Date: 10 Nov 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 113
Woah! Did not expect that twist at the end!
Author's Response:
Date: 10 Nov 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 113
Oh my! That would be really tragic if anything happens to Mia or Sarah.
Author's Response:
Date: 10 Nov 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 113
Sometimes... Christian can be a shit! He'll need to apologize to Ethan ASAP. When Mia finds out she will be really PO'd.
I hope Grace's "in the heat of the moment" phrase doesn't cause too much emotional damage to Christian.
I sure hope Mia and little Sarah will be OK!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 113
Great Chapter!!!!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2013 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 113
Well Ethan needs to man up.
Date: 09 Nov 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 113
Great chapter. And for those if us that wanted more drama...thanks. Btw, your depiction of HELLP syndrome was spot on. Now we have to hope Mia pulls through as she is the one at the greatest risk.
Date: 09 Nov 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 113
WOW...didn't see that one coming...amazing story, amazing update...can't wait to ready more...
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 113
Omg, didn't see this coming! Holy heck! What a great chapter! Christian get a hold of yourself dude! Ethan loves his wife very much, poor guy! Yes, I love Christian, but sometimes he gets beyond himself and takes action before he considers the consequences! Can't wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 105
Ana did very well putting that smut writer in his place.
My thought is that Christian is planning for Friday night date. Or...market crashes and all financials are lost?
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 104
Goodness grief...Ana should know better! Although, it is exciting to see if she could get one nice surprise without Christian finding out.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 102
They are so cute when they disagree!
Date: 07 Nov 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 112
when will this be continued?
Date: 07 Nov 2013 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 112
Waitng in anticipation for chapters 113 and more...love this follow up of the orginal story
Date: 06 Nov 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 107
Really LOVE this chapter...loving how much Christian really adores Ana and is doing his very best to make things work out between them.
Date: 06 Nov 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 112
Oh no...what now...hope everything will stay okay in the Grey household...looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 05 Nov 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh no...another cliff hanger. Hope Mia is okay. Not sure if I like Christian leaving the wedding and Ana behind to go running to Mia like this. Hope we get the next chapter real quick.
Date: 05 Nov 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 112
Oh how I love and hate cliffies. Fun chapter, I love to read the children's speak. Incredibly well done and very fun to read...just can't do it without smiling.
Date: 04 Nov 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 112
Chapter 12, certainly will dray tuned, I hope Mua is okay?
Date: 04 Nov 2013 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 112
Ooh sounds like this is going to be good!
Date: 04 Nov 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 112
No.... What going on with. Mia?!!
Lovely wedding...
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 112
Wondering what happened to Mia.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 112
Oh my gawd ... what's going on with Mia?!?! I hope the baby is ok.
This chapter was nice, I like scenes with Ana and her dad ... they are so endearing. We get a lot of the Greys so it's really nice whenwe get to knownthe Steeles too.
Thanks!
Date: 03 Nov 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 112
How can I wait a week to find out about Mia?
Date: 03 Nov 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 112
Aw I truely hope she is ok ...........brilliant I so love how you bring the kids across......what are you gonna come up with next AND Jose mmmm Until next time ...love ya x
Date: 03 Nov 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 112
Mia?!?!?!? OH NO!!!!! Can't wait...hurry...please!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2013 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 111
I can't believe I've finally caught up and actually have to wait for updates. I may go through withdrawal. ~R
Date: 31 Oct 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 75
Do you have a picture of the magic shoes?
Date: 30 Oct 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 35
So, thought I'd weigh in on the "Ana always giving in to Christian" controversy. Your posted info about D/S relationships was interesting and appreciated, but Ana is not a sub.
He may believe he went to Sacramento to protect her, but fact is he went to control the situation when she wouldn't follow his orders to not have dinner with that crew. And she is smart enough to know that. He is Christian being Christian, but she could have at least pointed it out to him, and then, yes, forgive him, because Ana is Ana.
Just my two cents. ~R
Date: 29 Oct 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 111
Your story is original. I love how you write
Date: 29 Oct 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 111
Can't wait for that chapter!!! Back to good ol' kinky fuckery!
Date: 28 Oct 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
LOL! The scene with Grace is priceless! And the listing of the spilled contents of her purse..well done!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 111
this is a beautiful chapter ..... I saw the desire to love and accept each other .... to give pleasure to each other. Ana with kinky fuckery ... Christian with hearts and flowers. She wants to please him and vice versa .... fuckery romantic .. the best example you could use .... what about the morning breakfast? wonderful ... thanks as always to continue to delight us with our favorite story .. thanks for making us dream and believe that true love exists and you just accept it entirely with their own strengths and weaknesses ....
Date: 27 Oct 2013 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 111
You never disappoint us ...thanks. BUT why is Christian scared that Ana leaves him ? Hot stuff great xxxxxxxx I also love the bit about him finding his breakfast lol xx
Date: 27 Oct 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 111
Wonderful!!!
Date: 27 Oct 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 111
Well, that was a fairly vanilla fest! And they both loved it.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 111
Awe!!! I love their change of "taste"!!! Love the story...please, please, please keep it going!!!
Date: 22 Oct 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 110
Teddy is a really smart boy! Good job Christian.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 110
Thank you for the wonderful update. I laughed out loud at the Oreos comment.
Date: 22 Oct 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 110
I love Christian and Teddy conversations. I will never look at Oreos the same way! Can't wait for date night!
Date: 21 Oct 2013 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 110
Thanks again , I really do appreciate your hard work ....brilliant and Teddy is so cute as are Gracie and Tommy ...excellent .I reaaly cannot wait until the next chapter.....nearly finished reading yout books for the third time . Thanks again x
Date: 21 Oct 2013 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 110
Quite the inquisitive kid, that Teddy. Cute chapter.
Date: 20 Oct 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 110
Loving this story as much as the first word I read in book one...I love to these updates...It just makes my week!!! Can't WAIT for DATE NIGHT!!!!!
Date: 16 Oct 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 109
I just cannot wait for the next Chapter, I wish I had not read this book so quickly but I was hooked.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
Lovely ...he adores her xxxx great writing xxxx
Date: 16 Oct 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 109
Love this story line. And that was a HOT chapter!
Date: 15 Oct 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aw I just love em xx
Date: 15 Oct 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love the bit where he says Ana my Ana xxxxx
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 109
Thank you for the update :)
Date: 13 Oct 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 109
Hot ....brilliant as usual but so sad now cause we will have to wait until next week .It is the highlight of my week . I remember reading that you wrote twice a week in reviews . Plesae pretty please just cause your the best lol xx
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2013 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 109
great chapter!!
Date: 13 Oct 2013 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 109
Nice, sweet, hot.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 109
Cool! I'm looking forward to reading about Teddy visiting Grey House ... should be fun.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 109
Love it! Glad to read it. How are you? Hope you're feeling better.
Date: 13 Oct 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 109
I wonder if little Tommy saw anything interesting? That was a great chapter, fun and HOT.
Date: 13 Oct 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 109
Hilarious! Your story is perfect as always!
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 108
Write a lot and often.
Date: 07 Oct 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 103
Can you explain when Christian had his thing with Amy he said the only time he touched her was to control her. But they still got their sexual gratificatiion ....so what did he still do to get it ..nipple clamps, toys please reply . It has been annoying me x AND they still got naked !
Author's Response:
As I remember I think I wrote that they went their separate ways if they needed any sexual gratification. When they were in the playroom it was all about power exchange.
Thanks for asking.
Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 102
oh what next ?mmmmmmm
Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 101
Love it ..... Its always Ana who has to hear the women ...what about him for a change eh ...lol x
Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 100
Oh a bit crabby is he not ? mmmmm
Date: 07 Oct 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 99
Oh my how I love this family and you x
Date: 07 Oct 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 96
Really enjoying the banter between them all . Great stuff x
Date: 07 Oct 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 108
Too sweet. What's up with Leila. She's it supposed to be around, and, why didn't Ana say anything to Christian about it?
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 108
this chapter made me smile and happy. thank you for writing one of the best stories!
Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 95
Awwwww is that no beautiful .......bless xxxx
Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 94
Easy reading ...brilliant x
Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 93
Love your style xxxxx
Date: 06 Oct 2013 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 91
I hope he is not getting too cocky with the comment about my women meaning .....him messing around ! But its GOOD not him messing around I mean x I so hope he's not xxxxxx
Date: 06 Oct 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 108
Aw just what I was waiting on . Go Allison , Ana has a spy so to speak ..great. Christian is very stressed right now though. BUT Christian is a natural with Tommy .Love this !!!! I would love Anna to have more time out with Kate ...shes great and doesn't give a shit about Christian and Ana seems to rebel against him which I like when she's with her ! Is Leila going to cause trouble ohhhh .I like when Christian gets jealous when Anna gets all the attention from the hot males!!!!! How often do you give us a chapter ? I am reading it for the second time...brilliant ! Nearly finished again too .I am sad I know but it's sooooo good. It's al I do in my free time lol Give it to us baby ...can't wait on the next chapter ...love ya xxxxxx
Date: 06 Oct 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 108
that was an amazing chapter ...so down to earth he loves his kids so much
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 108
Another day in the life of the Grey family ... I love these kind of chapters ... so sweet to watch them all interact.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 87
Really good but I am always waiting , wondering ...is he still being faithful ???????
Date: 05 Oct 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 86
naughty girl lol
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 107
Thank you for the update <3
Date: 05 Oct 2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 83
nice that Christian is finally opening up to the love x
Date: 05 Oct 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 82
never boring xxxxx
Date: 05 Oct 2013 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 81
Excell ent......very touching...they are such loving people and you make it happen x
Date: 05 Oct 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 79
Ok another great chapter.....you are the best .......love ya x
Date: 05 Oct 2013 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 78
You are so good at this .......x
Date: 04 Oct 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 75
I truely hope he has not got himself a new sub !!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 74
Great but I do hope he never strays again....
Date: 04 Oct 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 73
I love this chapter. This is what I'm talking about . Brilliant . Not always Christian fighting the women off. This should happen more often xxx
Date: 04 Oct 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 72
nice ..refreshing x
Date: 04 Oct 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 71
Great reading ...brilliant
Date: 04 Oct 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 66
It's good for Tommy and Christian ....bonding xxxxx healing xxxxx Brilliant
Date: 04 Oct 2013 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 65
this stuff is amazing xxx
Date: 04 Oct 2013 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 64
Oh I just love this .....give us some of this anytime but I would really like for some hot young male to approach Christian and say what he would or wouldn't do to get Anna into bed without him knowing who she is ...what would his reaction be mmmmm