That was sweet! I love how the characters have grown,this really needs to be published.

By far THE BEST 50 Shades of Grey story out there! You rock!

what a lovely chapter! i love it!

the social worker was ogling christian...damn i'd probably lunge at him and kiss him...and then they'd blackmail me and i'd tell them oaky but one more time and the it's  done deal!!! lol

looking forward to christian and ana's NY trip and virginia's visit!

I'm getting nervous that things are going to smoothly.  Mrs. Collins seem nice and helpful and I think reassured Ana a bit over getting Tommy.  I just feel like something is going to happen to wreak havoc somehow.  

This is so heart warming and fabulous!!  You're a great writer!!

Beautiful chapter.  I am so glad they want to adopt Tommy. It was a no brainier that they would though.  It's the best place for him.  I just hope they don't get resistance from the state. I also hope Lorna stays away for good, but I can just see her pimp forcing her to hit them up for some money or something. Scumbag.  This is a fantastic story, can't wait for more.  

This story keeps getting better and better.

This chapter should be titled "Perfect Day"!   Perfect Chapter,  loved the worms!   

What a beautiful chapter, so beautiful.  You are an awesome writer.  I love every bit of it.  Please, please continue.  Love, love.

hello!

congratulations.

public would like to know how often the chapters?

Love it!

i love these lines...so powerful and full of emotions.

"Everything in my life brought me to you. I wouldn't trade you for anything or anyone. Not even her."

"It's nothing I haven't asked myself a thousand times. And the answer is always the same. You and the kids mean more to me than anything I gave up in my past. Everything I've been through, every path I've chosen, every decision I've ever made was worth it."

"Mrs. Grey, for a man who had complete control over aspect of his life, I lost all of it the day I met you and I've never been able to get it back. And I wouldn't change a thing."

when ana was reading lorna's letter and when she found the necklace she wore when she lost sam with the bloodstain intact reminding him of that horrible tragic night, i felt lumps in my throat and it made me reach for tissue finding out the box was empty! had to run to another room to get one, my men were asking what was wrong and too embarrassed to tell them the truth so i said allergies.

your story is beautiful...this chapter is emotionally intense...your writing is perfect!

I absolutely love this.

Thanks for all of the updates!!!!

Yes, indeed that was  so sad, but all in all, Lorna isn't capable of fighting her demons for the sake of her  child,  at least Tommy has the Grey Family that loves him.  All of them, last chapter when Ana found Christian playing the piano with Tommy,  well that's really when I knew,  Christian needs Tommy too!       TY for the posting,  have a great weekend! 

Awe, I knew Christian would come around!  Poor Ana finding that necklace and all those memories coming back.  I hope the social worker doesn't bring some bad news about them keeping Tommy.

You bet,  I loved this  chapter,  the tenderness Christian has aith the  children is so endearing!   Love this story! 

Aawh. That was sweet. Somehow I think something bad is on the horizon.

Keep it coming...please :)

Oooooh, I wonder how the Tommy talk will go.  That must have been Lorna's pimp who left with her.  I bet they try and blackmail the Greys or try something for money.  Tommy belongs with Ana and Christian.  Can't wait for more.  

So happy to read a new chapter.  I'm a llittle worried that you are wrapping up the story with the presentation of evidence of Ana's equal partnership.  NOOOO!  I hope there are several more new chapters.  I look forward to the next chapter.

i want tommy to stay with the greys. someone like lorna and with what she had done with tommy and herself and how she treated her own son...she doesn't deserve him...tommy couldn't and shouldn't go back to that shitty life with his mom again.

christian and ana fell in love that day she fell in his office and the nanosecond he helped her up...they touched...and gazed into each other's eyes...it was their destiny...it was fate!

the gift was a loving and sweet gesture but all unnecessary...because they both know that they're equal...but it was a nice gift though!

i wonder if lorna contacted her pimp/boyfriend from sacramento...she's hopeless and tommy's better off with the greys!

Still Enjoying.  Curious for what's next.

OOOOOH, what's the phone call. Good cliffhanger.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  I love this story.  

Ok, I feel the plot thicken. Either the girl killed herself or the grandmother is dead. Or, maybe I should just wait to find out. I love the cliff hanger.

Ready got the weekend. 

oh my gosh that is quite the cliff you ledt us hangin from.  Loved the chapter ... CANNOT wait for the next one.  :)

Oh so good,  I knew it was going to be Elena's old house.... so good, ready for the weekend

Now matter how much their lives change, Ana and Christian's love and adoration for each other always remain the same.  I love every bit of it.  Tommy has recovered, thank goodness, and has a heart of gold.  Teddy is a combination of his mom and dad, but Grace is all Christian.  Beautiful chapter.  Happy Mother's Day!  Love, Carol xxoo

Hi, love your story line!  Please, please tell me when you will submit the new chapter??

the first time christian and ana went soaring in georgia was the first time was the first time i saw christian acted his age, it was how christian would have been had not for his childhood trauma and the bitch troll's evil influence. i'm really happy that you brought this back...christian and ana reliving one of their happiest and best moments, before the children came along. looking forward to ana's birthday celebration with the family.

love, love, love your story!!!

Hi! I was just wondering... have you considered doing a Christian's POV? It would be interesting to read about it. Once again I can't wait for the chapter to come.

I love the reference back to the original book ... one of my favorite scenes was when they went soaring. 

I love how well Tommis blending into their family.  

I love your story and continue to read. Just wondering if your going to end book three and start book four?  I can see there is still much to come.

I love the kids talking, you do an awesome job with that!

Ready for more.

Tommy is just the sweetest thing ever!! :)

Oh boy, I am sensing some of Christian's past is on that street where his sister lives...

this just gets better and better!

I am enjoying this story so much.  I actually plan my day according to when I want to read the newest chapter.  I have to read all alone without distraction from my family, LOL!!  It is great to hear that email notification on my phone for when a new chapter is posted.  The Grey family dynamic is awesome.  Tommy is fitting in so well and the children are so accepting of him just like they were for Jack.  Poor Christian!  I'm just going to have to hop a plane to Seattle, wrap my arms around him and comfort him!! LOL! Problem solved.  If it was only that easy. Christian definitely needs a session with John, to help him sort this out.  Meeting with his grandmother should be beneficial. BTW, Teddy probably woke up with his first woody.

teddy and grace are so blessed. fiction or not, some kids are lucky to have both parents who would love their children so much and fortunate enough to provide the emotional and financial support. in tommy's case, he only has a parent to provide what little love his mom could give him and sadly, whatever money she could get, she'd choose to spend it to get her fix. somehow, there might still some hope for her. she's lucky that ana and christian were able to get to her before something happens to her. too bad ella and christian didn't meet grace and carrick beforehand. but sometimes life is a bitch...and then you die! on the other hand, maybe it was for the best. grace found chrisitian and she and carrick adopted him and love him as their own. if only christian was able to forgive his mom early on, then perhaps he wouldn't have those issues. you are a genius storyteller and a fantastic storyteller.

i love the convo during the family dinner. it appears that tommy is already a part of the family and as much as i don't want anything bad to happen with lorna, i want tommy to say with the grey permanently. i wonder what the secret is between father and son!

I thought I had catched up, but it seems there were 2 more chapters... I hope your trip goes alright. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Poor Christian, laying in his closet thinking about his mother.  I love how the kids are open to "keeping" Tommy because he doesn't eat much.  Another great chapter!  

Poor little Tommy.  He would be better off if his Mother Just put him up for adoption to the Grey's.  Christian isn't handling this well and I think it is because, having heard more of Tommy's life, it reminds him of when he was a child and abused.  I htaker doesn't take his anxiety out on Ana.  it's hard for all of them. Gret story, can't wait for more. 

this was such an emotinal chapter!

the reunion between tommy and lorna started as heartwarming, touching and sweet but then when lorna was saying goodbye to her son and tommy not wanting to let go and became hysterical, i just lost it. it was clear that lorna loved her son but at the same time she still had some inner demons that must be battled and controlled. i was so heartbroken for mother and son. and at the same time i couldn't help but wonder how christian was really handling the scenario.

the car ride made it even worse for me (by this time i couldn't even breath and felt i had a lump in my throat), as christian got out of the car, pacing back and forth, deep-breathing, angry...the kind of anger which could teach him what he needed, what he believed, what he valued and what was missing in his life.

this chapter was poignant...the writing was stellar...and you're one brilliant writer!

Oh no, poor Fifty is reliving his childhood.  The scene he is witnessing is exactly what he used to do when he first lived with the Greys.  Only, Christian wouldn't verbalize it.  He was agonizing it all in his sweet little head.  What a tearful chapter, but I am loving every minute of it.  When they get back to the house, Christian is either going to need a stiff drink, a stiff you know what, or a session with Flynn or Bastille.  Thank you for keeping the story going.  You are an amazing writer.  Love ya!

Excellent chapter raw emotions for everyone involved, thank you so much for the update. I've been anxiously waiting for it, I always look forward to the journey you're going to take us on:)

I love this story and look forward to your writing don't think I will ever get bored of the life of Anna and christian 

ths story is one of my personal favorites....I love how he loves her so much

Totally in love with your trilogy. Full Circle is an awesome finish to the three stories and I can't wait to see where it goes.  

Now that was a delicious lemon!!!

This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 4th. Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. IMAGE not showing up ONLT SHOWING AS RED X PLEASSSSSSSSSSE FIX!!Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!

Thank you for continuing with this story I love it and looking forward to the next update.

Wow...that was...intense!  I don't recall Christian being quite so Dominant and having Ana be quite so submissive...don't recall the use of the cat when they have played either.  That was...intense.  Wan't expecting her to be punished for getting her hair cut...not like that anyway.  WOW!  Love the story...I so look forward to the updates and you never disappoint!!!  Can't wait to read more...I go back ad re-read from the begining every so often, this is an amazing story!

loving this can't wait