i just want to say that christian grey will never be jealous or possessive or stalkerish enough for me. he's perfect and ana loves him the way he is. kate may never get it but deep inside, i think she wishes elliott would have some christian grey in him.

christian paying for kate and ana's lunch was so christian-grey and ana knew well enough that she didn't even have to double check with their server!

the quickie in the restroom was tittilating...jealous christian was hot. christian stopping by ana and kates's table to say goodbye and give his wife a kiss was so sweet and apologizing to kate showed was maturity and well...kinda sexy!!!

Thank you, love the restaurant lunchtime lemon.

Yes, if Christian is that jealous, it just shows the intense love he has for Ana. I really  like how you incorporate such detail in your storytelling. Good thing Christian remembered his manners and apologized to his sister-in-law.  I doubt any of her family and friends forgot her birthday.  I think it's the big 30!  I am enjoying this sooo very much.  Love, Carol

Woah to Christian's reaction at the restaurant! It seems like there was something more behind it.   I hope he likes Ana's hair!  

I love this story!!!!  Ana is getting more and more attached to Tommy.....I sense she's gonna get her heart broken, but we'll see.  I'm gonna stay tuned :)

Awesome! I love this little family.  Naked Christian muscular and sexy in the pool.  That is some image to behold. That helicopter invading their privacy is something else for them to worry about.  But drama is all part of  being a power couple.  Thanks for the update.  Love the story. xo

Still enjoying but wonder where it's going. 

Thanks

oh my too funny!

lol

Christian and Anas antics make my day. THANKYOU for the regular updates which are eagerely awaited.

yeah! what in the world happened????

princess grace in her tiara...picturing her in my head...precious!

tommy saying "cwisten home" while patting christian home and christian smiling and putting his arm around his shoulders pulling him over to him...was one of the sweetest and heartwarming moments between the big man and the little man.

brilliant chapter!

As always, loved it! Ana and Christian loving is always electric. And Teddy, oh boy,getting to that age where he has questions. Christian will need extra therapy dealing with it. LOL

Hilarious.....another great chapter!!!

I absolutely adore this  story, great chapter!

Nice.... I was worried just now about them arguing, but making up is so nice!!  Teddy is so cute but wants to be treated like a young man instead of a baby. It is hard for mom's to accept their children growing up.  I feel like that with my sons too.  Tommy is slowly but surely fitting in so well. Thank you for the update, and I look forward to the next one.  Love, Carol xxoo

Amazing story... I'm waiting you update.... TU for your job!

I don't know if I like this new Allison especially if Christian is feeling a little out of control with Tommy and this deal not going well.

Left us hanging! haha That's ok, everyone is home safe and sound. I have no clue what happened but I bet it is "good".

Excellent chapter thank you for the update.

Awhhh, another happy ending. This should be an interesting story. Was sweet how Tommy patted Christians knee. I can see that Christian will be the one that wants to keep him in the end. 

Good chapter, eager for more. 

Damn you're GOOD!!!

I am desperate for the next chapter. 

Oh No!  Please let everyone be alright!  Update soon, I can't take it!

OMG, I hope they are alright!! I very much like that Gail and Ana have such a good relationship and that Gail loves the children too.  Ana probably feels so comforted by this, since she doesn't see her mother much.  I noticed the common interests that Tommy and Christian share, cars, art and a Teddy bear just like Christian clung to as a toddler.  I am enjoying your story so much you have no idea.  Or, maybe you do, I comment every time!!  Thank you for this escape. Love, Carol xo <3

Oh know I hope there has not been another kidnapping or hostage situation. Thank you for the update.

I love this story line, by far the best 50 Shades story out there.  And I love that you update so frequently. Keep up the good work!

Oh, I could feel it in my bones that something was coming......   oh geez, you know I love this story,  and your imagination!    Can't wait for more!

The more Christian talks about Tomny the more I think he is going to stay with them.  I'm not one for anal sex but damn girl that was hot.  

You are an awesome writer! Keep it up! I followed you all throughout and the chapters keep getting exciting, i hope it never ends. :-)

Good God!!  I gotta try me some a dat!! 

Wowww..so hot! ;) xoxo

my favorite chapters are the ones that have some yummy lemons, christian and ana having conversations about almost anything as long as they're being playful, family, some gossips (not that christian does, but as a woman, ana sharing some tidbits with christian, is something most women do), spending time with family, family dinners, a touch of drama, and whenever little grace has something to say about anything and everything...i do love her (i know she's fiction...but when i'm having my grey moments, she's quite real to me! lol).

i would award christian grey are father of the year! would you be writing more christian and tommy moments? i would love more.

i love ana doing her share pre/during/post intimate moments with christian! i see them enjoying their sexcapades even in their 90's!

looking forward for another brilliant chapter! xo

My heart melted when Christian called Tommy "son". I hope he lets that little boy in to his heart and Tommy permanently stays with the Greys. Wasn't Christian's biological father's name Thomas? Can't tell you how much I love this story and look forward to every chapter. 

I cannot begin to tell you how much I have enjoyed reading your work.  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter

i hope lorna stays on the path of wellness of her sake and tommy's. she's very lucky to have any by her side and tommy under the grey's care.

helen mancuso should have shut her mouth and stay in business mode. will christian fire her after ana tells him the story?

like what i have said before, the original christian grey and your christian grey "don't stray." the moment he met ana, christian knew that she belonged to him and he to her! he'd experienced life without ana and he made sure that he would not lose her ever again.

i'm glad you're keeping them together...being in love, playful, having oodles of sex, enjoying some kinky fuckery, and being great parents to teddy and grace.

love love love your brilliant trilogy!

Great chapter!   Glad to see that he is oblivious to other women,  honestly it makes my heart happy! 

Good girl, Ana!!  She should definitely tell Christian what Mancuso told her.  Mancuso was downright insubordinate.  I like Andrea's character very much.  She is so loyal, but knows her place.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

I love this chapeter. I loved the banter between Christian and Ana. It makes me laugh and smile and reminds me of the banter between my husband and me.

Will Lorna be reasonable and think of Tommy's well-being or flip out upon being asked to sign the papers. "So you're Mrs. Grey?" Hmm ? I cannot wait for the next chapter there's a lot going on with the Grey's.

interesting.....Tommy is adorable!

I love this story and little Tommy!   Christian explanation or summarization of what was going on in the world was cute.   Little guy just wanted to absorb it all! 

If only I had their stamina.  Wow!!!

Hello....First of all i want to thank you for writing such a beautiful story and letting us to read and to "live" with your story...i'm kind of "silent reader" but i want you to know that i am waiting every chapter with a lot of enthusiasm and i love it. i want to never end this story...please write more and more and more of it..thanks again for being such a good writer. take care of yourself and i send you a lot of hugs from Romania(i'm a very distant reader :)....)...bye :) :)

i truly enjoyed this chapter! love the christian being romantic by sextexing ana and sending her flowers just because, the sex marathon, the banter, the name calling: ana as the shit stirrer and christian, what else, as the dick, and the promise of some ass fucking!

christian making fun of ana by telling her to teach tommy how to pee correctly and reminding her what not tell the kid...what she told ted about his penis is going to fall off and grow back later!

playful christian and ana...it's epic!

Too funny!! I thought they were going to fight, but then they ended up bantering.  I was worried about you ending it that way.  I'm having anxiety about you wrapping the story up.  Please don't!! 0:) xxoo

Love!!!!  Ms. E you have the best stories.  I love your Ana and Christian just as much as the originals.  You are so talented with how you've written this whole series.  Love the kids. You're very talented, keep it up because I can't wait to keep reading.  I don't want these stories to end!!!!

Great chapter!!!. Love the coitus - interuptis.. 

Oh my Lord!!!!  Too funny!!! I could relate.  LOL!! Nice lemon though.  This Terry prick could use an ass kicking.  That sweet little Tommy who never hurt a fly doesn't deserve that poor treatment.  I'd like to teach Lorna a lesson too. I was so glad to hear the email alert of another chapter.  Thank you, dear.  Please, please keep the story going. I think I speak on behalf of your loyal followers that we love, love, love your writing.  Happy St. Patrick's Day.  Love, Carol xo

You have to continue the great work!!! I love your stories! Beautifully written! You have stayed true to the original characters, but made them your own. XXX

near the end... too cute and too true