[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
They will try and this is the most important
Thank you.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
:) Great story ;) I really like this one! I can't wait to read more of it ;)
Date: 15 Feb 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that they talked and want to try and make this work. I loved the talk the girls had and that the two families got along so well. Great job....thanks so much!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
I have an 8 year old that puts your 9 year old to shame and I am way more anal than both of them. I also ask the second question "to my standards?" It is effective because she does not also want to get caught lying which is my most hated flaw. She knows she would be in deep then.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
:p Great chapter ;-) I can't wait to read more! :-)
Date: 12 Feb 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!! My son is six, and he cleans things just the way I like it. Lol
Date: 12 Feb 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
to funny my cleaner is 4 she is good all her brothers and sister act like you are asking for there right arm pissing and moning all the way lol.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
I don't blame Sam for wanting to know about Edward. I am glad they are going to talk. Edward and Bella still have their connection. I can't wait to see how their relationship goes. Great job....thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love their interaction! Can't wait to read more :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter, I look forward to reading more.
Date: 10 Feb 2013 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
He said when he got out they would be together I think that is still his plan.
Date: 10 Feb 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward thinks that she is seeing Sam???
Date: 10 Feb 2013 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
What did he expect from her she has done everything he asked now it is his turn to tell all.
Date: 10 Feb 2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
She has fell in love with her daughter because that is what she is now
Date: 09 Feb 2013 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ashllynn is so happy right now, but she's gonna be very upset when they tell her the truth.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it!!! Don't be to harsh on him Bella, he is a good guy.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
:p Great chapter!! I so wanna know EPOV ;)
Date: 09 Feb 2013 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well their evening seem to go okay. I am glad that Ashlynn is so happy that he Daddy is back, but I wonder how she is going to take the news when she finds out where he really was and that Bella is not her biological daughter. I know Bella will always be her Mom, but it is still going to be a shock to her I would think. I love this story! Great job....thanks so much!!!
Date: 09 Feb 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am glad Ashlynn has her Daddy again. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Someone is jealous!!! xD
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
The reunion is a little strange.
This is a good chapter.
Thank you.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward needs this Bella. She is not going to let him get away with anything from now on. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Did I miss a chapter? I get that you're moving it along, which is good, but Edward just appeared out of no where.
Author's Response:
yes you did. i forgot to update twcs on staurday so now you have ch 4 and 5 to read. i am so sorry and thanks for this review and letting me know!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
you did say hea right???? so edwards gonna ocme back hes not going to ake ashlynn and he and bella are going to fall in love and marry and have more babies so ashlynn won't be alone.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved how u moved it along.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
So how much time has passed so far because Ashlynn seems to really be growing
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope he doesn't take her away from Bella! That would suck.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad Ashlynn okay.
Edward Bella wait forever.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
I loved this chapter and can't wait to see what happens next I really hope edward doesn't just show and take ash I would really dislike him then. Anyway I hope for the. Ext update soon !
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
An update for my B-day! Thank You. Lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapter!
Thank you.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
I didnt think that Charlie would take it to well but he will fall in love with the little girl she is to cute
Date: 26 Jan 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh please don't let them take the baby from Bella and I wish Charlie and renee would just understand so please let everything turn out alight and I can't wait for the next chapter !
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Uh oh...... I hope they don't get social involved. That kid will be taken away.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
I hope Anthony has every set up so there is not a chance that no one can take Ashlynn from Bella. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job....thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad that we won't have to wait a week for the next update :)
Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would like to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'll be sticking with you :) great first chapter. Can't wait to see if Anthony went to jail or on the run and what he needed the money from the bank robberies for. Till next time!!!
Great banner by the way
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
yes, I will stick with you. I suck at reviews, but love your storyline - it is different from anything else I have read. keep writing, I will keep reading, thank you, Pamela Hanley
pamhanley@tadaust.org.au
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
I bet he robbed those banks didn't he
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmmm sounds interesting. So let me get this right. Edward slept with Angela she got pregnant was an addict got killed in a drive by this is when Edward goes and tries to find Ashlynn his daughter when he does a year and a half late the sleeps with Bella and then so I'm guessing Edward was one of the robbers? So then he goes to Bella asking her to watch over her while he goes on the run to escape the law? Damn what's a girl to do?!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am looking forward to seeuing where your story will take me. Your first chapter intrigues me - I would like to read how Bella (the disliker of children) will get to bond with Ashlynn and get together with Anthony again.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I believe that fiction is much to please me.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmm wel i guess i know what he did. hihi can't wait for the rest....
Date: 23 Jan 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it already. Not going to lie the end had me a little teary eyed.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sticking with you on this one, sounds like a good one.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
i like it so far keep posting:)
Date: 23 Jan 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Please update soon!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! Looking forward to more!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm interested! Guardianship forms would be nice. Sorry. I'm a lawyer. Can't turn it off. :)
Date: 22 Jan 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whoa!!! I want more!! lol I'm excited about this, and that doesn't happen very often!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Crazy. So Edward robbed a bank maybe and is gonna go to jail? So curious.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great cant wait for more
Date: 22 Jan 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Bella's doing a bank robber! Ha!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am totally sticking with you on this one. Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have me roped in. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
You know a story is going to be good when it starts off like this! Can't wait for more!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh what a start of a story and I can't wait till the next chapter ;) I so want to discover everything ;)
Date: 22 Jan 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
if the story is complete, why are you waiting a week between each post? It makes it harder to get into a story
Date: 22 Jan 2013 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hooked! The anticipation is going to kill me :)
Date: 22 Jan 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was a freaking great chapter and left me wanting more I can't wait for the next update!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds Exciting! cant wait for the other updates!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Of course I will stick with this story. It sounds great so far. I can't believe you are making us wait a week for an update... :~( LOL!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it! I can't wait to read more :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sticking with you. Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for more ;)
Date: 22 Jan 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds very interesting. I can't wait for more. Thanks!!!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds crazy, but what the heck! Looking forward to Bella's explanation of a mysterious kid. Thanks for the hook, just looking for more. Thanks.