Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:22 AM Title: Edward
Poor Jasper! A scumbag E & B makes for interesting reading. Jasper was NUTS to let them get away with it, though. I'd have bought out a two-page ad in the New York Times.
Author's Response:
Your review made me lol :). Thank you.
Date: 24 Feb 2013 6:24 PM Title: Edward
Love the way it turned out. Good for Edward. I love that he made her come to him. There was a point that I wanted Bella to stay alone, but I'm glad it worked out in the end.
Author's Response:
Thank you for you review, I appreciate that you liked the way it all ended.
Date: 24 Feb 2013 5:51 PM Title: Jasper
Wow, I love it when Bella isn't the little angel....lol, and I find a cocky Edward so sexy. Oddly, I don't feel that bad for Jasper....*shrugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I'm glad you liked the characterization of the characters.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2013 5:45 PM Title: Jasper
Interesting. Is that the end I know you said it was a 2 shot.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review, the story is effectively over. The second chapter is a EPOV so we get to see what happened and how through his eyes and head.