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Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 19

Ohh, the angles are crying tonight.  What a beautiful way to end a chapter.  made my heart even sigh. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow, Edward is really opening up to Bella, it is nice to watch him grow and watch Bella learn pertinence.  They are beautiful together. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 13

Ohhh come on cant these two just say what they really feel.  I thought they were supposed to not lie to each other... 

I see some big lies going on here. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Cullen is fucked.  I am not sure he realises that he is in the same boat as Bella and just has not realised it yet.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 10

C U Next Tuesday is not what it is all crack up to be here in Australia. But Bella's C U Next Tuesday will be seeing a lot of action on Tuesday.  Let hope Edward keeps his promise.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9

Can you please tape Edward the next time he talks dirty, I am sure alot of ladies would get off listening to him

This chapter was buring hot.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Edward was actually starting to redeem himself until the last line...

His stock plummeted.  But all in all it was very exciting.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 7

Holy Crap, I want a friend like Edward.  Hmmm yeah I dont think this happens in real life but hey here is hoping.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

Now youa are in the shit Edward, how are you going to get out of this.

Think fast is all I have to say

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Ohh poor Eddie had a shitty night so to make himself feel better, he roped poor Bella into his boaring doctor night out's. Sure Edward just as friends... *wink wink* *nudge nudge* we all know.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

I think I will admit to being scared of thunder just to build a fort with Edward.

Reviewer: ahyacinth Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 23

Great story, the one you have here. It really kept me captive all these three days it took me to read the 23 chapters... I can hardly wait for more.... So, please, hurry :D

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, Bella's an unhappy drunk.

 

Well in this situation anyway.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

I agree with Bella, Edward was a pig but did redeem himself a little towards the end.

 

Still love your one liners they are so funny.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a way to start the story, I was killing myself laughing I actually had to get up and move around to breath.

Reviewer: chukulun Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 23

love your story! it's so fun and witty.  love bedward, too.

Reviewer: ahyacinth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

I read first the one-shot, which is great too, btw, and I'm just happy I found it now, so that I have much to read :D

Really nice work!

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 23

As always a great chapter.  I am always excited to see a new chapter, I followed this story over from FF.

Reviewer: Little71099 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is the funniest story I have read so far.  I think I may have pissed myself reading the beginning of this chapter.  IT IS GREAT!!!!!  I can't wait to keep reading.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

LOL that was funny!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOL I am grinning like the start of this.... Someone told me I would love it..... so thought I would give it a go......

 

great start!

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story. Can't wait for more. I also love all the witty lines in each chapter. LMAO!!!!

Reviewer: zksel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yay! So glad you put this story up here. I love it! Makes me laugh my ass off - and crave a drink & a cigarette! Anywho - looking forward to your updates :)

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