Date: 28 Jul 2013 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love protective Carlisle!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awww they are such a cute family!!!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awwwwwww!!! Please don't stop writing this story!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awwwww tell her Edward!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
He is just so darn cute! And Carlisle awwwwwwww!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy cow I love it!!! Finish it please!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awwww! I am so in love with this story! Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love it, please update soon:)
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loving the story so far!!..keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 26 Feb 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
Can just see the ball in my mind, wonderful! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 26 Feb 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loving this story, just gotta tell you! XOXO, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
I just wanted to let you know how much I love the story. I just couldn't stop reading it. Itsnverynwell written and they are so sweet and great together. Can't wait to see more of you around. Thanks so much!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love your story can't wait for more.
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
Tlhe whole upgraded prom dress thing was a neat idea
Date: 18 Feb 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
Are his feelings for Bella making him soft? Nah it really shouldn't, he's loved her for a while, now he just know she loves him back.... enjoying this story
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
good morning indeed!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Brilliant story. Looking forward to future chapters.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love this story! I'm glad that Edward let Ben go...and I hope he keeps his word to Edward. Everything is going smooth...so I'm just waiting for something to happen. Keep up the good work!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2013 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love Carlisle and Bella's relatiomship.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
That is so sweet family in love.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ben is one lucky man Edward can see the good in him
Date: 16 Feb 2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was a nice visit
Date: 16 Feb 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
wonderfully sweet chapter
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
def hope it doesnt bite him in the arse. But it was a nice gesture.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
def a yummy wake up call
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
That was so beautiful!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
im all cried out i loved those two chapters u decribed it so well u left your readers no chance but to cry their eyes out
cant wait for more chapters, see what else happens
Date: 15 Feb 2013 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
They are just in awe of her
Date: 15 Feb 2013 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was so amazing what a tribute to the dad she love :)
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yes I did shed a few tears. So sweet. I'm a sucker for father / daughter moments and that sure was a good one.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
awww I was crying right along with Esme. What a beautiful tribute
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
fun times in the office
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
ooooh what's going to happen in the office *wags eyebrows* ha ha What a nice surprise for Edward.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
ha ha so we know when Esme speaks in Italian she means business. That made me chuckle.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! Oh to have a boyfriend like Edward. :0) I don't want to be critical and I almost didnt say anything but in this chapter and several of the last chapters the word seen is used in the wrong tense. At first I thought maybe it was just an oversight but your beta hasn't caught it either. Normally I wouldn't say anything but I really like this story and sometimes stuff like that causes readers to stop reading. (Not me I usually just correct it in my head and keep reading). In case you don't know what I'm talking about an example in this chapter is....."I seen her blush and hide her head." It should say "I saw her blush and hide her head." Again I don't want to seem critical. I think you are doing a wonderful job. I just didn't want you to maybe find out later and wonder why no one told you. I will definately keep reading, in fact I'm going to read the next chapter now. I let a few chapters pile up, I love being able to just click next so I can keep reading.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm loving your Edward and Bella. sure they're hot together but I love the way they talk to each other. So glad to see that they are still best friends plus a little more.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
What a wonderful tribute to Carlisle. I think the whole family was beyond speechless and I especially loved her artistic expression.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
wonderful family time.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh wow. That was beyond words Wonderful
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
Office sex...Bella got what she wanted. LOL
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
This is going to be a night that Bella will never forget!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
You did great!!! You let all the men that love Bella take some anger out on James!!! That was great.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Go get him Edward and Carlisle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
i thnk angela will be shocked at what kind of friendship she has just found in bella and edward. great chapter
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awe;) just gotta love when love comes out!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm really enjoying the flashbacks. Its fill in a lot about Bella and Edward. I can't wait for her to wake up so Edward can tell her that he loves her. good chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm hooked on the story in just one chapter. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Look out James...Edward is gonna get you!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2013 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
::)) staying together is the best
Date: 13 Feb 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
they cant stay away from each other
Date: 13 Feb 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
she is a good girl
Date: 13 Feb 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
Will there be any action or just fluff?
Date: 12 Feb 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
ooooh Yummy Yummy. I like me a little Domward!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
Glad she is snacking. ROFl for sextexting.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Little brown bag with lots of snacks is a good idea. and some yummy shakes too.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
WOW, that was great
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
OoooooO round 2? Mmmmmm
Oh man that was so hot!!!!!!!!!
More!!!!!!!! Must have more chapters!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
Riley was not very good it is a good thing Edward will show her all.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
He is going to fix this ;) and make up for all the missed one she could of had lol. Ok I cheated I am in love with this story and went to ffn to read ahead but I like to review here because I am #2 reviewer I should still be #1 but my system was not working right I was doing all these reviews and none registered so lol I dont know why I feel you needed to know that just rambling anyway I will do it on this site and I just may do it on the other two lol/.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
He will be more than happy to change that I am sure
Date: 12 Feb 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
oooh yummy yummy!!! You get a lemon dance for the first lemon!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
love it update soon
Date: 11 Feb 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hope he is ging to take care of her!!!!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Riley is a douche. Go Bella surpriseing your man!!!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
aww they are so cute together. Love to see her having fun.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yey for going out with friends. Ugh for 6 hours to get ready????
Date: 11 Feb 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
That was hot! I can't wait to read more :)
Date: 11 Feb 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
buh bye James. Hate stupid rich men who think the world owes them anything
Date: 11 Feb 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
awww esme is so cute
Date: 11 Feb 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad he's so nice to angela.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
awwww for first kiss
Date: 11 Feb 2013 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
James is going to rue the day he picked B to mess with. Awww for Prom and jealousy.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor b. Glad the C's are there for her since Charlie is a dick.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start. cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
james deserved it all
i love that he was scared he should have never touched bella
loved it
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
edward has it bad for the lovely lady
hook line and sinker
love it
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
i would hate to be james
i sure hope the guys find him
why would someone go after bella. thank goodness she has people who care
Date: 10 Feb 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you tor sharing I love the start very very good cant wait for more
Date: 09 Feb 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
hi you,
great story!
I love it already!
I hope everythink will be fine...
Edward is bad, but sooo cute to Bella...
James is... ahem, sorry was, ... an asshole!
bye
Lil