Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 95
Aww..very sweet! :) xoxo
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 95
Aww, he finally called her mama! Maybe Sam sent him after all!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 94
Tear city! Love that Teddy! What a sweet Mommy Son conversation. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 94
poor christian! i hope it was just a nasty cold and nothing serious! ted was so sweet and i find his sensitive part of him quite endearing! tommy is fitting in quite well. for a small boy, he has a big heart that he wants to share with christian and ana and the rest of the greys. grace, my favorite is a little firecracker! yup, i could see her run GEH! and i believe she'd do an incredible job!
i feel a lot of sadess for virginia because she had missed out a lot and didn't have a chance to help her daughter. but watching christian and his family, not just his financial success but most importantly, the family he's created with ana's help, is something virginia will surely treasure forever.
beautiful and brilliant!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 94
I hate getting a cold! I can image Christian not being a very good patient...LOL
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've been following this for so long! I should've reviewed long ago I know! You are doing an amazing job and I hope you continue doing what you're doing! I'd love to see some other story in the future where all of the kids are teenagers! It would be interesting to see Christain handle that ;)
Date: 12 Jul 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ookie?! That's so hilarious! Especially hearing it from Christian... ookieville... That cracks me up. I always love how the kids interact, Grace is just adorable. The Sam moment between Ana and Teddy was touching.
You're an awesome writer! I always look forward to your chapters. I love that you regularly update and never leave the readers hanging. Even just the chapters that are the simple normal days at the Grey household are entertaining for me. You never get me bored. And of course, you lemony scenes are just fantastic. Did I say you are an awesome writer? ;)
I really do hope this book never ends! A hundred...no wait...a thousand more chapters to come!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2013 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 94
What a nice birthday gift to me, a posted chapter!! I couldn't wait for one. Thank you. Poor snoddy nose Kwisten!! I will make him some nice chicken soup and feed it to him (if only LOL!) Those children are so sweet, they love their daddy so much that includes Tommy. I could just see Gracie with her bed hair and struggling to pull a brush through it. Teddy is so intelligent, just like his parents. Tommy is so cute and doing so well. Gramma Ginia is so happy and proud of her new found family. I hope that things go well when they discuss Ella and Christian's life before the Greys. I am curious as to how Grace and Carrick are going to receive Virginia. Well done as always, your writing is so natural. I look forward to chapter 95. x
Date: 12 Jul 2013 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 94
Awwwwww, Teddy is an amazing little boy. So cute how Gracie talks. Snoddy nose...LOL. Hopefully Christian will be feeling better soon. Won't be too long before Ana catches it. Great update. Hope for more soon.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 94
there is nothing I love more ... as this story.
It just seems the natural course of the original story.
Thank you to let me live strong emotions such as these.
You're a great writer and talented
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2013 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 94
What a wonderful chapter! The kids, Virginia, all of it. Sorry for Ana Christian is sick, men when they are sick are worse than 3 kids sick! thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 93
What a treat! I've been without Internet for a couple of weeks & just got to read chapters 87-93! So funny and adorable and lemony!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 93
love love this chapter. they are precious.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 93
I adore how you write the children when they speak, especially Grace in this chapter. She's too damn cute. Teddy when he cupped his mouth and said "she takes drugs" was priceless. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 93
How cute, Gamma Ginia. So far, so good. I am sure Grace is going to ask her again about her little "gurl" that moved away. That is going to be an emotional explanation. Thank you for the update.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 93
Aww that was just so sweet. Good update!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 93
your grey family sounds and looks like any normal family. It's so wonderful to see how they interact with each other...so real..so genuine. i love so much hoe christian and ana treat tommy like he's one of them. he fits in and really belongs to them. i hope he gets to stay permanentlhy.
gramma ginia is such an adorable grandma. i felt sadness when teddy mentioned about tommy's mom being on drugs and unable to care for him. it reminds me of ella and christian and i'm sure virginia, ana, and christian had the same emotion but christian probably had other feelings about it.
oh the little greys are just so precious. and my favorite, grace, she always makes me smile whenever i read. she always brings joy in my heart! thank you edie for your beautiful story and superb writing!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 93
That was lovely! The kids were so cute!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 93
Perfect.....this story gets better and better!!!! I love the kids......ADORABLE. They'rme the cutest family. You definitely have the best fan fiction book out there!!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2013 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 93
These kids crack me up!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 93
OMG. I'm reading this with a smile on my face. Between the phone call home to the dinner conversation it's adorable.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 92
I Loved!
I'm ancious for another capther ^^
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 92
What a sweet story, I have to tell you that I am very attached to this story, like I almost need to read it to satisfy my craving. You are absolutely amazing and I love how you develop the story and the characters in it. I feel involved in their lives and all the goings on. I don't know how you do it. Loved the lemony goodness in the beginning. Rosa is clueless...Gail would never have knocked on the door to announce dinner!! I love Rosa though, she is so loving and motherly!! I am so happy for Christian that he is connecting with Ella's family and learning his roots. I enjoy how Christian wants Ana to share in everything too because he loves her so much. It is wonderful and will be very moving when Virginia meets the little rugrats. Brava!! Love, Carol
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 91
this is exactly how i see christian and ana post E.L. James' FSOG. their bond is stronger than ever. their relationship continues to grow...it just gets better and better. i love them being playful with one another.
i've always felt that ana could always match christian pound by pound when it comes to sex. she loves the kinky stuff, vanilla, and she's just one insatiable woman...just how christian wants her. the lemons are amazingly delicious...love ana's moment in the the tub.
brilliant story and writing. love the dialogues between CG and AG!
thank you for sharing your story and talent!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 92
Wow!. Christian has really taken to Virginia quickly hasn't he. It's good for him. Ana's butt must have copped quite the spanking the previous night. I love how Ana gives as good as she gets when she and Christian have their little kinky chats....LOL. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 90
I can imagine Christian not liking teddy playing drums but Ana be so proud.so cute
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 92
Oh I can picture Christian grinning and wanting to say "he's a jackoff". Hahahahahahahaha. He's so funny!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 91
Please don't stop writing! I love this story!
Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
When will the nex chapter be posted? Can't wait! Love your story!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 91
Nothing like a little fun with the tub jets. I'm surprised Christian was ok with that.
Date: 01 Jul 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 91
This story gets better and better!
Date: 01 Jul 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 91
Now I want a bathtub with LOTS of jets in it....LOL. And the kitchen sounds amazing. Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01 Jul 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 91
Oh she is being a naughty girl... How can she still be needy after the goings on of the morning? Why would you e
want to be alone when Christian would be more Han willing to take care of things? I'm perplexed.
Date: 01 Jul 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 91
Fun chapter. Glad to see self pleasure is always acceptable.
Yumm!
Date: 30 Jun 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
That really sucks...I like Ana pregnant but I still like where you've taken this story :-)
Date: 30 Jun 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 91
So Ana can't get pregnant at all correct?
Author's Response:
Nope. Her uterus ruptured when she lost Sam. She still has overies, but no where to cook a baby.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 91
Whew!! Hot chapter and Ana is making a little lemonade of her own. Good for her. I am curious about how things will go with Grandma Virginia. Thank you for posting another the chapter. Love , love.
Date: 30 Jun 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 90
Please don't stop writing! Loving the storylines!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 90
THANK YOU ... CHAPTER VERY EXCITING, FUN AND VERY VERY HOT!! ;-)
Date: 28 Jun 2013 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 90
Fabulous!.....I hope that Pimberton bitch doesn't keep causing trouble. Christian will sort her out. I love the backseat lemon and the phone call to the kids. Little Tokmy sounds like he's been ok while Ana and Christian are away, same as Ateddy and Grace. How cute was the call Christian got from Grace....that was super cute. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 90
the lemons were hot, steamy and so so sexy!
glad that the pimberton woman excused herself and got the message.
i laughed so hard reading this chapter!
the little greys are sooo adorable! and grace, crankcalling christian and ana =D, is just precious!
love love love this chapter!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 90
She handled that bitch with class. Great chapter.
Date: 28 Jun 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 90
Love this ..."No, I fucked the shit out of you because I love you and I had an overwhelming desire to make you come and then fuck you. No hidden messages." Classic CG line! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 90
Ahh, lovely lemon, as usual. I knew that biotch was going to be at that party. Shame on her. I am surprised Christian is tolerating such insubordination like she displayed in the elevator. How dumb was that Pimberton biotch for speaking so vulgarly to her co-workers with a visitor in the elevator. I know girls and guys talk, but that is a Human Resource issue. I hope Christian still demands decorum and professionalism for every one associate with GEH. She is a manager too!!! Hopefully Christian addresses this. Ana has been put through the mill during her marriage to him. I know that he loves her insanely, and she him, but it can't help but bother her at some point as I read in the previous chapter. I love those little kiddies there in Seattle. So cute and I love Nana and Papa Gail and Jason. I enjoyed watching the links you provided. Those kids are so talented. The boy reminds me of my son when he was that age playing the drums. xxoo
Date: 25 Jun 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 88
Sometimes she annoys me. She just thinks off of the top of her head and just goes. After all those years of being together you would think that she would know better than to wander around for half and hour and think that Christian wouldn't have a melt down.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2013 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 89
Love the dialogue in the car! Rosa was so nice to Ana validating her feelings and offering kind words. Ana needs these mother figures around her like Grace, Gail and Rosa. Being married to Christian the Greek god cannot be easy. I'm pretty pissed off at that brunette myself. Biotch!! I hope she is not at this party LOL!! Ana in heavy make-up, red mani-pedi and almost spray tanned!! Frankie and Joanie are trying to get Ana to join the NYC jet setters. Great story, so interesting. Thanks again.
Date: 24 Jun 2013 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 89
I wonder if she will run into thotell gossiping women at the event... Should prove interesting.
Date: 24 Jun 2013 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 89
Great update. Did Ana have a full hysterectomy. With her urge to eat more foo and being emotional, could she be pregnant. I can't remember if she is unable to have more kids or not. that girl in the elevator, is she someone to really worry about. Ana's gut feelings are usually never wrong. Hmmm, could be trouble ahead. Can't wait for more. I just love this story.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 89
lovely chapter!
i could understand ana's lingering insecurities. your husband is beyond gorgeous. oozing with oodles of sex appeal, inside out, multi-billionaire...of course women and men will desire him. but christian always tells ana how beautiful she is, how much he loves her, goes crazy when he thinks she's nowhere to be found, pretty much does what she asks him to do...it will still be not enough to feel secure. but at the end of the day, the both love each other so much and there will never be anyone else for them...just christian, ana and the little greys and tommy and jack! :D
that's exactly how your make me feel nuwriter when you write about christian and ana!
well done!
Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 89
Love the banter between them. Can't wait until Tuesday
Date: 23 Jun 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 89
Jealous Ana is seriously cute!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 89
Dear Ana, bless her heart, it would-be trying to continually hear sexual innuendos about one's spouse! I love how Christian loves Ana
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 88
Love it! Christian is full of surprises, but then again, Ana is playing with his nerves. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 22 Jun 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 88
Loved this chapter!!!...especially the phone call from Grace!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 88
I love your story. Thank you for not getting into cheating. I too see our couple as having found their soul mate in each other. The way you write cconversations between the characters is amazing. Your love scenes are written so well. I would love to read one where Ana takes the lead and makes love to Christian's body. She loves his body and his face and especially his feet. That would put a different twist to their love making. Please keep writing. I love your work. Thank you for all you do.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 88
Very clever, Christian's birthday as the elevator code! I was surprised that Christian's PA is a brunette and how ironic that her name is Elaine (shivers). However, I am glad that Ana feels secure in her marriage especially when those girls were discussing the Boss's sex appeal. Some things will never change. She is still a curious little thing and headstrong wanting to do what she wants like wandering the building aimlessly. Classic Ana!! I think she did it as a regular person so she could check out the female employees. I noticed that none of the men popped up to offer assistance which probably would normally be the case with a woman as stunning as Ana. It is so hot that the men scamper and jump to attention when Mr. Grey is in the room. Thank you for the update. I just love this story. xxoo
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2013 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 88
oh a new york day the in the life of mrs. grey!
ana is the not the only lucky one...i'd say christian is as lucky too. they're perfect for each other!
i'm always so happy to see adorable grace making an appearance. she never fails to amuse me. i looove her! thank you nuwriter!
Date: 21 Jun 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 88
I was so hoping that they would stop by finance or run into those chics again so we could see their shocked expressions when they realize what they said in front of 'Mrs. Grey'. LOL
Date: 21 Jun 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 88
I love them!!
Date: 21 Jun 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 88
Poor Ana. I thought she was going to cry in his office. That line of Christian's in the elevator about him wanting her so bad he could shit made me laugh, it was fabulous. I know I've said this a lot before, but I absolutely love your trilogy. I look forward to Tommy becoming Tommy Grey. Does he have a middle name. It would be great if they gave him Christian as his middle name. Just a thought. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 88
Our young Grace is a pistol! Ms ^GayGay has her hands very full loved the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2013 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 87
this is probably my most favorite chapter so far!
what christian and ana said to each other post-coitus were the most beautiful and honest declaration of their love! it was very touching and every word, every phrase, every sentence was quite moving...i actually felt their emotions, their love...so beautifully written nuwriter!
christian and tommy have a very strong connection...they're bound forver! like ana, ted, and grace!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Christian rocked this chapter ... the good lovin' he shared with Anna and then taking the phone call and playing the piano to help soothe Tommy ... that was just the best ever!
Date: 18 Jun 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 87
Thanks for sharing your story!
Date: 18 Jun 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 87
I hope shopping goes well... The beginning was very HOT!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 87
Oh my, always so so damn good and hot. Christian is so good with Tommy, vrry sweet.
Eager for more. This story never gets biring. Thanks for sharing you talent.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 87
Awwwwww, how sweet was that when Christian was playing piano to Tommy. That was a wonderful chapter. Some nice kinky fuckery, laced with some loving lemons. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 87
I have to get my husband to read these with me so he can pick up some pointers. Spicy lemon, by the way. I love that Ana wanted to keep the beautiful "Christian's" choker on. I like that Rosa acknowledges Christian's love and need for his wife. He just loves to love her. So sweet for him to play Rainbow Connection to Tommy over the phone, it brought tears to my eyes. Ana should go down to the South Street Sea Port or to the Museum of Natural History. Thank you for the update. xxoo
Date: 17 Jun 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 87
Just fabulous. I enjoy thos so much. Thank u for all the hard work. U r very talented.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 87
I hope you are in thiis for the long haul...I just have to watch Tommy grown up with Christian as his father and the bonb they have. I can't even imagine how all our hearts will break if Tommy does not stay with them! LOVE. THIS. STORY! Your story is amazing and I just want to say thanks for your faithful updates and keeping it going! It's a joy to read! Thank you!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 87
And I'm sure that everybody appreciates your chapters... at least I do. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 15 Jun 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 86
I love the description of the Seattle house "contempory Mattel". I love that Ana not only thought to pack her collar but she is topping from the bottom using it! Can't wait for Mr Grey's reaction!
Date: 14 Jun 2013 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 86
OOOOOH, I feel a big chunk of kinky fuckery coming in the next chapter....with a twist of lemon for good measure....LOL. Loving this story and so can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 86
I don't want this sturdy to END!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 86
All pleasantries aside...lets get to some fun. Lol
lovin it still!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 86
One delicious lemon coming right up!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 86
ahhh...it's nice to be christian and ana grey...actually it's fanfuckingtastic to be christian and ana grey!
what a lovely chapter! until next chapter!
Date: 14 Jun 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 86
Hmm seems she has plans for him... I wonder what he will say and do with her "stopping from the bottom"?
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 69
Aww Tommy likes C
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 49
Umm think ana is being dupped
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 47
Pooe teddy he afriad of being big
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 85
sexxxxxy!!!
christian and ana genuinely love each other so much they always have hot, luscious, steamy, titillating sex all the time wherever they are! *sighing* *fanning*
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 85
Sweet lemon!!!!! It was so touching when Ana told Christian that she wants to take care of him the way he looks out for her. Working hard and conducting business actually energizes Christian!! I am glad that his tummy is okay. I'd be happy to rub it for him! LOL!! If only!!! ;) Love,love
Date: 09 Jun 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 27
Hehugie i was goin say that Gail/Taylor would havrlr seen CG naked so no big deal.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 84
Oh dear, you have me worried about Christian's health and the ominous "we always need to make it back home". Can't wait for the lemons!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 84
Have I told you lately that I love these two crazy kids???? If only...... Should be interesting with GG Virginia coming on the scene. I hope all fares well. Finish this story when you feel you should. Write twenty more chapters, I don't care, just please keep writing for us. It makes my day to see that another chapter has been installed. Love and hugs to you. PS, Ana is going to knock them on their asses when they see her in that black Lanvin cocktail dress.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 84
"I kiss Teddy and Grace and Tommy. Christian does the same only he picks Tommy up and whispers something in his ear and then gives him a kiss on his cheek before setting him back on the floor."
i wonder what christian whispered in tommy's ear? i love that christian was as affectionate with tommy as same as teddy and grace!
""I didn't notice that your stomach was bothering you. I haven't asked about your scans lately. I'm not taking care of you like I should." I search his gray eyes that are locked with mine. "I've been so busy with my job and Tommy. I haven't paid enough attention to you. I'm going to change that. .....and I'm starting today with this trip. You're my priority Christian and I intend to make you feel that way." Leaning in I brush my lips across his and then press them against his mouth as his tongue begs entrance........"
i hope it's nothing serious with christian's stomach issue. with three kids and jack to take care of, i would give up my job if i were ana. she could always go back when the kids are older.
love the chapter and looking forward for the lemons!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 84
You are an awesome writer.....I hate for this story to end. I just love the story and characters!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 84
hello!
not fair to leave us wanting more, but hey will wait for the next chapter.
excellent work.
CONGRATULATIONS
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 84
Great update. I hope Lorna doesn't turn up while they are in New York. Teddy and Grace are so cute. Tommy is a lucky boy. The way you write their home life is wonderful. I hope Christian's health is ok. Awesome stoy and as always I can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 83
i love following your story. I religiously check back to see if there is anything new. Thank you for continuing the life of this family.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 83
Nuwriter, I love your story.... but if I can say a thing.... we don't need a drama ... but a KINKI FUCKING .... PLEASSSSEEEEE ;-)
Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 83
I have so enjoyed these three stories. I am kind of hoping that if this one finishes soon, as it is bound to, you will start another, maybe lorna will be coerced by a pimp to return, try and snatch Tommy. It's a while since we had a bit a drama and you write it well. Thank you for all your many chapters. I'll miss them when you finish!