[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
gotta love big daddy c.. *swoons*
Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved he got no less than what he deserved Thank you
Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am so happy that they are happy that Bella and Edward are together.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
This Carlisle is HOT!
Date: 09 Feb 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the updates! Hope you feel better soon. Good bye James, I knew it wasn't going to be pretty. It made me giggle a little when Edward asked James if he knew who his father was and then called for Carlisle to come out and introduce himself.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the revenge.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
I had wondered how Carlisle and Esme would find out. ha ha Really enjoying this story.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love it he is a good guy even if he kills people.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
They make me smile
Date: 08 Feb 2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
love love love he kissed her. I'm so glad she's not pushing him away with all that usual "I'm not worthy of you" nonsense It's nice to see them recognize what they have.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter, when are they going to see that it is more than jut friendship.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
loved it and the way Edward told her his heart
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
i hope u update soon i love this story already
Date: 07 Feb 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am LOVING the story. I will definately read more. But the word seen is not used correctly. Try saw or even had seen or just see.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am so loving this cant wait for more.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
nothing but the best for her. Did she hear him
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
What a great family they seem to be. I'm enjoying these glimpses of how they came to care for each other.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
awww he loves her. I love to see tough guys being tender and loving to those they love.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow pretty exciting first chapter. Looking forward to reading more. I love that they've been best friends for so long and that he looked out for her even then. Gong to read the next chapter now.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really got pissed at your Bella's reaction, I'd take the mafia anyday as that ass of a father
Date: 06 Feb 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
im liken it so far hope to love it as i read
Date: 06 Feb 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting plot, good writing, great characters. I can't wait to read more! =)
Date: 06 Feb 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
will edward and bella be a couple I hope so
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it i hope you update soon ;)
Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow this is one of my favorite storys out there from ff im glad you put it on here just in case keep writing more i could read over and over
thanks