Date: 05 Aug 2015 11:42 AM Title: They Lived Happily Ever After: Epilogue
*wiping tears* Such a fantastic journey! I really enjoyed this story, these characters since their very beginning. I love this geeky fairytale!! I am actually going to miss them. Thank you for sharing another brilliant story with us!!! :D
Date: 12 Jul 2015 2:32 PM Title: Moving Day and Difficult Conversations
I remember dropping each of my daughters off for their first year of university. I think my youngest was the most difficult for me. She turned eighteen three weeks after leaving her in downtown Chicago. That was scary for me.
Life moves forward!
I like you father son talks. Edward has just as much trouble as Owen. But as a father he takes his responsibility seriously. Red ears and all!
I gained a son-in-law at 45 and became a grandmother at 48.
Date: 05 Jul 2015 10:54 AM Title: Cabo San Lucas
Wow their saga if finally wrapping up!
Too sad to think about.
It's been an amazing journey.
Great chapter where they were able to reconnect as you said like they did in the beginning of their relationship.
I think it was more difficult for Owen to request condoms than for his father to reply. Another moment of parenting where you realize the kids are becoming responsible adults
Date: 29 Jun 2015 9:51 PM Title: City of Lights
Sounds like they are starting to heal from Jacob and are back to the normal family drama. Have to love those teenagers. (Note sarcasm) I agree with Edward that he and Bella need time alone. Looking forward to hearing about their time in Cabo.
Date: 19 Jun 2015 2:40 PM Title: Changing and Healing
Glad Edward is notthrowing a fit about Steve. Also glad to hear that Jasper and Alice are doing better. Maybe they need a vacation away too. Really liked the end of this chapter. This family needs some happy times.
Date: 11 Jun 2015 12:03 PM Title: A New Normal
The 'new normal'........that's an appropriate moniker.
Rose is just what Bella needs to bolster her daytime moods and naked Edward is the best medicine to aliviate the nightmares.
I hope Alice and Jasper find their way to a renewed partnership that carries them through their golden years. It's been a few bad years for both families!
Date: 06 Jun 2015 1:46 AM Title: Showdown in the Middle of a Cornfield
So sorry your mom is not doing better. I will say a prayer for her and for you.
I am glad that Jacob can no longer hurt Bella and her family. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 26 May 2015 6:47 AM Title: Showdown in the Middle of a Cornfield
Sweetie... it's gonna get hard before it gets better but it will get better. Smile and enjoy your time now soon her pain will end. As long as you know in your heart that you were there for her then it will hurt a little less when she's gone. I know how difficult it is for you right now but you have your magic that brings words to life and thzt gift will get you through the heartache. If it weren't for my stories that I read during that time I would have been lost. Savor your time and Smile with her she'll feel better too. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 26 May 2015 2:29 AM Title: Showdown in the Middle of a Cornfield
At least their ordeal is finally over and the healing can begin. And don't be too hard on Steve Edward, you owe him a debt now. It's just crazy that with all that effort about protection, they get kidnapped in broad daylight from a public place. But they didn't know they had so many familiar enemies.
Sorry to hear about your mom. I will be sending good thoughts.
Date: 25 May 2015 9:45 PM Title: Showdown in the Middle of a Cornfield
My prayers are still with you and your family. My sister is a home health care nurse in the Chicagoland area. She lives in Lombard, and I think her office is located in Mokena or Tinley Park. Does your mom have someone coming in and giving her care, or assistance? Is someone there for you? Is there someone there for you? Take some time for yourself, and remeber we are here for you.
Date: 20 May 2015 2:43 AM Title: Rising Action
OMGosh! I am so glad that Steve was following them. I bet Edward is about to lose his mind. Kyra will definitely need counseling after this. Really can't wait for your next update. Sending you hugs. Hope things get better for you.
Date: 19 May 2015 2:31 PM Title: Rising Action
Cyber Hugs coming your way! (()) (()) (()) (())
I'm sad to hear you are struggling with everyone else's stress load. Take a step back, several deep breaths and tell everyone you need time to take care of your own issues. If they become offended, it's time to walk away from the greedy needy grabby hands. It will be in your best interest. Then take a nap like Kyra!
How did Oliver get blindsided?
Will the rest of the security team arrive in time? Black ops......will they get a chance to take out Jacob?
Steve will try to be a hero. I hope he isn't injured during this recovery mission.
Casey is with Jacob and McKinna, hm. Willingly or by force?
Date: 18 May 2015 9:41 AM Title: Rising Action
I love it !!! More soon. Your in my prayers family can suck the life out of you. I did that the other weekend I took off to the movies by myself and made my family figure their own crap out for the night.... Movies are louder then I thought
Date: 18 May 2015 6:18 AM Title: Rising Action
Oh Sweetie.. Believe me I would love to give you a big hug e v e r y d a y! For getting me through the exact same pain your experiencing right now. You are special to me and to all your readersI'm sure. Real life is gonna be really tough on you and your family right now but you are gonna have to be strong in order to survive all the pain that's coming. Believe me I know it sucks but HONESTLY! it will get better one day at a time. Just remember to find something memorable to smile about. You'll feel better even if it's only for a second. READ YOU SOON : ) I'll keep you in my prayers.
Date: 18 May 2015 3:09 AM Title: Rising Action
Holy Toledo batman!!! What a cliffie but hopefully some final resolution. Some comeuppance for the cullens against Jacobs and his minions is greatly neede . Plus... Way to go Steve, love him!!!!
Sorry about RL, especially dealing with your family. They usually ends up no help me or make things worse with situations like yours.
Hopefully FF gives.you a repreive... Cuzz we appreciate you!!!
Date: 09 May 2015 12:37 AM Title: When Will This End?
I hate that Steve is not working for them any more. I think Steve is/was developingfeelings for Kyra. Not sure if Kyra's is a high school crush or not. Thanks for giving us Kyra's POV. Can't wait foryour next update, as always.
Date: 08 May 2015 4:38 PM Title: When Will This End?
When do we get to read the content of Kira's letter from Steve?
Could Kira's s ex-boyfriend be Jacob's other accomplice?
Her sixth sense is kicking into high gear. I'll bet something will happen to both Bella and Kira on this little excursion.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:28 PM Title: Physical Therapy, Birthday Surprises and Ghosts of Friends Past
BE STRONG SWEETIE.... I KNOW HOW MUCH IT HURTS RIGHT NOW BUT... WRITING YOUR STORIES LET'S YOU RUN AWAY FOR A LITTLE WHILE. READING ALL MY FAVORITE STORIES ALLOWED ME TO SMILE EVEN WHEN I THOUGHT I COULD'NT. IT WAS YOUR MAGICAL WAY WITH WORDS THAT GAVE ME THE SERENITY TO LOOK BEYOND THE TOMORROW I KNEW WAS COMING. READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:11 PM Title: Physical Therapy, Birthday Surprises and Ghosts of Friends Past
I was so excited to get this update. I have really missued this story. I am thinking Steve is developing feelings for Kyra. Mackenzie is crazy. I hope Kyra is ok. Edward is going to freak out. Again, I am sorry about your mama. I was thinking of you the other day. My mother is living with me. Her last blood work was not good. So I understand some of what you are going through. Hope you don't mind some advice. Make sure you take time for yourself. My mother does not want me to leave my house. It was taking a total on me. Also I was feeling quilty when I went to the grocery store and other places. Don't let that happen to you. I have been battling some depression. TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF!!!! Hopefully you have your writing to lose yourself in. PRAYING for you and your mom.
Date: 22 Jan 2015 1:15 AM Title: Commencement
Hope your mother got better. Sounds scary with her throwing up blood. Very happy that Kyra finally let Mackenzie have it. I am a little scard that no one Caan get on touch with her. Could Jacob have Mackenzie? ???
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:10 PM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
I hate what Jacob is doing to this family. Haye that Owen was hurt so bad.
Reading your author's note I am concerned that that is why you have not finished this wonderful story. I hope since you have been away from it for a little while now that hopefully you can now come back and finish it.
I've been seeing your amazing reviews. Thank you for taking the time to leave them! In regards to finishing the story, I'm changing how I'm updating my stories. As opposed to having a 'cycle' of stories that I update, I'm going to be updating them one at a time. I'm working on finishing Angels and Monsters (which will be done by the end of this month) before turning to Star Crossed. This story is up after that (I would like to get at least five chapters written before I turn to something new.) Fingers are crossed that I can begin adding to this by the mid or end of April, beginning of May.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! Also, for your patience as well!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:19 PM Title: Too Close for Comfort
oMGosh! I'm so glad Edward finally talked to Kyra. I understand why he stormed out but that really broke Kyra's heart. I was so scared Jacob was going to get Kyra when she left the house by herself. I am glad that Edward and Steve found her when they did. Glad Edward and Kyra got things worked out. It surprises me that Edward and Bella have such a hard time deciding what to do about Kyra getting harassed. They have counselors at the foundation that Kyra could have talked to. I am ready for Mackenzie to get what's coming to her. She needs a good old fashioned butt whooping.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 4:10 PM Title: Mortal Coil
I can not believe that Jasper did not let Alice know about his mother. That was just wrong. They are both wrong. They need to talk to each other and not yell. Alice sounds like she needs some of my meds. My kids call it my "bitch" pilll. Lol. Because I can be a bitch if I do not take it. Lol.
That was sad with Emmett. I am so glad that Edward went and was with him at the end. Emmett got peace and so did Edward I think.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 6:45 PM Title: A Christmas Anniversary to Remember
Love how Edward and Bella celebrated their anniversary. Why all of a sudden is Bella concerned with Kyra and Steve. When he first showed up Edward was upset about him and Bella was ok with it.