[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 6:28 PM Title: Physical Therapy, Birthday Surprises and Ghosts of Friends Past
BE STRONG SWEETIE.... I KNOW HOW MUCH IT HURTS RIGHT NOW BUT... WRITING YOUR STORIES LET'S YOU RUN AWAY FOR A LITTLE WHILE. READING ALL MY FAVORITE STORIES ALLOWED ME TO SMILE EVEN WHEN I THOUGHT I COULD'NT. IT WAS YOUR MAGICAL WAY WITH WORDS THAT GAVE ME THE SERENITY TO LOOK BEYOND THE TOMORROW I KNEW WAS COMING. READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 27 Apr 2015 6:11 PM Title: Physical Therapy, Birthday Surprises and Ghosts of Friends Past
I was so excited to get this update. I have really missued this story. I am thinking Steve is developing feelings for Kyra. Mackenzie is crazy. I hope Kyra is ok. Edward is going to freak out. Again, I am sorry about your mama. I was thinking of you the other day. My mother is living with me. Her last blood work was not good. So I understand some of what you are going through. Hope you don't mind some advice. Make sure you take time for yourself. My mother does not want me to leave my house. It was taking a total on me. Also I was feeling quilty when I went to the grocery store and other places. Don't let that happen to you. I have been battling some depression. TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF!!!! Hopefully you have your writing to lose yourself in. PRAYING for you and your mom.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:01 PM Title: Physical Therapy, Birthday Surprises and Ghosts of Friends Past
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[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 11:54 AM Title: Physical Therapy, Birthday Surprises and Ghosts of Friends Past
poor Kyra
Date: 27 Apr 2015 6:54 AM Title: Physical Therapy, Birthday Surprises and Ghosts of Friends Past
Great chapter! Love Steve. Thinking of you and your mom.
Date: 18 Apr 2015 5:31 AM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
Please update.
Date: 18 Apr 2015 5:30 AM Title: Commencement
Please update.
Date: 22 Jan 2015 3:15 AM Title: Commencement
Hope your mother got better. Sounds scary with her throwing up blood. Very happy that Kyra finally let Mackenzie have it. I am a little scard that no one Caan get on touch with her. Could Jacob have Mackenzie? ???
Date: 22 Jan 2015 2:08 AM Title: Rites of Passage
Thomas is such a douche. I hate that Kyra had her heart broke. Who took the picture of Kyra and Steve??
Date: 21 Jan 2015 6:10 PM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
I hate what Jacob is doing to this family. Haye that Owen was hurt so bad.
Reading your author's note I am concerned that that is why you have not finished this wonderful story. I hope since you have been away from it for a little while now that hopefully you can now come back and finish it.
Author's Response:
I've been seeing your amazing reviews. Thank you for taking the time to leave them! In regards to finishing the story, I'm changing how I'm updating my stories. As opposed to having a 'cycle' of stories that I update, I'm going to be updating them one at a time. I'm working on finishing Angels and Monsters (which will be done by the end of this month) before turning to Star Crossed. This story is up after that (I would like to get at least five chapters written before I turn to something new.) Fingers are crossed that I can begin adding to this by the mid or end of April, beginning of May.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! Also, for your patience as well!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 3:44 PM Title: New Cars and Prom Proposals
OMGosh! What happened to Owen? ? Glad that he and Tasha had a great time and she said yes. I just noticed that this story is not finished. PLEASE PLEASE finish this story. I am begging.
Date: 21 Jan 2015 2:10 AM Title: Mardi Gras
So glad that Edward and Bella are having some fun.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 9:19 PM Title: Too Close for Comfort
oMGosh! I'm so glad Edward finally talked to Kyra. I understand why he stormed out but that really broke Kyra's heart. I was so scared Jacob was going to get Kyra when she left the house by herself. I am glad that Edward and Steve found her when they did. Glad Edward and Kyra got things worked out. It surprises me that Edward and Bella have such a hard time deciding what to do about Kyra getting harassed. They have counselors at the foundation that Kyra could have talked to. I am ready for Mackenzie to get what's coming to her. She needs a good old fashioned butt whooping.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:48 PM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
I am glad that Kyra is telling her parents what is really going on. So glad that I can go on to the next chapter .
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:10 PM Title: Mortal Coil
I can not believe that Jasper did not let Alice know about his mother. That was just wrong. They are both wrong. They need to talk to each other and not yell. Alice sounds like she needs some of my meds. My kids call it my "bitch" pilll. Lol. Because I can be a bitch if I do not take it. Lol.
That was sad with Emmett. I am so glad that Edward went and was with him at the end. Emmett got peace and so did Edward I think.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 3:41 AM Title: Viva Lost Wages
What the hell is Jasper and Alice's problem? ??? Can't wait to find out more about that. Hope Edward gets closure with Emmett next chapter.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 8:45 PM Title: A Christmas Anniversary to Remember
Love how Edward and Bella celebrated their anniversary. Why all of a sudden is Bella concerned with Kyra and Steve. When he first showed up Edward was upset about him and Bella was ok with it.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 2:47 PM Title: Pontiac Prison Blues
I hope Edward finds some peace with Emmett before Emmett dies.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 1:23 PM Title: Firsts
Loved Kyra's POV. Glad she has turned her life around. Impressed that she put MacKenzie up against the wall.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 3:44 AM Title: Burnt Birds and Broken Bones
OOMGosh! Jacob has gone crazy. I am scared for all of them.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 2:57 AM Title: Disneyland
Love this chapter. I knew something was going to start with Kyra and Steve. I am on Bella's side. Love Owen. Oliver's story is interesting. Can't wait to find out more.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 12:31 AM Title: Lunch, Security Guards and the City of Angels
Loved the hot Skype sex. I can not believe that Jacob was that close to Bella at the restaurant. I am wondering if Kyra is going to crush on Steve.
Date: 18 Jan 2015 7:35 PM Title: Job Hunts, Mongoloids, and Volleyball
Jacob scares me
Date: 18 Jan 2015 4:35 PM Title: Parties and Working Stiffs
Kyra is a brat. she needs her butt whooped.
Date: 18 Jan 2015 3:57 PM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
I hope Kyra changes. I feel sorry for Masen.
Date: 18 Dec 2014 11:20 PM Title: Lunch, Security Guards and the City of Angels
Loved it!
Date: 14 Nov 2014 1:24 PM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
Oh my god! I've loved the 2 previous installments of your trilogy.
Why not use Bella as bit with the security detail hiding as well as police to capture him.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 1:41 AM Title: Commencement
Yes I love it read the whole serious in three days im obbssesed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 2:51 PM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
Please please let Kyra end up with Steve? I don't think Thomas is right for her, she needs a man like Steve :)
Date: 29 Sep 2014 2:33 PM Title: Commencement
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! READ YOU SOON.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:02 AM Title: Commencement
Always LOVE Geekward! :)
Wonder when Jacob will rear his ugly head again?
Glad your mom is alright.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 28 Sep 2014 1:48 PM Title: Commencement
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! :)
Date: 28 Sep 2014 11:49 AM Title: Rites of Passage
I LOVE THIS! :)
Date: 28 Sep 2014 6:37 AM Title: Commencement
good chapter. thank you
Date: 28 Sep 2014 6:09 AM Title: Commencement
Sorry to hear about your mom but I'm glad she is doing better.
It is great getting caught up with this family. I think Edward is right that they need to keep living their life because otherwise Jacob wins. I would not be surprised if he sent the photo to Thomas because he obviously wants them to suffer and what is worse to a teenage girl right? Hopefully things will get better soon. And Thomas is being an idiot for believing it.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:10 AM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
how often are you planning on updating this story. i have read just about all your stories which i love but it seems as if the updates for this one is longer then all the others. are you planning on finishing this one.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 10:45 PM Title: Rites of Passage
wow these last few chapters have been ridiculous!!! i cannot wait for more! i hated that one of their children got hurt but i love how true to the story it was. i think it was definitely needed, at least someone to get hurt, so the threat was still real and an actual threat. i feel so sorry for princepessa for that asshole boyfriend... and i hope that edward starts taking care of himself. cant wait for more. for all of those chapters i didnt review, im sorry and just know that i read them all and loved them all. i got in a bad habit of not reviewing if i read a chapter on my phone (which i've mostly been doing) and am trying to change that. thankfully i left all the inbox notifications and can go back and give more love to the authors i forgot.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 6:23 PM Title: Rites of Passage
Who took that picture? Seems no one asked that question. People in hospitals are there because someone they love is there or they work there otherwise no one "hangs out" in the hospital.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 5:43 PM Title: Rites of Passage
love this story
well done
Date: 20 Jul 2014 4:45 PM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
Well time to lock up Jacob
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2014 3:21 AM Title: Rites of Passage
Thomas wasn't the right one for Kyra - never was. I get the feeling that she & Steve will somehow end up together - I've always had that feeling about those two. However, that might cause poor Edward to have another panic attack! LOL
I CAN'T wait for Jacob to either be killed or caught - I hate what he's doing to poor E&B, as well as their kids. :( And poor Owen...bless his heart. I HOPE everything heals well & that he won't have any residual pain or problems with his legs when he's finished with his physical therapy.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 17 Jul 2014 4:40 PM Title: Rites of Passage
Just caught up- this was good
Date: 17 Jul 2014 3:01 PM Title: Rites of Passage
i love this story i hope you get to finish it :-D
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2014 2:56 PM Title: Rites of Passage
I love this chapter! I am a little 'concerned' that no one seems to be concerned about the mysterious number and how close the picture taker would have to have been to everyone when they were shopping for the prom. I KNOW that was Jacob. Seriously, I was practically screaming at the screen "It's Jacob and he's getting too close!" I am also wondering if Casey is really sick...Hmmm...Also, Thomas is a jerk for not really listening to Kyra.
LOVE it!
Date: 17 Jul 2014 10:22 AM Title: Rites of Passage
Geez, this poor family is at its wits end with Jacob and what he is putting him through. Poor Edward and that panic attack. He really freaked everyone out over that one. And I'm sure that Jacob, since he somehow watches everything, was somehow involved in sending that text to Thomas. I just hope he is caught soon.
Date: 17 Jul 2014 7:07 AM Title: Rites of Passage
I would bet that Jake or one of his associates took the picture because it is another way to cause trouble. But the fact that Thomas didn't even question the fact that it came from an unknown number means he really was just looking for an excuse. Interesting to hear Kyra's point of view. Ah, the joys of being a teenager. lol The question now is how does she do collage if this Jake cloud is still hanging over their head?
Date: 17 Jul 2014 6:40 AM Title: Rites of Passage
I hope Thomas gets herpes.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:39 AM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
i think they should set a trap and lure jacob in. so far all they have done is hire security. maybe edward and bella should have an argument that would have one of them leave to go stay in a hotel unprotected or so jacob thinks, and hire someone trained that jacob dosent know or have seen to stay in the back ground watching and waiting to see what jacob does. it should be someone that dosent look like a hired gun. jacob would be so busy stalking that he dosent pay attention to his surroundings leaving the hired gun to catch him. just something along those lines. please feel free to use this suggestion by adding to it or taking away from it, making it your own because we all are tired of jacob stalking this family espeically the kids.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2014 6:34 PM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
I am not a writer by any means, but your struggles do not show. This was a great chapter. Your words follow and the story line is fantastic! Sorry I can't help with the climax, but know I am here supporting you and patiently waiting for the next update. thank you!
Date: 25 Jun 2014 10:45 PM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
This was a busy chapter. Poor Owen and Steve. It can't end until Jacob is caught or killed. I guess I can't think of anything else. Jacob has to get sloppy and they will get him. Not much help, I know.
Date: 25 Jun 2014 5:25 PM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
I'M SORRY I HAVE NO SUGGESTIONS BUT I HAVE FAITH IN YOU! YOU HAVE NEVER LET US DOWN AND I DON'T SEE IT HAPPENING NOW. I'LL WAIT TIL THE MAGIC CUMS TO YOU SO DON'T LET IT GET YOU DOWN. IT WILL CUM!!!!!! READ YOU SOON. :) :) :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 2:19 PM Title: A Parent's Worst Nightmare
Edward is on the brink of a breakdown....
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2014 6:53 AM Title: New Cars and Prom Proposals
Oh no! Not poor, sweet Owen! And in his new car. :( I just HOPE he's okay. He's one of my faves. ;)
I bet that it was Jacob's nasty ass crashing into him. :( I HOPE they catch or kill him SOON!!!
And Alice...I have no words. She just disgusts me the way she's been acting. :( I hope that nobody babies or mollycoddles her in ANY way. She NEEDS to take responsibility for her actions!
Can't wait for more!!! :)
Date: 12 May 2014 11:25 AM Title: New Cars and Prom Proposals
CAN'T WAIT!!! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 11 May 2014 5:37 PM Title: New Cars and Prom Proposals
I think this is my forth or fifth time reading these and I love them!! I can't wait to read the next chap, I freaking adore Owen he's just too freaking sweet not to love.
Date: 11 May 2014 12:12 AM Title: New Cars and Prom Proposals
looking forward to more
Date: 10 May 2014 12:00 PM Title: New Cars and Prom Proposals
Good for Owen. It is a hard life for teens. As far as what happened with Owen, at least Steve will be with him.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 9:52 AM Title: New Cars and Prom Proposals
Oh! I hope he is alright
Date: 10 May 2014 5:15 AM Title: New Cars and Prom Proposals
Wow, great chapter!! So much happened!! Good for Edward for finally having enough of Alice and telling her off - at 4 in the morning. Her flightiness has gone on long enough and her family has been paying the price for it and that isn't right. And I love Owen; he is totally Edward's son. He is definitely a clone in every sense of the word. And he and Tasha are so cute together. I am on pins and needles to find out what happened to Owen - Edward and Bella are going to be beside themselves when they find out about it. Looking forward to the next chapter....
Date: 04 May 2014 3:17 PM Title: Mortal Coil
This made me cry. Edward compassion has no end. But I did feel for Emmett.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 3:12 PM Title: Firsts
Love the chapter. I would love to hear from Owen. But I am concerned about the whole abortion thing and the fact that Edward paid for it how does that work?
Date: 28 Apr 2014 11:13 PM Title: Parties and Working Stiffs
Somebody should tell Kyra she is not a millonare her parents are. She sure is the product of a spoilt pappered child.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 10:44 PM Title: Mardi Gras
Just when they are relaxed and thats when Jacob is going to raise his ugly head. And I think Alice will pull herself together. Keep on writing; Great stories.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 10:29 PM Title: Mardi Gras
As far as Jacob is concerned, I am always holding my breath. NO was nice but I am looking forward to Chicao and what is going on there. Alice needs to wake up.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:19 PM Title: Mardi Gras
Thanks for update :)
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:41 AM Title: Mardi Gras
looking forward to more
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:42 PM Title: Mardi Gras
Great chapter!! And it was great that Edward and Bella had some vacation time away, just for themselves. They really did need it.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:54 AM Title: Mardi Gras
AS ALWAYS WELL WORTH THE WAIT!! READ YOU SOON!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2014 8:00 PM Title: Too Close for Comfort
Great chapter, as usual. Do you have any way of letting us know when a new chapter is up? Just a kind of head's up.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 9:30 PM Title: Too Close for Comfort
Thanks for update :)
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:27 AM Title: Too Close for Comfort
That was amazing! I really loved it! I think Bella and Edward should escape to somewhere on the East Coast, or in the South (Charlotte, Charleston, etc).
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:34 AM Title: Too Close for Comfort
Well, I'm glad that all is well and nothing happened to Kyra. Edward was right to leave and chill out before talking with her as he would have definiitely said things he would have regretted. But I'm glad that he and Steve found her as she was driving around. And Edward was totally in the right by saying that until Jacob is caught, tht she can't go out alone. That was definitely a stupid thing to do on her part.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:37 AM Title: Too Close for Comfort
happy that they worked it out. was on pins and needles thinking jacob was going to get to kyra. so much drama im tired to. make their getaway close but nice. they need to be able to get home quickly if something happens with jacob.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:20 AM Title: Too Close for Comfort
I love this story and I cannot wait for more! I also love the Kyra element but I wish we could see more and hear from the other kids in the family.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 11:46 AM Title: Too Close for Comfort
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:32 AM Title: Too Close for Comfort
GREAT! CAN'T WAIT!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:28 AM Title: Too Close for Comfort
I agree with Edward about not wanting to impose his beliefs on his children, & allowing them to become their own person...however, if my child made a decision to do something that they KNEW that I am TOTALLY against, & would NOT approve of, while using MY money to fund it, then it WOULD become MY business, & be a matter of MY beliefs!
To me, what she did was extremely disrespectful because in essence, she used her parents money to have a fetus, a tiny, budding human life terminated...killed. :(
Abortion is unfortunately everyone's quick & easy answer out of irresponsibility anymore...no one hardly ever wants to think of, or try take any alternate paths to avoid this senseless loss of life. :( Not only should she have never went along with her friend in this, but she should've also tried to talk to Mackenzie about different options.
So no matter what Kyra's beliefs may be when she's an adult & is able to make her own decisions, for now, as her parent, I would feel responsible for what she did, & I would explain that to her...that because she used MY money for that dispicable act, I am now just as guilty of having a part in taking that baby's life. :( They NEED to make this real for her, not just a slap on the wrist, or swept under the rug. They need to make her understand the true consequences behind such actions! Otherwise, how is she going to truly learn?
Not to mention the fact that not only did Kyra lie in order to get the money, but she also hid the truth all of this time. To me, that is being a sneak, & I'm afraid that I just couldn't trust her anymore, either. :(
I think Kyra got off WAY TOO EASY for all of this!!! I mean, she only got punished for leaving the house without a bodyguard...in which she could've been harmed, kidnapped, raped, or even killed by Jacob! She came SO close, & didn't even realize it!!! No matter how bad she was feeling, she once again done a VERY foolish, thoughtless thing!!! :(
I'm a firm believer in what goes around, comes around, so I do find it funny how karma is sort of paying Kyra back in a way, as far as her being bullied/picked on. She done the same thing to Owen, her own brother, who seems to be nothing but a shy, sweet guy. She hurt & tortured him relentlessly with all of her evil, bitchy friends, & only stopped because her parents intervened, not because she felt bad, or wanted to! So...I don't really feel too awful bad for Kyra. I think she's nothing but what her nickname indicates : a spoiled principessa. :( I just hope that karma doesn't have a way of "paying her back" in the future for helping fund the abortion as well.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:25 AM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
Loved this chapter. Wish i could get notifications.
Your blog didn't email me about this.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 11:51 PM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
wow this was a shocker of a chapter!!!!! i love that we are finally learning why kirah is getting such terrible treatment.... and i loved that we actually got to see the extent of it in the beginning of the chapter.... but damn! how could you just end it there?! cant wait for more!
Date: 04 Jan 2014 11:10 PM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
You lost me.
Date: 02 Jan 2014 9:06 PM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
Thanks for update - happy 2014 to you and ours :)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 7:03 AM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
Great update. I love Edwards reActions.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2013 6:54 AM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
Mackenzie & her skanky friends NEED a serious ass whoopin'!!! LOL
And it's too bad that Max didn't get to sink his teeth into Jacob!
Alice DEFINITELY needs some Prozac & a kick in the ass! LOL
Looking forward to the next chapter! ;) I love this story, as well as ANSOL, & was missing it! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2013 2:53 AM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
Ok first of all I disagree with NOT pressing charges against that stupid self involved little whore.
I noticed that one this morning. I was a complete rip off of both prescription of love and another story by another author who had written about Bella having been married to Mike who was using her as a beard until she found out.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 9:56 PM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
READ YOU NEXT YEAR!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 9:33 PM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
I'm sure that Edward and Bella both are going to be majorly upset about the fact that their money went to pay for Mackenzie's abortion and I don't blame them in the least. But what I want to know is if Kyra did help her with her "problem", why is she being so mean to her? You'd think something like that would endear you to people, not make them hate you.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 9:10 PM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
I don't know why she would hate her she should thank her for doing that even if it is wrong. I love all the sexy times in the shower. Mackenzie is a uber bitch.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:30 PM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
Poor Kyra
Date: 28 Dec 2013 11:22 AM Title: Teenage Girl Drama
Looking forward to more
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:06 PM Title: Mortal Coil
I have already read this far. This is my second time. So I'm not sure this review will go through. I love this story . When will you be updating?
Author's Response:
Sometime over this Christmas holiday. I'm on winter break...two weeks off.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2013 8:55 AM Title: Mortal Coil
All them feels... this was a wonderful chapter. I love it!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2013 6:54 PM Title: Mortal Coil
I have just spent about a week doing nothing but reading this trilogy. I couldn't put it down. Edward's forgiveness at the end of Emmett's live was touching. I get that Edward needed to have this time with Emmitt alone, but feel bad that Alice and Esme didn't get a chance to say goodbye.
I can't wait for the next update!
Sue
Date: 04 Nov 2013 2:43 AM Title: Mortal Coil
What a tear jerked, this was Avery poinent chapter. Love your stories.
JAZZPURR
Date: 01 Nov 2013 11:23 PM Title: Lunch, Security Guards and the City of Angels
I love your stories and I will continue reading them, but I must object to the word "monoloid". I have a dear friend who's son is influenced with this disease. He is the most loving, fining, caring young man I know. I hate to put anyone's words Dowd I believe in 1st and2nd Amandments......but I'm asking as a friend for a friend...joke is a MONGREL!
Thanks for listening to my rant. jazzpurr
Date: 01 Nov 2013 11:03 PM Title: Job Hunts, Mongoloids, and Volleyball
What heartened to Mathew?
He kink of disappeared.
Date: 25 Oct 2013 7:10 PM Title: Mortal Coil
Wow, hard chapter, I'm almost sad for Emmett, I'm wondering how Edward will really deal with his death, no matter what hewas still his brother...
I can't wait for the next chapter, is there a way to put the story on updates alert like on fanfiction?
Author's Response:
What you need to do is click on the title of the story and 'add story to favorites'. It will take you to another page and you need to hit submit before it will take. You will get emails when a story updates.