[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
So happy your Bella has a spine!!! Both Edward and Bella had faults in what happened...communication is the key I hope they are both learning. :)
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
I loved it!!! Favorite line "He'll probably pay you off next"
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
Uh oh! Is Bella pregnant? She's acting awfully irrational & hormonal. LOL If she's not preggers, then she's just being her typical immature 18 year old self! I think it's cool that Liz finally said something in Edward's defense. It's about time. But Bella needs to chill. Edward is a good man, and if she keeps acting like this, she might lose him.
And Assper...what a fucking douche nozzle! The nerve of him! He absolutely disgusts me!
OH NO! Poor Jessica is preggers with Assper's spawn, too. I feel for her! But she should've known better when she saw how Assper treated Alice. But she's young and dumb, and will have to unfortunately learn the hard way. It's a shame that someone like him can procreate!
Again, I have to say it...he's such a slimy choad! I'm GLAD that Edward hit him with the ball. Too bad he couldn't do a lot more!
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
I loved when Bella appoligied to Edward and then punched Assper in the nuts so I guess my favorite line was "I'm sorry Edward" priceless. Dont mess with Bella and I would be willing to bet all baseball bunnys will not mess with Edward anymore lol
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love this chapter!
Bella is very jealous.
What I loved is what Carlisle said:
I think she did what any woman should have at least thought of it!
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh snap! Go Bella!!!!
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
The umpires....couldn't throw Edward out of the game for that.....in real life.....it was a perfect pitch for a line drive...right at the pitcher, that happens all the time. S any player wouldn't have been ejected for that.
kudos to Bella....I would have wanted to hit a bitch too...and then the whole junk punching jasper thing was priceless!!!!
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward ot more
Author's Response:
Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums. Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt. Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time. As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction. Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense. Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them. I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight. I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that. I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!” LOVE IT—just sayin’. As promised we would share our favorite line with you... Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle. Mine is: “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.” We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love. Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~
TEASER: “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”
“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”
“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.
“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”
“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.
“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.
“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.
“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.
“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.
“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.
“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.
“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.
“Why?”
“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope there can be a new chapter soon
Author's Response:
A lot of you are worried that we will let Edward become a cheater and that he will step out on Bella, but let us assure you of one thing that this story will not have and that is Edward screwing someone else on the side. With that said, not everything will be peaches and cream all the time, they are still working out the learning curve of living together. They are also working on being together all the time at home, not out on the road traveling for games, and all that stuff. As for the marriage issue, between Bella and Edward – we are not saying that marriage will never happen – Bella is only 18, marriage just isn’t her priority. The next chapter is one of my favorite chapters so far, so many things happen and it really was fun to write. Hope you enjoy it too. Kasi & (Jess)~
TEASER: “Hey Esme, thanks for picking me up. How are you today?” I ask getting into the car.
“I’m good Bella, you look really cute today. You all set for the trip to Florida tomorrow morning?”
“Yeah I packed last night, because I was bored. Edward didn’t want to go out and do anything, and I was a little mad about it. I start school soon, and he will still be playing ball, so I just felt put out when he wanted to be a couch potato last night. We didn’t even eat dinner together. I told him I wasn’t hungry and went to our room. I was kinda bitchy, but he was being an old man.”
“Well honey he is older than you are,” she says with a chuckle.
“Yeah, but he is in great shape, besides he isn’t that old. I wish sometimes he didn’t act so laid back and actually acted like he wants to have fun and be happy.”
“I am sure he was just worried about the game today. They need to win today to have a one and half game cushion going into the series with the Marlins. Not to mention a lot of publicity has circulated about the Marlin series, because it is the first time they will play against Whitlock.”
****New chapter posts tomorrow morning****
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter. I'm glad that things are working out for Liz and Bella. It was kind of sad when she said no one was there for her graduation. I'm happy Jake made it for her. Looking forward to some Bella/Edward time. See ya next week.
Author's Response:
A lot of you are worried that we will let Edward become a cheater and that he will step out on Bella, but let us assure you of one thing that this story will not have and that is Edward screwing someone else on the side. With that said, not everything will be peaches and cream all the time, they are still working out the learning curve of living together. They are also working on being together all the time at home, not out on the road traveling for games, and all that stuff. As for the marriage issue, between Bella and Edward – we are not saying that marriage will never happen – Bella is only 18, marriage just isn’t her priority. The next chapter is one of my favorite chapters so far, so many things happen and it really was fun to write. Hope you enjoy it too. Kasi & (Jess)~
TEASER: “Hey Esme, thanks for picking me up. How are you today?” I ask getting into the car.
“I’m good Bella, you look really cute today. You all set for the trip to Florida tomorrow morning?”
“Yeah I packed last night, because I was bored. Edward didn’t want to go out and do anything, and I was a little mad about it. I start school soon, and he will still be playing ball, so I just felt put out when he wanted to be a couch potato last night. We didn’t even eat dinner together. I told him I wasn’t hungry and went to our room. I was kinda bitchy, but he was being an old man.”
“Well honey he is older than you are,” she says with a chuckle.
“Yeah, but he is in great shape, besides he isn’t that old. I wish sometimes he didn’t act so laid back and actually acted like he wants to have fun and be happy.”
“I am sure he was just worried about the game today. They need to win today to have a one and half game cushion going into the series with the Marlins. Not to mention a lot of publicity has circulated about the Marlin series, because it is the first time they will play against Whitlock.”
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for this great chapter.
I am glad that Bella is réconcillié with his mom!
Arrival of Edward, it's party time.
Author's Response:
A lot of you are worried that we will let Edward become a cheater and that he will step out on Bella, but let us assure you of one thing that this story will not have and that is Edward screwing someone else on the side. With that said, not everything will be peaches and cream all the time, they are still working out the learning curve of living together. They are also working on being together all the time at home, not out on the road traveling for games, and all that stuff. As for the marriage issue, between Bella and Edward – we are not saying that marriage will never happen – Bella is only 18, marriage just isn’t her priority. The next chapter is one of my favorite chapters so far, so many things happen and it really was fun to write. Hope you enjoy it too. Kasi & (Jess)~
TEASER: “Hey Esme, thanks for picking me up. How are you today?” I ask getting into the car.
“I’m good Bella, you look really cute today. You all set for the trip to Florida tomorrow morning?”
“Yeah I packed last night, because I was bored. Edward didn’t want to go out and do anything, and I was a little mad about it. I start school soon, and he will still be playing ball, so I just felt put out when he wanted to be a couch potato last night. We didn’t even eat dinner together. I told him I wasn’t hungry and went to our room. I was kinda bitchy, but he was being an old man.”
“Well honey he is older than you are,” she says with a chuckle.
“Yeah, but he is in great shape, besides he isn’t that old. I wish sometimes he didn’t act so laid back and actually acted like he wants to have fun and be happy.”
“I am sure he was just worried about the game today. They need to win today to have a one and half game cushion going into the series with the Marlins. Not to mention a lot of publicity has circulated about the Marlin series, because it is the first time they will play against Whitlock.”
Date: 28 Nov 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
A lot of you are worried that we will let Edward become a cheater and that he will step out on Bella, but let us assure you of one thing that this story will not have and that is Edward screwing someone else on the side. With that said, not everything will be peaches and cream all the time, they are still working out the learning curve of living together. They are also working on being together all the time at home, not out on the road traveling for games, and all that stuff. As for the marriage issue, between Bella and Edward – we are not saying that marriage will never happen – Bella is only 18, marriage just isn’t her priority. The next chapter is one of my favorite chapters so far, so many things happen and it really was fun to write. Hope you enjoy it too. Kasi & (Jess)~
TEASER: “Hey Esme, thanks for picking me up. How are you today?” I ask getting into the car.
“I’m good Bella, you look really cute today. You all set for the trip to Florida tomorrow morning?”
“Yeah I packed last night, because I was bored. Edward didn’t want to go out and do anything, and I was a little mad about it. I start school soon, and he will still be playing ball, so I just felt put out when he wanted to be a couch potato last night. We didn’t even eat dinner together. I told him I wasn’t hungry and went to our room. I was kinda bitchy, but he was being an old man.”
“Well honey he is older than you are,” she says with a chuckle.
“Yeah, but he is in great shape, besides he isn’t that old. I wish sometimes he didn’t act so laid back and actually acted like he wants to have fun and be happy.”
“I am sure he was just worried about the game today. They need to win today to have a one and half game cushion going into the series with the Marlins. Not to mention a lot of publicity has circulated about the Marlin series, because it is the first time they will play against Whitlock.”
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
Im so happy that her and her mom have came back together.
Author's Response:
A lot of you are worried that we will let Edward become a cheater and that he will step out on Bella, but let us assure you of one thing that this story will not have and that is Edward screwing someone else on the side. With that said, not everything will be peaches and cream all the time, they are still working out the learning curve of living together. They are also working on being together all the time at home, not out on the road traveling for games, and all that stuff. As for the marriage issue, between Bella and Edward – we are not saying that marriage will never happen – Bella is only 18, marriage just isn’t her priority. The next chapter is one of my favorite chapters so far, so many things happen and it really was fun to write. Hope you enjoy it too. Kasi & (Jess)~
TEASER: “Hey Esme, thanks for picking me up. How are you today?” I ask getting into the car.
“I’m good Bella, you look really cute today. You all set for the trip to Florida tomorrow morning?”
“Yeah I packed last night, because I was bored. Edward didn’t want to go out and do anything, and I was a little mad about it. I start school soon, and he will still be playing ball, so I just felt put out when he wanted to be a couch potato last night. We didn’t even eat dinner together. I told him I wasn’t hungry and went to our room. I was kinda bitchy, but he was being an old man.”
“Well honey he is older than you are,” she says with a chuckle.
“Yeah, but he is in great shape, besides he isn’t that old. I wish sometimes he didn’t act so laid back and actually acted like he wants to have fun and be happy.”
“I am sure he was just worried about the game today. They need to win today to have a one and half game cushion going into the series with the Marlins. Not to mention a lot of publicity has circulated about the Marlin series, because it is the first time they will play against Whitlock.”
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think it was so sad that Jake was the only one there for Bella's graduation. I like that Bella and her Mom are working on their relationship.
Author's Response:
A lot of you are worried that we will let Edward become a cheater and that he will step out on Bella, but let us assure you of one thing that this story will not have and that is Edward screwing someone else on the side. With that said, not everything will be peaches and cream all the time, they are still working out the learning curve of living together. They are also working on being together all the time at home, not out on the road traveling for games, and all that stuff. As for the marriage issue, between Bella and Edward – we are not saying that marriage will never happen – Bella is only 18, marriage just isn’t her priority. The next chapter is one of my favorite chapters so far, so many things happen and it really was fun to write. Hope you enjoy it too. Kasi & (Jess)~
TEASER: “Hey Esme, thanks for picking me up. How are you today?” I ask getting into the car.
“I’m good Bella, you look really cute today. You all set for the trip to Florida tomorrow morning?”
“Yeah I packed last night, because I was bored. Edward didn’t want to go out and do anything, and I was a little mad about it. I start school soon, and he will still be playing ball, so I just felt put out when he wanted to be a couch potato last night. We didn’t even eat dinner together. I told him I wasn’t hungry and went to our room. I was kinda bitchy, but he was being an old man.”
“Well honey he is older than you are,” she says with a chuckle.
“Yeah, but he is in great shape, besides he isn’t that old. I wish sometimes he didn’t act so laid back and actually acted like he wants to have fun and be happy.”
“I am sure he was just worried about the game today. They need to win today to have a one and half game cushion going into the series with the Marlins. Not to mention a lot of publicity has circulated about the Marlin series, because it is the first time they will play against Whitlock.”
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
A lot of you are worried that we will let Edward become a cheater and that he will step out on Bella, but let us assure you of one thing that this story will not have and that is Edward screwing someone else on the side. With that said, not everything will be peaches and cream all the time, they are still working out the learning curve of living together. They are also working on being together all the time at home, not out on the road traveling for games, and all that stuff. As for the marriage issue, between Bella and Edward – we are not saying that marriage will never happen – Bella is only 18, marriage just isn’t her priority. The next chapter is one of my favorite chapters so far, so many things happen and it really was fun to write. Hope you enjoy it too. Kasi & (Jess)~
TEASER: “Hey Esme, thanks for picking me up. How are you today?” I ask getting into the car.
“I’m good Bella, you look really cute today. You all set for the trip to Florida tomorrow morning?”
“Yeah I packed last night, because I was bored. Edward didn’t want to go out and do anything, and I was a little mad about it. I start school soon, and he will still be playing ball, so I just felt put out when he wanted to be a couch potato last night. We didn’t even eat dinner together. I told him I wasn’t hungry and went to our room. I was kinda bitchy, but he was being an old man.”
“Well honey he is older than you are,” she says with a chuckle.
“Yeah, but he is in great shape, besides he isn’t that old. I wish sometimes he didn’t act so laid back and actually acted like he wants to have fun and be happy.”
“I am sure he was just worried about the game today. They need to win today to have a one and half game cushion going into the series with the Marlins. Not to mention a lot of publicity has circulated about the Marlin series, because it is the first time they will play against Whitlock.”
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
god no offense but her mom is a mega bitch like seriously!!!!!!!!!!!! love the daddy kink thrown in there lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
Date: 23 Nov 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
I feel bad she found out that way and Liz better fix the mistake thing because she cant feel that way about Bella she is just hormonal. I was so happy Edward came to be with her she needs him.
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love this chapter. I'm not real surprised by how Bella found out and her reaction was warranted after the way Liz has treated her. Sheis right, all Liz ever does is call having a child at a young age a mistake. When you are that child, how else would you feel when hearing that? Do I think that they will reconcile, probably but it'd tke a long time for me to forgive and understand the way Liz has treated Bella ( if I were Bella). I'd bet money that Edward will have a big part in helping them reconcile. See ya next time.
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
Date: 22 Nov 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
I have a song for these two. Check out Spinnerette-Sex Bomb. I feally like your story.
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
PS... LOVE THE SONG IT FITS BELLA TO A TEE!
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Gosh I love this story and I can't wait to see where you take thing.... Her mom is dead ass wrong with all the shit she's pulling. I can't believe that with how close they were that she's acting a straight fool now. Who's the kid in the relationship again? Poor Jim he seems so nice and he's being pulled all kinds of ways.
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward a bien fait de venir !
Bella est en colère contre Jim et sa mère, c'est normal.
Bon chapitre, merci.
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Nothing wrong with a possessive guy... I myself love them
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is hurt and feels betrayed. She feels like her mom thinks bella is a mistake but I don't think so. Poor Jim, he tried so very hard and was unaware that Bella didn't know and Bella said some very hurtful things to him and that was out of hurt and a little immaturity. I hope they will patch things up soon. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Absolutely loved it :)
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think Bella's mother needs to wake up to the mistakes she's making with her daughter. She seems to be completely self-absorbed. Maybe her new husband can help her see the light. I can see why she wants "Daddy" Edward, since she needs a stabilizing parent figure in her life. Hope to hear more about what's going on with Alice. Will Carlisle and Esme ever get married?
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
I THINK LIZ HAS SOME GROVEL TO DO, BELLA AND EDWARD ARE SHOWING MORE MATURITY THAN LIZ
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think the way she found out was pretty clever. I feel sorry for Jim because he caught Bella's wrath. I like him. He seems like a good guy. But why didn't Liz tell Bella she was pregnant?
Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree. Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella. Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella. Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy? There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry. Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters. Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow. We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing. Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”
“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.
“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.
“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.
“Am I hurting you?”
“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”
“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.
“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.
“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.
“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter. Especially the lemony goodness. Alice is trying to make things work the best she can for her and her child, I just hope she (and Jasper) stick to their agreement. Maybe she should movie in with Bella until Bella graduates and goes off to marry Edward/college. It's a thought. That would give Bella someone to talk to and Alice someone she knows to help her. Thanks for writing and I'll see ya next time.
Author's Response:
Sorry for being a bad review replier... I promise to do better the rest of the story. Kasi (&Jess)
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !
Merci.
Author's Response:
Sorry for being a bad review replier... I promise to do better the rest of the story. Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 14 Nov 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww.. I hope Alice gets everything worked out and is happy!!
Author's Response:
Sorry for being a bad review replier... I promise to do better the rest of the story. Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 14 Nov 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it Edward is amazing in all ways.
Author's Response:
Sorry for being a bad review replier... I promise to do better the rest of the story. Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
AT LEAST WE KNOW A LITTLE MORE ABOUT ALICE
Author's Response:
Sorry for being a bad review replier... I promise to do better the rest of the story. Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 14 Nov 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Sorry for being a bad review replier... I promise to do better the rest of the story. Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 09 Nov 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
So is Liz pregnant? I have a feeling that she's knocked up and that's making her extra emotional.
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
I have truely have been enjoying reading this story very much soooo!!!! I wanted to thank you for all your hard work & dedicacation!!! Please keep up with the frequent Updates becaue we all appreciate frequent updates Temendously so!!!
smileya987
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
Liz is acting completely irrational. I understand that she doesn't like their relationship, but she should love her daughter enough to want her to be happy. If the relationship isn't strong enough, it will implode on its own. Liz constantly pushing to get them apart is simply pushing them closer together and Bella further away from her. How is Bella going to feel when Liz reveals she is pregnant? At least that is what I got from the "hormonal but can't be on her period" section of the chapter. If I were Bella I would think she was pushing me away so she can focus all her love and attention on the baby she wanted, not the mistake that I was. Just a thought. As for Alice, she has found someone just like her biological father apparently and who knows what is going through her head. I look forward to each update and can't wait until next week for another chapter. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sounds like Liz is pregnant; that should be interesting.
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think Elizabeth is pregnant but bella hasn't even noticed.
I have to admit I know that it might probably freak me out about my daughter seeing an older man but if she's happy then what the hell no?
Edward is being sooo supportive and grown up about the situation, I just love him :)
good chapter by the way
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bon chapitre !
J'espère que tout va bien aller pour nos amoureux.
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think Elizabeth is pregnant. However, hormones or not, she needs to quit acting like she is! She's really driving a wedge that may not be able to be undone.
If Alice is back with Assper...I'm gonna be SO disappointed! I realize she's vulnerable, right now...but, UGH!
I also wonder what prompted that press conference? Was Jasper & Alice only "posing" as a "happy" couple to help Assper save face? They obviously don't think about anyone other than themselves.
As for Assper...a leopard doesn't change their spots, especially not that quickly, if at all. Alice is STUPID if she believes otherwise.
I hate that Bella & Edward has once again been dragged down into the negativity because of dumbass Assper & Alice's poor choices. This is probably why Alice hasn't called Bella...out of guilt. I hope this doesn't cause trouble for E&B...they have enough trouble with Bella's mom.
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Is Liz pregnant?
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Is Liz pregers????
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
I can't even begin to figure out what's up with Alice. Can't wait to find out though. And I'm so glad that Edward did not deny his relationship with Bella when the reporters asked. That right there should show Liz what type of man he is. Speaking of Liz, what is her problem? Is she pregnant? Jim said she was being hormonal. Of course that's no reason to be mean to Bella. Can't wait for next update.
Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
IS IT POSSIBLE THAT LIZ IS PREGNANT? SHE'S NOT OLD
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Liz is being a total bitch. Is she pregnant? That might account for some of her mood swings. This is sure one tangled up family. Things should get interesting when Alice arrives. Will Esme be as supportive of her as she is of Bella?
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow!! Kinda wondering if Renee is pregnant with the way she has been acting?!?!? Love that Daddy Carlislee stood up for Bella and Edward at the end of your chapter. I do wonder why Jasper has had a change of heart and if he is treating Alice decently. I am looking forward to your next update! :)
Author's Response:
So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant. Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe. Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course. Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon. Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her. You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.
Kasi & Jessica
Teaser: I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.
“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”
“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.
“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
She doesnt want to push Bella so hard. I enjoyed there time together something to dream about
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter, love your story can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Liz is such a witch! I am a mom and I would be worried too, but damn she needs to back off or whe will loose Bella forever. Pushing her will only push her faster in the opposite direction that Liz wants her to go. Me, I would leave for dinner and then follow through with the previous threats of moving out and taking the child support with me to pay rent. It might wake Liz up and make her see that she is going to loose her daughter forever if she doesn't back off.
Great chapter and I loved the sexy times. Major concern for Alice because her Dad doesn't sound any better than Assper! See ya next week.
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Go Bella, give her hell.
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
love it
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'M MORE CONCERNED ABOUT ALICE. POOR GIRL SUFFERS WITH JASPER THEN WITH HER FATHER, WHY CAN SHE STAY WITH ESME?WONDERFUL SEXCY TIMES FOR BELLA AND EDWARD ;)
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
the ultimatums are crazy....they gotta work this shit out!
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm so sad and worried for Alice. This is an awful lot to be put on such young shoulders. I wouldn't want ASSper around me or anyone I loved. He's a cruel, immature, dominating, controlling nut! Alice's dad Gary doesn't sound much better. I wonder why she went to him, instead of going to Thanksgiving with her family? Is it because she couldn't stand the thought of being around a bunch of happy couples? I'm also curious if Alice got pregnant on purpose? I hope everything works out for her...MINUS Assper!
Like I said before...Bella's mom is going to keep it up until she pushes Bella away. I'm surprised she didn't try something even more stupid and childish, like inviting Ben over for dinner. That would've been epic! LOL
I wonder what Edward plans on doing after his retirement? Does he have a degree? Just curious. :)
Thanks again, for this great story, and thanks for liking my renaming of Jasper to "ASSper". He's definitely an ass...to say the LEAST!
Looking forward to next update! ;)
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
C'est un bon chapitre !
Je pense que la mère de Bella va céder et qu'elle va se mettre à côté d'Edward.
Merci.
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love your story!!! This is by far the best story I've read. ! Keep up the good work! Also will we be seeing Bella have little Edwards eventually in this story ?
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella's mom is being a real bitch.
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
I don't think she'll leave. Jim and Carlisle will step in before that happens.
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all. Kasi~
Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story. Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time. Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10. All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually. We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself. There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you. Kasi & Jess.
Teaser for chapter 10: “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.
“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”
“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”
“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.
“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.
“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”
“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.
“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.
“Yes, I’m okay. Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.
“Why are you calling so late?”
“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.
“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”
“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! Liz's reaction I initially was probably what any mother who had a child extremely young(or not) would do. However, considering that Bella is responsible enough to be on birth control, she didn't start a relationship with Edward until very recently, her first sexual experience was with a boy her age and she wants to finish schools and go to college; she needs to realize that Bella is not her. Edward won't let Bella make rash decision like someone who is younger than him either. Liz needs to really think about whether sheis willing to loose her daughter over this or if she would rather have her in her house where she can monitor her interactions with the man she is concerned about. She isn't thinking logically but most mothers wouldn't be.
Thanks for writing this story. I love it.
Author's Response:
Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places. Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter. A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not. A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard. A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid. We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser: “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.
“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.
“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”
“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.
“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.
“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”
“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think that Bella's mom really took things to the extreme. As a parent myself, I can understand her concern to an extent, especially after Alice & Jasper's horrible display at the wedding. However, Liz didn't handle ANY of this the right way, or take certain facts into consideration. Whatever happened between Alice & ASSper, shouldn't reflect upon Bella & Edward.
Ultimately...what it boils down to is the fact that Bella IS 18, and is an adult now. If Liz continues to act like this, she will only push Bella away. If she alienates Edward, then she will do the same to Bella. She needs to pick her battles more wisely. However, she's being too unreasonable and irrational to seem to realize any of this. Same with Carlisle, although I have to give him some credit for not acting as poorly as Liz. That being said, he still needs to lighten up, and not dictate to Bella so much now that she's a woman. It will only be counterproductive.
I only hope that Bella & Edward can make this work. Regardless of the age difference, they seem perfect for each other. I also hope that Edward doesn't go all noble and walk away, thinking that he's put a wedge in Bella's family, because it will, anyway. Bella will blame her parents, if he leaves, and the damage will be done. He needs to fight for her, if need be...stand up to her parents, and let them know that he truly loves her, and that he's NOT going anywhere. If he doesn't, Bella might think that he doesn't want her, or that she's not worth it. I'm surprised that Bella was as mature as she was during this. Proud of her. They deserve a HEA!
I definitely DO NOT want to see Bella end up with some douche like Ben or Assper! Now that would be a MISTAKE & a TRAGEDY! Her parents better get their crap together, and realize that it could be far, FAR worse! Edward's actually quite a catch - successful, handsome, mature, and he's someone they KNOW, whose always truly loved, cared for, and been good to their daughter. His intentions are good/honorable - he wants to marry her, not just have sex. That should tell them that he's NOTHING like ASSper. They need to get their heads out of their asses, and realize that, before it's too late.
As for poor Alice...I HOPE that she stays away from Assper. What he's said and done - not just at the wedding, but throughout the entire relationship, if you can even call it that - is UNFORGIVABLE!!! I wouldn't want someone like that around me or my child! He's got serious issues, and at his age, I don't see him being able to change. He's the one that the adults need to be focusing on, and angry at...not Edward! He's the one who took Alice's virginity when she was underage, then got her pregnant, whilst in a relationship with another young girl that he also apparently treats like shit! Grrrr! He makes me sick!
Great story, so far, and very well written. Looking forward to the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places. Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter. A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not. A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard. A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid. We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser: “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.
“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.
“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”
“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.
“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.
“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”
“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.
PS... Thanks for the Assper we like it so much we incorperated it into a future chapter! THANKS TO YOU!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
C'est un bon chapitre !
La situation est délicate pour Edward et Bella mais je pense que Liz va céder et accepter Edward pour l'amour de sa fille.
Merci.
Author's Response:
Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places. Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter. A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not. A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard. A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid. We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser: “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.
“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.
“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”
“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.
“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.
“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”
“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
looking forward to mroe
Author's Response:
Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places. Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter. A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not. A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard. A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid. We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser: “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.
“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.
“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”
“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.
“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.
“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”
“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think Liz had the right to freak out but she needs to watch out because Bella is eighteen and will not stop loving Edward. I hope Edward doesnt walk away from Bella for her family it will not work.
Author's Response:
Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places. Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter. A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not. A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard. A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid. We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser: “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.
“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.
“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”
“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.
“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.
“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”
“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.
Author's Response:
Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places. Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter. A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not. A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard. A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid. We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser: “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.
“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.
“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”
“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.
“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.
“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”
“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it :)))
Author's Response:
Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places. Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter. A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not. A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard. A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid. We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser: “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.
“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.
“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”
“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.
“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.
“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”
“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.
Author's Response:
Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places. Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter. A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not. A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard. A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid. We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser: “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.
“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.
“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”
“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.
“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.
“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”
“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
I see Liz point, but as a mother of a teenager boy I know that if you forbid something, it will become the most desired thing and they will do anything to get it. This is where you act like an adult and think before talk. Even if Bella wasn't in love with Edward after Liz tirade she would run to him.
I liked more Carlisle attitude, he was aware of what Bella can do and never impossed his pov. He rather negotiate with her.
Author's Response:
Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places. Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter. A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not. A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard. A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid. We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~
Teaser: “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.
“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.
“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”
“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.
“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.
“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”
“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Maybe Edward can hit Jasper in the head and knock some sense into him.
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Jasper what a prick and he needs the shit kicked out of him over and over and over. Alice needs to take him for everything he is worth. Bella is growing up nicely and Ben is such an idoit.
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh shit Edward is older then Carlisle.. I must have messed that
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow great chapter, Jasper is a world class ass..can not wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Aww..... Poor Alice. I want better for her. I wonder if Ben will cause trouble?
Edward is a damn good man!
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
J'aime ce chapitre !
Jasper à été horrible, pauvre Alice.
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love this story!
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
Another amazing chapter. Loved the wedding, the drama at the reception and of course the lemon. Thanks for writing this story.
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Japer is a major ass. I liked the chapter. I just love Edward. I was so proud of Bella for making Bella's mom and Jim's day. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
CLEARLY THEY DESERVED SEXY TIME. I GUESS LIZ DOESN'T REMEMBER BUT WITH JASPER AND ALICE I THINK SHE HAS OTHER THINGS IN HER MIND. BTW, I WANT TO KICK JASPER BALL'S
Author's Response:
Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter. Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions. Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once. As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes. Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father. Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day. (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.) There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~
TEASER: “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.
“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.
“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.
“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.
“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago. And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first. Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control. Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”
“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.
“Mom…”
“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.
“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.
“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
C'est un bon chapitre !
Carlisle est sévère et Edward aussi.
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thanks
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
J'aime cette fiction.
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thanks
Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your kind words and for the wonderful review. We are so pleased with how this is going. Kasi and Jess
Teaser: The reception is in full swing, and we are all having a great time! Jake and Alice have declared themselves best friends. I’m so happy they like each other, but it’s hard not to like Jake. The food is great and I keep eating! We have done more dancing than anything. Edward can’t dance, but he’s still having fun. He excuses himself after a while to head for the bathroom. I’m dancing with Jake when I hear someone ask if they can cut in as soon as a slow song comes on.
“What are you doing here?” I ask.
“I said I would be your date. What kind of friend would I be if I stood you up?” Ben asks as he pulls me into him. I’m too stunned to say no. “You look beautiful.”
“Thanks,” I say, automatically looking around for Edward. “Why are you really here?”
“I told you why.”
“Well, you didn’t have to. I’m here with my boyfriend,” I tell him as he rolls his eyes at me.
“I think about you all the time. I’ve wanted to call you, but I knew you wouldn’t have answered,” he says while I remain silent.
“Ben, I’m over everything, I promise. It just hurt at the time,” I explain as he looks at his feet. “I’m really happy right now.”
“Huh. I guess my plan has been blown to shit then,” he says with a humorless laugh.
“What was your plan?” I question, needing to know.
“Well, I was hoping you would think I was the sweetest guy for showing up. If that didn’t work, I was going to charm my way back into your life. I miss you, Baby,” he says, pulling me closer.
“Ben, I’m here with my boyfriend,” I say as I pull away from him.
“Who is it?” he asks, sounding annoyed. I realize he thinks I’m bluffing.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your kind words and for the wonderful review. We are so pleased with how this is going. Kasi and Jess
Teaser: The reception is in full swing, and we are all having a great time! Jake and Alice have declared themselves best friends. I’m so happy they like each other, but it’s hard not to like Jake. The food is great and I keep eating! We have done more dancing than anything. Edward can’t dance, but he’s still having fun. He excuses himself after a while to head for the bathroom. I’m dancing with Jake when I hear someone ask if they can cut in as soon as a slow song comes on.
“What are you doing here?” I ask.
“I said I would be your date. What kind of friend would I be if I stood you up?” Ben asks as he pulls me into him. I’m too stunned to say no. “You look beautiful.”
“Thanks,” I say, automatically looking around for Edward. “Why are you really here?”
“I told you why.”
“Well, you didn’t have to. I’m here with my boyfriend,” I tell him as he rolls his eyes at me.
“I think about you all the time. I’ve wanted to call you, but I knew you wouldn’t have answered,” he says while I remain silent.
“Ben, I’m over everything, I promise. It just hurt at the time,” I explain as he looks at his feet. “I’m really happy right now.”
“Huh. I guess my plan has been blown to shit then,” he says with a humorless laugh.
“What was your plan?” I question, needing to know.
“Well, I was hoping you would think I was the sweetest guy for showing up. If that didn’t work, I was going to charm my way back into your life. I miss you, Baby,” he says, pulling me closer.
“Ben, I’m here with my boyfriend,” I say as I pull away from him.
“Who is it?” he asks, sounding annoyed. I realize he thinks I’m bluffing.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Suprise I thought Carlisle was going to rip Edwards face off. They are to funny drunk.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your kind words and for the wonderful review. We are so pleased with how this is going. Kasi and Jess
Teaser: The reception is in full swing, and we are all having a great time! Jake and Alice have declared themselves best friends. I’m so happy they like each other, but it’s hard not to like Jake. The food is great and I keep eating! We have done more dancing than anything. Edward can’t dance, but he’s still having fun. He excuses himself after a while to head for the bathroom. I’m dancing with Jake when I hear someone ask if they can cut in as soon as a slow song comes on.
“What are you doing here?” I ask.
“I said I would be your date. What kind of friend would I be if I stood you up?” Ben asks as he pulls me into him. I’m too stunned to say no. “You look beautiful.”
“Thanks,” I say, automatically looking around for Edward. “Why are you really here?”
“I told you why.”
“Well, you didn’t have to. I’m here with my boyfriend,” I tell him as he rolls his eyes at me.
“I think about you all the time. I’ve wanted to call you, but I knew you wouldn’t have answered,” he says while I remain silent.
“Ben, I’m over everything, I promise. It just hurt at the time,” I explain as he looks at his feet. “I’m really happy right now.”
“Huh. I guess my plan has been blown to shit then,” he says with a humorless laugh.
“What was your plan?” I question, needing to know.
“Well, I was hoping you would think I was the sweetest guy for showing up. If that didn’t work, I was going to charm my way back into your life. I miss you, Baby,” he says, pulling me closer.
“Ben, I’m here with my boyfriend,” I say as I pull away from him.
“Who is it?” he asks, sounding annoyed. I realize he thinks I’m bluffing.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am liking the way this story is playing out, ad I hope Bell and Edward will last the distance, because it will not be easy.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your kind words and for the wonderful review. We are so pleased with how this is going. Kasi and Jess
Teaser: The reception is in full swing, and we are all having a great time! Jake and Alice have declared themselves best friends. I’m so happy they like each other, but it’s hard not to like Jake. The food is great and I keep eating! We have done more dancing than anything. Edward can’t dance, but he’s still having fun. He excuses himself after a while to head for the bathroom. I’m dancing with Jake when I hear someone ask if they can cut in as soon as a slow song comes on.
“What are you doing here?” I ask.
“I said I would be your date. What kind of friend would I be if I stood you up?” Ben asks as he pulls me into him. I’m too stunned to say no. “You look beautiful.”
“Thanks,” I say, automatically looking around for Edward. “Why are you really here?”
“I told you why.”
“Well, you didn’t have to. I’m here with my boyfriend,” I tell him as he rolls his eyes at me.
“I think about you all the time. I’ve wanted to call you, but I knew you wouldn’t have answered,” he says while I remain silent.
“Ben, I’m over everything, I promise. It just hurt at the time,” I explain as he looks at his feet. “I’m really happy right now.”
“Huh. I guess my plan has been blown to shit then,” he says with a humorless laugh.
“What was your plan?” I question, needing to know.
“Well, I was hoping you would think I was the sweetest guy for showing up. If that didn’t work, I was going to charm my way back into your life. I miss you, Baby,” he says, pulling me closer.
“Ben, I’m here with my boyfriend,” I say as I pull away from him.
“Who is it?” he asks, sounding annoyed. I realize he thinks I’m bluffing.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
I WANT ALICE TO MAKE JASPER GROVEL A LOT. WELL NOW THE CAT IS OUT OF THE BAG, IS IT WRONG THAT I WANT BEN TO KNOW ABOUT EDWARD AND BELLA TOGETHR?
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your kind words and for the wonderful review. We are so pleased with how this is going. Kasi and Jess
Teaser: The reception is in full swing, and we are all having a great time! Jake and Alice have declared themselves best friends. I’m so happy they like each other, but it’s hard not to like Jake. The food is great and I keep eating! We have done more dancing than anything. Edward can’t dance, but he’s still having fun. He excuses himself after a while to head for the bathroom. I’m dancing with Jake when I hear someone ask if they can cut in as soon as a slow song comes on.
“What are you doing here?” I ask.
“I said I would be your date. What kind of friend would I be if I stood you up?” Ben asks as he pulls me into him. I’m too stunned to say no. “You look beautiful.”
“Thanks,” I say, automatically looking around for Edward. “Why are you really here?”
“I told you why.”
“Well, you didn’t have to. I’m here with my boyfriend,” I tell him as he rolls his eyes at me.
“I think about you all the time. I’ve wanted to call you, but I knew you wouldn’t have answered,” he says while I remain silent.
“Ben, I’m over everything, I promise. It just hurt at the time,” I explain as he looks at his feet. “I’m really happy right now.”
“Huh. I guess my plan has been blown to shit then,” he says with a humorless laugh.
“What was your plan?” I question, needing to know.
“Well, I was hoping you would think I was the sweetest guy for showing up. If that didn’t work, I was going to charm my way back into your life. I miss you, Baby,” he says, pulling me closer.
“Ben, I’m here with my boyfriend,” I say as I pull away from him.
“Who is it?” he asks, sounding annoyed. I realize he thinks I’m bluffing.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE CARLISLE REACTION
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thanks
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
I THINK SHE WOULD DUMP BEN EVENTUALLY, SHE'S SO COMFORTABLE WITH EDWARD
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
LOVING EDWARD'S REACTION TO BEN
Author's Response:
yeah we loved that too
Date: 10 Oct 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
I GUESS CARLISLE NOW WILL GET A LITTLE OF GREY HAIR, AND SHE'S JUST STARTING HER TEENAGE YEARS
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I know right? So fun!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it :)
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Thanks for all your kind words and for the wonderful review. We are so pleased with how this is going. Kasi and Jess
Teaser: The reception is in full swing, and we are all having a great time! Jake and Alice have declared themselves best friends. I’m so happy they like each other, but it’s hard not to like Jake. The food is great and I keep eating! We have done more dancing than anything. Edward can’t dance, but he’s still having fun. He excuses himself after a while to head for the bathroom. I’m dancing with Jake when I hear someone ask if they can cut in as soon as a slow song comes on.
“What are you doing here?” I ask.
“I said I would be your date. What kind of friend would I be if I stood you up?” Ben asks as he pulls me into him. I’m too stunned to say no. “You look beautiful.”
“Thanks,” I say, automatically looking around for Edward. “Why are you really here?”
“I told you why.”
“Well, you didn’t have to. I’m here with my boyfriend,” I tell him as he rolls his eyes at me.
“I think about you all the time. I’ve wanted to call you, but I knew you wouldn’t have answered,” he says while I remain silent.
“Ben, I’m over everything, I promise. It just hurt at the time,” I explain as he looks at his feet. “I’m really happy right now.”
“Huh. I guess my plan has been blown to shit then,” he says with a humorless laugh.
“What was your plan?” I question, needing to know.
“Well, I was hoping you would think I was the sweetest guy for showing up. If that didn’t work, I was going to charm my way back into your life. I miss you, Baby,” he says, pulling me closer.
“Ben, I’m here with my boyfriend,” I say as I pull away from him.
“Who is it?” he asks, sounding annoyed. I realize he thinks I’m bluffing.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
OH BEING 14 AND CRUSHING ON SOMEONE OLDER! OH THAT INNOCENT DAYS
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[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
This chapter was too hilarious! Well, all but the part about Jasper and Alice. Who would have thought that Jasper would be such a jerk! Yea, I know. He's confused about her being so young and he really does love her (well maybe if he really isn't a total douche) but he could have done the same thing Edward did and wait for Bella. As for what happened during the night of the drunkfest, I don't think any of us really want to know. I'm sure it was like a car accident, it was really horrible and you know you shouldn't look but you just can't help yourself. From the things said the morning after, I sure hope they didn't all end up in the room together. As for the plan the girls have, maybe this is where Ben will come back into play. He can pretend to be in a relationship with Alice to find out how Jasper really feels? See ya next chapter.
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Thanks for all your kind words and for the wonderful review. We are so pleased with how this is going. Kasi and Jess
Teaser: The reception is in full swing, and we are all having a great time! Jake and Alice have declared themselves best friends. I’m so happy they like each other, but it’s hard not to like Jake. The food is great and I keep eating! We have done more dancing than anything. Edward can’t dance, but he’s still having fun. He excuses himself after a while to head for the bathroom. I’m dancing with Jake when I hear someone ask if they can cut in as soon as a slow song comes on.
“What are you doing here?” I ask.
“I said I would be your date. What kind of friend would I be if I stood you up?” Ben asks as he pulls me into him. I’m too stunned to say no. “You look beautiful.”
“Thanks,” I say, automatically looking around for Edward. “Why are you really here?”
“I told you why.”
“Well, you didn’t have to. I’m here with my boyfriend,” I tell him as he rolls his eyes at me.
“I think about you all the time. I’ve wanted to call you, but I knew you wouldn’t have answered,” he says while I remain silent.
“Ben, I’m over everything, I promise. It just hurt at the time,” I explain as he looks at his feet. “I’m really happy right now.”
“Huh. I guess my plan has been blown to shit then,” he says with a humorless laugh.
“What was your plan?” I question, needing to know.
“Well, I was hoping you would think I was the sweetest guy for showing up. If that didn’t work, I was going to charm my way back into your life. I miss you, Baby,” he says, pulling me closer.
“Ben, I’m here with my boyfriend,” I say as I pull away from him.
“Who is it?” he asks, sounding annoyed. I realize he thinks I’m bluffing.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am officially in love please update soon.. I love how easily they fell for each other and I hope that carlisle finds out soon. i cant wait to read more
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Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away. Thank you all so much for everything you say. We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers. There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward. At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward. I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella. Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room. Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay. More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage. Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant. Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet. As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.
“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”
“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”
“Presents!” I say excitedly.
“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.
“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.
“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.
“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.
“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.
I know we are EVIL for leaving it there. It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)
Date: 04 Oct 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it :)
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Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away. Thank you all so much for everything you say. We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers. There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward. At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward. I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella. Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room. Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay. More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage. Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant. Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet. As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.
“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”
“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”
“Presents!” I say excitedly.
“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.
“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.
“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.
“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.
“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.
I know we are EVIL for leaving it there. It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)
Date: 04 Oct 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Omg!
Author's Response:
Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away. Thank you all so much for everything you say. We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers. There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward. At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward. I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella. Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room. Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay. More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage. Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant. Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet. As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.
“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”
“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”
“Presents!” I say excitedly.
“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.
“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.
“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.
“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.
“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.
I know we are EVIL for leaving it there. It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Just found this story.....really love it! Can't wait to see what happens when Dad finds out....KABOOM? But looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away. Thank you all so much for everything you say. We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers. There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward. At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward. I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella. Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room. Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay. More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage. Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant. Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet. As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.
“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”
“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”
“Presents!” I say excitedly.
“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.
“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.
“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.
“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.
“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.
I know we are EVIL for leaving it there. It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter, can not wait till they see each other when she is 18
Author's Response:
Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away. Thank you all so much for everything you say. We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers. There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward. At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward. I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella. Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room. Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay. More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage. Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant. Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet. As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.
“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”
“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”
“Presents!” I say excitedly.
“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.
“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.
“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.
“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.
“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.
I know we are EVIL for leaving it there. It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ah and so it begins.
Author's Response:
Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away. Thank you all so much for everything you say. We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers. There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward. At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward. I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella. Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room. Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay. More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage. Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant. Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet. As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.
“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”
“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”
“Presents!” I say excitedly.
“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.
“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.
“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.
“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.
“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.
I know we are EVIL for leaving it there. It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)
Date: 03 Oct 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Im so glad that she told Edward everything about Ben and Edward told her how he felt. Carlisle doesnt stand a chance he needs to just go with the flow but we know he is going to have a freak out and cant blame him.
Author's Response:
Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away. Thank you all so much for everything you say. We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers. There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward. At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward. I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella. Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room. Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay. More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage. Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant. Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet. As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.
“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”
“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”
“Presents!” I say excitedly.
“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.
“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.
“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.
“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.
“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.
I know we are EVIL for leaving it there. It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yes! They are together and Ben is history. Ben turned out to be the jerk I thought he would be, although I figured once he got what he was after he would drop her and then brag about sleeping with her. At least he stuck around. Not saying that was much better but still. I wouldn't want to be Ben if he tries anything with Bella the next time he sees her because Edward just might enjoy practicing his homerun swing on the kid's head. Awesome chapter as always and I look forward to the update next week.
Author's Response:
Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away. Thank you all so much for everything you say. We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers. There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward. At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward. I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella. Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room. Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay. More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage. Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant. Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet. As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.
“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”
“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”
“Presents!” I say excitedly.
“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.
“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.
“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.
“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.
“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.
I know we are EVIL for leaving it there. It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)