Date: 03 Oct 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 63
Keep up the great work xxx
Date: 03 Oct 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 61
Bleeping brilliant ...my heart is breaking ...they are so right for each other xx
Date: 03 Oct 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 60
I love how Grace is just a mini Christian .......brilliant x
Date: 03 Oct 2013 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 57
funny xxxx I love playful drunk Christian x
Date: 02 Oct 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 52
am lovin it xxxx
Date: 02 Oct 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 50
fabo .....never dull x
Date: 02 Oct 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 48
I truely love Ana ...everyone makes Christian out to be the be all but without Ana there is no story ...end of x
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 47
You are so funny ........great x
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 46
I just love the kids and the way you put them across...brilliant x
Date: 02 Oct 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 44
Whats lemons ? You write it all the time ....arguements ? Please tell xxx
Author's Response:
In fanfiction writing, lemons are sex scenes. Hope that helps,
Date: 02 Oct 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
You really go into this ....interesting xxx
Date: 01 Oct 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
Excellent ..this is what I am talking about .....your so good xxx
Date: 01 Oct 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 35
Aw true love ...shucks lol xxxx
Date: 01 Oct 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
I love when they have make up sex ...brilliant x
Date: 01 Oct 2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
This is what Iam talking about ....love it xxx
Date: 01 Oct 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
loved it ...brilliant x
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for filling in the blanks again. You have no idea how much I love reading this. I really love when you talk about life before Ana with the subs. Love to hear more about his life at the office and how they all want him .I would like to see more of the men falling down to get Anna as well to see his reaction...thanks ,brilliant x
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
just gets better xxx
Date: 01 Oct 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
never a dull moment ....great x
Date: 01 Oct 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
yip ...spot on xxx
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 107
it was nice for christian and ana to have some alone time at escala. i really like the idea of rebuilding their own personal playroom.
never a dull moment at the greys' house!
i love love love reading about christian, ana and the grey kids!
Date: 30 Sep 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 107
Too cute. I love it when the kids are talking.
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well explained ......thankyou xx
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
God bless them x...Brilliant
Date: 30 Sep 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 107
Oh you are such a tease ....first with Elaine who just happens to send girls who have safe word red nailvarnish then wakes up a mess ...why , now we have a maid who has the same hair AND is pretty like Elena mmmmm keeping us on our toes xxxxlol
Date: 30 Sep 2013 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 107
Great chapter! but I too have an uneasy fealing about Georgia. A former sub whose name and appearance has changed? Ugh, I hope I'm wrong. Keep up the great work. Love those kids.
Date: 30 Sep 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 107
Wow, a lot was covered here. I felt bad for Ana whe Tommy was takking about his mama. And I didn't get a good feeling about Georgia ... I have to wonder if she's going to bring trouble for my fav couple.
Date: 30 Sep 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 107
Aw Tommy, I feel bad for him. I hope she never shows up again.
i like the idea of them creating a new playroom... I hope they make it fun.
Date: 29 Sep 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
Brilliant but did Christian and Amy really not have sex ? mmmmmmm?
Date: 28 Sep 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
mmmmmmmmmm nice x raunchy though
Date: 28 Sep 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 106
Finally finished, my heart was pounding reading chapter 106; thankfully Ana found all to be well; she was so strong going to Escala I love her. It would be so good if you could get a lake night tv series of your scripts, wow it would be just wow. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Date: 28 Sep 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love your take on this story and honestly cant pre-guess where you may be taking it ( Actually prefer your version to the original ) I love the kids especially Grace and your peripheral characters (Gail/Taylor family members ets ) are all equally fleshed out And your Lemons are the best So congrats I have been reading this one for a long time now and always look forward to the next update Well Done !
Date: 27 Sep 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 106
I have been holding my breath all week afraid of what she was going to find going on there ....wow what a relief ....
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 106
I'm so glad he wasn't cheating. I want to think he wouldn't do that again but you never know. That took a lot of guts for Ana to go there and possibly catch him if he was. New playroom, more kinky lemons, oh yea!!!
Date: 26 Sep 2013 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 106
Woohoo! A weekend update!! I love it! More, more, more to come! My favorite awesome writer!
Date: 26 Sep 2013 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 106
Aw I love you .....thanks ...I was so depressed yesterday ,I was on a downer all day . Sad I know .........Keep it coming.but there is still something about Elaine in New York I don't trust mmmmm love ya x
Date: 26 Sep 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 106
Wow, a surprise mid-week update ... THANKS! And thanks for not making us wait a full week to find out exactly what Christian was up to. Whew!
Looking forward to 107. :)
Date: 26 Sep 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 106
I love all 3 books. Chapter 106 is one of your best. Please keep writing.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 106
Thank you. Don't think I could read another betrayal.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 106
Thank You, Thank You for a Wednesday night chapter. It was perfect as usual, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
Date: 26 Sep 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 106
Thank you, thank you, thank you! For both the Wednesday surprise and the positive chapter. I've been on pins and needles for days. I love this story and your writing style. Thank you, again and again.
Date: 25 Sep 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 106
Thank goodness, it was just stress relief ala Claude. Terrific chapter!
Date: 25 Sep 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 106
Thank you, I couldn't deal with him cheating again.
Date: 25 Sep 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 106
OH. MY. GOODNESS!!!!! First...what an awesome Wednesday surprise!!! Thank yo so much for not making us wait!!! I was crying so hard in the middle of the chapter when Gail said they went to Escala and Ana decided to go...THANK YOU so much for keeping Christian faithful! I can't wait to read more. I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. I'm sorry, you just can't ever end it until they are old and grey (no pun intended!!!)
Date: 25 Sep 2013 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 105
Hopefully he will see sense or Ana should kick him to the curb...How can he do this to her ...to them . Please write more ...the kids are brilliant .....you have brought them to life . Please make it a happy ending or I have truely lost my love for Fifty Shades and don't want to read it anymore , hard since I have read the 3 books 17 times ...I know you have done a fab job so far .....PLEASE
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2013 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 104
Ok ... I reread it a couple of times the last two chapters ... I wanted to understand better. You must know that I am Italian, so I often need help in the correct translation. Nuwriter, so far you've done an excellent job. original and compelling.
I tried to analyze and figure out where you wanted to end up. I do not think CG is cheating, he would never do that ... was wrong once, and as he says ... never repeats the same mistake. I think it's possible that he is acquiring the SAP, hostile takeover, of course, just as it was with the SIP. He knows that this will piss ANA, of this he spoke with Flynn ... but his need for control .... his need is to keep his family to the "safe" .... to keep his "angel" with him .... are digging in his insecurities. Or do you grow CG ... that leaves cart blanche to ANA at work .... while he is unleashed with Claude Bastille .... but this assumption is too trivial for your brilliant mind, is not it? I wonder if I guessed that something is in your mind, Nuwriter ..... to know that I will have to wait for the next chapters .... I miss your updates twice a week .... Wait one week is too long. I wish you a good job, serenity and happiness.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think the title is referring to adopting Tommy, the son of a drug addict like Christian.
it wouldn't be believable if Christian had another sub like Amy. He almost lost Ana and was almost outed. I just can't see it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 105
Please don't have Christian do something stupid again against Ana. I have always been worried over the title of the story. I don't want him with someone else either having sex or just like the last time. It would kill me for this Christian to hurt Ana like that again. I hope I'm really off base on this.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 105
Oh pleeeease nothing bad they have been thru to much. Thank you
Date: 23 Sep 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 105
Oh no! I hope he isn't seeing anyone else for a non sexual release.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 105
I love this book. I think he is having difficulty with her working. He did't want her to work when they were first married, she quit after Teddy was born. I think it is her working that he can't handle. Just my opinion.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 105
Dear God
I dont thinkk I could take it if he was deciced to take on a new submissive ,,,
Date: 22 Sep 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 105
Love the way Ana subtly cussed out Colton! Lol smart very smart.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 105
hello nuwrter. you know that I am your faithful reader. I read your books at least four times and each time I was excited, I cried, I laughed. I think that you are the BEST FF written so far. But I beg you not to do this ... do not cheat CG would be a disappointment too strong. I want this LOVE is forever. Please ....
Date: 22 Sep 2013 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 105
Seriously, what is up with him? Waiting on pins and needles to find out!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 105
Oh, mercy, this was outstanding! As always, Christian will not go the path of the past! Never, ever! He loves her too much! Can't wait for more!
Date: 22 Sep 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 105
OH. MY GOODNESS. How could you leave us hanging like that? Please oh please oh PLEASE not another Amy whatever her name was...I just don't think I can take it. I feel sick...Ana was so honest about the flowers and the card and stuff...Holding my breath till next time...
Date: 22 Sep 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 105
Thanks for the long chapter ... I loved it! Now I can't help wondering what's going on with Christian. I really hope it's nothing too bad.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 105
Omg. Please don't tell me your going to let him do this again... She won't stay.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 105
I hope it's not cheating. Once a cheater always a cheater!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my this so made me laugh, this book is brilliant!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 104
GOOD!!!!! I am so glad that Christian caught on to that. She likes to condemn Christian all the time and here she is lying through her teeth and bringing Gail into it as well. She deserves a good ass bussing for that!!!!! So can't wait until the next chapter! Woo HOOO
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
just to let you know i have spent 4 nights with a lack of sleep reading your story and i love it. my fave fic from fifty ever. I even like your writing more than the original book if i can say it, but then without the original book there wont be a fic so that's a tough choice but i certainly love this.
can't wait for an update
Date: 19 Sep 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for your wonderful story! I've really enjoyed reading it! I'd personally like you to continue it until Ana and Christian are old and grey but that's just me. Please don't ever stop writing! :)
Date: 18 Sep 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 104
u got me biting my nails each time!!! love it!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 94
You are an excellent writer. Funny,realistic with great grammar and syntax.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 104
Ana needs to watch out for Colton. I wouldn't trust him. She should have just told Christian about the flowers and not try to hide them. His phone call to Flynn didn't sound good. Ana and Christian sound like they need a session together.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 104
Oh my, nothing gets past Mr. Grey. I'm looking forward on this playing out. Thank you for the update :)
Date: 16 Sep 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 104
Uh oh Ana! I just wanted to drop a note to say how much I love this story. :)
Date: 15 Sep 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 104
Oh My God! That was HYSTERICAL!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! This story is soo on point!!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 104
Oh. my, goodnes!!!! Awesome!!! I knew that card going in the desk drawer was going to bring BIG TROUBLE and I thought the John conversation might have been about Christian knowing all about the author and his SWEET SUITE...I just LOVE CONTROLLING Christian! I just LOVE your story...you threw out so my new things in this chapter...this is gonna be a long night, then the morning with the author, and the new housekeeper person and the adoption attorney meeting and the Friday night date and then daddy's wedding...AND won't Tommy have a brithday coming up in October??? Just don't you go get any funny idea's about his mama showing up on his birthday or anything crazy like that! The Halloween, Thanksgiving and Christmas!!! Have I told you lately that I. LOVE. THIS. STORY!!!!! Thanks for the awesome update!!!!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 104
Wow, I what a cliffhanger ... what is going on with Christian? Was his call to John in relation to his concern's with Ana meeting her client at the hotel or the flowers or just all of it? And when did he have time to schedule that call? I mean he seemed fine when he got home. hhhhmmm .... and that ending? Dang, that is quite the cliffhanger you leave us danglin' from. I am SO looking forward to the next chapter ... can't wait. And can I just say how much I love how easily Tommy is fitting in with the Grey's and how I love that he call's Ana and Christian Mommy and Daddy ... too cute. Not to take away from Teddy and Grace ... they are just as adorable in their own way too. Great chapter....loved reading every second of it.
Date: 15 Sep 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 104
Please write soon. The suspense is killing me.
Date: 15 Sep 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 104
Yikes! That author is bad news! I think the phone call was about Ana defying him about meeting the author at the hotel and not about him and his BDSM. How did he know? I am thinking that the security at the house told him there was a delivery for Ana. I hope Ana does not meet Colton in his room. She would flip out if Christian did that! Can't wait for the update!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 104
Aghh! Best story line ever!!!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 104
He knows everything, get reports continuously all day... Of course he knows. I do give him kuttos for not being boorishly mad.
To solve the problem, have her CP with her...
Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 104
Oh shit. Really glad for the added excitement, it's time for more drama. Yeah.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 104
Oh, that man has a uncanny way about him. I think he's had Colton followed, that's how he knew! As for the phone call with John, hum. Not sure unless its his need for control over Ana! So good TY for the chapter!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 104
Uggghhhh!!! I can't wait a whole week!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 104
Hahahaha..excellent chapter!!Al Mr. Grey does not miss anything! ;D Anxiously waiting for more!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 103
Panting! Anyone else?
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 101
Yes, I believe she will... ;p
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 100
'Crazy for loving you!' I remember my Mom singing that song. Patsy Cline sings it right?