Date: 07 Feb 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am so glad they figured out Alice is a lunny bird. Edward better be doing some major ass kissing. Bella loves him so much and he loves her I think he will propose to her.
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Personally from the way Bella is acting yeah she feels like things are ending! Poor girl Edward has alot of making up to do with Bella i figured Edward would have noticed something was wrong when Bella tore up her daddy's girl shirt! Men are so clueless sometimes! He better fix this between them cause I so won't be happy if they end!
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
I still dont like edward....to question bella when she is telling the truth and to neglect her and hurt her is wrong. His feelings on how no woman not even bella would come before his family is wrong....if that family is poison to the person you love you sometimes have to cut them out of your life and put your loves feelings above others. I hope bella gives him the cold shoulder like he has been giving her and tell him she now needs to think...turn about is fair play.
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella is very smart and she loves her Edward so she will always forgive him and she will not leave but it certainly will not let it go.
Thank you for this good chapter and highly more ...
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow it took all this for Edward to choose the love of his life.
Alice can and will never do the things Bella does so why alienate her because Alice is being a brat!
Update appreciated x
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
Finally, he sees the light.
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm extremely pissed off at Edward for not defending Bella the way he SHOULD have. Family or not, you don't let someone continue to verbally berate someone that you supposedly love. Yet he continued to allow Alice to get away with her shit, which only made things worse!
And when he let Alice put even a single doubt in his supposed adult, mature mind, I thought he was as crazy as she is! Even though he KNEW in the back of his mind, and in his heart that the shit she was spewing was all garbage, he STILL allowed it to effect him and Bella.
Checking Bella's calls & e-mails because he had to be "sure"...I have no words. WHAT in the world would be the benefit of Bella telling Alice to get with Jasper, get pregnant, or give Landon up?! It makes no logical, sane sense, yet Edward fell for that stupidity! Bella never behaved that way when she was younger, or even now. She's loving & good towards babies - her sis & Landon. Edward SHOULD'VE known better! Shame on him!!! If I were Bella, I'd not only be horrendously hurt & insulted, but extremely mortified! He apparently doesn't trust or think very much of her...a recipe for disaster in any relationship.
My opinion of him is so very LOW right now. He's a spineless, gutless asshole who has mollycoddled Alice when she DIDN'T need or deserve it! What she needs is a swift, hard kick in the ass...and then some!
He said he would put Alice, or any of his family before Bella. If I were Bella, I'd be very concerned about what kind of husband he would make, especially since she would never be first in his life. He didn't even listen to her, believe her, or consider her feelings even once! He just took off with Alice, leaving Bella behind, not even bothering to call her. WTF! He said he needed some time & space...well, I'd give it to him, alright!
If I were Bella, I would question if this kind of shit was going to continue to happen? The Bible even says, "Cleave onto your wife". Edward would do well to follow that advice, and cut the cord from his family - especially Alice - and start treating Bella with the love, honor, & respect that she deserves. Put her FIRST like he should have been doing all along! She certainly puts him first - always has! She stood up against her family in defense of him & their relationship from the very beginning. It's no wonder he's never had a relationship last very long! He needs to grow the fuck up! He's TOO old for the shit he is pulling!
While I believe that you should love & respect your family, I also believe there are extenuating circumstances to that rule, such as with Alice. Alice doesn't deserve ANYTHING right now except for the help that she will hopefully be getting. And even IF she does get help, it still won't undo all of the damage and hurt that she has caused. I hope they all keep that in mind, and not forget everything she has done! I still wouldn't trust her either, no matter if they said she was "cured", or not! Edward saw with his own eyes that Alice tried to harm Landon, & how cold & callous she is, and has been! Anyone who would try to harm a baby/child is lowest of scum in my book, no matter their mental status!
Once again, idiot Edward never said anything when she tried to harm Landon - just stuck his foot behind the wheel of the stroller. WTF! I wouldn't have cared what the repercussions would've been...I would've literally tore her slimy little ass up right then & there! He acts all mouthy, domineering & controlling towards Bella, even when they're not "playing", so WHY can't he put Alice in her place?!
Once Alice is "well", what's he gonna do...allow her babysit or be around his and Bella's child, if they were to have one in the future, or Landon? I would seriously question his obviously poor judgement lately. I hope he speaks up about what he saw Alice do - it was a VERY serious thing - not one that should be swept under the rug! I wouldn't trust her any more than I would a pit viper!
Looking forward to the next chapter! ;)
*I hope that you guys put whatever was in Alice's journal in the next chapter. I'm dying to know! LOL
Also, what about Alice's supposed "husband"? Where's he been during all of this? Why didn't he go with Alice when she returned home with Edward? And the question of where all that money went has never been answered, either. Could you please clarify some or all of these things? Thank You! ;)
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
Don't get me wrong, I am so happy and overjoyed that Edward finally bought himself a clue, but I still think he needs to grovel. I mean does he even comprehend how horrible he made Bella feel? And Alice's dad....seriously....the man must have gotten hit by every single branch of the stupid tree as hr fell from the top. I loved how he tried to make it bella's doing at first. I mean I get that Alice is his child, but take off the rose colored glasses. I was happy to see him clue in there at the end, even if it was through snooping.
Oh, and that is another thing...Edward going through emails and texts, that is so gonna bite him in the arse. I hope he truly wants to make it up to Bella because she deserves so much mote than Edward has been giving her. He needs to somehow see what his foolishness can cost him. I get loving your family and always being there, but as someone speaking from experience, sometimes you need to cut them loose for a bit.
Anyway, loved the update as usual, please make Edward sincere this time.
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
They both were in a pickle.. but Edward should not have been so cold to Bella when she was telling him want was going on between her and Alice.. He should have seen through it. but of course this is Bella and Edward we are talking about now... I really hope they can move on from here and have wild passionate make-up sex to boot!!
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
I don't know if this chapter really made me "like" Edward any better. I get that he is in a tough place and I respect that he will stand by his family which he has stated before. But if memory serves I don't think Bella has ever made him choose between her or his family. Bella has never even given him an ultimatum between Alice and her and she could've considering all of the crap she taken from Alice. What I am confused by though ... Is why he acting like Alice's parent when she has two perfectly good and decent parents who should be handling her selfish ass?? I mean at the end of the story they all finally seem to be on the same page. But Uncle Edward's over involvement in his niece's screwed up life (which she screwed up all on her own) is wrecking havoc everywhere else. He is seeing the error in his ways but I don't think a couple of well placed apologies and a few I love yous will fix it. I hope he knows that.
I will give Bella credit because she could gone all spoiled brat on him but she seems to be trying to hold it together even if its killing her emotionally. (Yea, being an adult sucks sometimes, sweetie.) I am proud to see how far she's come. Maybe it's time Bella start thinking about what's good for her too. She's seems to always be waiting on when Edward has time for her so maybe she could start to demand that she should have nights to go out and hang with her friends and act her age. Bella obviously is not a clubbing every weekend type of girl but going out, dancing, having fun every so often with some trusted girlfriends would be good for her. Certainly beats her sitting at home waiting for Edward who is often too tired after a long day or cancels dates because of work. The girl needs friends of her own, a life of her own that doesn't consist of waiting on when Edward can make time. He's busy but maybe if she has a life that didn't constantly revolve around Edward making time it wouldn't be so bad. Edward's complete disregard for her and her feelings should be a wake up call for her to start looking at what she needs now too - not just what makes him happy.
Ok, slowly stepping down off the soapbox.... Thanks for giving the insight into Edward'a head although it really hasn't warmed me back up to him. Love the update. Can't wait til next week --- and yowza did you guys get a reaction out of me. Thumbs up!!!
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for epov,alice I dunno she batshit crazy,i see both bella and edwards side in this but edward definately got some making ip to do
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
GladforEdward.... I have faith that he and Bella will be able to work through things.....but Alice is still shitty.....she really does need her head examined. LOL!!
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
As always, amazing work!! I loved being able to see thru Edward's eyes.
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
Alice is definitely batshit crazy and needs some serious help. As for Edward's chances of keeping Bella, if he doesn't get his shit together Alice will have her wish. If I were Bella I would tell him that he can't treat me like a baby all the time. Daddy kink is fine but not allowing her to make any decisions is not allowing her to grow and she will begin to resent him and the control he has over her life. I look forward to reading next week chapter.
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 06 Feb 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward better start sucking up big time!
Author's Response:
Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all. Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story. Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole. So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters. There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through. I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. We do love hearing your thoughts. Jess & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”
“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.
“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.
“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.
“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”
“Wherever we go, we go together. Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”
Date: 04 Feb 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 22
Alice is an evil spitful little bitch I dont like her at all. Bella did a very good job of talking to him now he better pull his head out of his ass quick.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
I hope they talk and find out what is going on with each other. I think Alice has went mental.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing...
Date: 04 Feb 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 20
Alice has a lot of growing up to do but she did do right by giving the baby to her mom and Carlisle but that is all she has done right.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Edwards POV posts in 1 day... hope you like it...
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think Alice is so messed up, she is jealous of what Edward and Bella have and since she doesn't have it will try to break them up. Edward really needs to smarten up to Alice's manipulating ways or he is going to lose Bella. Sometimes you have to lose what you have to appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
What a bitch is Alice and what an asshole is Edward. I'm not a writer but Bella have to take time for herself away to regain her smashed self esteem. I heart a strong willing Bella than a weeping one. So both of you writers surprise me!
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, just read the last few chapters, not use to a vindictive Alice and I think Edward is the one who is delusional and very hypocritical if he can't see what Alice is trying to do.
He needs a major attitude adjustment. Not a fan right now but that is just what you wanted us to feel, great job.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
I really can't believe Alice's behavior. I mean she's been showing her true colors for some time now. What I am confused by is Edward's ignorance to it all?? And why Esme her own mama can see it and washed her hands of it all but Edward continually tries to coddle her. Hell even Garret gets it! I really hope Alice gets what she's got coming to her - karma and all that at least 10xs over. I am proud of Bella of handling herself. But Edward (smh) unless he gets his head out of ass he's going to lose Bella. And it would be his own damn fault. And let's be honest here...Alice is only part of the issue albeit a big part. He demands respect from Bella but doesn't offer her the same. What surprises me though... is that even though he's older and supposedly more experienced his emotional relationship experience is that of teenage boy. I am B&E shipper all the way but maybe he needs to lose her (temporarily of course ;)) to truly understand what he's got.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love grown up Bella!
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. I didn't review the previous one since I finally found time to read it today. I look forward to reading the next update, hopefully as soon as it hits my inbox.
Bella was impressive the way she is handling everything. Edward on the other hand is allowing himself to be manipulated my Alice. I thought he was smarter than that but apparently not. Bella has done some major growing up, which Alice hasn't seemed to do. Maybe Edward just needs that needy little girl with drama to feel complete.
See ya next time.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
It's nice to see Bella start to grow up and act like an adult. I guess there's hope for them after all.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
I wish I knew why Edward keeps believing Alice's lies!
I may be nuts, but I think that Alice and Ben are going to kidnap Edward and demand a ransom.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
I dont like edward but i liked how bella handled this suituation. I think alice wants edward to dump bella so she can get money out of him...shes the gold digging whore
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
wow why is he not believing her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean she's never lied to him and this is what he does for her!!!!!!!!! he picks his neice over the woman he supposedly loves!!!!!! bella's right he needs to prioritize his life and chose whether he wants bella or alice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and personally i think alice is just trying to rip edward and bella appart for her own amusement cause she knows that edward cares about her but she wants to see bella destroyed for showing the rest of her family what alice is really like and alice doesn't care who she hurts in the end especially if it's edward!!! he needs to open his eyes to what alice really is a two bit lying bitch of a whore!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 22
Its good nice work
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
there is something about this story that i love reading it makes so excited to read a new chapter i cant wait for an update
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
what the hell is going through alices head, maybe edward will wake up and realise that his conniving niece is being spiteful and im sure she will get hers...... i hope lol
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ahh...Edward is so stupid :/ hope he will take the two weeks to really think about his relationship with bella . Loved the chapter ! :) ( Alice not so much :/) update soon :)
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
Alice is jealous and wants to separate Edward and Bella.
I hope that Edward will put her in her place.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
I feel so violent right now. Ijust wantto beat the ever loving crap out of Alice - walk away and then come back and beat her sorry arse some more. She needs a good ass whipping. And Edward? I just want to kick him nice and hard square in the balls right now.seriously?! Taking Alice's side. Oh he needs to grovel.....and get his head outof his butt. I mean damn, how blind can you be? Alice is the whore (and well many other things). Can't tell I am annoyed can you....
what can I say, the story brings out emotions in me. Poor Bella. I really hope Edward can pull his head outof his butt before he loses her. Please ease mymind and tell me he gets it together before he loses it all. And please tell me some one beats the crap out of Alice....soon....
(:
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
OK I could NOT believe Edward said that crap about. Oohh I'm sure Alice didn't mean to say that. Really? And wow, Alice sure has amped up the hate factor
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
This is just disgusting..shit like this happens everyday for people and it disgusts me. I didn't even want to leave a review because of all ofAlice's petty,stupid, bullshit. She is disgusting. Edward needs a swift kick in the ass and to take a long, hard look in the mirror........or maybe it would be a good idea for him to have to deal with stuff likeBella hasto deal with. He should have to feel hurt like Bella does.
But the writers don't deserve that. You guys are doing a phenomenal job of writing and causing people to become emotional about it. :)
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
Alice needs to f**k off, and go rot in Hell! She's an evil, selfish, manipulative, conniving little bitch, and Edward needs to wake up and smell the coffee. She's jealous, miserable, and her life is a big mess, so she wants that for E&B, since they are happy together. She could give a shit less about her "Uncle Edward". She's just using him like she does everyone else, to get what she wants! Edward needs to get his gullible head out of his dumb ass, and focus on what's really important, before he loses it - and when or if he does, Alice most certainly wouldn't console him, or even give him the time of day! Maybe this is what it will take for Edward to see just who Alice really is!
However, if I was Bella, I'd have my phone on "record" the next time Alice approached me, and capture all the evidence I needed - let Edward hear the truth directly from the horse's mouth! Although him doubting me, and refusing to listen to me in the first place...taking Alice's side over mine - him needing to "think on things" after I told him everything, would've really taken something away from our relationship.
Maybe Bella should become the squeaky wheel like Alice is being...then she'll get the "grease" (attention/time/love) - though it's a shame that she would have to go to such lengths to get something from the man that she loves, and who supposedly loves her.
Why doesn't Esme say something in Bella's defense?! She KNOWS how her little cunt of a daughter is! I think they all are just as guilty and culpable for Alice's behavior, since none of them have put the little bitch in her place! They need to TRULY cut her off! No job, no money, no family support whatsoever! She needs to be left completely ALONE! Tough love...
I just don't understand how Edward could even begin to coddle Alice, considering all that she's done? I mean, she's married to Bella's ex...awkward! Not to mention for the millionth time that she's a worthless, stupid bitch. She and Edward never seemed to be this close before...so WHY now???
What about Alice's marriage? Is he going back with Alice while she works? I smell trouble brewing...
And what about the millions that Alice spent? What did she spend it on...where did it go? Will it ever be retrieved, and given to Landon? Please give us some clarity on that. Alice going to prison sounds good to me!
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG. Bella needs to kick Alice's ass. Is Edward really that blind???
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward needs to wake up now. Taping Alice in action and showing him the truth might work. Too bad something like that is necessary for him to get it.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
I really don't like Alice in this story. Your story is really awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think this is the only Alice that I've wanted to bitch slap.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am so glad that Bella finally stood up for herself, calmly, as an adult. Edward is a complete douche in this chapter, and I can't wait to read his POV. He needs to get his head out of his ass fast and see what Alice is doing. I can't believe he is this stupid. Maybe now that he realizes that he may actually lose Bella because of Alice, he will wise up. We will just have to wait and see.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
Got to say I not a violent person but yeah alice can get in front of speidis arse kicking for that crap she pulled,poor bella eddie boy needs to wake up and smell the shite alice is spreading like now.
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ugh!!! Alice is some piece of work! Where does she get off saying all of that to Bella??!?!?!! Can't believe that Edward is so blind to her tricks. Hope that he will wise up before he looses everything he has in his life now with Bella. Love your writing style, it makes your characters really pop out and it is actually like you can feel their emotions! Looking forward to your next update! :)
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
And again, another amazing chapter! I fully trust y'all to give us the HEA
Author's Response:
Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22. First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing. The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her. Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing. Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows. If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable. Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it. Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice. Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice. Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control. It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon.
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups: Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~
TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”
“You talked to Es?”
“Yeah, she calls me every day. How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”
“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once. He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier. I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”
“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks. “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”
“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.
“Yep,” she says popping the p.
“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt. Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”
“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 9th which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 19 not 21!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!! I have loved reading this beautifully written story!!!
Author's Response:
Well first of all, thank you and I messaged the ADMIN at TWCS and they are aware of the issue, and fixed our date issue for us. Thanks for reading and reviewing, here is the normal review reply.
Well I was not shocked at all by the fact that many of you still hate Alice, and all I can say is the next chapter will not be any better, she is really not going to be liked much after it posts. A lot of you seem to be hating Edward more and more, as the reviews start to roll in. I am worried after next chapter you will really hate him, but stick around, I promise it is worth it. Chapter 23 will be posting 2 weeks from today and it will be in Edward’s POV. Chapter 26 will bring the story to the end, and chapter 27 will be the Epilogue posted one year later from the end of 26. There is a lot to wrap up in that short amount of time, but have faith in us, because we will do it. Thank you to all of you who are reviewing each and every chapter, and not only that but for pimping us out so much—just AMAZING of you all, thanks. Jess’s favorite line: I bet the little fucking bitch is getting off on it. My Favorite line: I mean, you guys are my token gay friends, anyway.
Well we hope you like the next chapter, I know I did but I like writing fucking, fighting and crazy. (Jess) & Kasi~
Teaser:
“Having fun playing mommy to my son, and your sister? Maybe you should stop trying to be my Uncles little girl and find someone your own age.”
“What, what do you mean?” I ask in shock from the sound of hatred dripping off her tone.
“Oh Bella are you that stupid? That is a cute shirt for a twelve year old, and your ‘Daddy’ isn’t here—oh wait, never mind—I forgot I heard you and Uncle Edward playing around one night. I didn't realize your daddy—play issues were celebrated in public too,” she says loud enough that friends of my mother’s gasp.
I pull her to the side and stare at her. “What the fuck is your deal Alice? We were friends, more like sisters. Now all of a sudden you have all this rage for me.”
Date: 24 Jan 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
she is starting to show the signs of maturity. that's good!!!
Author's Response:
Well I was not shocked at all by the fact that many of you still hate Alice, and all I can say is the next chapter will not be any better, she is really not going to be liked much after it posts. A lot of you seem to be hating Edward more and more, as the reviews start to roll in. I am worried after next chapter you will really hate him, but stick around, I promise it is worth it. Chapter 23 will be posting 2 weeks from today and it will be in Edward’s POV. Chapter 26 will bring the story to the end, and chapter 27 will be the Epilogue posted one year later from the end of 26. There is a lot to wrap up in that short amount of time, but have faith in us, because we will do it. Thank you to all of you who are reviewing each and every chapter, and not only that but for pimping us out so much—just AMAZING of you all, thanks. Jess’s favorite line: I bet the little fucking bitch is getting off on it. My Favorite line: I mean, you guys are my token gay friends, anyway.
Well we hope you like the next chapter, I know I did but I like writing fucking, fighting and crazy. (Jess) & Kasi~
Teaser:
“Having fun playing mommy to my son, and your sister? Maybe you should stop trying to be my Uncles little girl and find someone your own age.”
“What, what do you mean?” I ask in shock from the sound of hatred dripping off her tone.
“Oh Bella are you that stupid? That is a cute shirt for a twelve year old, and your ‘Daddy’ isn’t here—oh wait, never mind—I forgot I heard you and Uncle Edward playing around one night. I didn't realize your daddy—play issues were celebrated in public too,” she says loud enough that friends of my mother’s gasp.
I pull her to the side and stare at her. “What the fuck is your deal Alice? We were friends, more like sisters. Now all of a sudden you have all this rage for me.”
Date: 23 Jan 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this story, I always squee and giggle like a fangirl when I see my notification pop lol
Author's Response:
Well I was not shocked at all by the fact that many of you still hate Alice, and all I can say is the next chapter will not be any better, she is really not going to be liked much after it posts. A lot of you seem to be hating Edward more and more, as the reviews start to roll in. I am worried after next chapter you will really hate him, but stick around, I promise it is worth it. Chapter 23 will be posting 2 weeks from today and it will be in Edward’s POV. Chapter 26 will bring the story to the end, and chapter 27 will be the Epilogue posted one year later from the end of 26. There is a lot to wrap up in that short amount of time, but have faith in us, because we will do it. Thank you to all of you who are reviewing each and every chapter, and not only that but for pimping us out so much—just AMAZING of you all, thanks. Jess’s favorite line: I bet the little fucking bitch is getting off on it. My Favorite line: I mean, you guys are my token gay friends, anyway.
Well we hope you like the next chapter, I know I did but I like writing fucking, fighting and crazy. (Jess) & Kasi~
Teaser:
“Having fun playing mommy to my son, and your sister? Maybe you should stop trying to be my Uncles little girl and find someone your own age.”
“What, what do you mean?” I ask in shock from the sound of hatred dripping off her tone.
“Oh Bella are you that stupid? That is a cute shirt for a twelve year old, and your ‘Daddy’ isn’t here—oh wait, never mind—I forgot I heard you and Uncle Edward playing around one night. I didn't realize your daddy—play issues were celebrated in public too,” she says loud enough that friends of my mother’s gasp.
I pull her to the side and stare at her. “What the fuck is your deal Alice? We were friends, more like sisters. Now all of a sudden you have all this rage for me.”
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2013 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella asks too many questions.
I hope that Edward will be able to reassure her.
thank you
Author's Response:
Well I was not shocked at all by the fact that many of you still hate Alice, and all I can say is the next chapter will not be any better, she is really not going to be liked much after it posts. A lot of you seem to be hating Edward more and more, as the reviews start to roll in. I am worried after next chapter you will really hate him, but stick around, I promise it is worth it. Chapter 23 will be posting 2 weeks from today and it will be in Edward’s POV. Chapter 26 will bring the story to the end, and chapter 27 will be the Epilogue posted one year later from the end of 26. There is a lot to wrap up in that short amount of time, but have faith in us, because we will do it. Thank you to all of you who are reviewing each and every chapter, and not only that but for pimping us out so much—just AMAZING of you all, thanks. Jess’s favorite line: I bet the little fucking bitch is getting off on it. My Favorite line: I mean, you guys are my token gay friends, anyway.
Well we hope you like the next chapter, I know I did but I like writing fucking, fighting and crazy. (Jess) & Kasi~
Teaser:
“Having fun playing mommy to my son, and your sister? Maybe you should stop trying to be my Uncles little girl and find someone your own age.”
“What, what do you mean?” I ask in shock from the sound of hatred dripping off her tone.
“Oh Bella are you that stupid? That is a cute shirt for a twelve year old, and your ‘Daddy’ isn’t here—oh wait, never mind—I forgot I heard you and Uncle Edward playing around one night. I didn't realize your daddy—play issues were celebrated in public too,” she says loud enough that friends of my mother’s gasp.
I pull her to the side and stare at her. “What the fuck is your deal Alice? We were friends, more like sisters. Now all of a sudden you have all this rage for me.”
Date: 17 Jan 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
I don't know which line is my favorite. Honestly, I just love how delusional Alice is. Please PLEASE let them press fraud charges against her!!!!
Author's Response:
Well not many are feeling the love for Alice, not that we thought many would. As I said only about 5 of you reviewers had previously questioned if it was Ben, Alice was messing with—so that was a shock to most of you. As for Ben hanging in and on for the money, only time will tell. Some of you are still mad at Edward because he is being so controlling, and again I just ask that you have faith in us. Edward has a lot of issues that he is going to start realizing in the next couple chapters and when chapter 23 posts most all of you will see a different Edward. Edward will be going through his own demons—let’s see how he fairs. Edward may be a jerk right now, but this is making Bella stronger. Thanks to everyone for reading and reviewing this story so much. You all mean a lot to us, and Jess and I are so proud of the turn out this story has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Jess’s favorite line: “She needs to blame someone other than herself for being a selfish bitch, so I can take it.”
My favorite line: And you," I say pointing to Alice, "I would have never taken you for someone who would want sloppy seconds."
TEASER:
I turn my head and see Jake looking out the side window; I turn and can’t believe what I see. There is Alice in Port Angeles and she honestly looks like shit.
“Should I stop and talk to her?”
“No, she looked right at you and turned her head away. I know she saw you, because she waved at me. Just go home, Honey,” Jake says.
“She is staying in Forks anyway, I’m sure you’ll see her again,” Sam says snidely.
“What,” my Mom all but shouts.
“What do you mean she is staying in Forks?” I ask at the same time, raising my voice as well.
I know that I am mad, but what surprises me the most is my mother, she looks livid.
“I never said anything, because she asked me not to. Don’t be mad, I just didn’t want what little time I get to see you be shadowed by her shadiness,” Jake admits.
“And trust me that girl, she’s shady!” Sam says while snapping his fingers and giving a head roll.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
I think Ben is using Alice for the money, which is most likely one of the reasons WHY he married her - so that he would have a right to it. I'm curious as to WHERE over THREE million dollars has went already??? Probably in a secret bank account that belongs to Ben! Boy...Alice sure can pick 'em! Jasper & Ben are total LOSERS!!!
I HOPE that the remainder of the money goes to Landon, as was intended, and I HOPE that the other money can be retrieved and given to him, as well. That poor baby deserves it!
Alice is such a colossal dumbass!!! Cold & cruel, too! She basically stated that her love for her child was only contingent upon the father sticking around - WTF! She's gonna learn everything the HARD way, and she's gonna have sooooooo many regrets, but it will be too late! Young & immature, or not, this goes waaaay beyond that - she literally must be insane!
When everything in her life disintegrates, which I'm sure it will shortly, I would NOT be there to help her in ANY way, and I hope that no one else is, either. She needs to learn her lesson, and suffer the consequences of all of her ridiculous actions! What she's done IS unforgivable!!!
I still think Jasper is a pathetic, disgusting excuse of a human being - he's no man. If I were Jessica, I'd have contingency plans made just in case! LOL
I have a bad feeling that Ben also married Alice as a way to get at Bella, and try to cause problems for her & Edward. Alice is a vulnerable idiot that was easily brainwashed & manipulated, so he got the "in" that he needed, and took that opportunity. The money was probably just a bonus. He was bitter about Bella breaking up with him, and was always jealous of Edward, so I believe that this was something that he had planned...just waiting for an opportunity to present itself, which it did. We'll see...
I just hope that E&B don't let that little weasel, or Alice come between them. Hopefully they are smart enough to see what's going on, and take a vigilant stance now...they'll most likely need it!
I honestly hope that BOTH Alice & Ben wind up in jail...for a loooooong time, before they have the chance to ruin or harm anyone's lives!
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Well not many are feeling the love for Alice, not that we thought many would. As I said only about 5 of you reviewers had previously questioned if it was Ben, Alice was messing with—so that was a shock to most of you. As for Ben hanging in and on for the money, only time will tell. Some of you are still mad at Edward because he is being so controlling, and again I just ask that you have faith in us. Edward has a lot of issues that he is going to start realizing in the next couple chapters and when chapter 23 posts most all of you will see a different Edward. Edward will be going through his own demons—let’s see how he fairs. Edward may be a jerk right now, but this is making Bella stronger. Thanks to everyone for reading and reviewing this story so much. You all mean a lot to us, and Jess and I are so proud of the turn out this story has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Jess’s favorite line: “She needs to blame someone other than herself for being a selfish bitch, so I can take it.”
My favorite line: And you," I say pointing to Alice, "I would have never taken you for someone who would want sloppy seconds."
TEASER:
I turn my head and see Jake looking out the side window; I turn and can’t believe what I see. There is Alice in Port Angeles and she honestly looks like shit.
“Should I stop and talk to her?”
“No, she looked right at you and turned her head away. I know she saw you, because she waved at me. Just go home, Honey,” Jake says.
“She is staying in Forks anyway, I’m sure you’ll see her again,” Sam says snidely.
“What,” my Mom all but shouts.
“What do you mean she is staying in Forks?” I ask at the same time, raising my voice as well.
I know that I am mad, but what surprises me the most is my mother, she looks livid.
“I never said anything, because she asked me not to. Don’t be mad, I just didn’t want what little time I get to see you be shadowed by her shadiness,” Jake admits.
“And trust me that girl, she’s shady!” Sam says while snapping his fingers and giving a head roll.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
I do not like Alice and Ben!
Thank you for this great chapter.
Author's Response:
Well not many are feeling the love for Alice, not that we thought many would. As I said only about 5 of you reviewers had previously questioned if it was Ben, Alice was messing with—so that was a shock to most of you. As for Ben hanging in and on for the money, only time will tell. Some of you are still mad at Edward because he is being so controlling, and again I just ask that you have faith in us. Edward has a lot of issues that he is going to start realizing in the next couple chapters and when chapter 23 posts most all of you will see a different Edward. Edward will be going through his own demons—let’s see how he fairs. Edward may be a jerk right now, but this is making Bella stronger. Thanks to everyone for reading and reviewing this story so much. You all mean a lot to us, and Jess and I are so proud of the turn out this story has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Jess’s favorite line: “She needs to blame someone other than herself for being a selfish bitch, so I can take it.”
My favorite line: And you," I say pointing to Alice, "I would have never taken you for someone who would want sloppy seconds."
TEASER:
I turn my head and see Jake looking out the side window; I turn and can’t believe what I see. There is Alice in Port Angeles and she honestly looks like shit.
“Should I stop and talk to her?”
“No, she looked right at you and turned her head away. I know she saw you, because she waved at me. Just go home, Honey,” Jake says.
“She is staying in Forks anyway, I’m sure you’ll see her again,” Sam says snidely.
“What,” my Mom all but shouts.
“What do you mean she is staying in Forks?” I ask at the same time, raising my voice as well.
I know that I am mad, but what surprises me the most is my mother, she looks livid.
“I never said anything, because she asked me not to. Don’t be mad, I just didn’t want what little time I get to see you be shadowed by her shadiness,” Jake admits.
“And trust me that girl, she’s shady!” Sam says while snapping his fingers and giving a head roll.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Well, I did give warning that things would not be super peachy. Edward is an asshole, and he is very demanding of Bella’s attentions, yet he seems to forget that she is young and wants to have fun. Bella does act very immature at times, and her ability to communicate properly sucks. Edward being a complete dick is not going to change for a few chapters, however he will have great moments along with shitty. Bella however will start to blossom and show her maturity level rising. Edward’s emotions were running very high in this chapter and the way that they played emotions off of the other caused them both to act in a way they normally wouldn’t. Jess feels this chapter is as bad as it gets for them, I think there is one more where Edward makes me want to hate him, however chapter 23 will be in Edward’s POV and that chapter will show everyone where he stands. There are questions regarding Edward’s age and Bella’s age and the difference in ages. At the start of the story Edward was 31 and Bella was 14, so there is a 17-year difference between them. I want to touch on the fact that we have had two people at this point message us saying they are walking away from this story after this chapter—I am personally sorry to hear that mainly because the resolutions planned for them are alone worth sticking around for. Now we asked what your favorite line was and not everyone participated, but I still will share with you all Jess’s favorite line. This is from when she was at the club and after meeting Riley and talking to him she thinks to herself ... “He reminds me of Jake, and I’d bet money his girlfriend has a dick, too.” Oh and speaking of her time at the club, her friend from School Corin, knew Seth before the club, somehow that got over looked by a couple of you. So no worries Seth nor Riley are bad people, and Corin is cool too. Thanks for reading and reviewing and if you still have questions hit us up on Facebook or PM. (Jess) & Kasi~
Chapter 20 TEASER: I’m sitting here in a sexual innuendo filled daze, but the timer dinging gets my attention. I pull the pan form the oven, and it smells even better in the kitchen than it did ten minutes ago. I put the garlic bread in and pull the salad out and toss it. I place everything on the table and pull the garlic bread out just as Edward comes in the room.
“Damn Baby, that smells better than it did before,” he compliments and I smile.
I watch as Edward gets out a bottle of wine from the chiller cabinet and opens it. I don’t drink often, but when we have a nice dinner we almost always have a glass or two. He pours our glasses and carries them to the table. I get everything in place and light the candles, as he dims the light.
“This is very romantic, Baby,” he says pulling out my chair.
“Thank you, my love,” I say after sipping the wine he gave me.
Dinner is amazing and we eat quietly while exchanging looks that say we have much better things to do than talk. We clean up together and I smile when I see him cover the apple pie I made and place it in the warming rack on low.
“I can’t wait any longer, come with me,” he says pulling me by my hand upstairs. Instead of going to the bedroom, he pulls me into his office. Walking to the wall safe he punches in the code and opens the door. My eyes grow wide as he pulls out a rather large light blue velvet box and turns to hand it to me.
“What—what’s this for?” I stammer.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
I can't wait to find out what's up with Alice and Jasper. And Esme's proposal was sweet! I think Bella is still a little young to have her own baby. Can Edward be a daddy to her and a baby at the same time?
Author's Response:
Well, I did give warning that things would not be super peachy. Edward is an asshole, and he is very demanding of Bella’s attentions, yet he seems to forget that she is young and wants to have fun. Bella does act very immature at times, and her ability to communicate properly sucks. Edward being a complete dick is not going to change for a few chapters, however he will have great moments along with shitty. Bella however will start to blossom and show her maturity level rising. Edward’s emotions were running very high in this chapter and the way that they played emotions off of the other caused them both to act in a way they normally wouldn’t. Jess feels this chapter is as bad as it gets for them, I think there is one more where Edward makes me want to hate him, however chapter 23 will be in Edward’s POV and that chapter will show everyone where he stands. There are questions regarding Edward’s age and Bella’s age and the difference in ages. At the start of the story Edward was 31 and Bella was 14, so there is a 17-year difference between them. I want to touch on the fact that we have had two people at this point message us saying they are walking away from this story after this chapter—I am personally sorry to hear that mainly because the resolutions planned for them are alone worth sticking around for. Now we asked what your favorite line was and not everyone participated, but I still will share with you all Jess’s favorite line. This is from when she was at the club and after meeting Riley and talking to him she thinks to herself ... “He reminds me of Jake, and I’d bet money his girlfriend has a dick, too.” Oh and speaking of her time at the club, her friend from School Corin, knew Seth before the club, somehow that got over looked by a couple of you. So no worries Seth nor Riley are bad people, and Corin is cool too. Thanks for reading and reviewing and if you still have questions hit us up on Facebook or PM. (Jess) & Kasi~
Chapter 20 TEASER: I’m sitting here in a sexual innuendo filled daze, but the timer dinging gets my attention. I pull the pan form the oven, and it smells even better in the kitchen than it did ten minutes ago. I put the garlic bread in and pull the salad out and toss it. I place everything on the table and pull the garlic bread out just as Edward comes in the room.
“Damn Baby, that smells better than it did before,” he compliments and I smile.
I watch as Edward gets out a bottle of wine from the chiller cabinet and opens it. I don’t drink often, but when we have a nice dinner we almost always have a glass or two. He pours our glasses and carries them to the table. I get everything in place and light the candles, as he dims the light.
“This is very romantic, Baby,” he says pulling out my chair.
“Thank you, my love,” I say after sipping the wine he gave me.
Dinner is amazing and we eat quietly while exchanging looks that say we have much better things to do than talk. We clean up together and I smile when I see him cover the apple pie I made and place it in the warming rack on low.
“I can’t wait any longer, come with me,” he says pulling me by my hand upstairs. Instead of going to the bedroom, he pulls me into his office. Walking to the wall safe he punches in the code and opens the door. My eyes grow wide as he pulls out a rather large light blue velvet box and turns to hand it to me.
“What—what’s this for?” I stammer.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
they are working together. Alice needs her ass kicked
Author's Response:
Well, I did give warning that things would not be super peachy. Edward is an asshole, and he is very demanding of Bella’s attentions, yet he seems to forget that she is young and wants to have fun. Bella does act very immature at times, and her ability to communicate properly sucks. Edward being a complete dick is not going to change for a few chapters, however he will have great moments along with shitty. Bella however will start to blossom and show her maturity level rising. Edward’s emotions were running very high in this chapter and the way that they played emotions off of the other caused them both to act in a way they normally wouldn’t. Jess feels this chapter is as bad as it gets for them, I think there is one more where Edward makes me want to hate him, however chapter 23 will be in Edward’s POV and that chapter will show everyone where he stands. There are questions regarding Edward’s age and Bella’s age and the difference in ages. At the start of the story Edward was 31 and Bella was 14, so there is a 17-year difference between them. I want to touch on the fact that we have had two people at this point message us saying they are walking away from this story after this chapter—I am personally sorry to hear that mainly because the resolutions planned for them are alone worth sticking around for. Now we asked what your favorite line was and not everyone participated, but I still will share with you all Jess’s favorite line. This is from when she was at the club and after meeting Riley and talking to him she thinks to herself ... “He reminds me of Jake, and I’d bet money his girlfriend has a dick, too.” Oh and speaking of her time at the club, her friend from School Corin, knew Seth before the club, somehow that got over looked by a couple of you. So no worries Seth nor Riley are bad people, and Corin is cool too. Thanks for reading and reviewing and if you still have questions hit us up on Facebook or PM. (Jess) & Kasi~
Chapter 20 TEASER: I’m sitting here in a sexual innuendo filled daze, but the timer dinging gets my attention. I pull the pan form the oven, and it smells even better in the kitchen than it did ten minutes ago. I put the garlic bread in and pull the salad out and toss it. I place everything on the table and pull the garlic bread out just as Edward comes in the room.
“Damn Baby, that smells better than it did before,” he compliments and I smile.
I watch as Edward gets out a bottle of wine from the chiller cabinet and opens it. I don’t drink often, but when we have a nice dinner we almost always have a glass or two. He pours our glasses and carries them to the table. I get everything in place and light the candles, as he dims the light.
“This is very romantic, Baby,” he says pulling out my chair.
“Thank you, my love,” I say after sipping the wine he gave me.
Dinner is amazing and we eat quietly while exchanging looks that say we have much better things to do than talk. We clean up together and I smile when I see him cover the apple pie I made and place it in the warming rack on low.
“I can’t wait any longer, come with me,” he says pulling me by my hand upstairs. Instead of going to the bedroom, he pulls me into his office. Walking to the wall safe he punches in the code and opens the door. My eyes grow wide as he pulls out a rather large light blue velvet box and turns to hand it to me.
“What—what’s this for?” I stammer.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the chapter. Their relationship is different than the average relationship but I'd still have a hard time with asking permission when he doesn't even consult her at all. There needs to be some give and take in both directions. She seems to be the one giving the majority ot the time while he only gives orders. As she grows and matures that might cause more issues. I look forward to reading more. It's definitely a nice break from my reality. ;) My favorite line: It's no secret that I'm crappy at communicating, but I guess it does work.
Until next time.
Author's Response:
Well, I did give warning that things would not be super peachy. Edward is an asshole, and he is very demanding of Bella’s attentions, yet he seems to forget that she is young and wants to have fun. Bella does act very immature at times, and her ability to communicate properly sucks. Edward being a complete dick is not going to change for a few chapters, however he will have great moments along with shitty. Bella however will start to blossom and show her maturity level rising. Edward’s emotions were running very high in this chapter and the way that they played emotions off of the other caused them both to act in a way they normally wouldn’t. Jess feels this chapter is as bad as it gets for them, I think there is one more where Edward makes me want to hate him, however chapter 23 will be in Edward’s POV and that chapter will show everyone where he stands. There are questions regarding Edward’s age and Bella’s age and the difference in ages. At the start of the story Edward was 31 and Bella was 14, so there is a 17-year difference between them. I want to touch on the fact that we have had two people at this point message us saying they are walking away from this story after this chapter—I am personally sorry to hear that mainly because the resolutions planned for them are alone worth sticking around for. Now we asked what your favorite line was and not everyone participated, but I still will share with you all Jess’s favorite line. This is from when she was at the club and after meeting Riley and talking to him she thinks to herself ... “He reminds me of Jake, and I’d bet money his girlfriend has a dick, too.” Oh and speaking of her time at the club, her friend from School Corin, knew Seth before the club, somehow that got over looked by a couple of you. So no worries Seth nor Riley are bad people, and Corin is cool too. Thanks for reading and reviewing and if you still have questions hit us up on Facebook or PM. (Jess) & Kasi~
Chapter 20 TEASER: I’m sitting here in a sexual innuendo filled daze, but the timer dinging gets my attention. I pull the pan form the oven, and it smells even better in the kitchen than it did ten minutes ago. I put the garlic bread in and pull the salad out and toss it. I place everything on the table and pull the garlic bread out just as Edward comes in the room.
“Damn Baby, that smells better than it did before,” he compliments and I smile.
I watch as Edward gets out a bottle of wine from the chiller cabinet and opens it. I don’t drink often, but when we have a nice dinner we almost always have a glass or two. He pours our glasses and carries them to the table. I get everything in place and light the candles, as he dims the light.
“This is very romantic, Baby,” he says pulling out my chair.
“Thank you, my love,” I say after sipping the wine he gave me.
Dinner is amazing and we eat quietly while exchanging looks that say we have much better things to do than talk. We clean up together and I smile when I see him cover the apple pie I made and place it in the warming rack on low.
“I can’t wait any longer, come with me,” he says pulling me by my hand upstairs. Instead of going to the bedroom, he pulls me into his office. Walking to the wall safe he punches in the code and opens the door. My eyes grow wide as he pulls out a rather large light blue velvet box and turns to hand it to me.
“What—what’s this for?” I stammer.
Date: 09 Jan 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Their relationship seems a bit weird at times.....lovers, partners, parent/child, dominant/submissive....isn't all about the sex between these two, or does Edward really see her as a young adult...rather than just so done he can bend to his will?
Author's Response:
Well, I did give warning that things would not be super peachy. Edward is an asshole, and he is very demanding of Bella’s attentions, yet he seems to forget that she is young and wants to have fun. Bella does act very immature at times, and her ability to communicate properly sucks. Edward being a complete dick is not going to change for a few chapters, however he will have great moments along with shitty. Bella however will start to blossom and show her maturity level rising. Edward’s emotions were running very high in this chapter and the way that they played emotions off of the other caused them both to act in a way they normally wouldn’t. Jess feels this chapter is as bad as it gets for them, I think there is one more where Edward makes me want to hate him, however chapter 23 will be in Edward’s POV and that chapter will show everyone where he stands. There are questions regarding Edward’s age and Bella’s age and the difference in ages. At the start of the story Edward was 31 and Bella was 14, so there is a 17-year difference between them. I want to touch on the fact that we have had two people at this point message us saying they are walking away from this story after this chapter—I am personally sorry to hear that mainly because the resolutions planned for them are alone worth sticking around for. Now we asked what your favorite line was and not everyone participated, but I still will share with you all Jess’s favorite line. This is from when she was at the club and after meeting Riley and talking to him she thinks to herself ... “He reminds me of Jake, and I’d bet money his girlfriend has a dick, too.” Oh and speaking of her time at the club, her friend from School Corin, knew Seth before the club, somehow that got over looked by a couple of you. So no worries Seth nor Riley are bad people, and Corin is cool too. Thanks for reading and reviewing and if you still have questions hit us up on Facebook or PM. (Jess) & Kasi~
Chapter 20 TEASER: I’m sitting here in a sexual innuendo filled daze, but the timer dinging gets my attention. I pull the pan form the oven, and it smells even better in the kitchen than it did ten minutes ago. I put the garlic bread in and pull the salad out and toss it. I place everything on the table and pull the garlic bread out just as Edward comes in the room.
“Damn Baby, that smells better than it did before,” he compliments and I smile.
I watch as Edward gets out a bottle of wine from the chiller cabinet and opens it. I don’t drink often, but when we have a nice dinner we almost always have a glass or two. He pours our glasses and carries them to the table. I get everything in place and light the candles, as he dims the light.
“This is very romantic, Baby,” he says pulling out my chair.
“Thank you, my love,” I say after sipping the wine he gave me.
Dinner is amazing and we eat quietly while exchanging looks that say we have much better things to do than talk. We clean up together and I smile when I see him cover the apple pie I made and place it in the warming rack on low.
“I can’t wait any longer, come with me,” he says pulling me by my hand upstairs. Instead of going to the bedroom, he pulls me into his office. Walking to the wall safe he punches in the code and opens the door. My eyes grow wide as he pulls out a rather large light blue velvet box and turns to hand it to me.
“What—what’s this for?” I stammer.
Date: 09 Jan 2013 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think Alice has a lot of growing up to do. Bella is having a tough time being a grown up and Edward and her need to find the balance. Xmas was great
Author's Response:
just got the review as I was postign the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi and Jess
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
Another great chapter. I think the trip will be an eye opening experience for both of them. Alice is a real piece of work. She doesn't even say Landon's name, just refers to him as the kid. I wanted to slap her. Edward has been a bit neglectful but that is how real life is sometimes. Working full time makes it hard to spend time together. My hubs is a firefighter with an extra job at a second department. Every third week he works 6 days straight. Depending on if we have any hurricanes or a drought with wildfires, he has been gone as many as 8 24-hour shifts in a row. Anyway, he is redeeming himself but Bella is a major brat who has a lot of growing up to do. Talking always works better than bitching, moaning and whining. ;) She'll get there. See ya next week.
Author's Response:
Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply. WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here. Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread. Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals. A lot of you think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters. The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward. These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices. Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~
Teaser: “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs.
He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands.
Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.
“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.
“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”
“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.
“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.
“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.
“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I sincerely hope that Edward's neglectfulness is truly work related, and he does not have someone else on the side. At first I thought Alice had run back to Jasper, but as someone else mentioned, I am now too wondering if it isn't Ben. She needs to grow up and get over herself. Honestly, I think they should all go out there and have an Alice smackdown. Talk about a fun read!
Author's Response:
Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply. WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here. Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread. Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals. A lot of you think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters. The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward. These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices. Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~
Teaser: “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs.
He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands.
Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.
“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.
“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”
“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.
“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.
“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.
“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm starting to wonder about Edward and his long work hours. Please tell me he has an ugly secretary and there are absolutely no attractive women at that office,lol.
Author's Response:
Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply. WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here. Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread. Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals. A lot of you think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters. The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward. These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices. Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~
Teaser: “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs.
He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands.
Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.
“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.
“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”
“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.
“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.
“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.
“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward Bella neglects a bit but he is older so he can not act in a manner that also puerile.
Fortunately Bella seems to have understood and it behaves more like an adult.
In any case it is difficult to live together, we need everyone involved to make it work.
I look forward to reading more.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply. WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here. Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread. Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals. A lot of you think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters. The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward. These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices. Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~
Teaser: “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs.
He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands.
Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.
“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.
“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”
“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.
“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.
“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.
“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply. WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here. Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread. Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals. A lot of you think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters. The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward. These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices. Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~
Teaser: “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs.
He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands.
Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.
“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.
“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”
“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.
“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.
“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.
“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
With the whole money thing edward is acting like her dad, somthimes there relationship takes on the whole child/parent role...and he is being neglectful. I love the lemon as always. And i think alice is seeing Ben (bellas ex) thats who she never a chance too. Wont this be bellas 1st time at anal sex if edward uses the cupon?
Author's Response:
Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply. WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here. Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread. Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals. A lot of you think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters. The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward. These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices. Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~
Teaser: “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs.
He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands.
Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.
“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.
“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”
“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.
“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.
“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.
“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter, He is getting better, so what ever he is working on at work should slow down after the new year, I can relate..in retail its always busy on the holidays then slows down.
Author's Response:
Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply. WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here. Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread. Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals. A lot of you think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters. The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward. These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices. Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~
Teaser: “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs.
He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands.
Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.
“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.
“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”
“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.
“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.
“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.
“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply. WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here. Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread. Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals. A lot of you think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters. The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward. These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices. Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~
Teaser: “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs.
He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands.
Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.
“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.
“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”
“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.
“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.
“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.
“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think she is with Jasper... I also think Edward needs to pay more attention to Bella "his little girl" can't wait for all the drama to be out of the way!!
Author's Response:
Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply. WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here. Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread. Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals. A lot of you think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters. The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward. These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices. Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~
Teaser: “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs.
He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands.
Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.
“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.
“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”
“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.
“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.
“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.
“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.
Date: 28 Dec 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
wow didnt see this coming
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
I loved it! I can honestly say I didn't see that coming until Jake brought up the Facebook thing. What do I think will happen next? I think Esme and Carlisle will start to have problems because of his schedule and having to raise a baby, so Edward is going to ask Bella if they can adopt Landon. Hence, the Edward POV. Am I close? See ya next week.
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 27 Dec 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
I have a feeling Alice is back with Jasper and that Bella and Edward may become parents early. Great chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
well holy cripes I didn't see that coming. What made Alice give up Landon???
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hope that donut aint back with jasper after the way he treated her,and an epov cant wait *squeeeeee* Happy holidays girls xFakx
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think Alice is sick! Postpartum depression can be.
I do not think she ended her days!
It's sad.
The baby in the family will be better anyway.
I look forward Edward becomes dad, he loves babies.
Strongly thereafter. See you next year.
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh what happened to Alice, did she run away to find Jasper or does she have post-pardom (baby blues)
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Poor little Landon! He has TWO worthless parents - Assper & Alice/Malice.
Alice, whom I will now call "Malice", since the definition of that word certainly suits her, conveniently dumps him and all of his belongings off on Esme & Carlisle, but what about financial support?! Raising a child is EXPENSIVE!!! Didn't Assper have to give her a five million dollar settlement for Landon, a while back? Esme should petition for that money to be taken from Malice, since she no longer wants, or has custody of Landon, and have it put into a trust for his care & future. Malice DEFINITELY DOES NOT deserve to keep a dime of it!
I didn't think going off to college with a baby in tow was going to work out for Malice, although I was hoping. By the signs of neglect that baby Landon is displaying, it's a good thing that Malice gave him to Esme...even though she done it in a VERY awful, thoughtless, cold, MALICE filled way! It's hard telling what that baby has been through!
BTW...what's up with Jacob paying such close attention to Malice's Facebook page? Just seems kinds odd...or maybe he knows something?
A thought that crossed my mind is that Malice has ran off with Assper - God forbid! They both are extremely selfish, and this would be right up their alley. After this stunt, though, I'd say they deserve each other! Either that, or Malice has met some other douche that doesn't want her kid around - she wants to be young, free, and have fun. TOO BAD! She should've thought about that before she dropped her drawers & got pregnant! However, she's a careless idiot that's obviously easily manipulated, so who knows!
Edward needs to propose to Bella soon...they don't have to get married right away...but it would be nice. :)
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Jake is just always nosey, it is his nature. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love the lemon as always. I knew she was gonna give him up i just didnt assume to esme.omg i wonder why?
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
well i think shes suffering from post pardum and with allthe shit she was handed it didnt help at all looking forward to what happensnext
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I do love your story and glad that edward wouldnt spank bella if he told him she didnt want it, ive read stories that had edward not taking bellas feelings into consideration. I love your teaser and i think alice gave up her baby.
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Surely she isn't back with jasper!? She needs to have her ass beat! Poor Landon, he has been neglected, emotionally, every baby needs interaction and shown love! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit. Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper. A few of you think post-partum depression. There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters. Things will really roll along here story line wise. Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon. I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon. Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward. They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well. The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Jess~
Teaser: “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.
“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.
“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”
“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.
“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.
Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues. My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little. Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.
Date: 23 Dec 2012 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Im glad she liked the spanking but edward is controling bella by telling her how to act by spanking her not as controling mean as jasper was...if bella said she hated the spanking andwld leave if he did it again wld edward still spank her? Or was this an expermint into punishments?
Author's Response:
Well so far so good, on the earth not ending... If this finds you melting in some remote part, I’m sorry, but thanks for having read and reviewed. If like me, and you’re still hanging in there, the next installment will post on Wednesday, without any delay. Well you all seem to be divided on things, but I do promise that Jess and I have worked through a lot here and have a pretty clear amount of chapters written ahead. Some of you are torn over the spanking as a punishment. Some of you are torn over her lack of ability to act grown up. Our Edward knows she can be very mature and grown up, and that is the part of her he loves, but when she does stupid stuff and acts like a child, he feels the need to treat her like one. As for Bella being weak, she will grow and change. She will still have fast reactions to certain things, she will still make mistakes, but so will Edward—neither of them is perfect. If Bella demanded that he stop spanking her, he would not do it again. Thanks all for reading and reviewing, we love the reactions to this story, even the few bad ones, are helping us to see things and ways others are thinking. Constructive criticism and of course great reviews are always welcome. Hope you enjoy your holiday! Kasi (&Jess)~
Teaser:
“So,” Jake says as we sit in the little sandwich shop down town.
“I thought we were going shopping,” I say laughing.
“You made me wait too long,” he says as we laugh more. “How’s Alice?”
“Good, I guess, she will be here for Thanksgiving. She’s really busy and what not with school. Why?” I ask. He seems weird, like he knows something that I don’t.
“Do you find it peculiar that she never talks about Landon on Facebook?” he asks. I wasn’t sure why he was so worried.
“I don’t know. Why are you asking such a thing?” I ask as he shrugs.
“I just think it’s weird. Your mom posts a new pic of Char like every day, and Alice doesn’t even say one word about Landon,” he says as I take my turn to shrug.
“Everyone is different.”
“Fine, I guess. Maybe I’m so lonely that I’m over thinking things. But still, I think you should really talk with her when she’s here,” he says pointing his manicured nail at me. “So, tell me what’s been going on with you.”
I have the best time with Jake. We never end up going shopping, but we do have the best conversation. We talk about everything and it was very overdue talk. Jake has a new boyfriend and I can’t wait to meet him. He told me he was going to try to bring him to Thanksgiving dinner. I knew if his boyfriend could handle a family dinner at my house than he was worth keeping around.
We have pizza for dinner and Alice never shows up. She is acting so weird and no one seems to know what is going on with her. I don’t even know who she is anymore. She’s not the fun loving girl I first met. Esme got a call from Alice asking her where we were. She must have had a lot on her mind since she flew all the way to St. Louis instead of here.
Date: 22 Dec 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Bella is a little hell fire but he loves her ;)
Author's Response:
Well so far so good, on the earth not ending... If this finds you melting in some remote part, I’m sorry, but thanks for having read and reviewed. If like me, and you’re still hanging in there, the next installment will post on Wednesday, without any delay. Well you all seem to be divided on things, but I do promise that Jess and I have worked through a lot here and have a pretty clear amount of chapters written ahead. Some of you are torn over the spanking as a punishment. Some of you are torn over her lack of ability to act grown up. Our Edward knows she can be very mature and grown up, and that is the part of her he loves, but when she does stupid stuff and acts like a child, he feels the need to treat her like one. As for Bella being weak, she will grow and change. She will still have fast reactions to certain things, she will still make mistakes, but so will Edward—neither of them is perfect. Thanks all for reading and reviewing, we love the reactions to this story, even the few bad ones, are helping us to see things and ways others are thinking. Constructive criticism and of course great reviews are always welcome. Hope you enjoy your holiday! Kasi (&Jess)~
Teaser:
“So,” Jake says as we sit in the little sandwich shop down town.
“I thought we were going shopping,” I say laughing.
“You made me wait too long,” he says as we laugh more. “How’s Alice?”
“Good, I guess, she will be here for Thanksgiving. She’s really busy and what not with school. Why?” I ask. He seems weird, like he knows something that I don’t.
“Do you find it peculiar that she never talks about Landon on Facebook?” he asks. I wasn’t sure why he was so worried.
“I don’t know. Why are you asking such a thing?” I ask as he shrugs.
“I just think it’s weird. Your mom posts a new pic of Char like every day, and Alice doesn’t even say one word about Landon,” he says as I take my turn to shrug.
“Everyone is different.”
“Fine, I guess. Maybe I’m so lonely that I’m over thinking things. But still, I think you should really talk with her when she’s here,” he says pointing his manicured nail at me. “So, tell me what’s been going on with you.”
I have the best time with Jake. We never end up going shopping, but we do have the best conversation. We talk about everything and it was very overdue talk. Jake has a new boyfriend and I can’t wait to meet him. He told me he was going to try to bring him to Thanksgiving dinner. I knew if his boyfriend could handle a family dinner at my house than he was worth keeping around.
We have pizza for dinner and Alice never shows up. She is acting so weird and no one seems to know what is going on with her. I don’t even know who she is anymore. She’s not the fun loving girl I first met. Esme got a call from Alice asking her where we were. She must have had a lot on her mind since she flew all the way to St. Louis instead of here.
Date: 22 Dec 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love the Bella and her mom are getting along so well and edward is the man he is ;)
Author's Response:
Well so far so good, on the earth not ending... If this finds you melting in some remote part, I’m sorry, but thanks for having read and reviewed. If like me, and you’re still hanging in there, the next installment will post on Wednesday, without any delay. Well you all seem to be divided on things, but I do promise that Jess and I have worked through a lot here and have a pretty clear amount of chapters written ahead. Some of you are torn over the spanking as a punishment. Some of you are torn over her lack of ability to act grown up. Our Edward knows she can be very mature and grown up, and that is the part of her he loves, but when she does stupid stuff and acts like a child, he feels the need to treat her like one. As for Bella being weak, she will grow and change. She will still have fast reactions to certain things, she will still make mistakes, but so will Edward—neither of them is perfect. Thanks all for reading and reviewing, we love the reactions to this story, even the few bad ones, are helping us to see things and ways others are thinking. Constructive criticism and of course great reviews are always welcome. Hope you enjoy your holiday! Kasi (&Jess)~
Teaser:
“So,” Jake says as we sit in the little sandwich shop down town.
“I thought we were going shopping,” I say laughing.
“You made me wait too long,” he says as we laugh more. “How’s Alice?”
“Good, I guess, she will be here for Thanksgiving. She’s really busy and what not with school. Why?” I ask. He seems weird, like he knows something that I don’t.
“Do you find it peculiar that she never talks about Landon on Facebook?” he asks. I wasn’t sure why he was so worried.
“I don’t know. Why are you asking such a thing?” I ask as he shrugs.
“I just think it’s weird. Your mom posts a new pic of Char like every day, and Alice doesn’t even say one word about Landon,” he says as I take my turn to shrug.
“Everyone is different.”
“Fine, I guess. Maybe I’m so lonely that I’m over thinking things. But still, I think you should really talk with her when she’s here,” he says pointing his manicured nail at me. “So, tell me what’s been going on with you.”
I have the best time with Jake. We never end up going shopping, but we do have the best conversation. We talk about everything and it was very overdue talk. Jake has a new boyfriend and I can’t wait to meet him. He told me he was going to try to bring him to Thanksgiving dinner. I knew if his boyfriend could handle a family dinner at my house than he was worth keeping around.
We have pizza for dinner and Alice never shows up. She is acting so weird and no one seems to know what is going on with her. I don’t even know who she is anymore. She’s not the fun loving girl I first met. Esme got a call from Alice asking her where we were. She must have had a lot on her mind since she flew all the way to St. Louis instead of here.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it and I can't wait until next week.
Merry Christmas and a wonderful "the Mayans got it wrong" day.
Author's Response:
Well so far so good, on the earth not ending... If this finds you melting in some remote part, I’m sorry, but thanks for having read and reviewed. If like me, and you’re still hanging in there, the next installment will post on Wednesday, without any delay. Well you all seem to be divided on things, but I do promise that Jess and I have worked through a lot here and have a pretty clear amount of chapters written ahead. Some of you are torn over the spanking as a punishment. Some of you are torn over her lack of ability to act grown up. Our Edward knows she can be very mature and grown up, and that is the part of her he loves, but when she does stupid stuff and acts like a child, he feels the need to treat her like one. As for Bella being weak, she will grow and change. She will still have fast reactions to certain things, she will still make mistakes, but so will Edward—neither of them is perfect. Thanks all for reading and reviewing, we love the reactions to this story, even the few bad ones, are helping us to see things and ways others are thinking. Constructive criticism and of course great reviews are always welcome. Hope you enjoy your holiday! Kasi (&Jess)~
Teaser:
“So,” Jake says as we sit in the little sandwich shop down town.
“I thought we were going shopping,” I say laughing.
“You made me wait too long,” he says as we laugh more. “How’s Alice?”
“Good, I guess, she will be here for Thanksgiving. She’s really busy and what not with school. Why?” I ask. He seems weird, like he knows something that I don’t.
“Do you find it peculiar that she never talks about Landon on Facebook?” he asks. I wasn’t sure why he was so worried.
“I don’t know. Why are you asking such a thing?” I ask as he shrugs.
“I just think it’s weird. Your mom posts a new pic of Char like every day, and Alice doesn’t even say one word about Landon,” he says as I take my turn to shrug.
“Everyone is different.”
“Fine, I guess. Maybe I’m so lonely that I’m over thinking things. But still, I think you should really talk with her when she’s here,” he says pointing his manicured nail at me. “So, tell me what’s been going on with you.”
I have the best time with Jake. We never end up going shopping, but we do have the best conversation. We talk about everything and it was very overdue talk. Jake has a new boyfriend and I can’t wait to meet him. He told me he was going to try to bring him to Thanksgiving dinner. I knew if his boyfriend could handle a family dinner at my house than he was worth keeping around.
We have pizza for dinner and Alice never shows up. She is acting so weird and no one seems to know what is going on with her. I don’t even know who she is anymore. She’s not the fun loving girl I first met. Esme got a call from Alice asking her where we were. She must have had a lot on her mind since she flew all the way to St. Louis instead of here.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
A good spanking thinning thoughts!
Bella is really horrible when she is angry.
Merry Christmas can be!
Author's Response:
Well so far so good, on the earth not ending... If this finds you melting in some remote part, I’m sorry, but thanks for having read and reviewed. If like me, and you’re still hanging in there, the next installment will post on Wednesday, without any delay. Well you all seem to be divided on things, but I do promise that Jess and I have worked through a lot here and have a pretty clear amount of chapters written ahead. Some of you are torn over the spanking as a punishment. Some of you are torn over her lack of ability to act grown up. Our Edward knows she can be very mature and grown up, and that is the part of her he loves, but when she does stupid stuff and acts like a child, he feels the need to treat her like one. As for Bella being weak, she will grow and change. She will still have fast reactions to certain things, she will still make mistakes, but so will Edward—neither of them is perfect. Thanks all for reading and reviewing, we love the reactions to this story, even the few bad ones, are helping us to see things and ways others are thinking. Constructive criticism and of course great reviews are always welcome. Hope you enjoy your holiday! Kasi (&Jess)~
Teaser:
“So,” Jake says as we sit in the little sandwich shop down town.
“I thought we were going shopping,” I say laughing.
“You made me wait too long,” he says as we laugh more. “How’s Alice?”
“Good, I guess, she will be here for Thanksgiving. She’s really busy and what not with school. Why?” I ask. He seems weird, like he knows something that I don’t.
“Do you find it peculiar that she never talks about Landon on Facebook?” he asks. I wasn’t sure why he was so worried.
“I don’t know. Why are you asking such a thing?” I ask as he shrugs.
“I just think it’s weird. Your mom posts a new pic of Char like every day, and Alice doesn’t even say one word about Landon,” he says as I take my turn to shrug.
“Everyone is different.”
“Fine, I guess. Maybe I’m so lonely that I’m over thinking things. But still, I think you should really talk with her when she’s here,” he says pointing his manicured nail at me. “So, tell me what’s been going on with you.”
I have the best time with Jake. We never end up going shopping, but we do have the best conversation. We talk about everything and it was very overdue talk. Jake has a new boyfriend and I can’t wait to meet him. He told me he was going to try to bring him to Thanksgiving dinner. I knew if his boyfriend could handle a family dinner at my house than he was worth keeping around.
We have pizza for dinner and Alice never shows up. She is acting so weird and no one seems to know what is going on with her. I don’t even know who she is anymore. She’s not the fun loving girl I first met. Esme got a call from Alice asking her where we were. She must have had a lot on her mind since she flew all the way to St. Louis instead of here.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Well so far so good, on the earth not ending... If this finds you melting in some remote part, I’m sorry, but thanks for having read and reviewed. If like me, and you’re still hanging in there, the next installment will post on Wednesday, without any delay. Well you all seem to be divided on things, but I do promise that Jess and I have worked through a lot here and have a pretty clear amount of chapters written ahead. Some of you are torn over the spanking as a punishment. Some of you are torn over her lack of ability to act grown up. Our Edward knows she can be very mature and grown up, and that is the part of her he loves, but when she does stupid stuff and acts like a child, he feels the need to treat her like one. As for Bella being weak, she will grow and change. She will still have fast reactions to certain things, she will still make mistakes, but so will Edward—neither of them is perfect. Thanks all for reading and reviewing, we love the reactions to this story, even the few bad ones, are helping us to see things and ways others are thinking. Constructive criticism and of course great reviews are always welcome. Hope you enjoy your holiday! Kasi (&Jess)~
Teaser:
“So,” Jake says as we sit in the little sandwich shop down town.
“I thought we were going shopping,” I say laughing.
“You made me wait too long,” he says as we laugh more. “How’s Alice?”
“Good, I guess, she will be here for Thanksgiving. She’s really busy and what not with school. Why?” I ask. He seems weird, like he knows something that I don’t.
“Do you find it peculiar that she never talks about Landon on Facebook?” he asks. I wasn’t sure why he was so worried.
“I don’t know. Why are you asking such a thing?” I ask as he shrugs.
“I just think it’s weird. Your mom posts a new pic of Char like every day, and Alice doesn’t even say one word about Landon,” he says as I take my turn to shrug.
“Everyone is different.”
“Fine, I guess. Maybe I’m so lonely that I’m over thinking things. But still, I think you should really talk with her when she’s here,” he says pointing his manicured nail at me. “So, tell me what’s been going on with you.”
I have the best time with Jake. We never end up going shopping, but we do have the best conversation. We talk about everything and it was very overdue talk. Jake has a new boyfriend and I can’t wait to meet him. He told me he was going to try to bring him to Thanksgiving dinner. I knew if his boyfriend could handle a family dinner at my house than he was worth keeping around.
We have pizza for dinner and Alice never shows up. She is acting so weird and no one seems to know what is going on with her. I don’t even know who she is anymore. She’s not the fun loving girl I first met. Esme got a call from Alice asking her where we were. She must have had a lot on her mind since she flew all the way to St. Louis instead of here.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it ;)
Author's Response:
Well so far so good, on the earth not ending... If this finds you melting in some remote part, I’m sorry, but thanks for having read and reviewed. If like me, and you’re still hanging in there, the next installment will post on Wednesday, without any delay. Well you all seem to be divided on things, but I do promise that Jess and I have worked through a lot here and have a pretty clear amount of chapters written ahead. Some of you are torn over the spanking as a punishment. Some of you are torn over her lack of ability to act grown up. Our Edward knows she can be very mature and grown up, and that is the part of her he loves, but when she does stupid stuff and acts like a child, he feels the need to treat her like one. As for Bella being weak, she will grow and change. She will still have fast reactions to certain things, she will still make mistakes, but so will Edward—neither of them is perfect. Thanks all for reading and reviewing, we love the reactions to this story, even the few bad ones, are helping us to see things and ways others are thinking. Constructive criticism and of course great reviews are always welcome. Hope you enjoy your holiday! Kasi (&Jess)~
Teaser:
“So,” Jake says as we sit in the little sandwich shop down town.
“I thought we were going shopping,” I say laughing.
“You made me wait too long,” he says as we laugh more. “How’s Alice?”
“Good, I guess, she will be here for Thanksgiving. She’s really busy and what not with school. Why?” I ask. He seems weird, like he knows something that I don’t.
“Do you find it peculiar that she never talks about Landon on Facebook?” he asks. I wasn’t sure why he was so worried.
“I don’t know. Why are you asking such a thing?” I ask as he shrugs.
“I just think it’s weird. Your mom posts a new pic of Char like every day, and Alice doesn’t even say one word about Landon,” he says as I take my turn to shrug.
“Everyone is different.”
“Fine, I guess. Maybe I’m so lonely that I’m over thinking things. But still, I think you should really talk with her when she’s here,” he says pointing his manicured nail at me. “So, tell me what’s been going on with you.”
I have the best time with Jake. We never end up going shopping, but we do have the best conversation. We talk about everything and it was very overdue talk. Jake has a new boyfriend and I can’t wait to meet him. He told me he was going to try to bring him to Thanksgiving dinner. I knew if his boyfriend could handle a family dinner at my house than he was worth keeping around.
We have pizza for dinner and Alice never shows up. She is acting so weird and no one seems to know what is going on with her. I don’t even know who she is anymore. She’s not the fun loving girl I first met. Esme got a call from Alice asking her where we were. She must have had a lot on her mind since she flew all the way to St. Louis instead of here.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad to see things are getting somewhat back to normal. It will probably be even better when Edward is finished. I know Bella is young, but she needs to give Edward a little twin Edward Jr. , soon! He would make such a fantastic dad. :) That being said, they need to get married first. Hopefully, that will happen soon.
I hope all goes well for Alice & Landon, and that she can find love & happiness. It's just sad that Assper made Alice feel as if she had to start over in a new place, and drove them away...out to California. Even though it's only a plane ride away, a lot of time will be missed watching Landon grow. I'm sad for Esme, and the rest of the family. :(
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Well we are again so pleased by the turn out and response to this chapter. Yes Bella will be a tad bitchy in the next chapter, but she has her reasons. Let’s see how Edward handles it. A whole lot, like 99.8% of you are begging for more Daddy-Kink, and we want to share that where they role-play, it will not be all daddy-kink... With that said, there will continue to be daddy-kink in the story, and there will be play on the age difference. There will be time jumps, but they will start to lessen in amounts of time. There is quite a bit of story yet to go. We’re loving all the comments about Jasper and the ways you think he should be handled. I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts after Chapter 20 posts. LOL... yes I am teasing you over a chapter you don’t get to read for 4 and ½ long weeks. Don’t be mad, it will be worth the wait. I promise... The next chapter is going to be Bella at one of her bitchiest times, and I was sure to give you a little piece of her bitchiness in the teaser... so excited to see next Wednesday’s reviews. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Jess~
TEASER:
My first thought is to knock his ass off the couch, but then he will probably follow me around and try to talk to me, and that is really the last thing I want right now. I somehow manage to get off the couch without waking him, and go to start the coffee before heading up the stairs to get ready for the day. By the time I am done in the shower, I hear Char crying and I know that my mom and Jim are up.
Just as I am about to walk out of the bedroom, I see the air horn that I bought sitting on the dresser. I bite my lip and think twice before I pick it up. What can I say... the bitch on my shoulder is rooting me on. Knowing what’s about to happen makes my day a whole lot better. I head down the stairs with a little pep in my step, and walk to the couch. I peek over to make sure he is still sleeping, and when I see that he is, I give the can a little shake and brace myself. I press the button long enough for it to let out a startling honk. I watch with a smug smile on my face as he flips off the couch, hitting his funny bone on the coffee table. Not so funny, is it? We make eye contact for a split second before I turn for the kitchen.
“That was very uncalled for, Isabella,” he says as he storms up the stairs. I high five the little bitch on my shoulder as I throw together some sort of breakfast. Jim walks in a little later with Char as my mother follows them.
“Bella, did you set off a smoke detector?” Jim asks as he makes himself a cup of coffee.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. I was rolling ith laughter over Bella and Jim with the baby vomit. I loved the whole chapter. It was amazing. Can't wait to see what set Bella off again. Will she be Edward's little slugger again? See ya next week.
Author's Response:
Well we are again so pleased by the turn out and response to this chapter. Yes Bella will be a tad bitchy in the next chapter, but she has her reasons. Let’s see how Edward handles it. A whole lot, like 99.8% of you are begging for more Daddy-Kink, and we want to share that where they role-play, it will not be all daddy-kink... With that said, there will continue to be daddy-kink in the story, and there will be play on the age difference. There will be time jumps, but they will start to lessen in amounts of time. There is quite a bit of story yet to go. We’re loving all the comments about Jasper and the ways you think he should be handled. I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts after Chapter 20 posts. LOL... yes I am teasing you over a chapter you don’t get to read for 4 and ½ long weeks. Don’t be mad, it will be worth the wait. I promise... The next chapter is going to be Bella at one of her bitchiest times, and I was sure to give you a little piece of her bitchiness in the teaser... so excited to see next Wednesday’s reviews. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Jess~
TEASER:
My first thought is to knock his ass off the couch, but then he will probably follow me around and try to talk to me, and that is really the last thing I want right now. I somehow manage to get off the couch without waking him, and go to start the coffee before heading up the stairs to get ready for the day. By the time I am done in the shower, I hear Char crying and I know that my mom and Jim are up.
Just as I am about to walk out of the bedroom, I see the air horn that I bought sitting on the dresser. I bite my lip and think twice before I pick it up. What can I say... the bitch on my shoulder is rooting me on. Knowing what’s about to happen makes my day a whole lot better. I head down the stairs with a little pep in my step, and walk to the couch. I peek over to make sure he is still sleeping, and when I see that he is, I give the can a little shake and brace myself. I press the button long enough for it to let out a startling honk. I watch with a smug smile on my face as he flips off the couch, hitting his funny bone on the coffee table. Not so funny, is it? We make eye contact for a split second before I turn for the kitchen.
“That was very uncalled for, Isabella,” he says as he storms up the stairs. I high five the little bitch on my shoulder as I throw together some sort of breakfast. Jim walks in a little later with Char as my mother follows them.
“Bella, did you set off a smoke detector?” Jim asks as he makes himself a cup of coffee.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad to read that Bella and her mom are getting along again.. love to hear about them having kids and the whole nine yards...
Author's Response:
Well we are again so pleased by the turn out and response to this chapter. Yes Bella will be a tad bitchy in the next chapter, but she has her reasons. Let’s see how Edward handles it. A whole lot, like 99.8% of you are begging for more Daddy-Kink, and we want to share that where they role-play, it will not be all daddy-kink... With that said, there will continue to be daddy-kink in the story, and there will be play on the age difference. There will be time jumps, but they will start to lessen in amounts of time. There is quite a bit of story yet to go. We’re loving all the comments about Jasper and the ways you think he should be handled. I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts after Chapter 20 posts. LOL... yes I am teasing you over a chapter you don’t get to read for 4 and ½ long weeks. Don’t be mad, it will be worth the wait. I promise... The next chapter is going to be Bella at one of her bitchiest times, and I was sure to give you a little piece of her bitchiness in the teaser... so excited to see next Wednesday’s reviews. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Jess~
TEASER:
My first thought is to knock his ass off the couch, but then he will probably follow me around and try to talk to me, and that is really the last thing I want right now. I somehow manage to get off the couch without waking him, and go to start the coffee before heading up the stairs to get ready for the day. By the time I am done in the shower, I hear Char crying and I know that my mom and Jim are up.
Just as I am about to walk out of the bedroom, I see the air horn that I bought sitting on the dresser. I bite my lip and think twice before I pick it up. What can I say... the bitch on my shoulder is rooting me on. Knowing what’s about to happen makes my day a whole lot better. I head down the stairs with a little pep in my step, and walk to the couch. I peek over to make sure he is still sleeping, and when I see that he is, I give the can a little shake and brace myself. I press the button long enough for it to let out a startling honk. I watch with a smug smile on my face as he flips off the couch, hitting his funny bone on the coffee table. Not so funny, is it? We make eye contact for a split second before I turn for the kitchen.
“That was very uncalled for, Isabella,” he says as he storms up the stairs. I high five the little bitch on my shoulder as I throw together some sort of breakfast. Jim walks in a little later with Char as my mother follows them.
“Bella, did you set off a smoke detector?” Jim asks as he makes himself a cup of coffee.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Well we are again so pleased by the turn out and response to this chapter. Yes Bella will be a tad bitchy in the next chapter, but she has her reasons. Let’s see how Edward handles it. A whole lot, like 99.8% of you are begging for more Daddy-Kink, and we want to share that where they role-play, it will not be all daddy-kink... With that said, there will continue to be daddy-kink in the story, and there will be play on the age difference. There will be time jumps, but they will start to lessen in amounts of time. There is quite a bit of story yet to go. We’re loving all the comments about Jasper and the ways you think he should be handled. I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts after Chapter 20 posts. LOL... yes I am teasing you over a chapter you don’t get to read for 4 and ½ long weeks. Don’t be mad, it will be worth the wait. I promise... The next chapter is going to be Bella at one of her bitchiest times, and I was sure to give you a little piece of her bitchiness in the teaser... so excited to see next Wednesday’s reviews. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Jess~
TEASER:
My first thought is to knock his ass off the couch, but then he will probably follow me around and try to talk to me, and that is really the last thing I want right now. I somehow manage to get off the couch without waking him, and go to start the coffee before heading up the stairs to get ready for the day. By the time I am done in the shower, I hear Char crying and I know that my mom and Jim are up.
Just as I am about to walk out of the bedroom, I see the air horn that I bought sitting on the dresser. I bite my lip and think twice before I pick it up. What can I say... the bitch on my shoulder is rooting me on. Knowing what’s about to happen makes my day a whole lot better. I head down the stairs with a little pep in my step, and walk to the couch. I peek over to make sure he is still sleeping, and when I see that he is, I give the can a little shake and brace myself. I press the button long enough for it to let out a startling honk. I watch with a smug smile on my face as he flips off the couch, hitting his funny bone on the coffee table. Not so funny, is it? We make eye contact for a split second before I turn for the kitchen.
“That was very uncalled for, Isabella,” he says as he storms up the stairs. I high five the little bitch on my shoulder as I throw together some sort of breakfast. Jim walks in a little later with Char as my mother follows them.
“Bella, did you set off a smoke detector?” Jim asks as he makes himself a cup of coffee.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aaa wow...glad mom and daughter are some what back to normal!!!
Author's Response:
Well we are again so pleased by the turn out and response to this chapter. Yes Bella will be a tad bitchy in the next chapter, but she has her reasons. Let’s see how Edward handles it. A whole lot, like 99.8% of you are begging for more Daddy-Kink, and we want to share that where they role-play, it will not be all daddy-kink... With that said, there will continue to be daddy-kink in the story, and there will be play on the age difference. There will be time jumps, but they will start to lessen in amounts of time. There is quite a bit of story yet to go. We’re loving all the comments about Jasper and the ways you think he should be handled. I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts after Chapter 20 posts. LOL... yes I am teasing you over a chapter you don’t get to read for 4 and ½ long weeks. Don’t be mad, it will be worth the wait. I promise... The next chapter is going to be Bella at one of her bitchiest times, and I was sure to give you a little piece of her bitchiness in the teaser... so excited to see next Wednesday’s reviews. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Jess~
TEASER:
My first thought is to knock his ass off the couch, but then he will probably follow me around and try to talk to me, and that is really the last thing I want right now. I somehow manage to get off the couch without waking him, and go to start the coffee before heading up the stairs to get ready for the day. By the time I am done in the shower, I hear Char crying and I know that my mom and Jim are up.
Just as I am about to walk out of the bedroom, I see the air horn that I bought sitting on the dresser. I bite my lip and think twice before I pick it up. What can I say... the bitch on my shoulder is rooting me on. Knowing what’s about to happen makes my day a whole lot better. I head down the stairs with a little pep in my step, and walk to the couch. I peek over to make sure he is still sleeping, and when I see that he is, I give the can a little shake and brace myself. I press the button long enough for it to let out a startling honk. I watch with a smug smile on my face as he flips off the couch, hitting his funny bone on the coffee table. Not so funny, is it? We make eye contact for a split second before I turn for the kitchen.
“That was very uncalled for, Isabella,” he says as he storms up the stairs. I high five the little bitch on my shoulder as I throw together some sort of breakfast. Jim walks in a little later with Char as my mother follows them.
“Bella, did you set off a smoke detector?” Jim asks as he makes himself a cup of coffee.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love the story so far ladies. I'm sorry to hear about your mom. The surprise for Bella was a good one. Happy to see her mom coming around a bit on the whole thing.
Author's Response:
Well we are again so pleased by the turn out and response to this chapter. Yes Bella will be a tad bitchy in the next chapter, but she has her reasons. Let’s see how Edward handles it. A whole lot, like 99.8% of you are begging for more Daddy-Kink, and we want to share that where they role-play, it will not be all daddy-kink... With that said, there will continue to be daddy-kink in the story, and there will be play on the age difference. There will be time jumps, but they will start to lessen in amounts of time. There is quite a bit of story yet to go. We’re loving all the comments about Jasper and the ways you think he should be handled. I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts after Chapter 20 posts. LOL... yes I am teasing you over a chapter you don’t get to read for 4 and ½ long weeks. Don’t be mad, it will be worth the wait. I promise... The next chapter is going to be Bella at one of her bitchiest times, and I was sure to give you a little piece of her bitchiness in the teaser... so excited to see next Wednesday’s reviews. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Jess~
TEASER:
My first thought is to knock his ass off the couch, but then he will probably follow me around and try to talk to me, and that is really the last thing I want right now. I somehow manage to get off the couch without waking him, and go to start the coffee before heading up the stairs to get ready for the day. By the time I am done in the shower, I hear Char crying and I know that my mom and Jim are up.
Just as I am about to walk out of the bedroom, I see the air horn that I bought sitting on the dresser. I bite my lip and think twice before I pick it up. What can I say... the bitch on my shoulder is rooting me on. Knowing what’s about to happen makes my day a whole lot better. I head down the stairs with a little pep in my step, and walk to the couch. I peek over to make sure he is still sleeping, and when I see that he is, I give the can a little shake and brace myself. I press the button long enough for it to let out a startling honk. I watch with a smug smile on my face as he flips off the couch, hitting his funny bone on the coffee table. Not so funny, is it? We make eye contact for a split second before I turn for the kitchen.
“That was very uncalled for, Isabella,” he says as he storms up the stairs. I high five the little bitch on my shoulder as I throw together some sort of breakfast. Jim walks in a little later with Char as my mother follows them.
“Bella, did you set off a smoke detector?” Jim asks as he makes himself a cup of coffee.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
looking forward to the next chapter !
Author's Response:
Well we are again so pleased by the turn out and response to this chapter. Yes Bella will be a tad bitchy in the next chapter, but she has her reasons. Let’s see how Edward handles it. A whole lot, like 99.8% of you are begging for more Daddy-Kink, and we want to share that where they role-play, it will not be all daddy-kink... With that said, there will continue to be daddy-kink in the story, and there will be play on the age difference. There will be time jumps, but they will start to lessen in amounts of time. There is quite a bit of story yet to go. We’re loving all the comments about Jasper and the ways you think he should be handled. I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts after Chapter 20 posts. LOL... yes I am teasing you over a chapter you don’t get to read for 4 and ½ long weeks. Don’t be mad, it will be worth the wait. I promise... The next chapter is going to be Bella at one of her bitchiest times, and I was sure to give you a little piece of her bitchiness in the teaser... so excited to see next Wednesday’s reviews. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Jess~
TEASER:
My first thought is to knock his ass off the couch, but then he will probably follow me around and try to talk to me, and that is really the last thing I want right now. I somehow manage to get off the couch without waking him, and go to start the coffee before heading up the stairs to get ready for the day. By the time I am done in the shower, I hear Char crying and I know that my mom and Jim are up.
Just as I am about to walk out of the bedroom, I see the air horn that I bought sitting on the dresser. I bite my lip and think twice before I pick it up. What can I say... the bitch on my shoulder is rooting me on. Knowing what’s about to happen makes my day a whole lot better. I head down the stairs with a little pep in my step, and walk to the couch. I peek over to make sure he is still sleeping, and when I see that he is, I give the can a little shake and brace myself. I press the button long enough for it to let out a startling honk. I watch with a smug smile on my face as he flips off the couch, hitting his funny bone on the coffee table. Not so funny, is it? We make eye contact for a split second before I turn for the kitchen.
“That was very uncalled for, Isabella,” he says as he storms up the stairs. I high five the little bitch on my shoulder as I throw together some sort of breakfast. Jim walks in a little later with Char as my mother follows them.
“Bella, did you set off a smoke detector?” Jim asks as he makes himself a cup of coffee.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
I loved the chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one. My favorite line in this chapter was: I watch myself hit the tramp, fix my shirt, and turn walking away. Go Bella!
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
I would have done the same thing to the baseball bunny (whore) js....
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.