That was awesome,  sweet and tender.   Sometimes we forget men miss their children too! 

i love this chapter even though it made me cry. grace my dear dear grace...she is si precious. she makes me smile, laugh whenever she makes those little comments. i hope teddy doesn't continue to behave the way he did when tommy called christian dad...but i guess kids will always be kids. i have a sweet spot for little tommy...you just want to hold him and love him and protect him. ana and christian's conversation about sam was heartbreaking. i'm glad they have each other during times when they miss their sweet sam. it was a beautiful chapter and it touched my heart!

WHat...are you kdding?  POSSIBLY a sad chapter...A heart wreching chapter and I loved it!  You can really get in touch with their emotions and I feel so connected to the story.  THat was amazing...I cant' wait for more...I have lost a child and i know Sam can't be replaced but I so hope Tommy can be a Grey one day...he didn't knw what a dad was....not that broke my heart!  LOVE THIS STORY!!!!  Please keep it going...you have such a way with words.  

Hi, just replying to your reply on the review I posted for chapter 60, is than on March 1st I replied on the last chapter back then (57) and it appeared the story was last updated on 04Jan2013, and it still shows that's the date when you last updated the story. But now that I decided to check I see that now there're 60 chapters, so that means it was updated some time between March 1st... but it stills says it was last updated on 04Jan2013. And that's why I was worrying about you... because according to that date you hadn't posted a new chapter... so I was concerned something had happened to you and now that I see you had more chapters I was relief to hear from you.

Sooo touching. Christian is struggling with this arrangement since it really hits home with him. Tommy seems to be such a little angel.  Thank goodness the children are receptive to his presence.  I look forward to your next chapter. xo

I hope Christian allows Tommy to stay I know the situation brings up painful memories for him but it can also be healing for him as well. Thank you for the update.

What a bitchLorna is, they are there to help her and she hits on Christian.  It was bad enough doing drugs on the plane.  Poor little Tommy, his mom is never going to straighten up and unless Christian changes his mind he isn't staying with them either.  Thanks for the update.   

OMG what an intense chapter.  I cried while reading about Tommy's reaction to the children and how comfortable he is with Ana.  Very well done.  Please, please keep this story going.  I love it.

I love Tommy poor little baby must be scared in a new environment especially when he doesn't appear to have had much stability in his life and as for Lorna what a piece of work hitting on Christian after all Anna has done for her and her son I don't care if she was high at the time or not so uncool. Lorna doesn't seem to be all that interested in Tommy or concerned for his well being I wonder if she will follow through with treatment and if she doesn't will Christian and Anna continue to take care of him. Great chapter thank you for the update.

I hope Lorna isn't going to grab Tommy and run!  I look forward to more info on her back story.

i enjoyed this sweet and tender loving moments between christian and ana. sexy and yummy lemons. well done.

love overprotective christian...andi believe christian can and will buy any future beivers who comes along grace's way! ha ha

so happy that lorna showed up and is willing to move tommy and herself to seattle. she should feel very lucky to have chrisitian and ana in their lives and the least she could do is commit herself in straightening her life for tommy's sake.

i love each and every story you write. thank you for sharing your wonderful gift!

Christian seems wasted but I was hoping we would be treated to seeing Christian taking off Ana dress with his "fucking teeth" ...  maybe???

I think my fav was the entire cocktail party .... funny shit.

Very Funny chapter!! ;D xoxo

Oh that was so good. Thank you

Still enjoying your story. I think you may have forgotten to update agin, I saw you have updated on FanFic. Looking forward as ever to next chapters!

This has to be One of my MOST Favorite Chapter's ever!   Daddy G and Princess Grace making Special Recipe Pancakes was hilarious!   Gosh can I say again how much I love Teddy!    Christian loves his life with his children and wife xo much, and I agred thag his reservations on Tommy must stem from the fear of uncertainty it could bring to his children's lives and their Happy Family which he feels he is in control of.   Of course the control Daddy might have now is nothing in compared to Teenager years,  right!   Awh our beloved Mr G the Megalomaniac Controlled Billionaire,  what a complex person he truly is.   

So happy Lorna called!

Thank you for the update.

Arghhh that's just mean leaving it there!!! lol

"Hi Honey. I'm home."...well, fuck!! I hope it's you! Or I just got fucked by a phantom!!!

OK....One of Tommy's babysitters is calling. I hope to hell the drugged-out heifer has not come and taken Tommy out of the hospital or I might have to jump into your story and kick her ass. 

I'm just saying...

what a fabulous chapter! it's so wonderful to read your story, specially after reading some cheating stories. i'd say yours is one of may favorites...gotta have my fix, you know!!!

i love that christian wanted ana to be next to him during the contract signing. they are perfect together and christian grey only does perfect...whether it's his business or his relationship. i have so much more love and respect for christian when he offered to add ana's name in their business and how she owns half regardless. i would want to know too just like ana wanted to know...just to have a better understanding of what it would mean in case something happens.

it was quite generous of christian to give 2.5% ownership to ros which i feel she rightfully deserves. so how much is christian grey worth at the present time? just curious.

brilliant chapter!

Hot chapter, I hope Tommy is okay. Thank you for the update.

OMG, the plot thickens!!! Soooo good!!! I thought it was Maggie on the phone saying that Harold suffered a heart attack and died!! I wonder how Tommy is.??? BTW, awesome love scene. Woo Hoo! Love you!!

Sexy back, yes, that's our boy.   He got his sexy back with the wifey!   Now what is goingnon with little Tommy!   Oh, No!    Can't wait

Great chapter, look forward to the lemon :)

Great chapter thanks for the update.

Sorry I am several days late in reading and catching up!  Very good chapter!   Don't we all love Christian and his Entrepreneur genes!   Lol!    Loved his talk with Teddy,  or his retelling of his talk with Teddy!  

I'm worried about what is happening with Tommy and especially with his Mom... she is trouble (or in trouble), I can feel it.

That was naughty and hot.

You still left me hanging with this odd circumstance of Ana being there when this transaction takes place. And poor Tommy and Lorena.......so many unanswered questions.

Christian ends up adopting a boy whose mother is a drug addict and who loves him but neglects him.  Is this how Christian's story ends up becoming "full circle"?

Thank you for your story.....enjoying it very much.

That was the sweetest chapter...I love this story..I love your C&A...I see love Tommy and hope Christian and Ana save him live Carrick and Grace saved Christian....please!

I hope the deal goes without a problem.  It seem strange that she didnt want her daughter in laws at lunch.  I love how much in love Christian and Ana are in your story.  They have their fights but the make ups are fantastic.  I'm still laughing over them dry humping like teenagers.  

I just love them!

The good news for me is that I can see Ana & Christian getting custody of Tommy regardless of Lorna's decision.  I truly hope that Lorna will see this opportunity that Ana is offering as a blessing but I suspect that the drugs have too much of a hold on her.  I can't help thinking that if anyone could get through to Lorna it would be Christian.  He has lived that life and Lorna needs to see it from his and her son's point of view.  Christian would be very convincing.

I can't wait to see where you take us.  I am nervous that Lorna is going to bring someone horrible into their lives so that he can try and get money out of The Grey's.   I hope that is just my overactive imagination.  No matter what, I am so glad that little Tommy has them to look out for him.  Thanks!

I hope that Lorna gives up parental rights and Tommy joins the Grey clan.  Or at the very least that Ana keeps him safe while his future is determined by the CA courts....or he reaches 18 years of age!!  It's destiny that Christian should be directly involved with a child with a background like his.  Christian does a lot of charitable giving but that's indirected support....this would mean so much more.

The story is good...well paced and interesting with the several things going on with the kid and the merger.  Thank you !!

I have a feeling that Christian and Ana are about to add another little boy to their family. It doesn't seem like Lorna wants help.  

That poor little boy.  I think it's great that Ana wants to try and help Lorna but it still might be best for Tommy to be taken from her.  

Great chapter!!!!

I have a sister who is addicted to crack cocaine. I haven't seen her in at least 10 years now. It is very true how you have written Lorna's character. When you start talking rehab to them, it's like the walls are closing in on them and they have to get away as quickly as possible. I can't even begin to get into their mind to tell you what they are thinking. All I can tell you is that when somebody gets too close to their business, they are like trapped rats. and if she is true to form, what she is going to do next is try to check Tommy out of the hospital and run. Because he is so sick and has obviously been abused, they are not going to let her do that. So she is going to try to just TAKE him out of the hospital and run. If all else fails, she is just going to run. If she does actually eventually seek help, she is going to be the exception, not the norm, and if she doesn't end up dead somewhere it will be a miracle! My sister lost two children--they died as babies--and it still wasn't enough to get her clean. Sad but true.

i hope lorna makes the right decision. poor tommy...he's not only sick but seems he's been physically abused.

i'm glad that ana listens to christian when it comes to her safety. she's sensible enough that they're quite high profile and will always be a target for pretty much anything. that's one the reasons i love your ana (some versions of ana are just annoying because she always seems to put herself and her family in danger...even E.L. James's  Ana). i also like that  taylor is a softie and she and ana have a really great relationship...like he's family to her. thank you for posting soon!

Sounds like there's trouble brewing in Sacramento.

I'm still laughing that Teddy thought his penis would call off.  You never know what your kids will talk about at dinner.  I think it's great what Ana wants to do to help but I don't think it's going to be an easy task.  

I so love your version of the Greys, this was an amazing chapter and as always thank you for the update.

Absolutely love when this are in the chapters......theymake me laugh out loud.  This was an adorable chapter, can't wait to see what happens with little Tommy.  A little nervous...waiting on pins and needles :)

As always.....I love your writing!

This is such a wonderful thing that she wants to do for Tommy and Lorna...but why do I smell a shitstorm coming?

I laughed out loud at Christian for paying Grace to let him wash her hair.  He may be a great negotiator but kids are the exception to all the rules!

Looking forward to more of your story!

I ave been reading another fan fic tonight that had my heart aching, but this chapter had me giggling  With four small children of my own, the dinner conversation was so perfect! I hope Ana doesn't do anything stupid in Sacramento  :)

Anna is a super wealthy woman and she is spending money now like she finally knows it. The good thing is all the money that she spent today was making her feel guilty when it was for herself, however, she did not hesitate to spend whatever money was needed on that sick child. I think that says a lot about who Ana is. Thats another reason why we love this character. 

Thanks for the update.

i'm glad ana decided to treat herself...no need to feel guilty. she deserves it. afterall, christian makes what?...over a hundred grand an hour?...i think. what she spent was nothing.
glad that lorna decided to call ana. poor tommy is in the hospital and ana is ana...she's got a mega heart and always thinks of others...just like grace. i have a feeling lorna and tommy will find their way to seattle and good things are coming their way...courtesy of christian and ana gray?!
well done nuwriter.