to put there action into place. so i am thinking is riley working with the volturi. he is getting edward to come to him for help using them as an excuse so they will leave riley alone. if that is the case riley should know better than to make a deal with the devil. oh the hairs are standing up on my arms, i am liek edward i am not getting a good vibe from this. look out the shit is about to hit the fan. i have my boots on. thanx as always
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:41 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
it's a trap, it's a freaking TRAP!!! don't go!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:36 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
well first when i read that this was going to be the last happy chapter for a while i said, "GAH DAMNIT!" - but then again i feel kinda bad that all the previous chapters with torture and murder are considered the happy ones!!!! LMAO - ah i love it!!! i loved this chap - but no surprise there! ahhh making himself puke was so wicked and funny - but now seriously... E - i wanna slap the shit out of him for agreeing to go to Congo - ugh - bad stuff is coming!!
other than that... THANK YOU DOLL for the shout out - that was so unexpected but totally awesome! and also HI-FIVE for sticking to your guns and not changing your fic for anyone!!!
can't wait for your next post - i'll be faithful! loves!!!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:03 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Kick ass as always mate...Loved the Bella distraction and god the demon is now cemented as my favourite!!! Back to the Congo...Bring it on Babes I totally got your back... :) xxx
Date: 08 Sep 2010 12:02 AM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Great chapter!! I feel something big and ugly is going to happen soon!!! Bring it on!!! hehehehe
Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:15 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Great chapter. I smiled at Edward's inner monologue (at how smooth he is, being able to kill a man with Bella in the room) lol. He IS smooth. I feel badly for Bella, and how she misses her parents, even if she didn't really know them. Unfortunately, I have a feeling what I think is going to happen will happen. Not happy about it, but I will stick around. I'm thinking she will voluntarily leave Edward, when Demetri contacts her about her father... and that Edward won't know *why* she did it. Definitely don't expect, or want you to, change your story. But. I hate angst. I hate that it's coming. And I hate knowing that it's going to last for more than one chapter. Sorry, but you like honest. And I can't promise you my reviews will be nice.
Author's Response:
LOL , thank you for your honesty. It's all I ask. I hate not making you happy though, you've been such an awesome reader/reviewer, but you WILL get a happy ending to this story. PROMISE. I hope to write all the angsty chaps together so i can post them together quite quickly. I dont wanna drag out anyones torture. Thats Demetri's thing. LOL. thanks again for the review and for choosing to stick with the story. Greenaway
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:15 PM Title: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
I can see the need for more angst ya know cause the storuy has been all lollipops and balloons, slight sarcasm! But I really do not see Bella being dumb enough to go after a man even if he is her father that pretty much had nothing to do with her while she was with him. I do not see her picking him and putting those she loves now in danger!
Author's Response:
LMAO! Im not saying anything, except you will get a happy ending for this story. Promise. LOL
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:56 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
OMFG i loved the laundry and cooking - who knew a sick twisted story could be so fucking funny - you've got a fab combo of hot sex - suspense - violence - humor - drama - etc etc etc - fuck i love this story - and now demetri has felix as a voice in his head - damn this is awesome -
PLEASE FUCKING UPDATE SOON - I'M ALREADY HAVING WITHDRAWS - fuck you rock
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:53 AM Title: I Would Die for You
love you
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:51 AM Title: My December
rock on mother fucker!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:49 AM Title: Blood is pumping
omg the demon is hot - and scary hot - fuck hot - gawh this fic is so awesome
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:46 AM Title: Holy Night
holy hell - dude those guys are fucking twisted - and man i liked the part when felix was so freaked out because the little girl didn't make a sound - he said "children of the corn" and i cracked up - damn you've got one fucking twisted mind and i love it - so creative!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:44 AM Title: Silent Night
holy shit - this chapter was all over the place - e & b was soooo hot as always - and omg the demon is getting better and better - i loved the line "maybe... now just hear me out... but maybe.." it was so funny - i swear i don't know what's wrong with me - something major - and omg - demetri and felix are so fucking twisted - gah this is fucking awesome - it's like a major rush reading this story - i swear you rock!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:40 AM Title: Good to be Home
you're kinda fucking smart or something! i love this fic
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:38 AM Title: None So Corrupt as Those with Power
again - so fucking hot - and i find myself oddly loving the demon - omg i love when you do him - i know i probably have major fucking brain issues - but i just find the demon/edward so fucking hot -
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:36 AM Title: I'll Always Come Home
so fucking hot!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:35 AM Title: We Gonna Run This Town
this was an awesome chapter!!! i don't know why i found it so funny - but i loved the bathroom scene when bella blocked the door and yelled "occupied" - i just cracked up - who knows why?!?! and i loveeeee that bella went to e after he killed all those fuckers and said she loved him - that was awesome!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:32 AM Title: All My Daughters For a Son
you're so fucking awesome
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:31 AM Title: Sin
OMG i love this fic! love love love it!