Date: 01 Aug 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow .. absolutely loved ur fic .. a strong and opinionated bella/isabella .. fantastic and thankfully they got together despite edwards broodiness .. thank god he finally realised how he'd been manipulated and followed his heart and his brain ...
loved that u made alice, esmee and the rest of the cullens as u did ... i always resented how they obliged and left bella w/out a word ...
looking forward to more of ur work
Thank you for your kind words! It's readers like you that make authors like me motivated enough to continue doing what we're doing :-D
Date: 10 Apr 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was a good story, I liked how you didn't make anyone evil who wasn't suppose to be. The Cullens stayed good, the Volturi weren't evil just justice. Edward & Bella still got to be together & while everyone could have been happier the ones who mattered got what they wanted. ( did that make sense?)
I really enjoyed how this story went & ended. I'm also glad that Bella isn't on friendly terms with the Cullens. I know this is all fiction but it wouldn't have felt real if she just forgave them.
I hope you write more stories.
Nice reading you, bye ;)
This entire story was actually inspired by that one line that Edward says in Breaking Dawn. The one about how the Volturi are not supposed to be seen as evil as they are by Bella. They only punish the criminals.
she replies with: we're not criminals.
and Edward brilliantly says: they don't know that.
See where I got everything from? :-)
and I agree with The Cullens, which was why I wrote it the way I did ;-)
Oh, I'm writing other stories :-D If you've seen my facebook, there's a photoalbum marked future stories. There you can see all the banners for stories I am going to write eventually :-D
Date: 09 Apr 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
Marvelous! The epilogue truly fits in as Edward has in his own time made his own decision about joining the Volturi. You've also left an excellent doorway to a sequel should you choose by delving further into Adriana and her effect on the coven. Thank you for all the hard work and effort you put in on this story. It showed.
You're not the first one to suggest a sequel, but I don't think I'll write one. I've kind of already placed Isabella Volturi on the shelf so I can just look at it from time to time :-)
Date: 31 Mar 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
That's a good idea but I wonder if it will be allowed.
I feel bad for Alice but Isabella is right, she knew what was going to happen & she had a choice. Alice picked the wrong one & now she's paying for it.
Hey is this going to be a HEA? 'Cause I can see this going for HEA or total chaos. Just wondering you don't have to answer.
Yes, there is an HEA :-D
Date: 25 Mar 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
I have a feeling hes gonna have a hard time being a human drinker and bella ill be ananimal drinker for its easier on edward......just think if edward was a human drinker when they met then bella would of been drained
Date: 23 Mar 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful work. This piece runs the gammet of emotions from Edward's situation in the beginning, to their acceptance of each other, to Edward seeing the inner Isabella and wanting to merge her with the Bella he knew in his heart and soul. I must say, Aro surprised me at the end. I was sure he would turn them down! Kudos!
When I wrote the story, I thought about having him turning them down, but then I decided that my Aro wasn't as heartless as he's portrayed in Twilight. He's actually, kind of, my favorite characters, and it worked better with the flow of the story ;-P
Date: 23 Mar 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was totally angsting that Edward was boning some human chick because of that earlier hybrid setup. Glad he was loyal.
No, I would never have Edward do that! :-)
That I invited the hybrids into the story is because I don't think they would have escaped the notice of the Volturi for that much longer. It didn't seem practical.
Date: 19 Mar 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Um an emaciated Edward?
Maybe a vampire with mind control or suggestion mad Edward their new toy?
I really am not sure what direction you're going to go in. As always though I look forward to your next post.
Read you later ^_^
You'll see in the next chapter, which you will get later this week because I amso nice and I'll give you another chapter this week :-D
Date: 14 Mar 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
An amazing story rich with details and what-ifs. It's rather like turning the version of the Volturi we think of on it's ear in most ways. I'm looking forward to more updates! Kudos on all tour hard work to date.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
“Bella Swan died fifty years ago in the forests of Forks out of a broken heart.”...so sad!
I'll bet Tanya is hanging all over Edward-bitch!...I would really like to see Isabella kick her ass!
I do hope that Edward doesn't reject Bella since she is not a "vegetarian"...she has already endured enough pain and rejection to last for eternity.
That is very sad, even though Isabella doesn't see it that way. Now that she's found her home, she won't want to change the way it happened for the world.
And most of your questions will be answered in the next chapter :-P
Date: 12 Mar 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Uh oh Tanya must be trying to have a conversation with Edward. I wonder if there will be a fight.
I absolutely love the meeting in the Throne room between the Cullen's & Isabella. I also loved the way she handled escorting them to their rooms. I would have behaved similarly. Bella Swan died decades ago. Isabella Volturi, princess of Volterra is who they are addressing now. I wonder how things will progress from here.
Read you next week ^_^
Yes, and from now on, since Edward's entered the story, it's going to be even more obvious how much she's changed :-)
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow she's really made the Volturi her home & family. That's cool! So thus means she gets the same black cloak as the family. This is going to be very interesting when the Cullens eventually reappear. I'm looking forward to that confrontation; it's gonna be fun.
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
I knew she would be a high guard. I gotta say though when Aro said first said he'd grown fond if her & she would not be leaving on mission unless Aro went the 1st thing that poped in head was that he wanted her to be his mistress. I wonder if Bella will ever take a lover? human lover? She's already making out with them & before that she was dressing up sexy for them. Curious.
Catch ya next week ^_^
All of your questions will be answered in time :-P
Date: 20 Feb 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love that killing Victoria was underwhelming; she doesn't deserve a big dramatic battle. Just pop her head off like a dandelion and boom--done.
I totally agree with you and that's why it went so easy :-) And I don't think that even Victoria would be able to go against The Volturi and cause a big scene :-)
Date: 20 Feb 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Victoria didn't last long as a threat. I'm glad that new born army never got to Forks. Charlie & everyone are safe. I'm curious to read how the visit with the Denali go. I hope none of the Cullens are around.
You'll get the answer to that in the next chapter :-)
Date: 12 Feb 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm Bella the succubus? I like it, I think if I was in the same position I'd do the same; play with my food. At least they would have a smile on their face before they died. I wonder if every human she eats (when she gain control) will be her lover first or if it will only be a once in awhile thing?
Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, that's an eventful first day. Oooooo is there going to be a romance between Isabella & Felix or at least lovers? I hope so, that would piss Edward off so much, but I'm not sure it would go with the story since Bella & Edward are mates.
Reguardless I look forward to your next post.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can wait a week.
I like where this story is going & how it's being written, I'm asking "wait when did that happen" or "that wasn't explained very well can you specify?"
Looking forward to reading what happens next.
I'm so pleased that you like it :-) Not many days o wait now :-)