[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:47 AM Title: Fathers and Sons
i love emmett - he cracks me up!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:46 AM Title: Pixies, Porsches and Promises
so exciting
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:46 AM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play
yikes!!! sick and awesome!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:45 AM Title: Have You Seen My Innocence?
so sad!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:45 AM Title: Introducing The Demon
fabulous!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:44 AM Title: Becoming Whole Again
awesome
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:44 AM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between
i'm loving what you're giving us! thanks
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:44 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever
i'm loving this fic so far
Date: 31 Aug 2010 9:35 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
great chapter, loved bella and edward carefree time, and its official demetri is an absolute nutter, thanks tracy
Date: 31 Aug 2010 8:48 AM Title: I Would Die for You
hey great chapter, nice to see bella and edward just on their own having fun thanks tracy
Date: 28 Aug 2010 11:39 AM Title: My December
great stuff, the plan has to go wrong for them, i hope it does thanks tracy
Date: 28 Aug 2010 10:43 AM Title: Blood is pumping
oh my god esme is the contact, how is the super observent carlisle not aware of this? the plot thickens, cant wait to read more, thanks tracy
Date: 28 Aug 2010 9:56 AM Title: Holy Night
another powerful chapter, edward has a lot to deal with two scared children i hope things are ok for them, thanks tracy
Date: 28 Aug 2010 9:34 AM Title: Silent Night
good god, a powerful chaper, demetri and felix are crazy taking on edward and the clan they barely made it out last time, love this story thanks tracy
Date: 25 Aug 2010 6:06 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Bloody hell... Charlie pov was eeemmm let's say illuminating ( I don't really know if this is the correct word but anyway...)
I do belive that D&F are in love...
xoxo
M
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:46 PM Title: I Would Die for You
Bloody hell!! I need to read the next one now!! I am honestly curious to see if he can!! lol
xoxo
MArianne
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:34 PM Title: My December
Carlisle's face must have been priceless indeed!! Awesome!!
xoxo
Marianne
PS Is it just me or not cause i think J&D were bloody in love??!!! ew...
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 9:28 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
PLEASE..PLEASE..PLEASE WHATEVER YOU DO WITH THE REST OF THE STORY PLEASE DON'T LET BELLA GET RAPED AGAIN OR DISFIGURED ANYWAY!! SHE LIVED THROUGH ENOUGH OF THAT WITH JACOB AND SHE IS SO HAPPY WITH EDWARD. IT WOULD TAKE HER FOREVER TO RECOVER FROM THAT IF SHE WERE TO EVEN SURVIVE IT.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 5:26 PM Title: Silent Night
Grusomely riveting. I love this story and I'm on pins and needles praying Edward saves Charlotte and Felix and Demetri don't get Bella.
You are a great storyteller/writer.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:03 AM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play
Damn....That was definitely some sweet revenge. People who are sexual predators deserve this type of torture in my opinion especially when it comes to children. So congrats on a job well done. You have a very creative imagination. Great Story plot.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:17 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Ohhhh I really really love that ring. Where did you find it?? I espeically love the cherry blossoms :)
Edward is just too cute with the pink clothes and burning down the kitchen. I have no idea how he would even melt the knobs I mean wow he must have been going for indoor bbq????
Poor Charlie I am curious to see what happens when Bella finds out they have him. :)
Author's Response:
Sent you the link for where I found it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Greenaway
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:45 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
OH poor charlie. hope edward gets them all. can't wait
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:55 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
I.Love.This.Story.
I was following it throughout it's fanfiction days and was so angry and sad that it got pulled from that site. I cannot tell you how happy I am that it is on here now :) This is definitely the story I most look forward to out of all that I have read, it's so different and I love, love, love assassin Edward :)!
Can't wait to read more!
-ZiggyLove
Author's Response:
LOL. Im totally loving your screename! So awesome, you will have to let me know how you came up with it! Thanks for following Edward's Clan and trust me, I have no real love lost for Fanfiction.net either. TWCSL is WAY more awesome. LOL
Greenaway
Date: 22 Aug 2010 2:42 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
They got a ring & are engaged, awe, sweet.
Alec should just get to it & off Demetri before it's too late. But I don't think he's smart enough to of figured that out, nor Aro.
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to next chapter;)
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:10 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Will Bella be violated again? I hope not..Love the story!!
I can't believe Esme..God,I hope Edward fucks her up ans Carlisle.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:32 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
I hate seeing Charlie in pain. I can't wait for Edward to get medieval on their asses!
Waiting for the update....
Date: 20 Aug 2010 8:32 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Edward can be so cute, lol. All the inner monologue about the Cleaning Agent?? LMAO. And Bella's reasoning was just great, she really needs a man, not a superhero. Hell, even the demon was laughing. She's making him vulnerable, but it feels so good, and it maes him HAPPY. like, real happiness and all. Just perfect.
And now with Charlie, Jesus, poor guy, that Demetri guy sure is a monster. This will destroy Edward now, since she will go to her dad. Will he let the monster take full control? 'cause that will be a bloodbath if we ever saw one. And there will be no escape for Esme, I get Carlisle loves her, but come on. And I hate that he says Bella is Edward's weakness, she kind of is, but also she's his best strength and wouldn't Carlisle do the same if it were Esme in that position? isn't Esme Carlisle's weakness too? I just think he's a hypocrite with this.
Nice chapter :)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:39 PM Title: Silent Night
Fuck! Please make the revenge so sweet that I shudder and shiver alot more than i am now. I love it, No moaning here. :D
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 7:15 AM Title: Holy Night
F is just as sick as D, dumb!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 7:07 AM Title: Silent Night
WOW, D is a nut case for sure!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:13 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Edward and his demon can be very entertaining when their guard is down.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 10:46 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
We needed to add it to the clothes. I walked past Bella with my container of powder and gave her a smirk. I knew what the fuck I was doing.
^^ LOL. I laughed out loud.
Excellent chapter. I'm still nervous, even more so with Demitri/Felix on the loose, and currently torturing Charlie. I feel so bad for Charlie.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:59 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
I'm really hoping that Bella knows better by now not to go by herself to save her dad....cuz realy??!?!?...she would die! Great chapter!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:52 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
I think what Bella did was honest. She wanted to show him that he is human and that she can and will take care of him. And the ring is beautiful. I am glad they had some fun together. They both deserve it. Demitri REALLY needs to be executed. There is no curing/helping that man. Please update soon as I have a feeling we will see a side of Edward that will scare Demitri.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Im sorry I didnt respond to you earlier on twitter, I'm still learning the ropes on that one.
Greenaway
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:46 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
My heart aches for Charlie *sniff,sniff*
Love the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:30 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
amazing :D
i have been waiting for this chapter for so long ;) and i loved it
10 / 10
Date: 19 Aug 2010 3:12 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Please let Bella be smart and talk with Edward or Jasper instead of falling into Demetri's trap. Show how smart she can be and let her use the Clan set a trap for Demetri instead.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:17 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Wow Demetri has some serious problems but the chapter was great. I am getting anxious over here, just let me know if they are going to hurt Bella or not; I cant stand the suspense. I hope they dont get to far. I am going to stop reading if they dont, I CANT STAND IT. Just needed to vent a lil but very good chapter, thanks forp posting it
Author's Response:
LOL. All I can tell you is that this story will have a HEA. I've always said that there will be some drama along the way though.... thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you can stick with the story, you will be happy in the end. :-)
Greenaway
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:28 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Greenaway
Loved the washing maching story!!! Pink clothes!!! (hee, hee)
Great ring choice by Bella!!!
The ending has me scared!!!!! That Demetri is certifiably nuts!!!!
More when you can please!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Hey Cory!
Yep, as soon as I have done the next one, you guys will have it. My beta Slyt is awesome, she does a really fast turn around!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:24 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
You really do,like blood, it really is a little scary. Do you think of these things on your own, and if so, do you want to do them. Maybe you need a little help, or just less time watching movies like SAW.
Author's Response:
LMAO! Yes, I do think of these things on my own, though sometimes my husband will help talk me through the logistics. Apparently, some of the tortures my mind comes up with are just not practical! LOL. No, I have no desire to ever act out any of said tortures (believe it or not, I'm a little squeamish around blood!). It's all fiction and none of my characters reflect my personal state of mind. LOL.
I am literally holding my sides and laughing while I try to type this. LOL. You aren't the first person to suggest I get 'some help' and I sincerely doubt you will be the last!!!!I hope not anyway, I kinda take that as a compliment!
I saw the first couple of 'SAW' movies but I didnt really like them that much. The first had a brilliant story and premise, the subsequent films were just repetitions of the first and that annoys the crap out of me. In saying that, I did like one scene I saw (please dont ask which movie, because I cant remember, it was only one scene a friend showed me.) where a woman fell into a pit of hypodermic syringes. That was pretty fucking cool.
Thank you for taking the time to review. I havent laughed so hard in a long time!
Greenaway
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:11 PM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Oh my Holy crap.... this chapter was awesome.... I have read your story on FF up until you pulled it to re write it.... and I love it... but the re write and tweak over here is awesome.... my only hope is that Bella never has to suffer at the hands of this freak.... Carlisle and Esme have to go ... maybe it is more Esme... she is gonna set this all up.... crazy... update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! Im always freaking stoked to hear that people liked the edits I did. It was a labour of love or insanity. Im not sure which yet! LOL. Thanks again.
Greenaway
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 11:39 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
he killed himself????? I hope Edward can stop her from going after Charlie, he's gotta know it's a trap.....BTW, the laundry scene was the funniest thing EVER!...lol
Author's Response:
No, Charlie didnt kill himself. He wished he would die because then Isabella would be safe. Thanks so much for all your reviews. I know you review each and everytime and that is so fucking awesome in my book! Appreciate it.
Greenaway
Date: 19 Aug 2010 9:56 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Amazing chapter. So many elements in it. I loved the Bella/Edward scenes, the laundromat was hilarious. I'm glad she is teaching him he doesn't have to succeed in everything and get his own way all the time.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:43 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Edward Cullen, deadly assassin ... visits the zoo. lol!
I don't know how far you'll let Demetri get with his plan but I have a feeling because of him, the Volturi is going to self destruct.
Oh.. I can't wait for more! I fucking love this story!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:06 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Yay new chapter! Ok so funny how Edward has pink clothes now lol first putting them in the dryer instead of the machine lol then cooking? Yea he can't do anything domestic huh?
That is a cute ring Bella picked out. Not your traditional engagement ring but it fits her..
Ok Demetri scares me...seriously! And poor charlie!! I really do hope Bella doesn't leave to go in search of him. She has to know that it's dangerous and she might end up hurt or worse..
So I enjoyed this update! Very sweet and funny in the beginning with edward and bella. Can't wait for the next!
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 4:52 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Awww... Poor Edward ended up with pink clothes and set his kitchen on fire. I agree with Charlie. Hopefully Bella won't leave the safety of the clan and actually ask Edward for help when she gets the pictures of a tortured charlie.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 4:42 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
Loved the laundromat scene, and the whole cleaning agent part. You had me swooning with the superhero speech....loved it. D needs some mental help or to get what's coming to him. Great chapter as always.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 4:41 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
OMG so glad the chp went up!!!! Itz nice seeing Edward cut loose and relax... Cant wait for the next chp!!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 4:12 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
What a dichotomy of a chapter. The Tokyo trip is light and frivolous, the ring perfect. Loved the barefoot grass walking. On the other hand, Demitri is so dark, so twisted, like the opposite side of a coin. Well done.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 19 Aug 2010 3:56 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
*sigh* i hate seeing charlie tortured.... cowers under the covers hiding from demitry/felix
Date: 19 Aug 2010 3:53 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
omg...I am so giddy right now and excited to be getting to the nitty gritty of things....bring it on!!!!!!!!!!!!
This NEW chapter was awesomeness!!!! I loved the ring that you picked out for them....it is perfect!!
I can tell you that by the time I reached the end of this chapter I was getting a lil jittery....you are really starting to freak me out as to whether or not Bella will run right to the volturi for her dad or will she tell Edward first to get his help....hmmm she will or she will not....she will or she will not; I am going to have to go with...she will tell Edward....HOPEFULLY!!!! But then of course if she did tell Edward it wouldn't be so dramatic....I guess I will just have to wait & see what you have in store for us....my chickadee!!
I am looking forward to Carlisle's reaction to Edward & Bella's engagement and looking forward to the wedding too!!
see you next time chickie!! Keep up the great work!! =)
Date: 19 Aug 2010 3:28 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
omg! this chapter was hilarious i almost peed myself pink clothes really? almost burned kitchen lol! this was nice i was missing u girl! i asked slyt about u as soon as she told me u updated i ran here! aas alwaysu didnt disapoint i LOVED IT i still hate demetri,poor charlie is not his fault please dont kill him :( E n B r so happy Esme must suffer 4 being such a bitch! dont take this long to update i missed u! :)
Date: 19 Aug 2010 3:09 AM Title: Vacations and Nightmares
That ring is stunning!!!More than one tenor moment in this chapter Edward's domestic failings will live forever in my mind..LOL...Demetri was nothing short of pure poetry in motion he is deliciously spine chillingly evil and having him hear felix in his head...Genius!! Congratulations my friend on the posting of your new material...Cinn xx
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:21 AM Title: I Would Die for You
Somehow I missed reading this last week, so I had to catch up!
Glad to see Bella accepted. I'm nervous as to where this story will go.
Waiting....
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:40 PM Title: Have You Seen My Innocence?
Hey! :)
That chapter was very well written, the flashback makes me hate Jacob. Ugh! I'm a Jacob fan, it takes a lot for me to hate him. Well done! lmao
On to the next one now! :)
xo
Date: 12 Aug 2010 1:05 PM Title: Blood is pumping
Bloody hell I knew it!! What a delusional person....!!
Anyway I loved the way bella got under Edward's skin once again!!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 12 Aug 2010 12:44 PM Title: Holy Night
What a bloody sociopath... I hate their guts.... F&D are disgusting....
Anyway on a lighter mode i just came back from Instabul so I have another 4 chapters... YAY for me!
C ya later!
xoxo
marianne
Date: 12 Aug 2010 4:57 AM Title: I Would Die for You
I love how Edward's monster gets all disgusted with Edward when he's soft but you just know he's secretly loving it too, that always makes me smile :)
Man 4 days with bugs I would probably go insane.... I don't do well with bugs :P
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 6:23 PM Title: None So Corrupt as Those with Power
just reading your story AGAIN from the beginning :D and looooooove it, can't wait for chapter 25
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:29 PM Title: I Would Die for You
Well at least Edward got out that he cant live withuot her. As for the Washing Machine, hhhmmm I think he is going to win but we will see I guess. I sure hope you update often. I have been reading this story for several days straight to get caught up. So now I have to wait for an update and I dont like it. But I understand it.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:08 PM Title: My December
Well I think when Bella finds out that Edward is there on a job she is going to be pissed. As for Charlie I think he has suffered a lot already. And I cant not even imagine any of the cullens suffering from Aro's men except maybe Carlise and Esme.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:11 AM Title: Silent Night
wow they are fucking crazy. Edward is going to have a field day when he gets his hands on them.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:49 AM Title: I Would Die for You
yes im glad all the chps that were written so far have been posted...cant wait for the new chp!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: I Would Die for You
hey there stranger. it is good to have the monster back. i have missed my men. i love edward and the monster just as much as bella. but she gets to have him in her bed. i am just a little jealous.
i love the bet they have going on. part of my wants bella to win. i want to see if edward/monster have what it takes to try and pull off normal. i so love bella. she is so down to earth and she loves him uncontionally. she doesn't care which edward he is he is hers, that is all that matters. i love that he wnats to give her part of her life. he wants to try marriage to make her happy. once again she doesn't want him to do anything he really doesn't want to. she is so caring about what he wants. she doesn't want to change him or make him something he is not. i think that is why they work so well because really she is far from being normal. i also think that if it came down to it she would fit tooth and nail for her man for what they have. i think the aro and the boys believe she will be a push over. she might be a first when it comes to her dad but then i am hoping that little spitfire rears its ugly head. i also love that she has no pretenses as to what his world is and what his family is. she knows pretty much that once carlisle knows them to be engaged he will want her head. i believe the monster and edward know that as well. i also believe that for once he wants something and he will fight to keep her. she is not something he is willing to lose because of his father. try carlisle try and take bella from him and i can't wait for the monster to come after you and don't think he won't. i love it. i am up to date and moving on, yeah. let the good times roll. love it and you
Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:14 AM Title: I'll Always Come Home
I think its a set up to get Edward away from Bella and I think Esme is behind the information that Aro and his men knew about Jacob. And what the heck was Jasper doing hugging her?
Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:01 PM Title: I Would Die for You
Fuck! Dying for a new chapter as I've just spent all my time reading this!
Don't care if E can wash clothes or not. Just please please please do not let B be incredibly stupid and niave when they get home. Don't give her the guilt complex so she runs to save a man she has long since thoughtg dead. I mean even B can't possibly think that they'll leave C unharmed if she goes to them. Give us something unexpected.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 8:49 PM Title: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between
good chapter again.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 8:02 PM Title: First Impressions are Forever
Good first chapter.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 7:34 PM Title: Sin
Its about time he made love to her. I was really waiting for that but I understand why he kept waiting he was scared just like she said. Well I am glad they will be getting closer now and I am so glad that Alice if going to forgive him, after all he did it to protect her.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:26 PM Title: Blood is pumping
That stupid bitch!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:22 PM Title: Holy Night
My only real confusion comes from the fact that both Aro and Carlilse have children/families so why can't E?
Date: 09 Aug 2010 12:32 PM Title: Silent Night
Christ Almighty! You are fucking twisted! I was telling another author on here (30 Days of Darkness) that I had read sicker shit than hers (she was worried). Here's my example.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 7:48 AM Title: I Would Die for You
I loved that last chapter.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:53 AM Title: I Would Die for You
Loved this chapter! Carlisle is scary!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:35 AM Title: Pixies, Porsches and Promises
wow well Edward sure fell in love fast with Bella. And I think Jacob got all he deserved for what he did to her and her parents. I wonder though if Charlie really is dead.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:47 AM Title: I Would Die for You
Hahaha, Edward doing laundry. I can't wait for that. I also cannot imagine growing up the way Edward did. Makes it so very complicated. Looking forward to more!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 12:07 AM Title: First Impressions are Forever
Well for the first chapter I say this was pretty dam good. I am excited to read the rest of the story.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:24 PM Title: I Would Die for You
This was funny and sad at the same time. His father really did torture him. I can see in a way why Esme says her son is dead. I hope that actually get married. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:12 PM Title: All My Daughters For a Son
So Jacob wasn't enough? Is she trying to die?!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:41 PM Title: I Would Die for You
I love seeing a more playful side of Edward. Maybe they could do it on TOP of the washing machine! LOL
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:54 AM Title: Pixies, Porsches and Promises
Favorite part in chapter:
Ease into it Alice, slow and steady wins the Porsche!
"I know, Edward, why you had to go. Hell, I would have done the same thing. That rat bastard needed to die, but you had that girl thinking she wasn't wanted here anymore. She's been crying on my shoulder for the last four hours, and by the way, you owe me a Porsche."
What the fuck!? That's not slow or easy! Quick! Emergency action! Evade! Evade!
He blinked rapidly at that, trying to connect Bella's crying to getting me a Porsche.
Damn! Think quick Alice! Use the confusion!
HILARIOUS. Love this story so far!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:05 PM Title: I Would Die for You
Greenaway
Please tell me Bella will win the bet????
Loved that they had such a great talk!!!!
More when you can please!!!
Cory
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:37 PM Title: I Would Die for You
hahahahahaha!! I like playfull Edward, I like Dark Edward also but it is nice that he does have a sort of soft side for Bella!! Good Job!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:07 PM Title: I Would Die for You
as if she would say no!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:06 PM Title: I Would Die for You
Lol I hope she wins just to see edward loose at something and see what she would plan for him to do.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:54 PM Title: I Would Die for You
A married Edward Cullen? wow. He does have a lot to consider though, his lifestyle is not exactly the most normal out there, but he is commited to mae it work, so that helps.
And my God is Demetri a monster or what? he sure deserves what's coming to him.
Edward will be beyond himself once Bella leaves to go to her father, hell sure break loose. Hope nothing bad happens to her.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:24 PM Title: I Would Die for You
Thanks for the new chapter. Can you kill Esme in the next chapter? Then hopefully Bella will confide in E. when she hears about her father and there will be an all out war against the Volturi & they can stop doing battle against them once & for all & have little chillins that won't need to know how to not be attached to anything or anyone;-)~
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:42 PM Title: Fathers and Sons
I hate to hear that C is a total prick, but glad they all sided w E and B.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:57 PM Title: I Would Die for You
Ah Greenaway....my favorite lil storyteller...you are as ever brilliant in all the most perfect ways, especially when it comes to writing this FUCKHOT story!!!!!
I have officialy declared myself as "Greenaway's Cheerleader".....If I was able to write such brilliance as you do I would surely be reccommending your story over n over, but alas I can't write nor have the time to write so I have settled for reccing you on my profile pages instead!!!
I wish I had the time to go to the Clan's Forum/Thread but I lately I am barely getting my reading in nevermind doing other things....
This chapter was completely new for me and I absolutely loved it of course and laugh my ass off at the "demon's" smartass comments as always!
Oh, and I want "grandbabies" lots n lots of grandbabies....Edward will be able to handle it because of Bella...she will of course help him just like she already is; he may not quite fully realize it yet, but she is completely showing him how to live & enjoy life outside of "The Clan"!!!
I am looking forward to the next "NEW" chappie and their lil wager too!!!
Keep up the great work BB....see you next time!!
Let's here it for all Clan readers & reviewers!!!! WE ROCK!!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:51 PM Title: The Demon Comes Out to Play
Christ. You are one sick mf. I skipped over a lot but I think I got the gyst.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:04 AM Title: I Would Die for You
Oh, please tell me he's going to add far too much soap, bleach the darks, and flood the whold laundromat? I would love to see Edward fail at something so basic.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:48 AM Title: I Would Die for You
freaking loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeddddddddddddddddddd it this is getting better by the minutr i hsvr 2 dsy i kinda hate carlisle hes mean damn it! teryre getting married yei!!! uhm a lot of shit is gonna go down uh? i hope yhe volturi dont kill charlie or bella! update soon im looooovvvvinnnnnnngggggg this
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:49 AM Title: I Would Die for You
this is so awesome, an update everyday. The story just keeps getting better and better, always keeping me on my toes. Cant wait for more.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:20 AM Title: I Would Die for You
I can see that the demon and Carlisle are going to be having a little dance over Bella and Edward getting married. Let the fireworks begin..
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:01 AM Title: I Would Die for You
Can't wait to see what's next!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:54 AM Title: I Would Die for You
Maybe they should get married before they go home! Carlisle will be furious when he hears this!
Who is going to figure out what Esme is up to? Someone should and hopefully Jasper and Edward have someone watching Alec's movements. If that's the case then they will figure out Aro's plan.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:39 AM Title: I Would Die for You
keep writing kid.. I hate the flashbacks. Too long. Maybe shorter!
Otherwise interesting story line.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:12 AM Title: I Would Die for You
Bella said yes! Can't wait to see everyone's reaction to the news that they are getting married. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update.
I wonder who will win the bet?