Date: 27 Sep 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
ok, i have to agree with Jim- they may be friends, but so not appropriate for them to room together! But, i will go with it for the sake of the story...plus, it REALLY pisses Ben off, and I don't like him! Not so sure about jim, eiother... and what are Alice and Jasper up to? Hmmm?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4. We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love. The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’. Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story. Kasi~
PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!
(subject to changes of course)
My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.
~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~
~I did! Where are you?~
~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~
And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.
~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~
~No, I’m okay. Night.~
Now what will I do with myself? I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again. I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.
~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~
~Okay. Night.~
And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man. I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug. I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love this story!!! That was hysterical!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4. We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love. The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’. Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story. Kasi~
PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!
(subject to changes of course)
My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.
~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~
~I did! Where are you?~
~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~
And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.
~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~
~No, I’m okay. Night.~
Now what will I do with myself? I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again. I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.
~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~
~Okay. Night.~
And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man. I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug. I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4. We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love. The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’. Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story. Kasi~
PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!
(subject to changes of course)
My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.
~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~
~I did! Where are you?~
~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~
And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.
~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~
~No, I’m okay. Night.~
Now what will I do with myself? I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again. I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.
~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~
~Okay. Night.~
And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man. I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug. I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh now I really hate Ben. He is a controlling little shit.
Min glad that Bella seems to be comIng to grips with Liz and Jim.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4. We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love. The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’. Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story. Kasi~
PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!
(subject to changes of course)
My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.
~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~
~I did! Where are you?~
~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~
And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.
~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~
~No, I’m okay. Night.~
Now what will I do with myself? I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again. I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.
~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~
~Okay. Night.~
And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man. I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug. I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I don't think she should have sex with Ben. If he really loves her then he would respect her wishes and not pressure her.
I hope her and Edward are okay. I hope he can talk some sense into her.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 26 Sep 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awww. Bella gets to date. I wonder if she'll continue to think Ben is so wonderful after all is said and done.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 26 Sep 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Holy age difference. It doesn't seem to matter when your older but 14 and 30 is a lot. That being said I'm glad Bella got her first kiss, even if she did steal it.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 26 Sep 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow the reaction of her parents was funny... I think Bella will end it with Ben, especially if he keeps up the possessive act... But if you love someone, there age won't matter. Can't wait...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4. We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love. The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’. Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story. Kasi~
PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!
(subject to changes of course)
My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.
~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~
~I did! Where are you?~
~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~
And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.
~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~
~No, I’m okay. Night.~
Now what will I do with myself? I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again. I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.
~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~
~Okay. Night.~
And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man. I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug. I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter again! I'm disappointed in Bella caving in to Ben's hard sell on having sex but that is reality. I figured she would. Edward is pretty smart so he probably does know that she did but doesn't want to admit it yet. As for Bella's epiphany, I think that it will help the break up along but probably won't be the only reason for her to stop dating Ben. His temper and not trusting her will take care of that for her more than likely. As for the age thing, I don't think it will matter one bit to Bella in the long run. Edward might be another story but Bella will get over it much easier. I'm glad Bella came around to Jim marrying Liz because that shows shenis maturing and will help Edward see her growing up as well. Looking forward to the next update as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4. We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love. The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’. Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story. Kasi~
PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!
(subject to changes of course)
My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.
~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~
~I did! Where are you?~
~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~
And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.
~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~
~No, I’m okay. Night.~
Now what will I do with myself? I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again. I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.
~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~
~Okay. Night.~
And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man. I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug. I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
love dosent care about age. I am sad she lost it to Ben but at least he was good to her and I think he does love her I hope anyway.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4. We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love. The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’. Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story. Kasi~
PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!
(subject to changes of course)
My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.
~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~
~I did! Where are you?~
~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~
And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.
~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~
~No, I’m okay. Night.~
Now what will I do with myself? I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again. I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.
~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~
~Okay. Night.~
And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man. I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug. I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope Edward will wait for her and she won't have sex with Ben.
Author's Response:
I always try to write a little bit of me into every book I write or have a part in writing... So yes I once owned a 1980 Chevy Monte Carlo with factory T-tops and power everything. It had a rebuilt (not stock) 350 with a 4 barrel carburetor man alive that car could SCREAM! She was midnight metallic blue and the interior was white leather. Yep... I say it was a female... I blame it all on her disposition. Okay enough about my personal life... LOL. Many of you are seeing the bratty side of Bella, but keep in mind she is close to seventeen now and she thinks she is in LOVE with Ben. She has these lingering feelings about Edward, but she doesn’t understand them – yet. Bella is territorial about her mom and her time with her. She has always had contact with Carlisle, but while he was in medical school and doing his residency of course there was a lull in just how much time he had to be with her, but he has always been a good father. Thank you all for reading and reviewing. I will try to get my head on straight and be sure to post the teaser for next week’s update to Fictionators... Matter of a fact I will go do that now. See ya all next week, Kasi and (Jess)
Date: 22 Sep 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think Ben will be the last thing on her mind when she sees Edward.
Author's Response:
I always try to write a little bit of me into every book I write or have a part in writing... So yes I once owned a 1980 Chevy Monte Carlo with factory T-tops and power everything. It had a rebuilt (not stock) 350 with a 4 barrel carburetor man alive that car could SCREAM! She was midnight metallic blue and the interior was white leather. Yep... I say it was a female... I blame it all on her disposition. Okay enough about my personal life... LOL. Many of you are seeing the bratty side of Bella, but keep in mind she is close to seventeen now and she thinks she is in LOVE with Ben. She has these lingering feelings about Edward, but she doesn’t understand them – yet. Bella is territorial about her mom and her time with her. She has always had contact with Carlisle, but while he was in medical school and doing his residency of course there was a lull in just how much time he had to be with her, but he has always been a good father. Thank you all for reading and reviewing. I will try to get my head on straight and be sure to post the teaser for next week’s update to Fictionators... Matter of a fact I will go do that now. See ya all next week, Kasi and (Jess)
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward has strong feelings for her already. Are we going to get his POV
Author's Response:
I always try to write a little bit of me into every book I write or have a part in writing... So yes I once owned a 1980 Chevy Monte Carlo with factory T-tops and power everything. It had a rebuilt (not stock) 350 with a 4 barrel carburetor man alive that car could SCREAM! She was midnight metallic blue and the interior was white leather. Yep... I say it was a female... I blame it all on her disposition. Okay enough about my personal life... LOL. Many of you are seeing the bratty side of Bella, but keep in mind she is close to seventeen now and she thinks she is in LOVE with Ben. She has these lingering feelings about Edward, but she doesn’t understand them – yet. Bella is territorial about her mom and her time with her. She has always had contact with Carlisle, but while he was in medical school and doing his residency of course there was a lull in just how much time he had to be with her, but he has always been a good father. We talked about an EPOV, but not yet. Thank you all for reading and reviewing. I will try to get my head on straight and be sure to post the teaser for next week’s update to Fictionators... Matter of a fact I will go do that now. See ya all next week, Kasi and (Jess)
Date: 20 Sep 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
sounds great cant wait
Author's Response:
I always try to write a little bit of me into every book I write or have a part in writing... So yes I once owned a 1980 Chevy Monte Carlo with factory T-tops and power everything. It had a rebuilt (not stock) 350 with a 4 barrel carburetor man alive that car could SCREAM! She was midnight metallic blue and the interior was white leather. Yep... I say it was a female... I blame it all on her disposition. Okay enough about my personal life... LOL. Many of you are seeing the bratty side of Bella, but keep in mind she is close to seventeen now and she thinks she is in LOVE with Ben. She has these lingering feelings about Edward, but she doesn’t understand them – yet. Bella is territorial about her mom and her time with her. She has always had contact with Carlisle, but while he was in medical school and doing his residency of course there was a lull in just how much time he had to be with her, but he has always been a good father. Thank you all for reading and reviewing. I will try to get my head on straight and be sure to post the teaser for next week’s update to Fictionators... Matter of a fact I will go do that now. See ya all next week, Kasi and (Jess)
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
I always try to write a little bit of me into every book I write or have a part in writing... So yes I once owned a 1980 Chevy Monte Carlo with factory T-tops and power everything. It had a rebuilt (not stock) 350 with a 4 barrel carburetor man alive that car could SCREAM! She was midnight metallic blue and the interior was white leather. Yep... I say it was a female... I blame it all on her disposition. Okay enough about my personal life... LOL. Many of you are seeing the bratty side of Bella, but keep in mind she is close to seventeen now and she thinks she is in LOVE with Ben. She has these lingering feelings about Edward, but she doesn’t understand them – yet. Bella is territorial about her mom and her time with her. She has always had contact with Carlisle, but while he was in medical school and doing his residency of course there was a lull in just how much time he had to be with her, but he has always been a good father. Thank you all for reading and reviewing. I will try to get my head on straight and be sure to post the teaser for next week’s update to Fictionators... Matter of a fact I will go do that now. See ya all next week, Kasi and (Jess)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter as always and really do nail the bratty teenager perfectly. She is definitely feeling threatened by the realationship the Jim and Elizabeth have formed which is pretty typical of an only child living with a single parent their entire life. As for Ben, him pressuring her for sex is typical high school boy stuff. That is all most of them think about. Hopefully she will talk to Edward about it before they go to Seattle and he will somehow have a little chat with Ben.
Looking forward to the next chapter. See y'all next week.
Author's Response:
I always try to write a little bit of me into every book I write or have a part in writing... So yes I once owned a 1980 Chevy Monte Carlo with factory T-tops and power everything. It had a rebuilt (not stock) 350 with a 4 barrel carburetor man alive that car could SCREAM! She was midnight metallic blue and the interior was white leather. Yep... I say it was a female... I blame it all on her disposition. Okay enough about my personal life... LOL. Many of you are seeing the bratty side of Bella, but keep in mind she is close to seventeen now and she thinks she is in LOVE with Ben. She has these lingering feelings about Edward, but she doesn’t understand them – yet. Bella is territorial about her mom and her time with her. She has always had contact with Carlisle, but while he was in medical school and doing his residency of course there was a lull in just how much time he had to be with her, but he has always been a good father. Thank you all for reading and reviewing. I will try to get my head on straight and be sure to post the teaser for next week’s update to Fictionators... Matter of a fact I will go do that now. See ya all next week, Kasi and (Jess)
Date: 18 Sep 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
looking forwrad to more
Author's Response:
I always try to write a little bit of me into every book I write or have a part in writing... So yes I once owned a 1980 Chevy Monte Carlo with factory T-tops and power everything. It had a rebuilt (not stock) 350 with a 4 barrel carburetor man alive that car could SCREAM! She was midnight metallic blue and the interior was white leather. Yep... I say it was a female... I blame it all on her disposition. Okay enough about my personal life... LOL. Many of you are seeing the bratty side of Bella, but keep in mind she is close to seventeen now and she thinks she is in LOVE with Ben. She has these lingering feelings about Edward, but she doesn’t understand them – yet. Bella is territorial about her mom and her time with her. She has always had contact with Carlisle, but while he was in medical school and doing his residency of course there was a lull in just how much time he had to be with her, but he has always been a good father. Thank you all for reading and reviewing. I will try to get my head on straight and be sure to post the teaser for next week’s update to Fictionators... Matter of a fact I will go do that now. See ya all next week, Kasi and (Jess)
Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
i was in that same spot bella is n with regards to her dad.
why doesn't she get upset with him for NOT being there? for spending more time with es & alice than be does his own daughter?
bella said so, that they really don't know each other....so what in the hell gives him the right to get all "daddy-ish" on her?!
so sorry, this is a fucking bad subject for me....
Author's Response:
I understand how you feel, from age 6 to 16 I never saw or heard a word from my father. As you read more you will understand more of the relationship between Bella and Carlisle. Carlisle was always there for her, but in a long distance compacity. I totally get the hard feelings, I had them myself for MANY years. Another chapter and another great response in reference to the chapter, we are both in such awe of our readers. Both Jess and I are very proud of this storyline and some are already questioning if Ben will be a bad guy and pressure Bella into sex. Well you will get the answers to those questions soon enough, in coming chapters. We all know some won’t be happy, but we are keeping things realistic and with the times. Keep in mind that this is and always will be a Bella and Edward story. There will be some kink, as our girl gets older and she will bring out a side of Edward that even he doesn’t realize he has. Bella is still a typical teenager, high school girl, bratty and selfish and we will be getting to see more of that side of her very shortly. We have had some questions regarding Bella’s age versus Edward’s age, and we just want to be clear that Edward will not be having sex with Bella at any time in this fic, until she is over the age of 18. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing... we love reading your thoughts. Be sure to check Fictionators every Monday for a teaser for the next chapter. We also post the links for the teaser on our group pages. Links are on our profile, join us and ask all the questions you wish. See ya next Wednesday... Kasi (&Jess)
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. The whole time I'm reading this one I'm remembering my Dad and the rules I had for dating. I was the youngest of three girls. My oldest sister was a homebody and didn't really date. She was your atypical bookworm who read and studied a lot but also played volleyball and sports, not leaving much time for dating. My middle sister was the troublemaker. She snuck out of the house to meet her boyfriend, pregnant and married at 18, gave my parents grey hairs basically. I suffered from her behavior. I was a mix of my sisters by being the bookworm/athlete who had a boyfriend but was the good girl who didn't sneak out of the house to meet up with him. Helps that he didn't live across the street like my sister's boyfriend did. I laughed throughout this chapter thinking about my Dad giving the 'cop' stare to my boyfriend (now my husband of 17years) all through high school. Too funny!
Pas for Edward, he didn't like the competition and he definitely wanted to make sure that she understood to be careful. Somehow I think he will be on Facebook more often this school year!
Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Another chapter and another great response in reference to the chapter, we are both in such awe of our readers. Both Jess and I are very proud of this storyline and some are already questioning if Ben will be a bad guy and pressure Bella into sex. Well you will get the answers to those questions soon enough, in coming chapters. We all know some won’t be happy, but we are keeping things realistic and with the times. Keep in mind that this is and always will be a Bella and Edward story. There will be some kink, as our girl gets older and she will bring out a side of Edward that even he doesn’t realize he has. Bella is still a typical teenager, high school girl, bratty and selfish and we will be getting to see more of that side of her very shortly. We have had some questions regarding Bella’s age versus Edward’s age, and we just want to be clear that Edward will not be having sex with Bella at any time in this fic, until she is over the age of 18. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing... we love reading your thoughts. Be sure to check Fictionators every Monday for a teaser for the next chapter. We also post the links for the teaser on our group pages. Links are on our profile, join us and ask all the questions you wish. See ya next Wednesday... Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this!! I am from St Louis and I am a die hard Cardinals fan, plus I love Edward and Bella!! Perfect story for me :)
Author's Response:
Another chapter and another great response in reference to the chapter, we are both in such awe of our readers. Both Jess and I are very proud of this storyline and some are already questioning if Ben will be a bad guy and pressure Bella into sex. Well you will get the answers to those questions soon enough, in coming chapters. We all know some won’t be happy, but we are keeping things realistic and with the times. Keep in mind that this is and always will be a Bella and Edward story. There will be some kink, as our girl gets older and she will bring out a side of Edward that even he doesn’t realize he has. Bella is still a typical teenager, high school girl, bratty and selfish and we will be getting to see more of that side of her very shortly. We have had some questions regarding Bella’s age versus Edward’s age, and we just want to be clear that Edward will not be having sex with Bella at any time in this fic, until she is over the age of 18. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing... we love reading your thoughts. Be sure to check Fictionators every Monday for a teaser for the next chapter. We also post the links for the teaser on our group pages. Links are on our profile, join us and ask all the questions you wish. See ya next Wednesday... Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Another chapter and another great response in reference to the chapter, we are both in such awe of our readers. Both Jess and I are very proud of this storyline and some are already questioning if Ben will be a bad guy and pressure Bella into sex. Well you will get the answers to those questions soon enough, in coming chapters. We all know some won’t be happy, but we are keeping things realistic and with the times. Keep in mind that this is and always will be a Bella and Edward story. There will be some kink, as our girl gets older and she will bring out a side of Edward that even he doesn’t realize he has. Bella is still a typical teenager, high school girl, bratty and selfish and we will be getting to see more of that side of her very shortly. We have had some questions regarding Bella’s age versus Edward’s age, and we just want to be clear that Edward will not be having sex with Bella at any time in this fic, until she is over the age of 18. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing... we love reading your thoughts. Be sure to check Fictionators every Monday for a teaser for the next chapter. We also post the links for the teaser on our group pages. Links are on our profile, join us and ask all the questions you wish. See ya next Wednesday... Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 07 Sep 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the concept of the story. Like how you get more of BPOV through her journal entries. Wondering if Edward did really kiss her on the plane and that was why her lips tingled when she woke up because, if not, then that was some dream! LOL
Nice to see that Carlisle is the dad instead of Charlie...just to shake things up a bit! LOL!
Can't wait to read what happens next and how much time you are going to jump ahead if any.
Keye
Author's Response:
Wow... what a turn out for the first chapter so far. I know that this has been an anticipated story for a few people, so we are happy to be posting it for your reading pleasure. The wonderful kick ass banner for this story was made by the very talented and wonderful Stephenie Masen and we just love her to pieces for it. There was a question regarding Carlisle’s age, and I want to be clear on things so there is no confusion. Elizabeth was 14 when she became pregnant with Bella, and Carlisle was 15. After nine months of pregnancy Elizabeth was 15 and Carlisle was 16, hence the fact that Bella is 14 and her mom is 29, and Carlisle is 30. Edward is 31, and Esme is 36. We hope this wraps everything question wise up for you all. Thanks so much for the wonderful response and reviews we are getting. We are planning to stick to the updating schedule of every Wednesday. We are excited to hear more from you in the future. Thanks, Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
esperando actualizacion buen primer capitulo
Author's Response:
Wow... what a turn out for the first chapter so far. I know that this has been an anticipated story for a few people, so we are happy to be posting it for your reading pleasure. The wonderful kick ass banner for this story was made by the very talented and wonderful Stephenie Masen and we just love her to pieces for it. There was a question regarding Carlisle’s age, and I want to be clear on things so there is no confusion. Elizabeth was 14 when she became pregnant with Bella, and Carlisle was 15. After nine months of pregnancy Elizabeth was 15 and Carlisle was 16, hence the fact that Bella is 14 and her mom is 29, and Carlisle is 30. Edward is 31, and Esme is 36. We hope this wraps everything question wise up for you all. Thanks so much for the wonderful response and reviews we are getting. We are planning to stick to the updating schedule of every Wednesday. We are excited to hear more from you in the future. Thanks, Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good so far can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Wow... what a turn out for the first chapter so far. I know that this has been an anticipated story for a few people, so we are happy to be posting it for your reading pleasure. The wonderful kick ass banner for this story was made by the very talented and wonderful Stephenie Masen and we just love her to pieces for it. There was a question regarding Carlisle’s age, and I want to be clear on things so there is no confusion. Elizabeth was 14 when she became pregnant with Bella, and Carlisle was 15. After nine months of pregnancy Elizabeth was 15 and Carlisle was 16, hence the fact that Bella is 14 and her mom is 29, and Carlisle is 30. Edward is 31, and Esme is 36. We hope this wraps everything question wise up for you all. Thanks so much for the wonderful response and reviews we are getting. We are planning to stick to the updating schedule of every Wednesday. We are excited to hear more from you in the future. Thanks, Kasi (&Jess)
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Super cute story! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Wow... what a turn out for the first chapter so far. I know that this has been an anticipated story for a few people, so we are happy to be posting it for your reading pleasure. The wonderful kick ass banner for this story was made by the very talented and wonderful Stephenie Masen and we just love her to pieces for it. There was a question regarding Carlisle’s age, and I want to be clear on things so there is no confusion. Elizabeth was 14 when she became pregnant with Bella, and Carlisle was 15. After nine months of pregnancy Elizabeth was 15 and Carlisle was 16, hence the fact that Bella is 14 and her mom is 29, and Carlisle is 30. Edward is 31, and Esme is 36. We hope this wraps everything question wise up for you all. Thanks so much for the wonderful response and reviews we are getting. We are planning to stick to the updating schedule of every Wednesday. We are excited to hear more from you in the future. Thanks, Kasi (&Jess)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start to what sounds like will be a wonderful story. I look forward to reading more. First kisses are always extra sweet and tend to make your insides turn to jello. I know mine did. ;)
Author's Response:
Wow... what a turn out for the first chapter so far. I know that this has been an anticipated story for a few people, so we are happy to be posting it for your reading pleasure. The wonderful kick ass banner for this story was made by the very talented and wonderful Stephenie Masen and we just love her to pieces for it. There was a question regarding Carlisle’s age, and I want to be clear on things so there is no confusion. Elizabeth was 14 when she became pregnant with Bella, and Carlisle was 15. After nine months of pregnancy Elizabeth was 15 and Carlisle was 16, hence the fact that Bella is 14 and her mom is 29, and Carlisle is 30. Edward is 31, and Esme is 36. We hope this wraps everything question wise up for you all. Thanks so much for the wonderful response and reviews we are getting. We are planning to stick to the updating schedule of every Wednesday. We are excited to hear more from you in the future. Thanks, Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
remember my first kiss i got the photo seriously bloody parents his name was russell :)) anyways yeah liking this first chapter Dakota x
Author's Response:
Wow... what a turn out for the first chapter so far. I know that this has been an anticipated story for a few people, so we are happy to be posting it for your reading pleasure. The wonderful kick ass banner for this story was made by the very talented and wonderful Stephenie Masen and we just love her to pieces for it. There was a question regarding Carlisle’s age, and I want to be clear on things so there is no confusion. Elizabeth was 14 when she became pregnant with Bella, and Carlisle was 15. After nine months of pregnancy Elizabeth was 15 and Carlisle was 16, hence the fact that Bella is 14 and her mom is 29, and Carlisle is 30. Edward is 31, and Esme is 36. We hope this wraps everything question wise up for you all. Thanks so much for the wonderful response and reviews we are getting. We are planning to stick to the updating schedule of every Wednesday. We are excited to hear more from you in the future. Thanks, Kasi (&Jess)