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Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 123

Please don't let this story end. I love it and look forward to it every week. Please keep writing.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 123

Oh this was another stellar chapter. I love the interaction between Christian and Grace....so dam cute.
And NO! not the end....can't this be the story that never ends? haha
Thank you for taking the time to write this.

Reviewer: binxy101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

cant wait for chapter 123.. if its ready please please post 

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 122

Amazing ....fxxking Brilliant really...smoking hot and funny ...you are the BEST and what a suprise finding this chapter tonight just before going to bed lol ....now I'll never sleep haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa       please when's 123 coming ???????? THANKS x

Reviewer: katwoman Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 121

Hmmmm. Why did Ana have to talk Christian out of the asparagus in favor of oral activities?  Can anyone educate me?  Fun chapter...love them with their family, but love seeing them spend time just as a couple!



Author's Response:

Asparagus can give 'body fluids' a funky taste and smell. Pineapple juice makes them sweet.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 122

wow Kate got a eat full...that's wat she gets...she tought her and Elliot had it going on , she had no idea Ana has no complaints.....I wonder who the star was?  He was a bit creepy, Ana held her own..until you post again

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 122

Poor Kate;)

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 122

OMG!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 122

That was fun. I think Kate will be eternally jealous.

Reviewer: Marychell Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 122

OMG Christian can be sooo sweet. Can't wait for more sweet Christian.

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 122

Ok, the bathroom scene was HOT, but Kate being stuck in the stall, having to listen to them, was freakin' hilarious. 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 122

Well I too was worried about CG's guilt, I hope he is not hiding something else. Wow public toilet sex with Miss Kavanagh listening, what ever next...   The actor, film rights to Ana's book I can feel something risky looming from this.  Bring on the next chapter please if it is ready now!  I love it.

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 122

Wow... I guess Kate learned a few things!

 

the evening had the potential to be a cluster f###, but it turned out alright so far.

Reviewer: cthreatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 122

I was getting a little paniced in the middle when Christian was feeling all guilty...what's up with that...he's usually not guilty unless he's up to something then I got all worried that something might be wrong with him and then OMG Kate walks out of the bathroom....Okay, forget worrying about why CG is feeling guilty...THAT was PRICELESS!!!!  Awesome as usual...can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 121

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW you do it every time I'm just getting into it then bang it's finished .......your discription is excellent ...love love love the Club ....oh what will happen next ...somebody from his last visit mmmmmmmm ...Oh hurry up and and post the next chapter love ya Pretty PLEASE x

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 121

Nice build up to the night and the food sounds delicious as always.  I have never tried oysters, since reading your work I have been craving trying them.

Reviewer: Marychell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 121

I cant wait for the rest... I'm excited!

Reviewer: anirb Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 120

You are such a gifted writer, I love your take on this story. I know it must come to an end at some point. like the E.L. James books i always want more. I must say your story have giving me more, thank you for that.

 

HAPPY NEW YEAR'S

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 121

No drama yet... But I wonder if it's coming soon?  Can't wait, one way or the other.

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 121

What a nice fun break from the everday drama.  Glad to know Tommy's adoption is going to be finalized soon.  Speaking of drama, I hope the baby-mama isn't going to show up and cause problems.  I liked what Christian said about her though ... saying that maybe she loved him enough to let him live a life she knew she couldn't provide.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 121

Ok, I'm waiting for the Sex/BDSM rooms.......

Reviewer: cthreatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 121

Thanks for the Wednesday update!  Happy New Year!  Tommy's adoption final...looking forward to that and the rest of clubbing!

Reviewer: RebeccaKukla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 43

Yup - didn't buy it that she shouldn't have met Virginia the first time around, don't buy it this time either. She didn't betray him. I do understand why he thinks that, but she did not do it. ~R

Reviewer: Kalico0809 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have really enjoyed reading your stories!! Hope they continue:)

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 120

A club in LA sounds like it might be an interesting night. Ana's dress sounds as sexy as ever. I am loving the continuation of their lives, more please.... 

I so want to go to Portland and Seatle after reading your stories.  



Author's Response:

That's interesting because when I get blocked, I pull up the Earthcam that looks down on Seattle. It's live streaming and I look at Escala and the traffic and boats and wonder what Christian and Ana are doing.  Is Christian at work or are they at Escala or a restaurant. I know it sound silly, but it works.  I'd love to go too.

thanks.

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Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 120

Awwwwwwwwwww I was just getting into that. I was just having a very pleasant conversation with one of my friends about how some of the FSOG stories are too far fetched and not keeping in with the original characters but you are spot on everytime x I really hope it was the weather or Portland that kept Christian away after Gails suprise reaction mmmm What will happen in L A ????????? Thanks love ya xxx

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 120

Three is enough... But perhaps they can help find her a good home.

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 120

I'm glad Tommy wasn't too sick.  LA should be fun ... can't wait.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 120

L.A. Humm, will thereby drama?

happy holidays

Reviewer: cthreatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 120

Another awesome day at Grey Manor...Love the family...love the story...alway excited when I see your updates!  Happy New Year!  Can't wait to read more!



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Thank you.

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 120

Can't wait for L.A.!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Me either. Now all Ihave to do is make it up. lol

Reviewer: elicerea Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2013 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 119

Mrs. E, you are the best.

I love your Christian and Ana and your story to death! I cannot stop reading about the kids, the day to day stuff and of course the kink. It cannot be put into words how much I appreciate the work and talent you put into these stories. And I am so greatful that you are willing to share it with us. I just do not want the story of this couple to end.

I wish you and your family a lovely Christmas and all the best for the New Year.

Thank you sooo much!!!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 119

Great chapter and so much more to look forward to.  2 parties where will this venture... 

Merry Christmas and excited for the store in the New Year. 

Thanks.

Reviewer: anirb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 119

very good, as always i can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 119

Hmmm... I wonder what's up with Ray? 

Happy Holiday's to you are yours!

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 119

Brilliant ....you are such a tease ...all these tip bits that need following lol . I remember when my daughter got a bit better and she was just about to leave special care and I wondered how this baby needed care cause he looked healthy enough ..yip mum took drugs then there was a beautiful baby girl that was to be given up for adoption too . I was there when  the mother came in to say goodbye oh my heart was bursting .Anyway...your story is fabulous and I really cannot wait on the next chapter. Will the young lady who started at Grey House have some more information or what about this coming club ..any old friends from Christians past mmmmmmmm love ya have a great Chistmas Thanks again xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: Remy Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 119

loved it plz keep writing!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 119

Interesting. 

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 119

Merry Christmas!!



Author's Response:

And Merry Christmas to you, too.

Thanks

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 119

Wow ... so much going on here.  Ana and a "new" baby.  hhhmmmm ... i wonder how she'll get sucked in.  I would love it if they could expand their family, especially to those who are not as fortunate as them. 

And why was Ray calling??? 

I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter.  I SO love this book.

Thanks and Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 119

Oh deAr...could it be Tommy's sister in the nicu?

Reviewer: Remy Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 118

omggggggggggg plz tell me you are gonna add more i loved every story!! do not leave us hanging you have to tell how they adopted tommy and all!!

Reviewer: anirb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 118

As always, you " aim to please". Looking forward to the next chapter.                   

             HAPPY HOLIDAY.

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 118

You go Ana!  What the heck is he thinking!!!  

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 118

Well damn Ana.....lol

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 118

Loved their banter when he walked into Ana's office.  But...Ut oh, Mr. Grey needs to go double on the hearts and flowers!  He is in the dog house big time!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 118

Lol. That was awesome!!!  Go Ana!

Reviewer: TNC2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 118

Another fantastic chapter! I love how Ana is protective of her children and is not afraid of standing up to Christian.

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2013 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 118

Go Ana! I adored family time when Christian is playing with the kids.  It's nice to see no matter how busy he is, he always makes time to spend with his family.

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2013 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 118

That was good!  Go Anna!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2013 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 118

Oh no, Teddy off to boarding school does not sound good.  Why does CG push it so? Where is this going to go next....

 

 

Reviewer: anirb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 116

when will you have chapter 118 done, and will you write more chapter after 118?

 

            " i'm a big fan!!!



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Reviewer: anirb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 117

I can't tell you how glad im to hear that. I just started following your stories a week ago., this is tthe last chapter 117 of the fifty shades full circle, and i was wondring what happens when cristian visits teddy's school.your stories are just as good as the fifty shades of grey, fifty shades darker, and fifty shades freed, which i enjoy reading them all. keep up the good writing.

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 117

Aw ......I was just getting into that ..lol Sorry I checked on Saturday and Sunday andddd again today lol but I thought we were at chapter 119 sorry ...Thats what I look forward to at the weekends . NOW  what about that night club ....sexy dancing , men rubbing up Ana mmmmmm x Thanks love ya xxx

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 117

That was sensual and funny at the same time!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 117

FANTASTIC!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 117

Haha!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 117

Lol. Pants, really Christian? 

. I can't believe Elena didn't take you there.

 

 

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 117

Fabulous....as always

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 117

Love the lemons!  I can't wait to see how the visit to Teddy's school goes. 

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 117

Loved the update, thank you :)

Reviewer: TNC2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 117

Holy hotness! 

Reviewer: nickygiu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 117

WOW very very HOT .... oh lemons always do the magic .... "I'm not taking any chances" hilarious Christian ... thank you .... I confirm and emphasize that you are a great writer.

 Please do not end this story soon ... continuous, continuous, continuous .... I say ........... forever ... is too long?

Reviewer: ILaa2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 116

Love your work...

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 116

Sweet. Go Christian, I think Teddy was just defending himself. 

Reviewer: farrells4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 116

Love this story, please keep it going! I so look forward to each chapter! I can imagine it in my head.

 

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 116

Ah just what I needed lol .......poor Teddy and what might happen at the night club mmmmmmmmmm   Thanks again cannot wait for next chapter xxxx

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 116

I do hope Teddy sorts himself out at school, it is heart breaking.

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 116

Too funny! 

Reviewer: TNC2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 116

Love it!!

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 116

Poor Teddy ... he's a good kid who seems like he was standing up for himself.  I hope Anna doesn't go too crazy over this and understands the situation for what it is. 

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 116

Great chapter.  I loved that CG asked if he needed to send flowers!  What a cute couple they are!  Thank you!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 116

Oh dear... is Christian in hot water...?  I hope he didn't tell Teddy to hit first ask questions later.  That would not be good. 

I can't wait to see how this all plays out.

Reviewer: cthreatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 116

Ah....My weekly fix...Finding out what is happenings with the Greys' and Teddy, Grace and Tommy.  I love this story...thank's so much for keeping it going!!!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 115

This just gets better and better!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 115

thank you for the update...I'm happy Mia and Sarah are on the road to recovery

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 115

This was good.....you have the best story!!!  Love this!!  Happy Thanksgiving :)

Reviewer: Carol711 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 115

 

Thank God Mia is okay.  I like that Gail and Jason are more like family.  They are a tremendous help to Ana and Christian.  Nice ending, by the way!  Thank you for the update. xoxo

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 115

Glad Mia is on the mend. Woukd be too devastating to lose her or the baby. What's up with the writer who had the hots for her? Or will we hear from Tommy's mother or father? Or, the guy who knows about Christians past? What's yet to come? 

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 115

I'm glad Mia and the baby are doing better.  

I wonder what is going to happen with the bully?

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 115

I'm so glad Mia is starting to get better.  I was worried at the beginning as she started getting worse.  WOW, Teddy is already starting school?  I can't believe their summer is over.

 

I can't get enough of this family and look forward to each chapter ... keep em coming when you can.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Readabook Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 115

I hope Mia and Sarah are well soon.  This is such a good story.  Now, I need to go back and read the first two books.  Can't wait.

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 115

ah thats better .....was so getting into that there lol ...well until next time .As I said today brilliant natural ....I could go on . I hope you had a good holiday and enjoyed all your family x Cannot wait for the next chapter ...so much appreciation for all your time and energy xxxxxxxxxx  thanks x

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 114

Magnifique!

Reviewer: TNC2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 114

Poor Mia.  I love to see the big brother-little sister bond, very special! 

Reviewer: Cheryl608 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 114

can wait for Ch 115...loving this

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 114

Suspense, i like it!

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 114

Don't kill Mia off!

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 114

Excellent ! Your bringing back all the memories now ....forgot to say last Saturday when you started with the preeclampsia it was my daughters birthday weird or what .....Thanks again ! Cannot wait on the next chapter 123 aw ..xxxx

Reviewer: cthreatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 114

Oh how I love a good cry...and that is just what I ad ready this update...love the story...LOVE.THIS.STORY.!!!!! Can't wait for the update!!!

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 114

Any chance 115 can come sooner????  It's going to be so hard to wait and see what happens.

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 114

The Suspense......your such a great writer!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 114

Oh no!

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 114

Oh no, I really hope Mia pulls through.

Reviewer: Eva Masen-Pattinson Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 114

Can't wait to read next chapter. 

Reviewer: TNC2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 113

Wow! Well written. Love this story 

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 113

Girl! You sure know how to write up some DRAMA! Love this!



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Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 113

As uaual spot on .Your research is excellent as well as I also had Preeclampsia and had a seizure after an emergency c so well done ! Cannot wait for next chapter xxxxxxxx



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Reviewer: jmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 113

I wonder if Anna's blood type is a perfect match for Mia if a transfusion is needed!!!



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Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 113

wow!



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